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    Satori Ryuutei [Updates]

    Satori Ryuutei
    Satori Ryuutei


    Posts : 774
    Join date : 2019-03-27
    Location : Kirigakure no Sato

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Bloodline | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu | Genjutsu | Fuuinjutsu | Kuchiyose | Ijutsu
    Class: X
    Ryo: 253,660

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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Sun Mar 31, 2019 1:39 pm

    Name: Satori Ryuutei
    Age: 14
    Gender: Male
    Rank: Genin
    Renown: 200
    Class: X
    Village: Kirigakure no Sato

    Total EXP: 8,275
    Spendable EXP: 2,225
    Spent EXP: 10,950 [1,050 (Starter)+5,500 (Earned)+3,000 (Class Up)+1,500 (SP Sacrifice)]
    Ryo: 253,660

    Items:
    Bloodline:

    Skills: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kuchiyose & Ijutsu

    Elements: N/A

    Custom(s): Custom Techniques, Custom Enchantments & Custom Chemcials.
    Jutsu: 125 Known

    Ninjutsu:
    Taijutsu:
    Genjutsu:
    Fuuinjutsu:
    Kuchiyose:
    Ijutsu:
    Clan Jutsu:

    Stats: Base | Passives
    Strength: B | B
    Constitution: B | B
    Stamina: A | A++
    Speed: B | B+
    Coordination:  B | B
    Intelligence: A | A
    Perception: B | B++

    Housing Boost: Increases Speed by one + due to proper housing passive buffs.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Creative Mind: Satori is a boundless orb of creativity and intelligence. Constantly coming up with new ideas and thoughts, and putting them to the test, he tends to block out the "normal" and put it on the backburner. Due to this, the word count requirements for canon techniques or custom techniques that have been made by other people is increased by 50%, but the word requirement for techniques he created himself are lowered by 50%.

    • Tactician: Satori has become a natural leader with his fame in the Academy and training within his clan, and finally pushed past the feral rage that once clung so tightly to his personality. Learning to perform tactics with groups and come up with strategies at high speeds to solve problems. This allows Satori to take a moment to close his eyes and focus, rapidly planning out the next future events, giving him +2 extra Intelligent premonition saves against a target that can be used on himself or others. Requires 1 post of focusing which reduces Perception by 2 Tiers for the duration, and must have already analyzed the targets to perform this.

    • Unyielding: Satori is a manifestation of raw determination and willpower, and doesn't really understand the idea of "giving up", this is part of why he inspires so many. When he hits 10 Chakra or less, he instantly regenerates 50% of his total Chakra. In return, he suffers the "Exhaustion" effect, doubled, for the rest of the thread or until he has spent enough time recovering IC to remove the effect as per normal.

    • Predator: There are times when even the most educated and controlled individuals can lose themselves. Satori is of no exception, and when he becomes too excited or emotional he loses himself in a haze of instinct. During this time he becomes far more feral, losing two tiers in Intelligence in return for gaining + to Strength and Speed, and ++ to Coordination and Perception. This can never push these stats beyond S-Rank.

    • High Resistance: Due to his past diet as a Ryuutei, Satori has eaten, drunk and been invaded by toxins, diseases, and poisons of all sorts. This has magnified his immune system and causes it to fight off foreign invasions far more quickly. This lowers the effects of poisons, drugs, toxins, and medicine used on him (both beneficial and harmful) by 1 rank.

    • Ninjutsu Specialist: Satori is a natural when it comes to Ninjutsu and general chakra control. Due to this natural aptitude, he is able to learn Ninjutsu one rank higher than normal, in return for its chakra cost increases by 50%. (ie. Being C-Class and using a B-Rank Ninjutsu causes it to cost 15 Chakra instead of 10.)

    • One-Handed Seals: Satori after his time in the Academy and training with his mother, has learned the intricacies of molding chakra with more reliance on focus, than seals themselves. This allows him the ability to perform seals one-handed, at the cost of lowering his Coordination by one tier while he is doing such.

    • Trigger Manipulator: Satori is able to manipulate Genjutsu on a fundamental level through complex chakra control. This allows him to add a new "trigger" to a Genjutsu aside its original. Doing so, however, will lower the effective casting rank of its Intelligence by one tier due to the chakra redisputing to alter its state.

    • Seal Manipulation: Satori is an incredibly creative and intelligent individual, between his tactical abilities and skill at creating techniques rapidly, it has allowed him to develop the ability to alter techniques on the fly. He is able to lessen the number of hand-seals required to perform the technique and increasing the speed of a technique by one tier, in return for weakening its power by one tier. Similarly, he is able to add hand seals to do the opposite and increase its power by one tier but lower its speed by one tier.


    • Body Flicker Master: Through the years, Satori has performed the body flicker technique as an emergency mode of transportation as well as a key weapon for emergency defenses. This has led to him burning the technique into his muscle memory and chakra control to the point he can perform the technique near-subconsciously, in return for expending more chakra through the instinctual activation of the technique. Satori may perform the body flicker technique and any of its variants using no handseals, in return for increasing its chakra cost by one rank.

    • Medical Specialist: Satori has dedicated himself to the usage of medical techniques tremendously, to the point that he has realized how incredibly natural they come to him. This refined focus has come at the cost of not following his clan teachings as much, however, and often not relying on his clan's summons during battle. As such any medical techniques have their chakra cost lowered by one rank, in return all Kuchiyose techniques have their chakra cost increased by one rank. In the instance of techniques having a higher base cost have their costs increased or lowered by 30%. [ie. An S-Rank medical technique costs 50 chakra, it would have its cost lowered by 15.]

    • Enchantment Expertise: Satori has studied Fuuinjutsu and Enchantments heavily since his acquisition of them. This focus has allowed him to begin learning how to create complex enchantments that bond two different concepts together into one. This allows him to apply up to two enchantments on one item at the cost of 50% more Ryo for both enchantments than normal.

    • Expert Leader: Satori has spent his entire life tutoring, assisting, and strategizing with his peers, superiors, and clan. This has led to not only having an incredibly intelligent mind but also a keen insight into how to lead and assist others in taking away as much as possible from any battle or conflict. Any threads Satori is in grants any of his students, or PC acting under his orders as a commander an extra 5 EXP per post. In return, Satori loses 5 EXP per post during missions.

    • Defensive Training: Satori is determined to become the next Mizukage, and that means defending his borders to the end. This, in turn, means he must hammer in extensive training into his guards and assassins to keep his country safe and secure. Any Counter-Espionage or Guard NPC that he purchases are considered one rank higher than normal. However, due to this focus, any Assault or Scout Troops that he owns are considered one rank lower than normal.

    • Chakra Eater: As a Ryuutei Satori has been feasting on the flesh and chakra of others for many years, and has finally reached a peak. Satori is able to physically eat the chakra of those that he bites and thus requires him to make contact of his teeth with the target's skin, it can draw blood or not, it's entirely up to him. This allows him to drain 5 Chakra instantly, and 15 Chakra, if he is able to maintain his mouths, hold on the target for an entire post. This drained chakra then restores his own. Any break of contact with his mouth to the skin will end the drain prematurely locking it at 5 Chakra having been drained.  This is capped at 15 drainable chakra per post and up to half Satori's total Chakra per thread can be absorbed total. This cannot put him past his total Chakra Pool.

    Limit Break Points

    • Physical: 0
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 3

    Renown: 0

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    Satori Ryuutei
    Satori Ryuutei


    Posts : 774
    Join date : 2019-03-27
    Location : Kirigakure no Sato

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Bloodline | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu | Genjutsu | Fuuinjutsu | Kuchiyose | Ijutsu
    Class: X
    Ryo: 253,660

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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Tue Apr 02, 2019 1:15 am

    Immidiate Family

    Parentage

    • Kiyoshi Ryuutei: Satori's father, the previous head of the family. Head of the Ryuutei Clan. Born Ryuutei. Black wild hair, crimson eyes, dark skin, 7'2" tall, broad build. Notable physical prowess and chakra reserves. Special-Jounin level.

    • Raika Ryuutei: Satori's birth-mother. Married-in Ryuutei first wife. Red straight hair, green eyes, tan skin, 5'8" tall, average frame, curvacious and broad. Medical, Fuuinjutsu, Kugutsu and Genjutsu specialist. Special-Jounin level.

    • Chuya: Married-in Ryuutei second wife. Silver hair, teal eyes, pale but not unhealthy skin, 5'9" tall, curvaceous build. Medical and Ninjutsu specialist. Chunin-level.

    • Kyoko Ryuutei: Born Ryuutei, cousin fifth removed of Kiyoshi. Third wife. Black straight hair, violet eyes, pale skin like a doll. Stunning beauty, especially fragile looking. 5'5" tall and thin but lightly curvacious build. Ninjutsu, and Kuchiyose specialist. Highly Specialized Jounin-level. Immense chakra, own body can't handle its energy. Can barely move physically on her own.

    • Hanako Ryuutei: Married-in Ryuutei fourth wife. Brown curly hair cropped short, green eyes, peach skin, 5'2", petite and thin. AS to Genin-level, non-shinobi.

    Siblings

    • Serena & Saika Ryuutei: Twins, daughters of Hanako. Youngest of the siblings. Brunettes, Serena has green eyes and Saika has crimson. Playful, energetic, intelligent pranksters taking mothers intellect and fathers sadism combined. Genin-level. Both short and petite in build.

    • Hiyori Ryuutei: Eldest "daughter" and child of Chuya. Technically transexual as she was born male. Hair is blonde, eyes are crimson, and has a feral and brutal personality similar to Kiyoshi with strong instincts. A bit of an airhead, but keenly observant and surprisingly wise.

    • Midori Yamato Ryuutei: Adopted child of the family. Information located here for details.

    • Miyu Ryuutei: Adopted child of the family. Information located here for details.

    Mission Log

    Status
    D
    C
    B
    A
    S
    Successful
    8
    9
    3
    0
    0
    Failed
    0
    0
    0
    0
    0
    Thread Tracker

    Arc 1: Pre-Academy Life

    Arc 2: Academy Life

    Arc 3: Genin Life

    Arc 4: Clan Head Life (Current Timeperiod)


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    Class: X
    Ryo: 253,660

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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Tue Apr 09, 2019 11:21 am

    Update Type: Starter + General
    Information: Claiming my starter 25,000 Ryo, 65,000 Ryo from 2 D-Rank Missions and 3 C-Rank Mission, and 20,000 Ryo monthly salary (see below). Also putting my free housing advantage into Speed, raising it an extra + and making the following purchases for items.

    Rebreather Mask | 1 (10,000 Ryo)
    Kunai | 2 (200 Ryo)
    Steel Wire | 15 Feet (100 Ryo)
    Explosive Tag | 3 (4,500 Ryo)
    Backpack | 1 (50 Ryo)
    Hip Pouch | 1 (50 Ryo)
    Holster | 2 (50 Ryo)
    Medkit | 1 (5,000 Ryo)
    Military Ration Pills | 20 (5,000 Ryo)

    Ryo Spent: 18,715 [24,950 (Base) -6,235 (25% Comfortable Living Discount)
    Ryo Leftover: 91,285

    As well, I will be turning in multiple threads and ranking Satori up to C-Class in the process. This will involve a timeskip of 5 years that Satori as well as Riku, Minami, Midori and Akemi are all involved in at varying times as we all hit 500 EXP. This was discussed with and approved with the administration before our characters were made. Please contact them for details, if required.

    Turning in these threads will grant Satori a total of 2,360 EXP at base. I would also like to request that for several threads I gain some bonus EXP for going above and beyond in storytelling or planning out the story itself, purposely doing flashbacks with a group to flesh out the social dynamics as Genin, etc. As a general note, we also wrote quite a bit, and none of it was fluff. The posts could have easily been broken up into 2-3 posts at times to "maximize" their EXP  gain, but instead, we focused on the flow of the story instead.

    Building One's Form: Despite the fact I was not required to write out Satori learning the basic Academy Jutsu, I did so anyone. I used this as a storytelling tool to flesh out his relationship with his family, add depth to his clan for others to read over if they wish to make a Ryuutei themselves, and so forth. This also was used as a large internal conflict to flesh out Satori battling with the weakness of his body due to his chakra destroying it at a young age, and the fact he was the "runt" of the litter despite being the eldest.

    All Flashback Threads: This is a more general request, there are several moments, especially in The Beasts of the Mist that I'm quite proud of in the last twenty or so posts where the emotional depth and connection between Riku and Satori really begins to solidify. But frankly, all of them were things that we didn't have to write, and we were told to just jump past it all and write them as Genin initially.

    Instead, we took the time to write out their childhoods, families, social dynamics, details of their relationship and how they met, and so forth. There are quite a few storytelling moments in the threads I'm proud of related to emotional connections. I also used the threads to flesh out the Ryuutei Clan that much more with their rituals, teachings, outlooks, and so forth to add real depth to the Clan socially and culturally.

    Bloody Beginnings is another excellent example of using the Clan and its teachings as a whole to bounce off culture, ideas, and the reason that Satori is the way he is. His true roots and the emotional and familial connection he has to Midori. It also gave a pretty great little combat contrast that made a very fun story to write. The example of Satori losing his head after being in a position of power and paying for it, of Midori having to face her own abilities and true bloodlust for the first time.

    As well as the contrast of both of them never having the chance of winning their respective battles, without having been able to train and lean on one another as siblings to better themselves. Without training against Satori's Genjutsu Midori never would have managed to properly deal with her opponent. Without fighting against a pure brawler with no Ninjutsu unlike his father, ie. Midori, Satori never would have known how to deal with his opponent either. It was just a nice tie-in and contrast that I was proud of from a storytelling perspective.

    Also claiming the referral bonuses for bringing over Dysney (Riku), Roz (Minami), Colt (Midori) and Vaetric (Tin) for an extra +400 EXP.

    As this will at the least be putting Satori at C-Class, I'd like to also state I'll be using his two new skill points to purchase the "Genjutsu", and "Fuuinjutsu" skills and automatically learning all C-Rank and below techniques for Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Taijutsu, and non-Elemental Ninjutsu. He's also going to be learning the custom techniques that are listed in the threads found below.

    Custom Techniques:

    I'd also like to change this UA:

    Sponge for Knowledge: Satori is the type to absorb all information that he can acquire at as fast a speed as possible. A glutton for information and skills, anything that can provide him with an advantage, the wordcount requirement to learn canon techniques or custom techniques made by other characters is halved. While the word count for creating his own custom techniques is increased by 50%.

    To this one, instead:

    Creative Mind: Satori is a boundless orb of creativity and intelligence. Constantly coming up with new ideas and thoughts, and putting them to the test, he tends to block out the "normal" and put it on the backburner. Due to this, the word count requirements for canon jutsu or custom techniques that have been made by other people is increased by 50%, but the word requirement for techniques he created himself are lowered by 50%.

    I took this misunderstanding how some rules worked, thinking that the canon jutsu had to be learned individually. This was my fault, as I should have asked or read the rules more carefully, but due to how auto-learning with class-ups work, this trait is basically just hampering me. If I can't switch it around, I'd like to just remove it outright.

    I'd also like to add the following UA's as well:

    One-Handed Seals: Satori after his time in the Academy and training with his mother, has learned the intricacies of molding chakra with more reliance on focus, than seals themselves. This allows him the ability to perform seals one-handed, at the cost of lowering his Coordination by one tier while he is doing such.

    Tactitian: Satori has become a natural leader with his fame in the Academy and training within his clan, and finally pushed past the feral rage that once clung so tightly to his personality. Learning to perform tactics with groups and come up with strategies at high speeds to solve problems. This allows Satori to take a moment to close his eyes and focus, rapidly planning out the next future events, giving him +2 extra Intelligent premonition saves against a target that can be used on himself or others. Requires 1 post of focusing which reduces Perception by 2 Tiers for the duration, and must have already analyzed the targets to perform this.

    Defensive Training: Satori is determined to become the next Mizukage, and that means defending his borders to the end. This, in turn, means he must hammer in extensive training into his guards and assassins to keep his country safe and secure. Any Counter-Espionage or Guard NPC that he purchases are considered one rank higher than normal. However, due to this focus, any Assault or Scout Troops that he owns are considered one rank lower than normal.

    Unyeilding: Satori is a manifestation of raw determination and willpower, and doesn't really understand the idea of "giving up", this is part of why he inspires so many. When he hits 10 Chakra or less, he instantly regenerates 50% of his total Chakra. In return, he suffers the "Exhaustion" effect, doubled, for the rest of the thread or until he has spent enough time recovering IC to remove the effect as per normal.

    High Resistance: Due to his past diet as a Ryuutei, Satori has eaten, drunk and been invaded by toxins, diseases, and poisons of all sorts. This has magnified his immune system and causes it to fight off foreign invasions far more quickly. This lowers the effects of poisons, drugs, toxins, and medicine used on him (both beneficial and harmful) by 2 ranks.

    Trigger Manipulator: Satori is able to manipulate Genjutsu on a fundamental level through complex chakra control. This allows him to add a new "trigger" to a Genjutsu aside its original. Doing so, however, will lower either the speed or power of the Genjutsu by one tier due to the chakra redisputing to alter its state.

    Seal Manipulation: Satori is an incredibly creative and intelligent individual, between his tactical abilities and skill at creating techniques rapidly, it has allowed him to develop the ability to alter techniques on the fly. He is able to lessen the number of hand-seals required to perform the technique and increasing the speed of a technique by one tier, in return for weakening its power by one tier. Similarly, he is able to add hand seals to do the opposite and increase its power by one tier, but lower its speed by one tier.

    Ninjutsu Specialist: Satori is a natural when it comes to Ninjutsu and general chakra control. Due to this natural aptitude, he is able to learn Ninjutsu one rank higher than normal, in return for its chakra cost increases by 50%. (ie. Being C-Class and using a B-Rank Ninjutsu causes it to cost 15 Chakra instead of 10.)

    As far as stats, I'll be posting another request once I know how much EXP I have total to spend on Satori! Thank you ahead of time for the heavy grade!

    Link(s):


    Final New Totals (Not including any bonus EXP)

    Ryo: 91,285
    Comfortable Living Bonus: + to Speed
    Total EXP: 2,360
    Spendable EXP: 2,960 [2,360+200+400]
    Class: C
    Skills: Bloodline, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu


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    Post by Nozomi Fri Apr 12, 2019 7:13 am

    Satori Ryuutei wrote:Update Type: Starter + General
    Information: Claiming my starter 25,000 Ryo, 65,000 Ryo from 2 D-Rank Missions and 3 C-Rank Mission, and 20,000 Ryo monthly salary (see below). Also putting my free housing advantage into Speed, raising it an extra + and making the following purchases for items.

    Rebreather Mask | 1 (10,000 Ryo)
    Kunai | 2 (200 Ryo)
    Steel Wire | 15 Feet (100 Ryo)
    Explosive Tag | 3 (4,500 Ryo)
    Backpack | 1 (50 Ryo)
    Hip Pouch | 1 (50 Ryo)
    Holster | 2 (50 Ryo)
    Medkit | 1 (5,000 Ryo)
    Military Ration Pills | 20 (5,000 Ryo)

    Ryo Spent: 18,715 [24,950 (Base) -6,235 (25% Comfortable Living Discount)
    Ryo Leftover: 91,285

    As well, I will be turning in multiple threads and ranking Satori up to C-Class in the process. This will involve a timeskip of 5 years that Satori as well as Riku, Minami, Midori and Akemi are all involved in at varying times as we all hit 500 EXP. This was discussed with and approved with the administration before our characters were made. Please contact them for details, if required.

    Turning in these threads will grant Satori a total of 2,360 EXP at base. I would also like to request that for several threads I gain some bonus EXP for going above and beyond in storytelling or planning out the story itself, purposely doing flashbacks with a group to flesh out the social dynamics as Genin, etc. As a general note, we also wrote quite a bit, and none of it was fluff. The posts could have easily been broken up into 2-3 posts at times to "maximize" their EXP  gain, but instead, we focused on the flow of the story instead.

    Building One's Form: Despite the fact I was not required to write out Satori learning the basic Academy Jutsu, I did so anyone. I used this as a storytelling tool to flesh out his relationship with his family, add depth to his clan for others to read over if they wish to make a Ryuutei themselves, and so forth. This also was used as a large internal conflict to flesh out Satori battling with the weakness of his body due to his chakra destroying it at a young age, and the fact he was the "runt" of the litter despite being the eldest.

    All Flashback Threads: This is a more general request, there are several moments, especially in The Beasts of the Mist that I'm quite proud of in the last twenty or so posts where the emotional depth and connection between Riku and Satori really begins to solidify. But frankly, all of them were things that we didn't have to write, and we were told to just jump past it all and write them as Genin initially.

    Instead, we took the time to write out their childhoods, families, social dynamics, details of their relationship and how they met, and so forth. There are quite a few storytelling moments in the threads I'm proud of related to emotional connections. I also used the threads to flesh out the Ryuutei Clan that much more with their rituals, teachings, outlooks, and so forth to add real depth to the Clan socially and culturally.

    Bloody Beginnings is another excellent example of using the Clan and its teachings as a whole to bounce off culture, ideas, and the reason that Satori is the way he is. His true roots and the emotional and familial connection he has to Midori. It also gave a pretty great little combat contrast that made a very fun story to write. The example of Satori losing his head after being in a position of power and paying for it, of Midori having to face her own abilities and true bloodlust for the first time.

    As well as the contrast of both of them never having the chance of winning their respective battles, without having been able to train and lean on one another as siblings to better themselves. Without training against Satori's Genjutsu Midori never would have managed to properly deal with her opponent. Without fighting against a pure brawler with no Ninjutsu unlike his father, ie. Midori, Satori never would have known how to deal with his opponent either. It was just a nice tie-in and contrast that I was proud of from a storytelling perspective.

    Also claiming the referral bonuses for bringing over Dysney (Riku), Roz (Minami), Colt (Midori) and Vaetric (Tin) for an extra +400 EXP.

    As this will at the least be putting Satori at C-Class, I'd like to also state I'll be using his two new skill points to purchase the "Genjutsu", and "Fuuinjutsu" skills and automatically learning all C-Rank and below techniques for Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Taijutsu, and non-Elemental Ninjutsu. He's also going to be learning the custom techniques that are listed in the threads found below.

    Custom Techniques:

    I'd also like to change this UA:

    Sponge for Knowledge: Satori is the type to absorb all information that he can acquire at as fast a speed as possible. A glutton for information and skills, anything that can provide him with an advantage, the wordcount requirement to learn canon techniques or custom techniques made by other characters is halved. While the word count for creating his own custom techniques is increased by 50%.

    To this one, instead:

    Creative Mind: Satori is a boundless orb of creativity and intelligence. Constantly coming up with new ideas and thoughts, and putting them to the test, he tends to block out the "normal" and put it on the backburner. Due to this, the word count requirements for canon jutsu or custom techniques that have been made by other people is increased by 50%, but the word requirement for techniques he created himself are lowered by 50%.

    I took this misunderstanding how some rules worked, thinking that the canon jutsu had to be learned individually. This was my fault, as I should have asked or read the rules more carefully, but due to how auto-learning with class-ups work, this trait is basically just hampering me. If I can't switch it around, I'd like to just remove it outright.

    I'd also like to add the following UA's as well:

    One-Handed Seals: Satori after his time in the Academy and training with his mother, has learned the intricacies of molding chakra with more reliance on focus, than seals themselves. This allows him the ability to perform seals one-handed, at the cost of lowering his Coordination by one tier while he is doing such.

    Tactitian: Satori has become a natural leader with his fame in the Academy and training within his clan, and finally pushed past the feral rage that once clung so tightly to his personality. Learning to perform tactics with groups and come up with strategies at high speeds to solve problems. This allows Satori to take a moment to close his eyes and focus, rapidly planning out the next future events, giving him +2 extra Intelligent premonition saves against a target that can be used on himself or others. Requires 1 post of focusing which reduces Perception by 2 Tiers for the duration, and must have already analyzed the targets to perform this.

    Defensive Training: Satori is determined to become the next Mizukage, and that means defending his borders to the end. This, in turn, means he must hammer in extensive training into his guards and assassins to keep his country safe and secure. Any Counter-Espionage or Guard NPC that he purchases are considered one rank higher than normal. However, due to this focus, any Assault or Scout Troops that he owns are considered one rank lower than normal.

    Unyeilding: Satori is a manifestation of raw determination and willpower, and doesn't really understand the idea of "giving up", this is part of why he inspires so many. When he hits 10 Chakra or less, he instantly regenerates 50% of his total Chakra. In return, he suffers the "Exhaustion" effect, doubled, for the rest of the thread or until he has spent enough time recovering IC to remove the effect as per normal.

    High Resistance: Due to his past diet as a Ryuutei, Satori has eaten, drunk and been invaded by toxins, diseases, and poisons of all sorts. This has magnified his immune system and causes it to fight off foreign invasions far more quickly. This lowers the effects of poisons, drugs, toxins, and medicine used on him (both beneficial and harmful) by 2 ranks.

    Trigger Manipulator: Satori is able to manipulate Genjutsu on a fundamental level through complex chakra control. This allows him to add a new "trigger" to a Genjutsu aside its original. Doing so, however, will lower either the speed or power of the Genjutsu by one tier due to the chakra redisputing to alter its state.

    Seal Manipulation: Satori is an incredibly creative and intelligent individual, between his tactical abilities and skill at creating techniques rapidly, it has allowed him to develop the ability to alter techniques on the fly. He is able to lessen the number of hand-seals required to perform the technique and increasing the speed of a technique by one tier, in return for weakening its power by one tier. Similarly, he is able to add hand seals to do the opposite and increase its power by one tier, but lower its speed by one tier.

    Ninjutsu Specialist: Satori is a natural when it comes to Ninjutsu and general chakra control. Due to this natural aptitude, he is able to learn Ninjutsu one rank higher than normal, in return for its chakra cost increases by 50%. (ie. Being C-Class and using a B-Rank Ninjutsu causes it to cost 15 Chakra instead of 10.)

    As far as stats, I'll be posting another request once I know how much EXP I have total to spend on Satori! Thank you ahead of time for the heavy grade!

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    Final New Totals (Not including any bonus EXP)

    Ryo: 91,285
    Comfortable Living Bonus: + to Speed
    Total EXP: 2,360
    Spendable EXP: 2,960 [2,360+200+400]
    Class: C
    Skills: Bloodline, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu

    100 Extra exp granted for excellent story telling and helping those in Flashback threads catch up.

    Everything else approved with the exception of this list of Ua's:
    Unyielding, High Resistance, and Trigger Manipulator.

    I'll work more with you to get those approval ready but I'D like to think about it more and I have to go to work.


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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Fri Apr 12, 2019 12:20 pm

    Update Type: Class Up & Stats
    Information: Claiming a final thread, as well as spending my total EXP to distribute through. The below thread pushes Satori to a total of 2,715 Total EXP combined with the above approved requst and 100 Bonus EXP. This bumps him up to B-Class officially, and gives him an additional 600 spendable EXP atop the original 600 Bonus.

    Making the following purchases:

    Strength: D -> C [300 EXP]
    Constitution: D -> C [300 EXP]
    Stamina: D -> B [800 EXP]
    Speed: D -> C [300 EXP]
    Coordination: D -> C [300 EXP]
    Intelligence: D -> B [800 EXP]
    Perception: D -> B [800 EXP]

    As well as putting my B-Rank Skill point into Kuchiyose.

    Link: Polishing a Dirty Jewel [Group, Training Grounds] [17x15= 255 EXP]

    New Totals

    Class: B
    Rank: Genin
    Age: 14
    Ryo: 91,285
    Total EXP: 2,715
    Spendable EXP: 100
    Spent EXP: 4,965 [1,050 Starter+2,715 Earned+1,200 Class Up]
    Skills: Bloodline, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kuchiyose

    Will post on adding in the new UA's once Nozo get's back to me.


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    Post by Nozomi Fri Apr 12, 2019 12:23 pm

    Satori Ryuutei wrote:Update Type: Class Up & Stats
    Information: Claiming a final thread, as well as spending my total EXP to distribute through. The below thread pushes Satori to a total of 2,715 Total EXP combined with the above approved requst and 100 Bonus EXP. This bumps him up to B-Class officially, and gives him an additional 600 spendable EXP atop the original 600 Bonus.

    Making the following purchases:

    Strength: D -> C [300 EXP]
    Constitution: D -> C [300 EXP]
    Stamina: D -> B [800 EXP]
    Speed: D -> C [300 EXP]
    Coordination: D -> C [300 EXP]
    Intelligence: D -> B [800 EXP]
    Perception: D -> B [800 EXP]

    As well as putting my B-Rank Skill point into Kuchiyose.

    Link: Polishing a Dirty Jewel [Group, Training Grounds] [17x15= 255 EXP]

    New Totals

    Class: B
    Rank: Genin
    Age: 14
    Ryo: 91,285
    Total EXP: 2,715
    Spendable EXP: 100
    Spent EXP: 4,965 [1,050 Starter+2,715 Earned+1,200 Class Up]
    Skills: Bloodline, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kuchiyose

    Will post on adding in the new UA's once Nozo get's back to me.
    Approved


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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Fri Apr 12, 2019 12:47 pm

    Update Type: General
    Information: Fixed the UA's that were denied while me and Nozo talked in PM's. These are the updated variations that have been ok'd.
    Link: N/A

    Trigger Manipulator: Satori is able to manipulate Genjutsu on a fundamental level through complex chakra control. This allows him to add a new "trigger" to a Genjutsu aside its original. Doing so, however, will lower the effective casting rank of its Intelligence by one tier due to the chakra redisputing to alter its state.

    High Resistance: Due to his past diet as a Ryuutei, Satori has eaten, drunk and been invaded by toxins, diseases, and poisons of all sorts. This has magnified his immune system and causes it to fight off foreign invasions far more quickly. This lowers the effects of poisons, drugs, toxins, and medicine used on him (both beneficial and harmful) by 1 rank.

    Unyielding: Satori is a manifestation of raw determination and willpower, and doesn't really understand the idea of "giving up", this is part of why he inspires so many. When he hits 10 Chakra or less, he instantly regenerates 50% of his total Chakra. In return, he suffers the "Exhaustion" effect, doubled, for the rest of the thread or until he has spent enough time recovering IC to remove the effect as per normal.


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    Post by Nozomi Fri Apr 12, 2019 12:54 pm

    Satori Ryuutei wrote:Update Type: General
    Information: Fixed the UA's that were denied while me and Nozo talked in PM's. These are the updated variations that have been ok'd.
    Link: N/A

    Trigger Manipulator: Satori is able to manipulate Genjutsu on a fundamental level through complex chakra control. This allows him to add a new "trigger" to a Genjutsu aside its original. Doing so, however, will lower the effective casting rank of its Intelligence by one tier due to the chakra redisputing to alter its state.

    High Resistance: Due to his past diet as a Ryuutei, Satori has eaten, drunk and been invaded by toxins, diseases, and poisons of all sorts. This has magnified his immune system and causes it to fight off foreign invasions far more quickly. This lowers the effects of poisons, drugs, toxins, and medicine used on him (both beneficial and harmful) by 1 rank.

    Unyielding: Satori is a manifestation of raw determination and willpower, and doesn't really understand the idea of "giving up", this is part of why he inspires so many. When he hits 10 Chakra or less, he instantly regenerates 50% of his total Chakra. In return, he suffers the "Exhaustion" effect, doubled, for the rest of the thread or until he has spent enough time recovering IC to remove the effect as per normal.
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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Fri Apr 12, 2019 4:03 pm

    Not sure how I messed up my math but man did I.

    Kay so these are the purchases, total:

    Strength: C [450 EXP]
    Constitution: C [450 EXP]
    Stamina: B+ [950 EXP]
    Speed: C+ [450 EXP]
    Coordination:  C [450 EXP]
    Intelligence: B [950 EXP]
    Perception: B+ [950 EXP]

    EXP Spent: 4,650
    EXP Grand Total: 4,965 [1,050 Starter+2,715 Earned+1,200 Class Up]

    Means he actually has 315 spendable EXP left. Not 100. I don't know where I got that from but uh, just a minor update on that front to keep the numbers correct.


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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Wed Apr 17, 2019 3:21 pm

    Update Type:
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    • Custom Kiri Missions [6,500 Ryo]
    • Fang or Fist [13 Posts, Group, Trainiing Area, Flashback] [14x7.5= 105 EXP]
    • Tin Quiver [5 Posts, Group] [5x10= 50 EXP] [Market Purchase Thread]
    • A Helping Hand [1 Post, Solo D-Rank Mission] [1x10=10+10= 20 EXP] [10,000 Ryo]
    • Simple Jobs [1 Post, Solo D-Rank Mission] [1x10=10+10= 20 EXP] [10,000 Ryo]
    • Cat & The Hound [1 Post, Solo D-Rank Mission] [1x10=10+10= 20 EXP] [10,000 Ryo]
    • Fishing Trip [28 Posts, Group C-Rank Mission] [28x20=560+15= 575 EXP] [15,000 Ryo]
    • Blood Tells [22 Posts, Group, Training Grounds] [22x15= 330 EXP]
    • Regular Patrols [X Posts, Group, Mission] [15x20=300+15= 315 EXP] [15,000 Ryo]


    Information: Claiming the 100 recruitment EXP from Rapheing (Akemi). As well as turning in a few threads for an extra 66,500 Ryo and 1,535 EXP. This then bumps him to A-Rank for an additional 800 spendable EXP. Totaling him at 2,650 Spendable EXP and 4,250 Total EXP).

    I'm then spending 1,900 of my Spendable EXP to increase his Intelligence and Stamina from B-Rank to A-Rank, and his Coordination from C-Rank to B-Rank, leaving a total of 750 Spendable EXP left and capping him at 20 Stat Raises.

    From there I'll be purchasing the following Bloodline Trait for 500 EXP, leaving him a total of 250 spendable EXP left.

    Feast of Flesh [500 EXP]
    Ryuutei's core Kekkai Genkai that came far before their passive augmentations was the ability to assimilate and adapt to any genetic material that they devoured. This allowed them to rapidly evolve and grow stronger by feasting on the flesh of others. Though their Bijuu chakra has augmented their bodies and chakra networks, this remains a potent ability. If a Ryuutei eats the flesh of a living creature that holds chakra (pets, shinobi, summons, etc), there is then a 2 post waiting period while they digest. On the third post they begin regenerating minor injuries and 5 chakra per post for three posts. This has a 4 post cooldown (the cooldown begins after the last post of regeneration ends). This only effects registered or purchased NPC and Summons, as well as PC (this rule can be overturned if those within the thread allow it to effect non-registered NPC/Mook NPC by ooc vote).

    He'll also be purchasing Ijutsu with his last skill point. Also using the market thread found above in order to add some extra purchases to Satori's inventory.

    Items

    • Hip Pouch [50 Ryo]
    • 90m Steel Wire [600 Ryo]
    • 18 Kunai [1,800 Ryo]
    • 20 Shuriken [2,000 Ryo]
    • 100 Caltrops [1,000 Ryo]
    • 5 Blood Pills  [15,000 Ryo]
    • 5 Coagulation Pills [15,000 Ryo]
    • 17 Explosive Tags [25,500 Ryo]
    • 5 Flash Bombs [5,000 Ryo]
    • 1 Ink Pot 125mls [400 Ryo]
    • 1 Ink Brush [50 Ryo]
    • 2 Large Blank Scrolls [6,000 Ryo]
    • 1 Sealing Ink Pen [100 Ryo]
    • 1 Sealing Chisel [1,000 Ryo]

      Total
      73,500 Ryo
      -18,375 Ryo (25% Comfortable Living Discount)
      55,125


    New Total Summary

    Class: A
    Rank: Genin
    Age: 14
    Ryo: 102,660
    Total EXP: 4,250
    Spendable EXP: 250
    Spent EXP: 7,450 [1,050 (Starter)+4,400 (Earned)+2,000 (Class Up)]
    Skills: Bloodline, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kuchiyose, Ijutsu
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: B


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    Post by Kim Chang-Min Fri Apr 19, 2019 9:24 pm

    Satori Ryuutei wrote:Not sure how I messed up my math but man did I.

    Kay so these are the purchases, total:

    Strength: C [450 EXP]
    Constitution: C [450 EXP]
    Stamina: B+ [950 EXP]
    Speed: C+ [450 EXP]
    Coordination:  C [450 EXP]
    Intelligence: B [950 EXP]
    Perception: B+ [950 EXP]

    EXP Spent: 4,650
    EXP Grand Total: 4,965 [1,050 Starter+2,715 Earned+1,200 Class Up]

    Means he actually has 315 spendable EXP left. Not 100. I don't know where I got that from but uh, just a minor update on that front to keep the numbers correct.

    Approved.
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    Post by Kim Chang-Min Fri Apr 19, 2019 9:54 pm

    Satori Ryuutei wrote:Update Type:
    Link(s):

    • Custom Kiri Missions [6,500 Ryo]
    • Fang or Fist [13 Posts, Group, Trainiing Area, Flashback] [14x7.5= 105 EXP]
    • Tin Quiver [5 Posts, Group] [5x10= 50 EXP] [Market Purchase Thread]
    • A Helping Hand [1 Post, Solo D-Rank Mission] [1x10=10+10= 20 EXP] [10,000 Ryo]
    • Simple Jobs [1 Post, Solo D-Rank Mission] [1x10=10+10= 20 EXP] [10,000 Ryo]
    • Cat & The Hound [1 Post, Solo D-Rank Mission] [1x10=10+10= 20 EXP] [10,000 Ryo]
    • Fishing Trip [28 Posts, Group C-Rank Mission] [28x20=560+15= 575 EXP] [15,000 Ryo]
    • Blood Tells [22 Posts, Group, Training Grounds] [22x15= 330 EXP]
    • Regular Patrols [X Posts, Group, Mission] [15x20=300+15= 315 EXP] [15,000 Ryo]


    Information: Claiming the 100 recruitment EXP from Rapheing (Akemi). As well as turning in a few threads for an extra 66,500 Ryo and 1,535 EXP. This then bumps him to A-Rank for an additional 800 spendable EXP. Totaling him at 2,650 Spendable EXP and 4,250 Total EXP).

    I'm then spending 1,900 of my Spendable EXP to increase his Intelligence and Stamina from B-Rank to A-Rank, and his Coordination from C-Rank to B-Rank, leaving a total of 750 Spendable EXP left and capping him at 20 Stat Raises.

    From there I'll be purchasing the following Bloodline Trait for 500 EXP, leaving him a total of 250 spendable EXP left.

    Feast of Flesh [500 EXP]
    Ryuutei's core Kekkai Genkai that came far before their passive augmentations was the ability to assimilate and adapt to any genetic material that they devoured. This allowed them to rapidly evolve and grow stronger by feasting on the flesh of others. Though their Bijuu chakra has augmented their bodies and chakra networks, this remains a potent ability. If a Ryuutei eats the flesh of a living creature that holds chakra (pets, shinobi, summons, etc), there is then a 2 post waiting period while they digest. On the third post they begin regenerating minor injuries and 5 chakra per post for three posts. This has a 4 post cooldown (the cooldown begins after the last post of regeneration ends). This only effects registered or purchased NPC and Summons, as well as PC (this rule can be overturned if those within the thread allow it to effect non-registered NPC/Mook NPC by ooc vote).

    He'll also be purchasing Ijutsu with his last skill point. Also using the market thread found above in order to add some extra purchases to Satori's inventory.

    Items

    • Hip Pouch [50 Ryo]
    • 90m Steel Wire [600 Ryo]
    • 18 Kunai [1,800 Ryo]
    • 20 Shuriken [2,000 Ryo]
    • 100 Caltrops [1,000 Ryo]
    • 5 Blood Pills  [15,000 Ryo]
    • 5 Coagulation Pills [15,000 Ryo]
    • 17 Explosive Tags [25,500 Ryo]
    • 5 Flash Bombs [5,000 Ryo]
    • 1 Ink Pot 125mls [400 Ryo]
    • 1 Ink Brush [50 Ryo]
    • 2 Large Blank Scrolls [6,000 Ryo]
    • 1 Sealing Ink Pen [100 Ryo]
    • 1 Sealing Chisel [1,000 Ryo]

      Total
      73,500 Ryo
      -18,375 Ryo (25% Comfortable Living Discount)
      55,125


    New Total Summary

    Class: A
    Rank: Genin
    Age: 14
    Ryo: 102,660
    Total EXP: 4,250
    Spendable EXP: 250
    Spent EXP: 7,450 [1,050 (Starter)+4,400 (Earned)+2,000 (Class Up)]
    Skills: Bloodline, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kuchiyose, Ijutsu
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: B


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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Wed May 08, 2019 6:08 pm

    Update Type: Class & General
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    Information: Turning in some threads for the Ryo and EXP. Gaining 3,975 EXP and 151,000 Ryo for 8,275 Total EXP giving him X-Class for an extra 1,000 Spendable EXP. He will then be sacrificing his skill points immediately for an extra 1,500 Spendable EXP. Giving him a new total of 6,945 Spendable EXP and 263,660 Ryo. From here he will then be spending 3,000 of his EXP to buy the following Bloodline traits and 1,500 of this EXP to buy his Speed, Constitution and Strength from C to B Rank to cap himself at 23 Stat Raises. Lowering his spendable EXP to 2,225, and raising his total Spent EXP to 10,950. Also gains +200 Renown for becoming the head of the Ryuutei Clan.

    Chakra Scent [500 EXP]: Ryuutei's enhanced senses can be trained to evolve to a new level the more it is used. This allows a Ryuutei to smell and track chakra similarly to how physical scents can be traced (ie. Smelling the difference between two different peoples chakra). This does not allow them any detailed information of chakra beyond the fact it's being used, and a general idea of how much chakra an individual has or is being gathered, nor can it tell them the exact location of the chakra, only that they're in the general proximity of it. This amplifies their sensory abilities granting them + to Perception, with its range being based on training. Due to their heightened senses, techniques that use strong odors or genjutsu that targets the Ryuute's smell and land cause a loss of -- to Perception while they are under its influence and are unable to perform their tracking/chakra smelling. As well, tracking chakra through scent is nothing like tracking physical smells as the Ryuutei's mind must focus entirely on the chakra they wish, only allowing them to track one chakra signature at a time. They can only track 1 scent per thread and once they track a scent they cannot switch to another. They remained locked onto that scent for the remainder of the thread.

    • E-Class: 5m Range
    • D-Class: 10m Range
    • C-Class: 25m Range
    • B-Class: 50m Range
    • A-Class: 150m Range
    • S-Class: 300m Range
    • X-Class: 500m Range

    Feral Progression [500 EXP]: Some Ryuutei are born with abnormal amounts of the Bijuu chakra within them, generally due to their side of the family having cannibalized itself causing the diluted chakra to steadily build up within the branch until it was passed down and condensed into the character. This can also be acquired by eating large quantities of other Ryuutei, heavy chakra users (individuals with A-Rank or higher stamina), or Bijuu flesh. By doing so their raw chakra, as well as feral traits all are enhanced even further than normal. This grants the Ryuutei a further + to their Stamina and Perception, this cannot push these Stats to X-Rank.

    Ritual of Flesh [1,000 EXP]: Ryuutei are able to evolve their dietary abilities and evolve their stomachs even further so that when they devour the chakra-rich flesh of others, they are able to not only regenerate their bodies but also empower themselves with a temporary burst of energy from the meal. This means that while "Feast of Flesh" is active, the Ryuutei gains the normal benefits but also gains a + to Strength, Speed, Coordination, and Perception. This can never push these stats into X-Rank. This also unlocks the special "Ritual of Flesh and Water" Clan Technique.

    Pack Hunters [500 EXP]: Ryuutei's natural chakra and animalistic traits have caused them to specifically evolve with a supernatural empathy toward felines. Felines instinctually see Ryuutei as one of their own, allowing interactions with them to be far easier. This causes combination techniques with the felines tremendously easier as they can act based on one another's body language and physical tells, not having to rely on verbal communication. While feline-based summons/pets are active, both the Ryuutei and the feline(s) gain an extra ++ to Coordination and + to Speed. This cannot push these stats to X-Rank.

    Unbreaking Claws [500 EXP]: Through extensive abuse of their claws and fangs, constantly using them against opponents and hard materials, the Ryuutei's body will naturally adjust over time. This causes their natural weapons to steadily grow stronger, causing them to become A-Rank quality and hardness. Their teeth and claws infinitely regrow, the speed of such being equal to one IC day per rank of stamina that they have.

    He will also be gaining access to the following list of techniques that he learned in the above threads.

    Techniques Learned:

    I'd also like to request the following new UA group due to Satori acquiring X-Rank for his final update as far as UA's go.

    Chakra Eater: As a Ryuutei Satori has been feasting on the flesh and chakra of others for many years, and has finally reached a peak. Satori is able to physically eat the chakra of those that he bites and thus requires him to make contact of his teeth with the target's skin, it can draw blood or not, it's entirely up to him. This allows him to drain 5 Chakra instantly, and 15 Chakra, if he is able to maintain his mouths, hold on the target for an entire post. This drained chakra then restores his own. Any break of contact with his mouth to the skin will end the drain prematurely locking it at 5 Chakra having been drained.  This is capped at 15 drainable chakra per post and up to half Satori's total Chakra per thread can be absorbed total. This cannot put him past his total Chakra Pool.

    Expert Leader: Satori has spent his entire life tutoring, assisting, and strategizing with his peers, superiors, and clan. This has led to not only having an incredibly intelligent mind but also a keen insight into how to lead and assist others in taking away as much as possible from any battle or conflict. Any threads Satori is in grants any of his students, or PC acting under his orders as a commander an extra 5 EXP per post. In return, Satori loses 5 EXP per post during missions.

    Body Flicker Master: Through the years, Satori has performed the body flicker technique as an emergency mode of transportation as well as a key weapon for emergency defenses. This has led to him burning the technique into his muscle memory and chakra control to the point he can perform the technique near-subconsciously, in return for expending more chakra through the instinctual activation of the technique. Satori may perform the body flicker technique and any of its variants using no handseals, in return for increasing its chakra cost by one rank.

    Medical Specialist: Satori has dedicated himself to the usage of medical techniques tremendously, to the point that he has realized how incredibly natural they come to him. This refined focus has come at the cost of not following his clan teachings as much, however, and often not relying on his clan's summons during battle. As such any medical techniques have their chakra cost lowered by one rank, in return all Kuchiyose techniques have their chakra cost increased by one rank. In the instance of techniques having a higher base cost have their costs increased or lowered by 30%. [ie. An S-Rank medical technique costs 50 chakra, it would have its cost lowered by 15.]

    Enchantment Expertise: Satori has studied Fuuinjutsu and Enchantments heavily since his acquisition of them. This focus has allowed him to begin learning how to create complex enchantments that bond two different concepts together into one. This allows him to apply up to two enchantments on one item at the cost of 50% more Ryo for both enchantments than normal.

    New Totals

    Class: X
    Rank: Genin
    Age: 14
    Ryo: 253,660
    Renown: 200
    Total EXP: 8,275
    Spendable EXP: 2,225
    Spent EXP: 10,950 [1,050 (Starter)+5,500 (Earned)+3,000 (Class Up)+1,500 (SP Sacrifice)]
    Skills: Bloodline, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kuchiyose, Ijutsu
    Stats:

    • Strength: B
    • Constitution: B
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: B
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: B


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Fri May 10, 2019 6:51 pm

    "Weaponized Healing [8 Posts, Solo, Training Grounds] [8x10= 50 EXP] [Technique Learning]"

    *^ This should say 5 not 8.


    "Witchdoctor: Satori has put himself constantly through his own toxins, and he is one of his own key test subjects following the ancient beliefs of the medicine men that allowed themselves to be bitten by snakes to turn their blood slowly into a natural anti-venom. As he constantly injects himself with anything that he himself creates on a daily basis, he has rendered himself immune to all Drugs, Medicines, and Poisons that he himself has created."

    *^ This might be better suited to be a technique.

    "Chemistry Expertise: Thanks to his constant studying and training with Minami, Miyu and Riku, all skilled chemists in their own right, Satori has picked up on a few things of his own. This has allowed him to expand his chemical knowledge beyond what a normal medical ninja has access too, but at the cost of them not being quite as efficient as true chemists. Satori may create chemicals at one rank higher than he is normally able to, in return for increasing drugs and poisons countdown, or medicines cooldowns by 50%. "

    *^ You need the Chemistry Skill to take this UA.

    "Training Professional: Satori takes the training of his clan and soldiers seriously. The training is difficult, painful, and can be often overwhelming to even skilled ninja. But those that come out through the brutal training can't deny their results despite the extra time and money invested to obtain those results. NPC owned by Satori gain +25% more Spendable EXP than normal, but cost him 50% more Ryo than normal as well."

    *^ Unfortunately, that will have to be denied. It buffs NPCs too much.


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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Fri May 10, 2019 7:02 pm

    Edits have all been made.


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Wed May 15, 2019 7:37 am

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    Satori Ryuutei wrote:Update Type: Class & General
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    Information: Turning in some threads for the Ryo and EXP. Gaining 3,975 EXP and 151,000 Ryo for 8,275 Total EXP giving him X-Class for an extra 1,000 Spendable EXP. He will then be sacrificing his skill points immediately for an extra 1,500 Spendable EXP. Giving him a new total of 6,945 Spendable EXP and 263,660 Ryo. From here he will then be spending 3,000 of his EXP to buy the following Bloodline traits and 1,500 of this EXP to buy his Speed, Constitution and Strength from C to B Rank to cap himself at 23 Stat Raises. Lowering his spendable EXP to 2,225, and raising his total Spent EXP to 10,950. Also gains +200 Renown for becoming the head of the Ryuutei Clan.

    Chakra Scent [500 EXP]: Ryuutei's enhanced senses can be trained to evolve to a new level the more it is used. This allows a Ryuutei to smell and track chakra similarly to how physical scents can be traced (ie. Smelling the difference between two different peoples chakra). This does not allow them any detailed information of chakra beyond the fact it's being used, and a general idea of how much chakra an individual has or is being gathered, nor can it tell them the exact location of the chakra, only that they're in the general proximity of it. This amplifies their sensory abilities granting them + to Perception, with its range being based on training. Due to their heightened senses, techniques that use strong odors or genjutsu that targets the Ryuute's smell and land cause a loss of -- to Perception while they are under its influence and are unable to perform their tracking/chakra smelling. As well, tracking chakra through scent is nothing like tracking physical smells as the Ryuutei's mind must focus entirely on the chakra they wish, only allowing them to track one chakra signature at a time. They can only track 1 scent per thread and once they track a scent they cannot switch to another. They remained locked onto that scent for the remainder of the thread.

    • E-Class: 5m Range
    • D-Class: 10m Range
    • C-Class: 25m Range
    • B-Class: 50m Range
    • A-Class: 150m Range
    • S-Class: 300m Range
    • X-Class: 500m Range

    Feral Progression [500 EXP]: Some Ryuutei are born with abnormal amounts of the Bijuu chakra within them, generally due to their side of the family having cannibalized itself causing the diluted chakra to steadily build up within the branch until it was passed down and condensed into the character. This can also be acquired by eating large quantities of other Ryuutei, heavy chakra users (individuals with A-Rank or higher stamina), or Bijuu flesh. By doing so their raw chakra, as well as feral traits all are enhanced even further than normal. This grants the Ryuutei a further + to their Stamina and Perception, this cannot push these Stats to X-Rank.

    Ritual of Flesh [1,000 EXP]: Ryuutei are able to evolve their dietary abilities and evolve their stomachs even further so that when they devour the chakra-rich flesh of others, they are able to not only regenerate their bodies but also empower themselves with a temporary burst of energy from the meal. This means that while "Feast of Flesh" is active, the Ryuutei gains the normal benefits but also gains a + to Strength, Speed, Coordination, and Perception. This can never push these stats into X-Rank. This also unlocks the special "Ritual of Flesh and Water" Clan Technique.

    Pack Hunters [500 EXP]: Ryuutei's natural chakra and animalistic traits have caused them to specifically evolve with a supernatural empathy toward felines. Felines instinctually see Ryuutei as one of their own, allowing interactions with them to be far easier. This causes combination techniques with the felines tremendously easier as they can act based on one another's body language and physical tells, not having to rely on verbal communication. While feline-based summons/pets are active, both the Ryuutei and the feline(s) gain an extra ++ to Coordination and + to Speed. This cannot push these stats to X-Rank.

    Unbreaking Claws [500 EXP]: Through extensive abuse of their claws and fangs, constantly using them against opponents and hard materials, the Ryuutei's body will naturally adjust over time. This causes their natural weapons to steadily grow stronger, causing them to become A-Rank quality and hardness. Their teeth and claws infinitely regrow, the speed of such being equal to one IC day per rank of stamina that they have.

    He will also be gaining access to the following list of techniques that he learned in the above threads.

    Techniques Learned:

    I'd also like to request the following new UA group due to Satori acquiring X-Rank for his final update as far as UA's go.

    Chakra Eater: As a Ryuutei Satori has been feasting on the flesh and chakra of others for many years, and has finally reached a peak. Satori is able to physically eat the chakra of those that he bites and thus requires him to make contact of his teeth with the target's skin, it can draw blood or not, it's entirely up to him. This allows him to drain 5 Chakra instantly, and 15 Chakra, if he is able to maintain his mouths, hold on the target for an entire post. This drained chakra then restores his own. Any break of contact with his mouth to the skin will end the drain prematurely locking it at 5 Chakra having been drained.  This is capped at 15 drainable chakra per post and up to half Satori's total Chakra per thread can be absorbed total. This cannot put him past his total Chakra Pool.

    Expert Leader: Satori has spent his entire life tutoring, assisting, and strategizing with his peers, superiors, and clan. This has led to not only having an incredibly intelligent mind but also a keen insight into how to lead and assist others in taking away as much as possible from any battle or conflict. Any threads Satori is in grants any of his students, or PC acting under his orders as a commander an extra 5 EXP per post. In return, Satori loses 5 EXP per post during missions.

    Body Flicker Master: Through the years, Satori has performed the body flicker technique as an emergency mode of transportation as well as a key weapon for emergency defenses. This has led to him burning the technique into his muscle memory and chakra control to the point he can perform the technique near-subconsciously, in return for expending more chakra through the instinctual activation of the technique. Satori may perform the body flicker technique and any of its variants using no handseals, in return for increasing its chakra cost by one rank.

    Medical Specialist: Satori has dedicated himself to the usage of medical techniques tremendously, to the point that he has realized how incredibly natural they come to him. This refined focus has come at the cost of not following his clan teachings as much, however, and often not relying on his clan's summons during battle. As such any medical techniques have their chakra cost lowered by one rank, in return all Kuchiyose techniques have their chakra cost increased by one rank. In the instance of techniques having a higher base cost have their costs increased or lowered by 30%. [ie. An S-Rank medical technique costs 50 chakra, it would have its cost lowered by 15.]

    Enchantment Expertise: Satori has studied Fuuinjutsu and Enchantments heavily since his acquisition of them. This focus has allowed him to begin learning how to create complex enchantments that bond two different concepts together into one. This allows him to apply up to two enchantments on one item at the cost of 50% more Ryo for both enchantments than normal.

    New Totals

    Class: X
    Rank: Genin
    Age: 14
    Ryo: 253,660
    Renown: 200
    Total EXP: 8,275
    Spendable EXP: 2,225
    Spent EXP: 10,950 [1,050 (Starter)+5,500 (Earned)+3,000 (Class Up)+1,500 (SP Sacrifice)]
    Skills: Bloodline, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kuchiyose, Ijutsu
    Stats:

    • Strength: B
    • Constitution: B
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: B
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: B


    Approved. Congratulations on being the first character on the site to go from E-Class to X-Class. Take 100 bonus experience.


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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Wed May 15, 2019 7:53 am

    This is a WIP Update please do not grade just yet.

    Update Type: Class & General
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    Information: Turning in some threads for the Ryo and EXP. Also spending 20,000 Ryo (going into Miyu's wallet) to purchase a set of Ebony Ryuutei Studs that are inserted into the piercing slots he already had. He's then enchanted two of the entire full-body set as found in the thread above. Each stud has one separate enchantment added to it for 100,000 Ryo total, a Store for 150,000 Ryo, and the Range and Chemistry Set as well for 75,000 Ryo. Also paying for the 5,000 Ryo to maintain his shop for the month of June. Leaving Satori with a total of 23,660 Ryo left in his wallet.

    As well he has acquired an organ from Miyu to acquire the Uzumaki Bloodline for a future implant. He has sealed it and placed it into stasis via his S-Rank Sealing Technique "Stasis Seal", and sealed it into his smallest scroll to have implanted into his body at a later date. The stasis seal allowing him to ignore the usual time-restrained caused by taking an organ.

    Also removing the UA that stat trades "Predator", and would like to keep "Seal Manipulation" with the following edits instead:

    Seal Manipulation: Satori is an incredibly creative and intelligent individual, between his tactical abilities and skill at creating techniques rapidly, it has allowed him to develop the ability to alter techniques on the fly. He is able to lessen the number of hand-seals required to perform the technique in return for lowering the power of the technique by 1 rank per 3 handseals removed. He is similarly able to add handseals to a technique to increase its power at the rate of 3 extra handseals per +1 Rank of Power. This cannot raise a technique beyond S-Rank power.

    Also changing the housing + to Coordination instead of Speed. Also requesting to have him raised to 5,000 Renown for becoming the Head Medic of the land of water (compared to ANBU, approved by Nyg). From that gaining the +50,000 Ryo and his free A-Rank Item, the first title is "Surgeon of Death", second is "Black Lion", and third is currently unclaimed until IC actions create another one. Free Unique NPC will be added at a later date after roleplay has introduced them.

    Items Gained:

    He will also be gaining access to the following list of techniques that he learned in the above threads. As well as some of these techniques have an EXP cost, Satori is spending 2,500 EXP for Cellular Osmosis (1,000), Refined Surgery (500) and Chakra Channeling (1,000). Between these expenditures as well as the gains found above, this leaves him at ___ Total, ___ Spent, and ____ Spendable remaining.

    Techniques Learned:

    New Totals

    Class: X
    Rank: Chunin
    Age: 14
    Ryo: 23,660
    Renown: 1,400
    Housing Buff: Coordination
    Attunement Slots: Perception Buff, Coordination Buff, Open
    Total EXP: 8,275
    Spendable EXP: 2,225
    Spent EXP: 10,950 [1,050 (Starter)+5,500 (Earned)+3,000 (Class Up)+1,500 (SP Sacrifice)]
    Skills: Bloodline, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kuchiyose, Ijutsu
    Stats:

    • Strength: B
    • Constitution: B
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: B
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: B


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Mon May 27, 2019 8:04 pm

    The Seal Manipulation UA is unapproved as are the stat boosting UAs. You can only have 2 stat boosting UAs and they each can only increase a stat by 1 tier.


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