Akihiro's jutsu

Name: Advanced Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: D-rank
Range: Self/Same as Kawarimi
Speed: Non-appliable
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Same as Kawarimi no Jutsu. Having Genjutsu Skill
Parent Technique: Kawarimi no Jutsu, the Substitution Technique
Hand Seals: Tiger
Description: This is a clever technique devised by Uchiha Akihiro, which makes use of the Genjutsu ninja art to go one step beyond in the use of Substitution Technique. This jutsu basically functions just like the Substitution Technique but allows the user to place its victim under a Genjutsu that tricks them into being fooled for a longer time.
Upon being placed under this technique, the victim will see the log (or whatever object was used for substitution) behaving just like the user if the attack had succeeded. For example, if someone tries to stab the user and this technique is used, the stabber will be put under a Genjutsu and will see the log as its victim's body, stabbed and bleeding. Unlike the regular Kawarimi no Jutsu, where the trick is dispelled after a couple of seconds and the log returns to its usual appearance, this technique allows the log to retain the user's appearance for much longer as long as the upkeep cost is being paid.
Weaknesses: Standard Genjutsu rules apply (Perception and Intelligence checks as described in the rules).

Name: Flying Sparrow
Rank: C-rank
Power: C-rank
Activation Cost: C-rank
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 100 meters
Speed: B-rank
Element: Wind Release
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Fuuton
Parent Technique: None
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: This is Akihiro's signature technique, and the one which earned him his nickname. After performing the required hand-seal, Akihiro spews a small sparrow made entirely our of wind. This creatures travels towards opponents and tries to pierce through them. Because of the Wind Release nature of this technique, the sparrow has incredibly high piercing and slashing power, which makes it very dangerous upon contact. Upon piercing an opponent's body, the sparrow explodes into many tiny wind blades that cause massive internal damage to its victims. The explosion is rather small, only 50 cm in diameter, but it can be devastating if placed right. If the sparrow clashes with something it can't pierce, it explodes immediately. Additionally, because of its bird-like form, this projectile can change direction midflight, and chase its enemies until it hits a target. The maximum distance it can travel is still 100 meters, however. If 100 meters are reached and it hasn't hit anything, the sparrow will explode.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Quick Jump
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: 3 points
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: Fuuton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Fuuton
Parent Technique: None
Hand Seals: None
Description: A very simple technique. By focusing Fuuton chakra on one's feet, they quickly expell air and jump. This technique can be used on the ground to jump much higher than usual, or in the air to gain a platform to delay a fall. Despited being very simple, this technique can be used to prevent death from falls or quickly escape an incoming attack.
Weaknesses: -

1. Advanced Sub - I assume the trigger is the opponent seeing the substituted item? You need to explicitly identify the trigger.

2. Cut down the range to a max of 50 meters. Cut down the damage from massive to moderate. Decrease the Speed from B to C.

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:

Name: Quick Jump
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: 3 points
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: Fuuton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Fuuton
Parent Technique: None
Hand Seals: None
Description: A very simple technique. By focusing Fuuton chakra on one's feet, they quickly expell air and jump. This technique can be used on the ground to jump much higher than usual, or in the air to gain a platform to delay a fall. Despited being very simple, this technique can be used to prevent death from falls or quickly escape an incoming attack.
Weaknesses: -

Approved

Name: Advanced Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: D-rank
Range: Self/Same as Kawarimi
Speed: Non-appliable
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Same as Kawarimi no Jutsu. Having Genjutsu Skill
Parent Technique: Kawarimi no Jutsu, the Substitution Technique
Hand Seals: Tiger
Description: This is a clever technique devised by Uchiha Akihiro, which makes use of the Genjutsu ninja art to go one step beyond in the use of Substitution Technique. This jutsu basically functions just like the Substitution Technique but allows the user to place its victim under a Genjutsu that tricks them into being fooled for a longer time.
Upon being placed under this technique, the victim will see the log (or whatever object was used for substitution) behaving just like the user if the attack had succeeded. For example, if someone tries to stab the user and this technique is used, the stabber will be put under a Genjutsu and will see the log as its victim's body, stabbed and bleeding. Unlike the regular Kawarimi no Jutsu, where the trick is dispelled after a couple of seconds and the log returns to its usual appearance, this technique allows the log to retain the user's appearance for much longer as long as the upkeep cost is being paid.
The trigger for this jutsu is the opponent seeing the user/the Kawarimi'd object. Can be stacked vertically with False Surroundings, the Double False Surroundings, or the Vanish Technique which will trigger once the first illusion is dispelled.
Weaknesses: Standard Genjutsu rules apply (Perception and Intelligence checks as described in the rules).

Added trigger and stacking indications.



Name: Flying Sparrow
Rank: C-rank
Power: C-rank
Activation Cost: C-rank
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 50 meters
Speed: C-rank
Element: Wind Release
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Fuuton
Parent Technique: None
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: This is Akihiro's signature technique, and the one which earned him his nickname. After performing the required hand-seal, Akihiro spews a small sparrow made entirely our of wind. This creatures travels towards opponents and tries to pierce through them. Because of the Wind Release nature of this technique, the sparrow has incredibly high piercing and slashing power, which makes it very dangerous upon contact. Upon piercing an opponent's body, the sparrow explodes into many tiny wind blades that cause massive internal damage to its victims. The explosion is rather small, only 50 cm in diameter, but it can be devastating if placed right. If the sparrow clashes with something it can't pierce, it explodes immediately. Additionally, because of its bird-like form, this projectile can change direction mid-flight, and chase its enemies until it hits a target. The can travel within a 50 meters radius from the user, however. If the 50 meters mark is reached and surpassed, the sparrow will explode.
Weaknesses: Elemental jutsu weaknesses apply. Fire releases of D-rank can cause this little bird to enter not-so-spontaneous combustion.

Distance and speed reduced.


Name: Vanish Technique
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: D-rank
Range: 50 meters
Speed: N/A
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Fuuton
Parent Technique: None
Hand Seals: Snake
Description: This technique allows Akihiro to hide his presence on the battlefield. It allows him to trick a single opponent into suddenly stop seeing, hearing or smelling him. The technique will trigger once the opponent looks at Akihiro. This jutsu can be vertically stacked with Advanced Kawarimi Technique in order to hide the user's presence after the user faked their own death.
Weaknesses: Standard Genjutsu rules apply. Doesn't mask user's chakra signature.

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:Name: Advanced Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: D-rank
Range: Self/Same as Kawarimi
Speed: Non-appliable
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Same as Kawarimi no Jutsu. Having Genjutsu Skill
Parent Technique: Kawarimi no Jutsu, the Substitution Technique
Hand Seals: Tiger
Description: This is a clever technique devised by Uchiha Akihiro, which makes use of the Genjutsu ninja art to go one step beyond in the use of Substitution Technique. This jutsu basically functions just like the Substitution Technique but allows the user to place its victim under a Genjutsu that tricks them into being fooled for a longer time.
Upon being placed under this technique, the victim will see the log (or whatever object was used for substitution) behaving just like the user if the attack had succeeded. For example, if someone tries to stab the user and this technique is used, the stabber will be put under a Genjutsu and will see the log as its victim's body, stabbed and bleeding. Unlike the regular Kawarimi no Jutsu, where the trick is dispelled after a couple of seconds and the log returns to its usual appearance, this technique allows the log to retain the user's appearance for much longer as long as the upkeep cost is being paid.
The trigger for this jutsu is the opponent seeing the user/the Kawarimi'd object. Can be stacked vertically with False Surroundings, the Double False Surroundings, or the Vanish Technique which will trigger once the first illusion is dispelled.
Weaknesses: Standard Genjutsu rules apply (Perception and Intelligence checks as described in the rules).

Added trigger and stacking indications.

1. Advanced Sub:

"Can be stacked vertically with False Surroundings, the Double False Surroundings, or the Vanish Technique which will trigger once the first illusion is dispelled. "

Can you be a bit clearer here? Are you saying that once Advanced Sub is dispelled that False Surroundings, the Double False Surroundings, or the Vanish Technique will trigger?

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:Name: Flying Sparrow
Rank: C-rank
Power: C-rank
Activation Cost: C-rank
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 50 meters
Speed: C-rank
Element: Wind Release
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Fuuton
Parent Technique: None
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: This is Akihiro's signature technique, and the one which earned him his nickname. After performing the required hand-seal, Akihiro spews a small sparrow made entirely our of wind. This creatures travels towards opponents and tries to pierce through them. Because of the Wind Release nature of this technique, the sparrow has incredibly high piercing and slashing power, which makes it very dangerous upon contact. Upon piercing an opponent's body, the sparrow explodes into many tiny wind blades that cause massive internal damage to its victims. The explosion is rather small, only 50 cm in diameter, but it can be devastating if placed right. If the sparrow clashes with something it can't pierce, it explodes immediately. Additionally, because of its bird-like form, this projectile can change direction mid-flight, and chase its enemies until it hits a target. The can travel within a 50 meters radius from the user, however. If the 50 meters mark is reached and surpassed, the sparrow will explode.
Weaknesses: Elemental jutsu weaknesses apply. Fire releases of D-rank can cause this little bird to enter not-so-spontaneous combustion.

Approved

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:
Name: Vanish Technique
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: D-rank
Range: 50 meters
Speed: N/A
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Fuuton
Parent Technique: None
Hand Seals: Snake
Description: This technique allows Akihiro to hide his presence on the battlefield. It allows him to trick a single opponent into suddenly stop seeing, hearing or smelling him. The technique will trigger once the opponent looks at Akihiro. This jutsu can be vertically stacked with Advanced Kawarimi Technique in order to hide the user's presence after the user faked their own death.
Weaknesses: Standard Genjutsu rules apply. Doesn't mask user's chakra signature.

Same as above the language with regarding needs to be explicitly clear. Meaning it needs to be some proximation of: this jutsu can be vertally stacked with Advanced Kawa Tech in order to hide the user's presence after the user faked their own death. This means that when Advanced Kawa Tech is dispelled, its dissolution will serve as the trigger for Vanish

That said this Genjutsu allows for invisibility at a fairly high level. It should have another drawback that forces you to move a bit slower than normal while it is in effect. Reduces Speed or Coor by 1 tier sould be good.

Also why does this tech require Fuuton?

Name: Advanced Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: D-rank
Range: Self/Same as Kawarimi
Speed: Non-appliable
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Same as Kawarimi no Jutsu. Having Genjutsu Skill
Parent Technique: Kawarimi no Jutsu, the Substitution Technique
Hand Seals: Tiger
Description: This is a clever technique devised by Uchiha Akihiro, which makes use of the Genjutsu ninja art to go one step beyond in the use of Substitution Technique. This jutsu basically functions just like the Substitution Technique but allows the user to place its victim under a Genjutsu that tricks them into being fooled for a longer time.
Upon being placed under this technique, the victim will see the log (or whatever object was used for substitution) behaving just like the user if the attack had succeeded. For example, if someone tries to stab the user and this technique is used, the stabber will be put under a Genjutsu and will see the log as its victim's body, stabbed and bleeding. Unlike the regular Kawarimi no Jutsu, where the trick is dispelled after a couple of seconds and the log returns to its usual appearance, this technique allows the log to retain the user's appearance for much longer as long as the upkeep cost is being paid.
The trigger for this jutsu is the opponent seeing the user/the Kawarimi'd object. Can be stacked vertically with False Surroundings, the Double False Surroundings, or the Vanish Technique. Any of which (but only a single one) may trigger once the first illusion is dispelled. This means depending on which of these three Genjutsus the user chooses to stack, the dissolution of Advanced Kawarimi will serve as a trigger for these techniques.
Weaknesses: Standard Genjutsu rules apply (Perception and Intelligence checks as described in the rules).

Name: Vanish Technique
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: D-rank
Range: 50 meters
Speed: N/A
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: None
Parent Technique: None
Hand Seals: Snake
Description: This technique allows Akihiro to hide his presence on the battlefield. It allows him to trick a single opponent into suddenly stop seeing, hearing or smelling him. The technique will trigger once the opponent looks at Akihiro. This jutsu can be vertically stacked with Advanced Kawarimi Technique in order to hide the user's presence after the user faked their own death. This means that when Advanced Kawa Tech is dispelled, its dissolution will serve as the trigger for Vanish.
Weaknesses: Standard Genjutsu rules apply. Doesn't mask user's chakra signature.
Because of the concentration required to maintain this jutsu, the user's Coord drops by a tier while it is active.

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:Name: Advanced Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: D-rank
Range: Self/Same as Kawarimi
Speed: Non-appliable
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Same as Kawarimi no Jutsu. Having Genjutsu Skill
Parent Technique: Kawarimi no Jutsu, the Substitution Technique
Hand Seals: Tiger
Description: This is a clever technique devised by Uchiha Akihiro, which makes use of the Genjutsu ninja art to go one step beyond in the use of Substitution Technique. This jutsu basically functions just like the Substitution Technique but allows the user to place its victim under a Genjutsu that tricks them into being fooled for a longer time.
Upon being placed under this technique, the victim will see the log (or whatever object was used for substitution) behaving just like the user if the attack had succeeded. For example, if someone tries to stab the user and this technique is used, the stabber will be put under a Genjutsu and will see the log as its victim's body, stabbed and bleeding. Unlike the regular Kawarimi no Jutsu, where the trick is dispelled after a couple of seconds and the log returns to its usual appearance, this technique allows the log to retain the user's appearance for much longer as long as the upkeep cost is being paid.
The trigger for this jutsu is the opponent seeing the user/the Kawarimi'd object. Can be stacked vertically with False Surroundings, the Double False Surroundings, or the Vanish Technique. Any of which (but only a single one) may trigger once the first illusion is dispelled. This means depending on which of these three Genjutsus the user chooses to stack, the dissolution of Advanced Kawarimi will serve as a trigger for these techniques.
Weaknesses: Standard Genjutsu rules apply (Perception and Intelligence checks as described in the rules).

Name: Vanish Technique
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: D-rank
Range: 50 meters
Speed: N/A
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: None
Parent Technique: None
Hand Seals: Snake
Description: This technique allows Akihiro to hide his presence on the battlefield. It allows him to trick a single opponent into suddenly stop seeing, hearing or smelling him. The technique will trigger once the opponent looks at Akihiro. This jutsu can be vertically stacked with Advanced Kawarimi Technique in order to hide the user's presence after the user faked their own death. This means that when Advanced Kawa Tech is dispelled, its dissolution will serve as the trigger for Vanish.
Weaknesses: Standard Genjutsu rules apply. Doesn't mask user's chakra signature.
Because of the concentration required to maintain this jutsu, the user's Coord drops by a tier
while it is active.

Approved

Name: Sparrow's Mirror
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: Varies with range. 0-25 meters E-rank. 26-51 D-rank. 52-100 C-rank
Range: Up to 100 meters
Speed: B-rank
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Genjutsu Skill
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: The first thing you need to know about this Genjutsu, is that it doesn't affect anyone within the described range. This Genjutsu extends the user's chakra outwards and creates an invisible barrier at the end of the stated range. Within this radius, no one is affected. What this barrier do is simply change the look of whatever is inside the barrier for whatever is outside the barrier. For example, if a tree is inside the barrier the user may make it look like a person for anyone looking from outside the barrier. Or the user can make the tree vanish. This is achieved by reflecting light differently towards the outside of the barrier. Using Kai against this technique is pointless because this jutsu doesn't interfere with its victim's tenketsu. This technique is mainly used to mask the user's presence while camping in hostile grounds but it does have some practical applications on the battlefield such as hiding key points or key objects.
Weaknesses:
The catch on this Genjutsu is that the barrier is very fragile. Due to its complexity, it falls apart if anyone steps inside it. For example, if there's a 25-meter radius barrier around the user and an opponent enters that radius the Genjutsu is immediately dispelled and falls apart without the opponent having to pay any chakra or using Kai to dispell the Genjutsu. An Intelligence check is not needed to dispell this Genjutsu if one steps inside the barrier.
It should be noted that a real body needs to step inside the barrier to dispell the jutsu. Objects won't have this effect. The barrier doesn't protect from anything physical although it affects it. For example, throwing a kunai towards the barrier may cause the tool to seem to "disappear" as it steps in but it will follow its regular course once inside.
Technique is vulnerable against Dojutsu like Byakugan and Sharingan which can clearly see through it.

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:Name: Sparrow's Mirror
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: Varies with range. 0-25 meters E-rank. 26-51 D-rank. 52-100 C-rank
Range: Up to 100 meters
Speed: B-rank
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Genjutsu Skill
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: The first thing you need to know about this Genjutsu, is that it doesn't affect anyone within the described range. This Genjutsu extends the user's chakra outwards and creates an invisible barrier at the end of the stated range. Within this radius, no one is affected. What this barrier do is simply change the look of whatever is inside the barrier for whatever is outside the barrier. For example, if a tree is inside the barrier the user may make it look like a person for anyone looking from outside the barrier. Or the user can make the tree vanish. This is achieved by reflecting light differently towards the outside of the barrier. Using Kai against this technique is pointless because this jutsu doesn't interfere with its victim's tenketsu. This technique is mainly used to mask the user's presence while camping in hostile grounds but it does have some practical applications on the battlefield such as hiding key points or key objects.
Weaknesses:
The catch on this Genjutsu is that the barrier is very fragile. Due to its complexity, it falls apart if anyone steps inside it. For example, if there's a 25-meter radius barrier around the user and an opponent enters that radius the Genjutsu is immediately dispelled and falls apart without the opponent having to pay any chakra or using Kai to dispell the Genjutsu. An Intelligence check is not needed to dispell this Genjutsu if one steps inside the barrier.
It should be noted that a real body needs to step inside the barrier to dispell the jutsu. Objects won't have this effect. The barrier doesn't protect from anything physical although it affects it. For example, throwing a kunai towards the barrier may cause the tool to seem to "disappear" as it steps in but it will follow its regular course once inside.
Technique is vulnerable against Dojutsu like Byakugan and Sharingan which can clearly see through it.

Approved

Name: Sparrow's Mirror
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: Varies with range. 0-25 meters E-rank. 26-51 D-rank. 52-100 C-rank
Range: Up to 100 meters
Speed: B-rank
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Genjutsu Skill
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: The first thing you need to know about this Genjutsu, is that it doesn't affect anyone within the described range. This Genjutsu extends the user's chakra outwards and creates an invisible barrier at the end of the stated range. Within this radius, no one is affected. What this barrier do is simply change the look of whatever is inside the barrier for whatever is outside the barrier. For example, if a tree is inside the barrier the user may make it look like a person for anyone looking from outside the barrier. Or the user can make the tree vanish. This is achieved by reflecting light differently towards the outside of the barrier. Using Kai against this technique is pointless because this jutsu doesn't interfere with its victim's tenketsu. This technique is mainly used to mask the user's presence while camping in hostile grounds but it does have some practical applications on the battlefield such as hiding key points or key objects.
The user can choose to extend or retract the barrier at B-rank speed, paying the respective range chakra costs.
Weaknesses:
The catch on this Genjutsu is that the barrier is very fragile. Due to its complexity, it falls apart if anyone steps inside it. For example, if there's a 25-meter radius barrier around the user and an opponent enters that radius the Genjutsu is immediately dispelled and falls apart without the opponent having to pay any chakra or using Kai to dispell the Genjutsu. An Intelligence check is not needed to dispell this Genjutsu if one steps inside the barrier.
It should be noted that a real body needs to step inside the barrier to dispell the jutsu. Objects won't have this effect. The barrier doesn't protect from anything physical although it affects it. For example, throwing a kunai towards the barrier may cause the tool to seem to "disappear" as it steps in but it will follow its regular course once inside.
Technique is vulnerable against Dojutsu like Byakugan and Sharingan which can clearly see through it.


Reposting this with an important detail I missed. Sorry xP

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:Name: Sparrow's Mirror
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: Varies with range. 0-25 meters E-rank. 26-51 D-rank. 52-100 C-rank
Range: Up to 100 meters
Speed: B-rank
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: Genjutsu Skill
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: The first thing you need to know about this Genjutsu, is that it doesn't affect anyone within the described range. This Genjutsu extends the user's chakra outwards and creates an invisible barrier at the end of the stated range. Within this radius, no one is affected. What this barrier do is simply change the look of whatever is inside the barrier for whatever is outside the barrier. For example, if a tree is inside the barrier the user may make it look like a person for anyone looking from outside the barrier. Or the user can make the tree vanish. This is achieved by reflecting light differently towards the outside of the barrier. Using Kai against this technique is pointless because this jutsu doesn't interfere with its victim's tenketsu. This technique is mainly used to mask the user's presence while camping in hostile grounds but it does have some practical applications on the battlefield such as hiding key points or key objects.
The user can choose to extend or retract the barrier at B-rank speed, paying the respective range chakra costs.
Weaknesses:
The catch on this Genjutsu is that the barrier is very fragile. Due to its complexity, it falls apart if anyone steps inside it. For example, if there's a 25-meter radius barrier around the user and an opponent enters that radius the Genjutsu is immediately dispelled and falls apart without the opponent having to pay any chakra or using Kai to dispell the Genjutsu. An Intelligence check is not needed to dispell this Genjutsu if one steps inside the barrier.
It should be noted that a real body needs to step inside the barrier to dispell the jutsu. Objects won't have this effect. The barrier doesn't protect from anything physical although it affects it. For example, throwing a kunai towards the barrier may cause the tool to seem to "disappear" as it steps in but it will follow its regular course once inside.
Technique is vulnerable against Dojutsu like Byakugan and Sharingan which can clearly see through it.


Reposting this with an important detail I missed. Sorry xP

Approved

Name: Sparrow Encryption Method
Rank: A-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuuinjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals:N/A
Description: This technique is used to encrypt and decrypt messages. It maybe be used in two different ways.
1. It can be applied to a scroll. When a person writes a message on it, the fuuinjutsu will take a sample of the person's chakra and encrypt the message, making it unreadable by anyone else. It will only be decrypted by applying the chakra of the person who first applied the Fuuinjutsu to the scroll.

2. If the user has a sample of another person's chakra (sealed on another one of these scrolls foe example) they can encrypt a message and send it to that person. Upon receiving the message, the person needs only to apply chakra to decrypt the message.
Weaknesses:
The message can be forcefully decrypted by someone who surpasses the original user's Intelligence.

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:Name: Sparrow Encryption Method
Rank: A-rank
Power: Null
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuuinjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals:N/A
Description: This technique is used to encrypt and decrypt messages. It maybe be used in two different ways.
1. It can be applied to a scroll. When a person writes a message on it, the fuuinjutsu will take a sample of the person's chakra and encrypt the message, making it unreadable by anyone else. It will only be decrypted by applying the chakra of the person who first applied the Fuuinjutsu to the scroll.

2. If the user has a sample of another person's chakra (sealed on another one of these scrolls foe example) they can encrypt a message and send it to that person. Upon receiving the message, the person needs only to apply chakra to decrypt the message.
Weaknesses:
The message can be forcefully decrypted by someone who surpasses the original user's Intelligence.

What happens when someone removes the chakra from the message itself? Gonna need some drawbacks for this. My personal suggestion would be to incorporate the Sharingan, and change it so that Sharingan users of the equal tomoe/stage can decrypt it, with the same applying to standard fuuinjutsu users after following the standard rule on removing fuuinjutsu based on intelligence to affect the post count required.

I'm not sure what you mean by chakra on the message. Maybe I didn't explain myself properly. This jutsu is a mechanism to encrypt and decrypt messages. The Fuuinjutsu itself doesn't store the message, the scroll does.

Let's say I apply the fuuinjutsu to a scroll and then write:
"My name is Lyon".

The Fuuinjutsu present on the scroll would take a sample of my chakra and alter the letters on that message. So by then it would be read, for example:

"ue jdkp gw aucn"

At this point, removing or breaking the Fuuinjutsu would just remove the engine that decrypts the message. The message on the scroll would still be "ue jdkp gw aucn", but it would not be impossible to decrypt.

The sharingan gives no advantage to decrypting the message. The sharingan user can clearly see the letters even without activating it. Decrypting would depend on the sharingan user's Intelligence.
Fuuinjutsu users can remove the fuuinjutsu but the way this jutsu is designed that doesn't mean decrypting the message. It just means the message can't be decrypted anymore. Additionally, members who have Intelligence which surpass the original user's *can* decrypt the message but that's because they can look at the code and deduce its pattern, thus finding the original message.
I don't see why this would need any more drawbacks. It's a simple encrypting jutsu that depends on the user's Intelligence to be efficient.

Think of the Fuuinjutsu like a black box. You throw a message in, it comes out encrypted. You throw the encrypted in, it comes out decrypted. Removing the box doesn't affect the messages already written.

I'm saying that the only method of decryption being based around having superior intellect (which would literally require X Intelligence in this case) isn't feasible. Tweak it so that it requires equal or higher intelligence.

Copycat wrote:I'm saying that the only method of decryption being based around having superior intellect (which would literally require X Intelligence in this case) isn't feasible. Tweak it so that it requires equal or higher intelligence.

The reason this would require X ranked Intelligence is because I invested thousands of points into Intelligence. Which, btw, is directly related to Fuuinjutsu.


If this jutsu is used by someone with D-ranked Intelligence, you'll only need C-ranked Intelligence to decrypt the code. So the need of X-tier Intelligence as an argument to deny this jutsu is a mute argument.

The reason you need higher Intelligence is that it's harder to Decrypt a code than it is to Encrypt it. If an intelligent person encrypts something, it's going to take someone smarter than the first person to manually decrypt it without any sort of key.

I think you're missing the point of this jutsu. This jutsu is basically a key management jutsu.

Technically, Akihiro could arguably already manually come up with a code that would be impossible even for him to break without the key. Security programmers do that daily and most of them aren't part the 1% most intelligent population, lol. With Akihiro's Intelligence, I wouldn't need a jutsu for that. The reason I *am* making a jutsu is because I want key management, and I want chakra to be a key.
If you possess a sample of the right chakra you don't need superior intellect- you have the key.

Regardless of simplicity it's still a technique with only two weaknesses -- neither of which follow the standard that Fuuinjutsu has on here. In my personal opinion this is a no go in its current state.

Copycat wrote:Regardless of simplicity it's still a technique with only two weaknesses -- neither of which follow the standard that Fuuinjutsu has on here. In my personal opinion this is a no go in its current state.

It does follow the standard Fuuinjutsu rule. You can break down the Fuuinjutsu with equal Int, obviously, and make it impossible to decrypt the message and have the sampled chakra lost.

But you can't decrypt the message by breaking down the fuuinjutsu because you took appart the engine that decrypts it.

If you're Intelligent enough you don't even need to break the Fuuinjutsu to decrypt the message. You can just look at it and manually do it ._. Instantly.

But if you're only as Intelligent as the user, you can only follow the Fuuinjutsu rules and are able to break the Fuuinjutsu, which is the engine that decrypts the message and stores chakra samples.

Engine destroyed, no decryption.

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:If you're Intelligent enough you don't even need to break the Fuuinjutsu to decrypt the message. You can just look at it and manually do it ._. Instantly.

Add this bit into the technique if that's the case -- with intelligence difference being the number of posts someone spends trying this method. Unless you intend for it to only be done with superior intelligence.

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:Name: Sparrow Encryption Method
Rank: A-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuuinjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals:N/A
Description: This technique is used to encrypt and decrypt messages. It maybe be used in two different ways.
1. It can be applied to a scroll. When a person writes a message on it, the fuuinjutsu will take a sample of the person's chakra and encrypt the message, making it unreadable by anyone else. It will only be decrypted by applying the chakra of the person who first applied the Fuuinjutsu to the scroll.

2. If the user has a sample of another person's chakra (sealed on another one of these scrolls for example) they can encrypt a message and send it to that person. Upon receiving the message, the person needs only to apply chakra to decrypt the message.
Weaknesses:
The message can be forcefully decrypted by someone who surpasses the original user's Intelligence.

It literally was already there. It happens instantly if you have superior Intelligence to the user's.

I already explained why one needs to surpass the user's Intelligence: Decrypting is harder than encrypting. It's easy to come up with a code you can't break without a key or someone smarter than you.

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:Name: Sparrow Encryption Method
Rank: A-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuuinjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals:N/A
Description: This technique is used to encrypt and decrypt messages. It maybe be used in two different ways.
1. It can be applied to a scroll. When a person writes a message on it, the fuuinjutsu will take a sample of the person's chakra and encrypt the message, making it unreadable by anyone else. It will only be decrypted by applying the chakra of the person who first applied the Fuuinjutsu to the scroll.

2. If the user has a sample of another person's chakra (sealed on another one of these scrolls for example) they can encrypt a message and send it to that person. Upon receiving the message, the person needs only to apply chakra to decrypt the message.
Weaknesses:
The message can be forcefully decrypted by someone who surpasses the original user's Intelligence.

It literally was already there. It happens instantly if you have superior Intelligence to the user's.

I already explained why one needs to surpass the user's Intelligence: Decrypting is harder than encrypting. It's easy to come up with a code you can't break without a key or someone smarter than you.

If this has been explained, can someone pleaaaase approve this already?

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Name: Heavenly Eye
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Sight/50 meters
Speed: D-rank
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret / Clan
Requirements: Sharingan
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user creates a perfectly round sphere. This sphere is the image of an enlarged Sharingan eyeball with a radius which can range anywhere from 2cm (size of a normal eyeball) to 5 meters. It has the ability to float around at D-rank speed and up to 30 meters above the ground (although not necessarily 30 meters), which will give it the ability to slowly chase targets. Any target that looks upon this eyeball will find the Sharingan looking directly at him/her. This eye ball is an illusion and does not have a physical form, so any attacks or physical bodies just go through it. The eyeball gives the user the ability to cast Genjutsu which require eye contact (although it does not erase these jutsu's chakra cost).
Weaknesses: The eye ball does not allow the user to see through it, although the user will immediately know if someone made eye contact with it.

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Uchiha Akihiro wrote:Name: Sparrow Encryption Method
Rank: A-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuuinjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals:N/A
Description: This technique is used to encrypt and decrypt messages. It maybe be used in two different ways.
1. It can be applied to a scroll. When a person writes a message on it, the fuuinjutsu will take a sample of the person's chakra and encrypt the message, making it unreadable by anyone else. It will only be decrypted by applying the chakra of the person who first applied the Fuuinjutsu to the scroll.

2. If the user has a sample of another person's chakra (sealed on another one of these scrolls for example) they can encrypt a message and send it to that person. Upon receiving the message, the person needs only to apply chakra to decrypt the message.
Weaknesses:
The message can be forcefully decrypted by someone who surpasses the original user's Intelligence.

Approved.

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:
Name: Heavenly Eye
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Sight/50 meters
Speed: D-rank
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret / Clan
Requirements: Sharingan
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user creates a perfectly round sphere. This sphere is the image of an enlarged Sharingan eyeball with a radius which can range anywhere from 2cm (size of a normal eyeball) to 5 meters. It has the ability to float around at D-rank speed and up to 30 meters above the ground (although not necessarily 30 meters), which will give it the ability to slowly chase targets. Any target that looks upon this eyeball will find the Sharingan looking directly at him/her. This eye ball is an illusion and does not have a physical form, so any attacks or physical bodies just go through it. The eyeball gives the user the ability to cast Genjutsu which require eye contact (although it does not erase these jutsu's chakra cost).
Weaknesses: The eye ball does not allow the user to see through it, although the user will immediately know if someone made eye contact with it.

Denied because this would defeat the purpose of the eye contact trigger which is meant to be difficult to pull off. I'd allow this to be a trigger for your own seperate custom genjutsu but not function as a replacement for eye contact for canon Uchiha genjutsu.

Name:Gift of Kynareth
Rank: A-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: A-rank
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Same as KageBunshin
Speed: A-rank
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: A-rank Intelligence, Genjutsu
Parent Technique: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Hand Seals: Bird
Description:
This Genjutsu can be cast upon any animal, although it can not be cast upon summoned creatures bound by the Kuchiyose no Jutsu. It allows the user to take control of such animal, and gain full access to its body. Additionally, the user may extend his/her sensory abilities to such animal, allowing this jutsu to be extremely useful for tracking down running targets.
The same principle of the Kage Bunshin technique is used in terms of conscience- as when the Jutsu is cast, a second "user conscience" will take over the animal and force its will upon it. After the jutsu is released, the conscience will return to the original used and all knowledge will then be shared.
As for traveling rules, to this jutsu apply the same rules as any other clone jutsu.
The user pays a single A-ranked chakra amount, and like clones, the jutsu can be maintained indefinitely. However, each turn the Sensory Technique is active, the original user is drained a C-ranked Chakra amount.

Weaknesses:
All Genjutsu weaknesses apply (eg.applying Kai dispells all effects of the Genjutsu on the person it was applied on)
Killing the animal or using Kai on it disperses the Genjutsu.
Animals bound by Kuchiyose contracts are immune to this.




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Name:Ninja Style: Afterimage
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range:  40 meters radius or cast by Sharingan
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements:  Genjutsu
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Ram
Description:
The trigger for this Genjutsu is either Sharingan eye-contact or merely looking at the user's body.
After triggering this genjutsu either via hand-seals or the use of the Sharingan, the user can move unnoticed while leaving an afterimage behind. While this jutsu turns the user invisible to the eyes of its victims, it does not erase sounds nor chakra signatures.

Weaknesses:
The afterimage will look exactly like the user, but it won't make any sounds nor be able to move. If it is hit by something solid, the genjutsu will automatically disperse.

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Name: Sparrow's Judgment
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Sight
Speed: Sight
Element: N/A
Skill: Dõjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique/Sharingan
Requirements: A-rank Intelligence, Sharingan
Parent Technique: Copy Technique
Hand Seals: N/A
Description:
This jutsu makes use of the Sharingan and the user's immense knowledge to detect micro-expressions in someone's face. This allows the user to know whether or not someone is lying through their facial expressions alone.
Weaknesses:N/A

Uchiha Akihiro wrote:

Name: Sparrow's Judgment
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Sight
Speed: Sight
Element: N/A
Skill: Dõjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique/Sharingan
Requirements: A-rank Intelligence, Sharingan
Parent Technique: Copy Technique
Hand Seals: N/A
Description:
This jutsu makes use of the Sharingan and the user's immense knowledge to detect micro-expressions in someone's face. This allows the user to know whether or not someone is lying through their facial expressions alone.
Weaknesses:N/A

Approved.

Name:Gift of Kynareth
Rank: A-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: B-rank (Costs 1 B-rank per animal)
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Same as KageBunshin
Speed: A-rank
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: A-rank Intelligence, Genjutsu
Parent Technique: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Hand Seals: Bird
Description:
This Genjutsu can be cast upon any animal, although it can not be cast upon summoned creatures bound by the Kuchiyose no Jutsu. It allows the user to take control of such animal, and gain full access to its body. Additionally, the user may extend his/her sensory abilities to such animal, allowing this jutsu to be extremely useful for tracking down running targets.
The same principle of the Kage Bunshin technique is used in terms of conscience- as when the Jutsu is cast, a second "user conscience" will take over the animal and force its will upon it. After the jutsu is released, the conscience will return to the original used and all knowledge will then be shared.
As for traveling rules, to this jutsu apply the same rules as any other clone jutsu.
The user pays a single A-ranked chakra amount, and like clones, the jutsu can be maintained indefinitely. However, each turn the Sensory Technique is active, the original user is drained a C-ranked Chakra amount.

Weaknesses:
All Genjutsu weaknesses apply (eg.applying Kai dispells all effects of the Genjutsu on the person it was applied on)
Killing the animal or using Kai on it disperses the Genjutsu.
Animals bound by Kuchiyose contracts are immune to this.




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Name:Ninja Style: Afterimage
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: D-rank
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range:  40 meters radius or cast by Sharingan
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements:  Genjutsu
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Ram
Description:
The trigger for this Genjutsu is either Sharingan eye-contact or by intending to strike or somehow attack the user's body.
After triggering this genjutsu either via hand-seals or the use of the Sharingan, the user can move unnoticed while leaving an afterimage behind. While this jutsu turns the user invisible to the eyes of its victims, it does not erase sounds nor chakra signatures. The invisibility effect lasts for up to 10 seconds or until the afterimage is struck.

Weaknesses:
The afterimage will look exactly like the user, but it won't make any sounds nor be able to move. If it is hit by something solid, the genjutsu will automatically disperse.

Name:Gift of Kynareth
Rank: A-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: B-rank (Costs 1 B-rank per animal)
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Same as KageBunshin
Speed: A-rank
Element: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Secret Technique
Requirements: A-rank Intelligence, Genjutsu
Parent Technique: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Hand Seals: Bird
Description:
This Genjutsu can be cast upon any animal, although it can not be cast upon summoned creatures bound by the Kuchiyose no Jutsu. It allows the user to take control of such animal, and gain full access to its body. Additionally, the user may extend his/her sensory abilities to such animal, allowing this jutsu to be extremely useful for tracking down running targets.
The same principle of the Kage Bunshin technique is used in terms of conscience- as when the Jutsu is cast, a second "user conscience" will take over the animal and force its will upon it. After the jutsu is released, the conscience will return to the original used and all knowledge will then be shared.
As for traveling rules, to this jutsu apply the same rules as any other clone jutsu.
The user pays a single A-ranked chakra amount, and like clones, the jutsu can be maintained indefinitely. However, each turn the Sensory Technique is active, the original user is drained a C-ranked Chakra amount.

Weaknesses:
All Genjutsu weaknesses apply (eg.applying Kai dispells all effects of the Genjutsu on the person it was applied on)
Killing the animal or using Kai on it disperses the Genjutsu.
Animals bound by Kuchiyose contracts are immune to this.
Can be used on up to 5 animals at the same time.


LYON'S NOTE!
Hey this is Lyon, lol. I accidentally edited Shimi's post instead of my own.

Nyg's notes:
-Cap the number of animals GoK can be used on.

Regarding the 2nd jutsu:
- Intention to attack is a vague trigger.