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    Nakaba Custom Jutsu

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    Post by Nakaba Thu Aug 31, 2023 9:01 pm

    Code:
    [b]Name:[/b]
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    [b]Power:[/b]
    [b]Activation Cost:[/b]
    [b]Upkeep Cost:[/b]
    [b]Range:[/b]
    [b]Speed:[/b]
    [b]Element:[/b]
    [b]Skill:[/b]
    [b]Classification:[/b]
    [b]Requirements:[/b]
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    Post by Nakaba Thu Aug 31, 2023 11:36 pm

    i’m not sure if I’ve ever apped a genjutsu or taijutsu before, so I’m sure I’ve overlooked something.

    Leeward Shadow:

    Crumbling Boulder:

    Spinning + _:

    Left/Right Hook:

    Empty Chestnut Shell:


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    Post by Burittsu Sat Sep 16, 2023 4:43 pm

    Nakaba wrote:i’m not sure if I’ve ever apped a genjutsu or taijutsu before, so I’m sure I’ve overlooked something.

    Leeward Shadow:

    Crumbling Boulder:

    Spinning + _:

    Left/Right Hook:

    Empty Chestnut Shell:

    Reviewed By Buri!
    • L-Shadow: Can not stat trade due to the rank of Jutsu. A-Rank is required.
    • Crumb-Boulder: Cost of skill needs to be changed to 5.
    Speed must be C unless you can state why it varies.
    • Spin: APPROVED
    • L&R: APPROVED
    • Empty: APPROVED


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    Post by Nakaba Mon Sep 18, 2023 8:51 pm

    Leeward Shadow:

    Crumbling Boulder:

    Drunken Fist:

    Ephemeral Glare:



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    Post by Burittsu Sat Sep 23, 2023 1:36 pm

    Nakaba wrote:
    Leeward Shadow:

    Crumbling Boulder:

    Drunken Fist:

    Ephemeral Glare:


    •Leeward, Boulder, and Glare: Approved
    • Drunken Fist: the technique should end after the duration of the drug or poison has passed.


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    Post by Nakaba Sun Oct 01, 2023 8:45 pm

    Rewriting Left/Right Hook to include the ability to deliver a left hook with it as well, and fixing other typos.

    Left/Right Hook:
    Drunken Fist:

    Sprint:

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    Kick:


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    Post by Burittsu Thu Oct 05, 2023 2:42 pm

    Nakaba wrote:Rewriting Left/Right Hook to include the ability to deliver a left hook with it as well, and fixing other typos.

    Left/Right Hook:
    Drunken Fist:

    Sprint:

    Punch:

    Kick:

    Approved!


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    Post by Nakaba Mon Oct 23, 2023 2:16 pm

    OOC: I acknowledge that this probably won't get approved on my first try since it does a bunch, so I probably balanced it wrong. Rip me a new one.

    Name: Radiant Chakra Mode V1 [Unique Booster]
    Rank: B
    Power: E-S
    Activation Cost: E-S
    Upkeep Cost: Activation Cost -1 Rank (.5 CP for E Rank activation)
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: N/A
    Classification: Unique Booster
    Requirements: Radiant Chakra Mode [UA] & Sensory [Crafting Skill Optional]
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: When the user activates this jutsu surges up their chest and into their head causing them great pain. Golden flame-like chakra ignites around their heart, climbing and growing until their head is alight with this golden flame. As the wave of chakra surges and then calms, it settles as it fills the caster's hair with a golden glow. Activating this technique significantly changes the user's Chakra Signature, making them seem like a different person to sensors. Their chakra becomes vaguely reminiscent to Son Goku the Five Tailed Beast's chakra.

    The user takes a one tier debuff to Intelligence, from the initial damage, for the duration of the jutsu. Their new form gives a unique boost to their Stamina and Speed of a + and an additional boost of a + to Stamina. At every rank above E, they gain an additional + to stamina for each additional rank. This means at D-Rank they have +1 tier to stamina, +1 tier and a + at C, +1++ at B, +2 at A-Rank, and +2+ at S-Rank.

    Additional Effect: The user can spend chakra to generate a simple object no more than 3 meters in any dimension out of their Radiant Chakra. This includes weapons and armor from the shinobi market place as well as simple shapes like a cube. The user can freely manipulate them within 5 m of themselves with their Stamina -1 tier. This object can have Quality and Hardness up to the Chakra cost that they pay (E=1, D=2, etc). These objects glow brightly illuminating the area within 5 meters of them, and their light cannot be diminished by jutsu with a rank/power (whichever is stronger) lower than their Quality. The user can launch it at a target with a burst of energy using the projectile rules, using their Stamina instead of their Strength to scale the projectile's speed and power. These projectiles singe and burn their targets with searing light, but also interact and collide as if they had solid mass (so a strong enough target could swat one away). If the user has a crafting skill they can use this to create any object they can craft that is no greater than 3 meters in any dimension.

    Weaknesses: Radiant Chakra can be blocked normally, but reflective or refractive objects and jutsu (Metal, Ice, Water, Crystal, etc) interact as if they were a rank higher, repelling or redirecting the chakra, target's (not the caster's) choice. Techniques that manipulate light or render a target invisible can deflect or choose not to interact (completely ignoring their effects and mass) with the objects generated respectively.

    While in this state the user cannot use or be forced to use any jutsu from skills other than Taijutsu and Sensory.




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    Post by Nakaba Mon Nov 06, 2023 6:04 am

    Chakra Flow:

    Reversal:

    Analysis:


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    Post by Data_Sora Sat Nov 11, 2023 11:46 am

    Name: Chakra Flow
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: E
    Upkeep Cost: None
    Range: Self or Touch
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Sensory
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: None
    Parent Technique: None
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: This technique lets the user change their chakra signature or the chakra signature of a willing target that they touch. The target must already be under the effects of the Chakra Suppression technique. This lets the user manipulate the apparent total and current chakra levels, kkg, and elements. The user can also replicate the chakra signature of someone they are familiar with. This technique is usable with Chakra Suppression
    Weaknesses: If the target ceases to be under the effects of Chakra Suppression this technique also ends.
    Denied. Rank too low, and theChakra Disguise Technique now exists

    Name: Chakra Flow: Reversal
    Rank: C
    Power: E-S
    Activation Cost: E-S
    Upkeep Cost: None
    Range: Self or Touch
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Sensory
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description:The user of this technique can disrupt a maintained technique being used on themselves or cast by themselves of equivalent or lower rank. This technique forcefully changes the flow of chakra while expelling foreign chakra out of the target's body ending a technique of equal or lower rank like a genjutsu or chakra-based poisons. It can also disable a technique that the target is maintaining.

    This technique can be used with Chakra Suppression and similar techniques.
    Weaknesses: This technique has no effect on techniques the target isn't maintaining. It also doesn't protect from any harmful or beneficial effects of being hit by a jutsu: A poison's damage isn't reversed, a fireballs burns don't heal, a ijutsu's healing doesn't go away, and a genjutsu's stat debuffs don't vanish. This makes the jutsu effectively unable to counter damage created outside of the body. To use on another this Technique requires the user to make contact with the target. The user must be aware of the jutsu used or its effect on the target to even target it.
    Denied due to parent technique being denied.

    Name: Chakra Flow: Analysis
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: D
    Upkeep Cost: E
    Range: 5 meters
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Sensory
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: None
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to deduce the effect of a technique on a target or memorize their chakra signature to imitate it later with another technique. They can get the Natures involved, whether or not it used a Kekkei Genkai, Activation Cost, Skill, weaknesses, and the general effect (Buff, Debuff, Damage, Stealth, etc.). This doesn't help them learn the technique, but does give them insight to potential weaknesses.

    This technique is usable with Chakra Suppression.
    Weaknesses: Analyzing some jutsu takes time. Any jutsu of C-Rank or higher requires the user to take time and process it. This requires an additional post per rank above C. This can be done immediately or later in a different thread.
    Denied due to parent technique being denied.


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    Post by Data_Sora Sat Nov 11, 2023 11:50 am

    Name: Radiant Chakra Mode V1 [Unique Booster]
    Rank: B
    Power: E-S
    Activation Cost: E-S
    Upkeep Cost: Activation Cost -1 Rank (.5 CP for E Rank activation)
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: N/A
    Classification: Unique Booster
    Requirements: Radiant Chakra Mode [UA] & Sensory [Crafting Skill Optional]
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: When the user activates this jutsu surges up their chest and into their head causing them great pain. Golden flame-like chakra ignites around their heart, climbing and growing until their head is alight with this golden flame. As the wave of chakra surges and then calms, it settles as it fills the caster's hair with a golden glow. Activating this technique significantly changes the user's Chakra Signature, making them seem like a different person to sensors. Their chakra becomes vaguely reminiscent to Son Goku the Five Tailed Beast's chakra.

    The user takes a one tier debuff to Intelligence, from the initial damage, for the duration of the jutsu. Their new form gives a unique boost to their Stamina and Speed of a + and an additional boost of a + to Stamina. At every rank above E, they gain an additional + to stamina for each additional rank. This means at D-Rank they have +1 tier to stamina, +1 tier and a + at C, +1++ at B, +2 at A-Rank, and +2+ at S-Rank.

    Additional Effect: The user can spend chakra to generate a simple object no more than 3 meters in any dimension out of their Radiant Chakra. This includes weapons and armor from the shinobi market place as well as simple shapes like a cube. The user can freely manipulate them within 5 m of themselves with their Stamina -1 tier. This object can have Quality and Hardness up to the Chakra cost that they pay (E=1, D=2, etc). These objects glow brightly illuminating the area within 5 meters of them, and their light cannot be diminished by jutsu with a rank/power (whichever is stronger) lower than their Quality. The user can launch it at a target with a burst of energy using the projectile rules, using their Stamina instead of their Strength to scale the projectile's speed and power. These projectiles singe and burn their targets with searing light, but also interact and collide as if they had solid mass (so a strong enough target could swat one away). If the user has a crafting skill they can use this to create any object they can craft that is no greater than 3 meters in any dimension.

    Weaknesses: Radiant Chakra can be blocked normally, but reflective or refractive objects and jutsu (Metal, Ice, Water, Crystal, etc) interact as if they were a rank higher, repelling or redirecting the chakra, target's (not the caster's) choice. Techniques that manipulate light or render a target invisible can deflect or choose not to interact (completely ignoring their effects and mass) with the objects generated respectively.

    While in this state the user cannot use or be forced to use any jutsu from skills other than Taijutsu and Sensory.
    Denied. Requires a Skill, this looks more like a restricted compared to a Unique Booster technique


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    Post by Nakaba Sun Mar 24, 2024 2:10 am

    Chakra Circulation:

    Reversal:

    Analysis:

    Externalization:

    Straight:


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    Post by Burittsu Mon Mar 25, 2024 10:41 am

    Nakaba wrote:
    Chakra Circulation:

    Reversal:

    Analysis:

    Externalization:

    Straight:

    Denied: External: explain how much CP it caps out and can hold.

    Approved: rest of Jutsu


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    Post by Nakaba Mon Mar 25, 2024 9:20 pm

    Externalization:

    “Apply”:

    “Needle”:

    “Stitch”:

    “Basket”:


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    Post by Burittsu Tue Mar 26, 2024 8:09 pm

    Nakaba wrote:
    Externalization:

    “Apply”:

    “Needle”:

    “Stitch”:

    “Basket”:

    Approved


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    Post by Nakaba Fri Mar 29, 2024 12:45 am

    Counter:

    Invisible Strike:

    Wicker Mannequin:

    Performance Technique: Fine String Manipulation:

    Taijutsu Specialist:


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    Post by Burittsu Wed Apr 03, 2024 1:05 am

    Nakaba wrote:
    Counter:

    Invisible Strike:

    Wicker Mannequin:

    Performance Technique: Fine String Manipulation:

    Taijutsu Specialist:

    Enjoy yourself approved


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    Post by Nakaba Fri Apr 19, 2024 9:56 pm

    Smother:

    Spool:

    Big Chonker of a jutsu:


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    Post by Airi Ohara Sat Apr 20, 2024 5:48 pm

    Nakaba wrote:
    Smother:

    Spool:

    Big Chonker of a jutsu:
    - Smother: Being able to shut down someone's ability to use a technique above C Rank (which is kinda sorta similar to 5 Elements Seal, should not be something able to be used at lower ranks so I suggest increasing this jutsu rank to A. The stamina debuff needs a duration as this isn't a seal so it isn't supposed to be semi-permanent.

    - Spool: Even if it is less than 1 per post, you'll still need some kind of upkeep cost.

    - Chakra Oppression: Due to the effects, I'd suggest making countdown 2 posts minimum. Increase the rank to at least B due to it's effects.
    • Fine: This is alright
    • Fight: This is alright
    • Flight: This is alright
    • Fawn: I would indicate/dummy-proof this by saying any ongoing techniques lower ranking than the power used in this jutsu. I would also have this not include certain techniques like Restricteds as well. The last part howerver "Jutsu that the target casts while they can see the target of a lower rank fail to cast while still expending the chakra until the jutsu ends." is going to be a no-go
    • Freeze: This is fine.
    • Flop: this is going to need a hard core drawback for this to work.



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    Post by Nakaba Sun Apr 21, 2024 11:54 am

    Spool:

    Big Chonker of a jutsu:

    Flat Life Distortion:

    Mushigami:

    Block:


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    Post by Airi Ohara Tue Apr 23, 2024 6:20 pm

    Nakaba wrote:
    Spool:

    Big Chonker of a jutsu:

    Flat Life Distortion:

    Mushigami:

    Block:
    Spool: Approved
    Chakra Oppression: Increase the rank of this technique to B.
    Flat Life: The cost will be 20 due to this being an A Rank technique. Going to have to say know as that treads very similarly to the Paper Technique of Konan's -- which is goign to be a restricted.
    Mushigami: See above.
    Block: You're going to have to up the rank. This isn't going to fly as an E Rank. This would work as a C Rank.


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    Post by Nakaba Thu Apr 25, 2024 3:30 am

    Last Tech before the Exams


    Name: Unique Booster: Radiant Chakra Circulation
    Rank: C Rank
    Power: E to S
    Activation Cost: E [1] to S [30]
    Upkeep Cost: Rank -1 Tier
    Range: (Heat Sensory) 5m [E] | 25m | 50m | 125m | 250m | 500m [S]
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu/Sensory
    Classification: Secret [Personal, Unique Booster]
    Requirements: None
    Parent Technique:  
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: Nakaba's chakra appears as a range of radiant gold and intense oranges and dances like an inferno to those who can visualize chakra. Techniques and UAs [Radiant Chakra Mode] that he activates that produce light can have the range of that light doubled up to the applicable range of this technique. Nakaba takes a debuff [--] to their Intelligence when they activate this technique. In exchange they receive a Unique Boost to their Coordination [+] and their Speed [+].

    Additional Effect: This technique gives Nakaba the ability to see lower ends of the light spectrum allowing him to visualize heat with his naked eye within the applicable range increment. Nakaba receives a buff [+] to perception that increases [by a +] for each rank above E [++++++ (two tiers) at S rank].
    Weaknesses:


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    Post by Gyokusho Sun Apr 28, 2024 5:53 pm

    Nakaba wrote:Last Tech before the Exams


    Name: Unique Booster: Radiant Chakra Circulation
    Rank: C Rank
    Power: E to S
    Activation Cost: E [1] to S [30]
    Upkeep Cost: Rank -1 Tier
    Range: (Heat Sensory) 5m [E] | 25m | 50m | 125m | 250m | 500m [S]
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu/Sensory
    Classification: Secret [Personal, Unique Booster]
    Requirements: None
    Parent Technique:  
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: Nakaba's chakra appears as a range of radiant gold and intense oranges and dances like an inferno to those who can visualize chakra. Techniques and UAs [Radiant Chakra Mode] that he activates that produce light can have the range of that light doubled up to the applicable range of this technique. Nakaba takes a debuff [--] to their Intelligence when they activate this technique. In exchange they receive a Unique Boost to their Coordination [+] and their Speed [+].

    Additional Effect: This technique gives Nakaba the ability to see lower ends of the light spectrum allowing him to visualize heat with his naked eye within the applicable range increment. Nakaba receives a buff [+] to perception that increases [by a +] for each rank above E [++++++ (two tiers) at S rank].
    Weaknesses:

    Unique booster portion is good.

    This reads more like nin/sensory than tai/sensory to me. 

    You'll need to note that the "additional effect" currently would make it so that if you use this at E rank, you would get a + to perception, -- to int, and no unique booster. You might consider making this 2 different techniques or just having the min cast level be C?


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    Nakaba Custom Jutsu Empty Re: Nakaba Custom Jutsu

    Post by Nakaba Sun Apr 28, 2024 6:31 pm

    Last Tech before the Exams


    Name: Unique Booster: Radiant Chakra Circulation
    Rank: C Rank
    Power: E to S
    Activation Cost: E [1] to S [30]
    Upkeep Cost: Rank -1 Tier
    Range: (Heat Sensory) 5m [E] | 25m | 50m | 125m | 250m | 500m [S]
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu/Sensory
    Classification: Secret [Personal, Unique Booster]
    Requirements: None
    Parent Technique:  
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: Nakaba's chakra appears as a range of radiant gold and intense oranges and dances like an inferno to those who can visualize chakra, and his eyes glow to match. Nakaba takes a debuff [--] to their Intelligence when they activate this technique. In exchange they receive a Unique Boost to their Coordination [+] and their Speed [+]. If used with D Rank power Nakaba receives a reduced debuff [-] and can choose to boost either Speed or Coordination. If used at E Rank Nakaba receives neither debuff nor unique booster.

    Additional Effect: This technique gives Nakaba the ability to see lower ends of the light spectrum allowing him to visualize heat with his naked eye within the applicable range increment. Nakaba receives a buff [+] to perception that increases [by a +] for each rank above E [++++++ (two tiers) at S rank].
    Weaknesses:


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