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Renny's Customs

by Guest Fri Jun 04, 2021 9:01 pm

Reserved for approved jutsu

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Last edited by Renny on Mon Nov 29, 2021 9:23 am; edited 10 times in total

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Kitsuki Kurahasa Sat Jun 05, 2021 2:08 am

[quote="Renny"]Name: Lampbulb
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: B Intelligence
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Dragon, Dog
Description: This jutsu is Renny's Unique Booster. The user flows chakra to the brain and releases their latent potential. As a medical jutsu, the user can share the effect as long as contact is sustained. The jutsu is an Aura.

+2 tiers to Intelligence. One of the +s in the 2 tiers is a + Unique Boost of Intelligence that doesn't exceed 2 tiers.

Conditional + Unique Boost to Speed. In exchange, the users can only get the + Speed if they're prepared to fight 1st. If they don't try to engage 1st, 2 precognition saves are used to get the + Speed.

Weaknesses: There are no particularly unique effects besides boosting, and Intelligence needs to remain B+ for concentration.

A single technique cannot boost more than +2 tiers.

Name: Slideway Waltz
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 35
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A limited jutsu dance Style that focuses on conditional Speed. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Speed.

The first circumstance it can be used is when carrying something living or dead that has(d) character stats. In this case, the user can boost the target's Speed as well, and they can whack people with the body to use it's Strength. If the target can move itself, it's Strength can be used for lifting it. Both hands are needed for lifting if both users are below B-rank Strength, one hand is needed at B-rank Strength. For large creatures, both hands are needed for lifting at B-rank Strength, one hand is needed at A-rank Strength. If the original user doesn't have B-rank Strength, they can't lift large creatures.

The second circumstance it can be used is when in contact with a living target, borrowing their help. Continually wrestling the target, or hitting off it for a bouncy escape that needs to maintain a run. Wrestling can be considered hitting, as long as the hitting aims to adjust on the target's body, like sliding a fist or arm.

Weaknesses: Reliant on external help. Speed is inconsistent when hitting, unless the user decides to retreat when the enemy does.

Boosts can't conditionally boost the user's Speed or Target's Speed, pick one.

Name: Slideway Smite
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: 35
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Slideway Waltz
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A limited jutsu dance Maneuver that focuses on conditional Strength. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Strength.

The user syncs their Strength with a non-weapon they carry. For the duration of one non-ranged hit, the user and target both attack with increased Strength.

Weaknesses: Same weaknesses as the Parent Technique, isn't a sequence.

What do you mean by the user and target both attack with increased Strength?

Name: Ransōtengai {Disheveled Paradise Puppet}
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: B-rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: A-rank Ijutsu
Hand Seals: Snake, Hare
Description: The user numbs the body in localized areas while active. Pain is controlled, and unconsciousness is prevented, this technique being maintained unless chakra is sealed. Moving off of chakra, only physically binding the user will stop them from moving.

Weaknesses: Healing is still required. If the entire body is damaged, the user becomes more susceptible to Genjutsu.

Turning off pain is okay for a high level Ijutsu technique but removing the possibility of turning unconcious is denied and not really possible with a technique such as this,

Name: Dreamcaller
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Upkeep Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuinjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: S-rank Intelligence, C-rank Stamina, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: On contact or being the user, a genjutsu affecting the user or a target is sealed. The seal manifests in the innards of the user, representing the genjutsu in varied appearance, and chakra ink is used as long as Intelligence was S-rank. The Stamina requirement for chakra ink is reduced by -1 rank for this jutsu. When the user desires, they can unseal the genjutsu on a target in it's range.

Following the rules, there's a 5 post cooldown before this jutsu can be used again. The jutsu's cost is equal to the base cost of the genjutsu being sealed.

Weaknesses: The jutsu doesn't work on dojutsu, unless the dojutsu is casting normal genjutsu.

On contact or being the user, a genjutsu affecting the user or a target is sealed.

*^ I don't know what this sentence means.

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Sat Jun 05, 2021 3:07 am

Is 2 tiers the hard cap even with drawbacks?

The second technique is meant to be like

https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Dance_of_the_Crescent_Moon
https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Puppet:_Spring_Punishing_Strike

and others like those that give boosts to 2+ targets without being a cooperation jutsu

For unconsciousness, I mean sort of in terms of like a wakefulness drug that dulls your pain. There's an A-rank medical ninjutsu that prevents some fatal wounds, this technique is meant for surviving to activate it. Is it passable if the unconsciousness negation needs to be paired with a healing technique or Constitution? The prerequisite would be that genjutsu damage needs to be healed first too.

3rd and 5th I've edited to start

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Nyguyen Uchiha Mon Jun 14, 2021 9:24 pm

1. Yes
2. Boosts don't exist in canon, it's purely a game mechanic and thus will have them confirm to the rules.
3. Dulling pain is fine but after a certain amount of damage (ie bleeding out) you will go unconscious.

I don't understand the meaning of the second sentence in the third technique.

Last tech is a Genjutsu but has no trigger and it grants a random chakra reduction. Both are not features are not approveable

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Thu Jun 24, 2021 11:28 pm

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Shimiko Chinoike Thu Jul 01, 2021 12:45 pm

Renny wrote:
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Which two techniques?

Name: Slideway Waltz
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 35
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A limited jutsu dance Style that focuses on conditional Speed. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Speed.

The first circumstance it can be used is when carrying something living or dead that has(d) character stats. Only the user or their target can be boosted.

The user can boost the target's Speed, and they can whack people with the body to use it's Strength. If the target can move itself, it's Strength can be used for lifting it. Both hands are needed for lifting if both users are below B-rank Strength, one hand is needed at B-rank Strength. For large creatures, both hands are needed for lifting at B-rank Strength, one hand is needed at A-rank Strength. If the original user doesn't have B-rank Strength, they can't lift large creatures.

The second circumstance it can be used is when in contact with a living target, borrowing their help. Continually wrestling the target, or hitting off it for a bouncy escape that needs to maintain aquote run. Wrestling can be considered hitting, as long as the hitting aims to adjust on the target's body, like sliding a fist or arm.

Weaknesses: Reliant on external help. Speed is inconsistent when hitting, unless the user decides to retreat when the enemy does.

The third technique is like swinging someone to hit someone else.

Strength is the application of force generated by one's muscles. A PC corpse while previously having a useable Str stat will not have one after it dies. Additionally even if it were alive the bear fact that it poses strength is not sufficient enough to generate it by swinging the body. For example, tossing Mike Tyson at someone will not necessarily do as much or greater damage than Mike Tyson's punch.

Name: Slideway Smite
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: 35
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Slideway Waltz
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A limited jutsu dance Maneuver that focuses on conditional Strength. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Strength.

The user syncs their Strength with a non-weapon they carry. For the duration of one non-ranged hit, the user and Parent's Technique's carry-on attack with increased Strength. An attack could be such as swinging each other to dance on the enemy. A weapon can't be used for the attack, and this technique doesn't have it's own Power damage.

Weaknesses: Same weaknesses as the Parent Technique, isn't a sequence

Name: Ransōtengai {Disheveled Paradise Puppet}
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: B-rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: A-rank Ijutsu or medicine to replenish blood loss
Hand Seals: Snake, Hare
Description: The user numbs the body in localized areas while active. Pain is controlled, and unconsciousness is prevented, this technique being maintained unless chakra is sealed. Moving off of chakra, only physically binding the user will stop them from moving.

Weaknesses: Healing is still required. If the entire body is damaged, the user becomes more susceptible to Genjutsu.

A fuinjutsu to seal genjutsu. It only lowers the requirement of Stamina for chakra ink.

Same problem after a certain amount of damage is incurred unconscious will result. I understand healing can make it harder to incur such damage but it cannot nullify that possibility full stop so this technique is still denied.

Name: Dreamcaller
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Upkeep Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuinjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: S-rank Intelligence, C-rank Stamina, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A genjutsu affecting a touched target or oneself is sealed, if it can be noticed. The seal manifests in the innards of the user, representing the genjutsu in varied appearance, and chakra ink is used as long as Intelligence was S-rank. The Stamina requirement for chakra ink is reduced by -1 rank for this jutsu. When the user desires, they can unseal the genjutsu on a target in it's range.

Following the rules, there's a 5 post cooldown before this jutsu can be used again. The jutsu's cost is equal to the base cost of the genjutsu being sealed.

Weaknesses: The jutsu doesn't work on dojutsu, unless the dojutsu is casting normal genjutsu.

"The Stamina requirement for chakra ink is reduced by -1 rank for this jutsu."

This isn't allowed unfortunately so its denied.

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Fri Jul 09, 2021 4:20 am

Body Revival, Paralyzing Flute debuff, Dance of the Crescent Moon, Iaido, Lightweights, Hidden Lotus. The stat topic implies drawbacks increase the cap

Is that how strength works? Tsunade created fissures with their finger, and there's martial arts like Thousand Years of Death. The redirection of force and a counter in boxing can use someone else's strength. Outside of that, I'm planning to use Dead Soul Technique

How much medical ninjutsu can keep someone awake per each rank. Explicit X-rank effects bypass for a S-rank. It's not like death and maims are prevented just by staying awake. Fuinjutsu and genjutsu can create unconsciousness, but that's damage. What limit do you suggest?

o/ Dreamcaller's meant to be a +1 to the jutsu, like +1 to Power or -1 to debuff jutsu

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Post n°8

Re: Renny's Customs

by Menza the Cursed One Thu Jul 22, 2021 11:40 am

Renny wrote:Body Revival, Paralyzing Flute debuff, Dance of the Crescent Moon, Iaido, Lightweights, Hidden Lotus. The stat topic implies drawbacks increase the cap

All of those except for Body Revival are Exclusives which allow them more leeway. Body Revival will be re-examined and drawbacks in theory might be fine but they have to be pretty severe drawbacks. As it is now, denied.

Is that how strength works? Tsunade created fissures with their finger, and there's martial arts like Thousand Years of Death. The redirection of force and a counter in boxing can use someone else's strength. Outside of that, I'm planning to use Dead Soul Technique

This doesn't really address the point which is that throwing a body does not apply its Str stat for damage purposes nor should it. Still Denied.

How much medical ninjutsu can keep someone awake per each rank. Explicit X-rank effects bypass for a S-rank. It's not like death and maims are prevented just by staying awake. Fuinjutsu and genjutsu can create unconsciousness, but that's damage. What limit do you suggest?

I'm not sure, but nullifying unconsciousness altogether is prohibited.

o/ Dreamcaller's meant to be a +1 to the jutsu, like +1 to Power or -1 to debuff jutsu

A jutsu cannot increase +1 Rank in Power.

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Sat Jul 31, 2021 10:19 am

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Name: Lampbulb
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: B Intelligence
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Dragon, Dog
Description: This jutsu is Renny's Unique Booster. The user flows chakra to the brain and releases their latent potential. As a medical jutsu, the user can share the effect as long as contact is sustained. The jutsu is an Aura.

+1 tier and ++ to Intelligence. One of the +s is a + Unique Boost of Intelligence that doesn't exceed 2 tiers for the whole technique.

Conditional + Unique Boost to Speed. In exchange, the users can only get the + Speed if they're prepared to fight 1st. If they don't try to engage 1st, 2 precognition saves are used to get the + Speed.

Weaknesses: There are no particularly unique effects besides boosting, and Intelligence needs to remain B+ for concentration.

Name: Slideway Waltz
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 35
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A limited jutsu dance Style that focuses on conditional Speed. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Speed.

The first circumstance it can be used is when carrying something living or dead that has(d) character stats. Only the user or their target can be boosted.

The user can boost the target's Speed. Both hands are needed for lifting if the user's are below B-rank Strength, one hand is needed at B-rank Strength. For large creatures, both hands are needed for lifting at B-rank Strength, one hand is needed at A-rank Strength.

The second circumstance it can be used is when in contact with a living target, borrowing their help. Continually wrestling the target, or hitting off it for a bouncy escape that needs to maintain a run. Wrestling can be considered hitting, as long as the hitting aims to adjust on the target's body, like sliding a fist or arm.

Weaknesses: Reliant on external help. Speed is inconsistent when hitting, unless the user decides to retreat when the enemy does.

Name: Slideway Smite
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: 35
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Slideway Waltz
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A limited jutsu dance Maneuver that focuses on conditional Strength. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Strength.

The user syncs their Strength with a non-weapon they carry. For the duration of one non-ranged hit, the user attacks with increased strength only. An attack could be such as swinging each other to dance on the enemy. A weapon can't be used for the attack, and this technique doesn't have it's own Power damage. The synced target's Strength isn't used for damage.

Weaknesses: Same weaknesses as the Parent Technique, isn't a sequence.

Name: Ransōtengai {Disheveled Paradise Puppet}
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: B-rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: A-rank Ijutsu or medicine to replenish blood loss
Hand Seals: Snake, Hare
Description: The user numbs the body in localized areas while active. Pain is controlled, and unconsciousness is prevented, this technique being maintained unless chakra is sealed. Moving off of chakra, only physically binding the user will stop them from moving. An A-rank ijutsu needs to be used too while active.

Unconscious can only be prevented on effects equal or below the user's Constitution tier. If they aren't a damage amount, it's prevented.
Fuinjutsu and genjutsu can't have their unconsciousness effects resisted with this jutsu.

Weaknesses: Healing is still required. If the entire body is damaged, the user becomes more susceptible to Genjutsu.

Name: Dreamcaller
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Upkeep Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuinjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: S-rank Intelligence, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A genjutsu affecting a touched target or oneself is sealed, if it can be noticed. The seal is drawn in the innards of the user, representing the genjutsu in varied appearance. When the user desires, they can unseal the genjutsu on a target in it's range.

Following the rules, there's a 5 post cooldown before this jutsu can be used again. The jutsu's cost is equal to the base cost of the genjutsu being sealed.

Weaknesses: The jutsu doesn't work on dojutsu, unless the dojutsu is casting normal genjutsu.

Some edits Renny's Customs 1f61a

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Nyguyen Uchiha Wed Aug 04, 2021 1:50 am

Renny wrote:[spoiler]Name: Lampbulb
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: B Intelligence
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Dragon, Dog
Description: This jutsu is Renny's Unique Booster. The user flows chakra to the brain and releases their latent potential. As a medical jutsu, the user can share the effect as long as contact is sustained. The jutsu is an Aura.

+1 tier and ++ to Intelligence. One of the +s is a + Unique Boost of Intelligence that doesn't exceed 2 tiers for the whole technique.

Conditional + Unique Boost to Speed. In exchange, the users can only get the + Speed if they're prepared to fight 1st. If they don't try to engage 1st, 2 precognition saves are used to get the + Speed.

Weaknesses: There are no particularly unique effects besides boosting, and Intelligence needs to remain B+ for concentration.

Approved.

Name: Slideway Waltz
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 35
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A limited jutsu dance Style that focuses on conditional Speed. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Speed.

The first circumstance it can be used is when carrying something living or dead that has(d) character stats. Only the user or their target can be boosted.

The user can boost the target's Speed. Both hands are needed for lifting if the user's are below B-rank Strength, one hand is needed at B-rank Strength. For large creatures, both hands are needed for lifting at B-rank Strength, one hand is needed at A-rank Strength.

The second circumstance it can be used is when in contact with a living target, borrowing their help. Continually wrestling the target, or hitting off it for a bouncy escape that needs to maintain a run. Wrestling can be considered hitting, as long as the hitting aims to adjust on the target's body, like sliding a fist or arm.

Weaknesses: Reliant on external help. Speed is inconsistent when hitting, unless the user decides to retreat when the enemy does.

I don't understand this technique how it works or how the increase in Speed functions in relation to this Taijutsu style.

Name: Slideway Smite
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: 35
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Users
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Slideway Waltz
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A limited jutsu dance Maneuver that focuses on conditional Strength. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Strength.

The user syncs their Strength with a non-weapon they carry. For the duration of one non-ranged hit, the user attacks with increased strength only. An attack could be such as swinging each other to dance on the enemy. A weapon can't be used for the attack, and this technique doesn't have it's own Power damage. The synced target's Strength isn't used for damage.

Weaknesses: Same weaknesses as the Parent Technique, isn't a sequence.

I don't understand what you mean by "sync" are you saying the non-target inflicts damage equivalent to the user's boosted strength stat?

Name: Ransōtengai {Disheveled Paradise Puppet}
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: B-rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: A-rank Ijutsu or medicine to replenish blood loss
Hand Seals: Snake, Hare
Description: The user numbs the body in localized areas while active. Pain is controlled, and unconsciousness is prevented, this technique being maintained unless chakra is sealed. Moving off of chakra, only physically binding the user will stop them from moving. An A-rank ijutsu needs to be used too while active.

Unconscious can only be prevented on effects equal or below the user's Constitution tier. If they aren't a damage amount, it's prevented.
Fuinjutsu and genjutsu can't have their unconsciousness effects resisted with this jutsu.

Weaknesses: Healing is still required. If the entire body is damaged, the user becomes more susceptible to Genjutsu.

Specify unconsciousness as it relates to damage so it should read:

"unconsciousness by certain levels of damage is prevented"

Name: Dreamcaller
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Upkeep Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuinjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: S-rank Intelligence, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A genjutsu affecting a touched target or oneself is sealed, if it can be noticed. The seal is drawn in the innards of the user, representing the genjutsu in varied appearance. When the user desires, they can unseal the genjutsu on a target in it's range.

Following the rules, there's a 5 post cooldown before this jutsu can be used again. The jutsu's cost is equal to the base cost of the genjutsu being sealed.

Weaknesses: The jutsu doesn't work on dojutsu, unless the dojutsu is casting normal genjutsu.

What Genjutsu is being released? Any Genjutsu the user knows?

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Sun Aug 08, 2021 12:26 pm

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Name: Mind Encryption
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Touch
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuinjutsu
Classification: Group Exclusive (Wanderers, Underworld B+)
Requirements: A-rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: Saiko Denshin
Hand Seals: Bird, none Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
Description: The user enters the target's subconscious by placing a hand on the target's head and extracts any information needed, even if the target has forgotten it or has had it blocked.

The memories are all extracted instantly into an encrypted fuinjutsu on the user's head, for access without needing the target anymore. Going through the memories takes 5 CP each post after the first of use. The memories are able to be combed through by type similar to Sharingan's Extraction.

A-Tier: 6 months per post
S-Tier: 8 months per post
X-Tier: 10 months per post

Weaknesses: The target must be unconscious. The user can only have one Mind Encryption at a time.

Name: Slideway Waltz
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 35
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A jutsu dance Style that focuses on Speed. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Speed.

Weaknesses: Extra chakra cost.

Name: Slideway Smite
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: 35
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Slideway Waltz
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A jutsu dance Maneuver that focuses on Strength. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Strength. The user attacks once.

Weaknesses: Extra chakra cost, not a sequence.

Name: Ransōtengai {Disheveled Paradise Puppet}
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: B-rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: A-rank healing ijutsu needs to be used at the same time as this
Hand Seals: Snake, Hare
Description: The user numbs the body in localized areas while active. Pain is controlled, and unconsciousness is prevented, this technique being maintained unless chakra is sealed. Moving off of chakra, only physically binding the user will stop them from moving. An A-rank healing ijutsu needs to be used too while active.

Unconsciousness by up to S-rank tier damage is prevented, or offensive effects.
Fuinjutsu and genjutsu can't have their unconsciousness effects resisted with this jutsu.

Last edited by Renny on Thu Aug 26, 2021 7:36 pm; edited 1 time in total

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Tue Aug 17, 2021 7:08 am

Bumping the techs

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Re: Renny's Customs

by Shimiko Chinoike Fri Aug 20, 2021 9:35 pm

Renny wrote:
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This is significantly stronger than the canon jutsu like beyond what would normally be permitted by a custom. Needs more drawbacks/costs associated with it and even then you'd still need to tone down the timeframes. A century and a decade per post is way too much as is a year.

Name: Slideway Waltz
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 35
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A jutsu dance Style that focuses on Speed. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Speed. The style is used with a partner of some sort, making it easier to coordinate with them or carry them. The style isn't reliant on a partner and involves physical training, so it can still be used within a post of losing a partner.

Weaknesses: Extra chakra cost.

Speed doesn't effect your ability to carry items or your ability to coordinate movement of another person.

Name: Slideway Smite
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: 35
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Slideway Waltz
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A jutsu dance Maneuver that focuses on Strength. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Strength. The user strikes while their previous ally is around or disorientated.

Weaknesses: Extra chakra cost, not a sequence.

"The user strikes while their previous ally is around or disorientated."

*^ I don't understand this sentence. Why is it here? What does that have to do with boosting the user's strength for attacking purposes?

Name: Ransōtengai {Disheveled Paradise Puppet}
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: B-rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: A-rank Ijutsu or medicine to replenish blood loss
Hand Seals: Snake, Hare
Description: The user numbs the body in localized areas while active. Pain is controlled, and unconsciousness is prevented, this technique being maintained unless chakra is sealed. Moving off of chakra, only physically binding the user will stop them from moving. An A-rank ijutsu needs to be used too while active.

Unconsciousness by up to S-rank tier damage is prevented. If they aren't a damage amount, it's prevented.
Fuinjutsu and genjutsu can't have their unconsciousness effects resisted with this jutsu.

Weaknesses: Healing is still required. If the entire body is damaged, the user becomes more susceptible to Genjutsu.

"Unconsciousness by up to S-rank tier damage is prevented."

If the damage is S-Tier and user has D-Tier Con, they would still be knocked unconscious despite this technique. The only way to prevent this is if you had a tech that did some kind of preventing healing and then you had this to keep you concious despite the low con.

"If they aren't a damage amount, it's prevented."

*^ Not sure what this sentence means.

Name: Dreamcaller
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Upkeep Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuinjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: S-rank Intelligence, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A genjutsu affecting a touched target or oneself is sealed, if it can be noticed. The seal is drawn in the innards of the user, representing the genjutsu in varied appearance. When the user desires, they can unseal the genjutsu on a target in it's range.

Following the rules, there's a 5 post cooldown before this jutsu can be used again. The jutsu's cost is equal to the base cost of the genjutsu being sealed.

Weaknesses: The jutsu doesn't work on dojutsu, unless the dojutsu is casting normal genjutsu.

The last jutsu seals a genjutsu and unseals it, like if the user was affected by a genjutsu.

So the user has sealed inside their body Genjutsu that has been cast on them and no other Genjutsu?

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Post n°14

Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Thu Sep 02, 2021 12:18 am

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Unconsciousness by up to S-rank tier damage is prevented, or offensive effects.
Fuinjutsu and genjutsu can't have their unconsciousness effects resisted with this jutsu.

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Post n°15

Re: Renny's Customs

by Jōki Sun Sep 05, 2021 11:27 am

Renny wrote:
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Automatic bypassing of blocked/forgotten memories is denied. There should be some kind of mechanism to achieve bypassing rather than it being immediately successful. Needs more drawbacks.

Name: Slideway Waltz
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 35
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A jutsu dance Style that focuses on Speed. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Speed.

Weaknesses: Extra chakra cost.

Name: Slideway Smite
Rank: A
Power: S
Activation Cost: 35
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Slideway Waltz
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A jutsu dance Maneuver that focuses on Strength. While being used, there's a +2 tier increase to Strength. The user attacks once.

Weaknesses: Extra chakra cost, not a sequence.

Approved.

Name: Ransōtengai {Disheveled Paradise Puppet}
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: B-rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: A-rank healing ijutsu needs to be used at the same time as this
Hand Seals: Snake, Hare
Description: The user numbs the body in localized areas while active. Pain is controlled, and unconsciousness is prevented, this technique being maintained unless chakra is sealed. Moving off of chakra, only physically binding the user will stop them from moving. An A-rank healing ijutsu needs to be used too while active.

Unconsciousness by up to S-rank tier damage is prevented, or offensive effects.
Fuinjutsu and genjutsu can't have their unconsciousness effects resisted with this jutsu.

Weaknesses: Healing is still required. If the entire body is damaged, the user becomes more susceptible to Genjutsu.

This hasn't been appropriately edited. All of my comments remain the same. With the addition that the inability to stop the person from moving without phyiscal restraints is overbroad, out of left field, and doesn't seem to connect to the rest of the technique.

Name: Dreamcaller
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Upkeep Cost: Genjutsu targeted
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuinjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: S-rank Intelligence, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A genjutsu affecting a touched target or oneself is sealed, if it can be noticed. The seal is drawn in the innards of the user, representing the genjutsu in varied appearance. When the user desires, they can unseal the genjutsu on a target in it's range.

Following the rules, there's a 5 post cooldown before this jutsu can be used again. The jutsu's cost is equal to the base cost of the genjutsu being sealed.

Weaknesses: The jutsu doesn't work on dojutsu, unless the dojutsu is casting normal genjutsu.

How is the user drawing the seal on their innards?

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Post n°16

Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Tue Sep 07, 2021 8:05 am

Previous Jutsu:

Spoiler:

Last edited by Renny on Sun Sep 19, 2021 8:35 pm; edited 3 times in total

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Post n°17

Re: Renny's Customs

by Shimiko Chinoike Tue Sep 07, 2021 10:47 pm

Name: Slideway Waltz
Rank: A

Name: Slideway Smite
Rank: A

These should both be ranked S actually. Unapproved. My bad, make that change and I'll re-approve ASAP.

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Post n°18

Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Wed Sep 08, 2021 8:11 am

Added stat drawbacks too

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Post n°19

Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Tue Sep 14, 2021 10:16 am

Bumping the jutsu

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Post n°20

Re: Renny's Customs

by Nyguyen Uchiha Sun Sep 19, 2021 8:02 pm

Add another minus for the drawback.

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Post n°21

Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Sun Sep 19, 2021 8:36 pm

Edits completed there

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Post n°22

Re: Renny's Customs

by Nyguyen Uchiha Sun Sep 19, 2021 8:59 pm

Renny wrote:
Previous Jutsu:

Approved.

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Post n°23

Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Sun Sep 19, 2021 9:17 pm

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Skills & Elements: Fuuton, Doton, Jiton, Chemistry, Iryojutsu, Engineering, Weaponsmith, Armorsmith, Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu, Kugutsu, Genjutsu
Class: S
Ryo: More than I need, less than I'd like

Post n°24

Re: Renny's Customs

by Kara Wed Sep 22, 2021 2:23 pm

Nyguyen Uchiha wrote:

Renny wrote:
Previous Jutsu:

Approved.

Unapproved.

You cannot create customs for skills/elements that you don't have.

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Post n°25

Re: Renny's Customs

by Guest Wed Sep 22, 2021 2:57 pm

Renny wrote:
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Yeah as I've been told, my mistake. Renny's Customs 1f602

Sorry about that guys, bumping the new techs without genjutsu.

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