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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Wed Sep 29, 2021 6:12 am

    Dreamcaller: This seems Exclusive/Restricted level, the seal would presumably have to be placed on the brain which is what Genjutsu affects. It kinda bypasses standard Genjutsu release rules and unleashing it seems like it doesn't necessitate a trigger. This is too overpowered and thus denied.

    Rumbling: This seems like a gravity technique. What is crushing the opponent?

    Refreshment: I don't understand how you can re-manifest techniques. Can't move with the user. I assume this seal would have to make contact with the opponent's body to force them to sustain the jutsu otherwise its unworkable and/or overpowered.

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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Wed Sep 29, 2021 6:12 am

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    Post by Guest Wed Sep 29, 2021 2:52 pm

    Dreamcaller seemed alright to me? It only uses 1 genjutsu every 5 posts.

    Sidelining Mind Encryption until revisited, next post 4 jutsu are the ones to be checked

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    Post by Nyguyen Uchiha Fri Oct 15, 2021 5:43 am

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    My understanding is that Danzo's seal seals things into it. This generates pressure field through an unknown source to crush things. That seems a lot like Gravity Release which would be a Restricted level ability.



    Name: Refreshment
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 75m
    Speed: S
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A-rank Intelligence, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
    Parent Technique: A-rank chakra blocker
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Barcodes spread in each cardinal direction, and the chakra ink is usable if the requirements are met. Afterward, any chakra-based jutsu and enchantments can be forced to remain active in range. Effects and jutsu can only be forced to remain active if they could already be sustained. If a jutsu ends independent of it's user cancelling it normally, such as from damage, this jutsu's user can force the jutsu to manifest again by paying their own chakra. The jutsu forced to manifest again require the user to have knowledge of it through precognition or sensory, and it's as if the user put more chakra to keep it's presence uninterrupted.

    Jutsu that were forced to manifest again come back in the state they were in, except the user can lock the jutsu to remain in place until it's damaged again.

    These rules only apply to jutsu that were cast beforehand. Any other chakra-based jutsu and enchantments up to S-rank are disabled within the boundaries of the fuinjutsu.

    Weaknesses: The user can't cast new jutsu either. Barcode seals must make contact with an opponent to force their jutsu to remain active.

    Range is far too big. What's an A-Rank Chakra Blocker? Can't be used on enchantments.

    "If a jutsu ends independent of it's user cancelling it normally, such as from damage, this jutsu's user can force the jutsu to manifest again by paying their own chakra."

    *^ The re-manifestation clause is problematic. I don't like the idea of forcing people to CAST techniques again. Forcing them to remain active is one thing but forcing a re-cast is not approveable.



    Name: Another Man's Trash
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 15 sealing and unsealing, 30 for larger items
    Upkeep Cost: 10 for each post spread from the body
    Range: 75m, target
    Speed: S
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Group Exclusive (Kumogakure, Unaffiliated)
    Requirements: A-rank Intelligence, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
    Parent Technique: A-rank storage fuinjutsu of some kind
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Barcodes spread in each cardinal direction, and the chakra ink is usable if the requirements are met. The user can alternatively have the seal contact it's target by touch, the user's whole body qualifying if the seal is on them. Another Man's Trash is a high-tech storage seal that can only be filled by stealing.

    The seal can bypass the ritual for certain fuinjutsu derived from this jutsu, and it can steal the contents of other fuinjutsu by contact. The seal can replace Living Tissue Preservation Technique by simply sealing loose bloodlines and without needing any scrolls or other preparation, such as hand seals.

    Another Man's Trash can seal chakra items lacking the user's chakra, such as items with enchantments on them. The fuinjutsu cannot seal live jutsu or release them. Sealed items cannot be used until after the topic. The user can utilize this seal to transfer a bijuu or entity to this seal instead of releasing it to the wild. In the case of non-bijuu entities, the user can seal them inside this seal upon a target's defeat or inability to beat an active fuinjutsu Intelligence check. Any physical entity stolen by this fuinjutsu will be trainable no matter the requirements, as if it was tamed like a bijuu.

    Before the user can seal fuinjutsu or steal from them, they usually must break the fuinjutsu by the normal method of comparing Intelligence over posts. The benefit of this jutsu is that it will automatically magnet the contents of destroyed fuinjutsu in range, before they're destroyed, and the contents of fuinjutsu will seamlessly transfer to this seal. The user can utilize precognition saves for the purpose of using this jutsu to protect their future property, if they don't physically anticipate a fuinjutsu being destroyed.

    The Group Exclusive version is weaker than the creator's, and it's only function is to steal from fuinjutsu in contact with.

    Weaknesses: The user still needs to analyze fuinjutsu when breaking them with this technique. If an entity is stolen, it will take up the user's entity slot unless the user releases it to someone or somewhere else within 1 OOC week. The size of the seal is limited by making what's sealed unusable and only based off chakra, since the sidelined chakra's used. The user can use the seal as a normal storage seal for items, but it's a one for one comparison to needing an equal-rank inactive enchantment in the seal for that topic.

    "The seal can bypass the ritual for certain fuinjutsu derived from this jutsu, and it can steal the contents of other fuinjutsu by contact."

    *^ Denied. Something like this would require multiple posts of sustained contact depending on what your sealing and its overbroad and just saying anything housed by a Fuuin with no specificity. That's overpowered and therefore denied.


    Name: Forced Jutsu Activation
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Contact
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A-rank Intelligence, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
    Parent Technique: Mind Reading, Time-Release Technique
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description:

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    First, the user must have read the mind of their target. The user spreads barcode-like fuinjutsu from their body by having contact with a target. Chakra ink is usable if the requirements are met. After making contact, the user no longer needs to retain contact and a branded fuinjutsu will force their target to activate jutsu that the user's aware of. Activated jutsu must be jutsu the target had already learned. The user can perform the hand seals required for techniques (if it's a physical impossibility for the target), even if the target is unconscious, and then the target will still cast them.

    Weaknesses: Jutsu can only be delay-casted for up to 1 post. A target must have had their mind read, such as by Saiko Denshin. The user can only apply one of these seals at a time. The target cannot cast the user's jutsu unless they've learned them already.

    "The user spreads barcode-like fuinjutsu from their body by having contact with a target."

    Needs a range here. Also if the user is performing handsigns for the target they should be able to perform the technique and not just have awareness of it.


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    Post by Guest Fri Oct 15, 2021 9:00 am

    Fair enough, although sounds like a fanon term

    The recasting was only to prevent people from destroying their jutsu to avoid this one. Without that, that technique isn't for fighting.

    Clarified Another Man's Trash can only affect seals after the fuinjutsu skill's Intelligence check, and it can't steal jutsu in seals

    I rephrased Forced Jutsu Activation, there's no tendrils and it's just like Time Release Technique

    I've added a new jutsu similar to an old jutsu we were going over

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    Post by Nozomi Sun Nov 07, 2021 6:49 pm

    Remove the Sealless combat requirements from all of them please. They still need to follow the general rules with having handsigns, while the UA allows you to disregard any handsigns.

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    unconsciousness is prevented from physical damage.

    Remove this. Unconciousness would be determined by the amount of damage compared to your constitution. People can pass out from pure shock.

    The user defensively isolates and transfers instances of damage to take place over 5 posts instead.

    Go further into this. The way I understand it, if you take an S rank amount of damage on your body, you can transfer it to a limb. 1st post requires that you take an A rank amount of damage, and then you disperse the remaining A rank damage over the next 4 posts. Are you saying you could do a post of A rank damage, 3 posts of E rank damage, and then another post of B rank damage? I'm hard pressed to allow this. I think spreading out over 5 posts is a lot. Drop it to 2 or 3, and then if it's two, you can take 1 rank less the post it's used, and then the other next post. If it's 3, it'll be 1 rank less the post it's used, then 1 rank less than that for the next two (for example, An S rank tech spread over 3 being A, B, B.)

    In the case of taking damage to themselves, the user can choose to take on a flaw instead of someone else for KKG organs.

    No. We don't allow anything that might allow for unlimited organ farming. The drawback of a flaw for losing an organ is designed specifically to discourage people from just handing over organs.

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    Name: Refreshment
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 50m
    Speed: S
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A-rank Intelligence, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
    Parent Technique: A-rank chakra blocker {Five Elements Seal or Lion Closing Roar}
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Barcodes spread in each cardinal direction, and the chakra ink is usable if the requirements are met. Afterward, any chakra-based jutsu can be forced to remain active in range. Jutsu can only be forced to remain active if they could already be sustained.

    These rules only apply to jutsu that were cast beforehand. Any other chakra-based jutsu up to S-rank are disabled within the boundaries of the fuinjutsu.

    Weaknesses: The user can't cast new jutsu either. Barcode seals must make contact with an opponent to force their jutsu to remain active.
    Approved

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    Another Man's Trash:
    The reasons it was denied are still present. It remains denied.

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    Name: Forced Jutsu Activation
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Contact
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A-rank Intelligence, Seal-less Combat {Fuinjutsu}
    Parent Technique: Mind Reading, Time-Release Technique
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description:

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    First, the user must have read the mind of their target. The user spreads barcode-like fuinjutsu from their body by having physical contact (not ranged like the gif) with a target. Chakra ink is usable if the requirements are met. After making contact, the user no longer needs to retain contact and a branded fuinjutsu will force their target to activate jutsu that the user's aware of. Activated jutsu must be jutsu the target had already learned. The target can perform hand signs, even if unconscious, as long as it's not a physical impossibility (no hands). The user can perform the hand seals required for techniques instead, but they must have learned the jutsu already.

    Weaknesses: Jutsu can only be delay-casted for up to 1 post. A target must have had their mind read, such as by Saiko Denshin. The user can only apply one of these seals at a time. The target cannot cast the user's jutsu unless they've learned them already
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    Post by Guest Mon Nov 08, 2021 3:19 pm

    Impacting Grafting: Yeah there's no specific threshold though. If I have an A-rank ijutsu active, can the tech prevent unconsciousness? Shock stoppage, blood restoral, pain nullification should all be usable with ijutsu.

    The flaw thing wasn't very thought out of me, I was just thinking about it for negotiation. I was thinking Jesus-like, where I take the flaw and they lose a dojutsu permanently still. Then, to make it more balanced they can't take another KKG flaw until they take the 1st.

    Another Man's Trash: It still requires multiple posts of sustained contact depending on what's being stolen, and it can't steal jutsu. I made it clearer some more.

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    Post by Nozomi Fri Nov 12, 2021 11:47 am

    Name: Refreshment
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 50m
    Speed: S
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A-rank Intelligence
    Parent Technique: A-rank chakra blocker {Five Elements Seal or Lion Closing Roar}
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Dragon
    Description: Barcodes spread in each cardinal direction, and the chakra ink is usable if the requirements are met. Afterward, any chakra-based jutsu can be forced to remain active in range. Jutsu can only be forced to remain active if they could already be sustained.

    These rules only apply to jutsu that were cast beforehand. Any other chakra-based jutsu up to S-rank are disabled within the boundaries of the fuinjutsu.

    Weaknesses: The user can't cast new jutsu either. Barcode seals must make contact with an opponent to force their jutsu to remain active.

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    Name: Forced Jutsu Activation
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Contact
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A-rank Intelligence
    Parent Technique: Mind Reading, Time-Release Technique
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Boar
    Description:

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    First, the user must have read the mind of their target. The user spreads barcode-like fuinjutsu from their body by having physical contact (not ranged like the gif) with a target. Chakra ink is usable if the requirements are met. After making contact, the user no longer needs to retain contact and a branded fuinjutsu will force their target to activate jutsu that the user's aware of. Activated jutsu must be jutsu the target had already learned. The target can perform hand signs, even if unconscious, as long as it's not a physical impossibility (no hands). The user can perform the hand seals required for techniques instead, but they must have learned the jutsu already.

    Weaknesses: Jutsu can only be delay-casted for up to 1 post. A target must have had their mind read, such as by Saiko Denshin. The user can only apply one of these seals at a time. The target cannot cast the user's jutsu unless they've learned them already

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    Impact Grafting: The tech itself cannot prevent unconsciousness as a benefit. If you have a separate technique activated, that would be a natural benefit of having healing active. Otherwise this technique is far too strong by itself. Spreading out damage over 3 posts is already quite potent and allows you to more easily outheal damage.

    Another Man's Trash: I'm tabling this one for now, pending staff discussion about it.


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    Post by Guest Fri Nov 19, 2021 1:17 pm

    Bump, can discuss anything over Discord
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    Post by Nozomi Fri Nov 26, 2021 9:03 pm

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