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    Grandpa's New Old Tricks

    Ojii-San
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    Post by Ojii-San Wed May 19, 2021 11:36 am

    Name: Eight Trigrams Deflecting Palm (八卦偏針掌, Hakke Henshinsho)
    Rank: C
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: Varies
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga, Open
    Requirements: Byakugan
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: By using their Byakugan to perceive everything around them, the Hyuuga will focus chakra into their palms to greatly increase their durability. As long as their Coordination is higher than the attack’s Power, they can effectively swat it away. The cost of this technique depends on the cost of the technique the user is redirecting.
    Weakness: N/A

    Name: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Kick (八卦空蹴り Hakke Kuukeri)
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: User’s Coordination -1 Tier
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga Clan, Open
    Requirements: Byakugan
    Parent Technique: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: While Jyuukenpo does typically prefer palm strikes as its main form of attacking and defending against their opponents, there comes a time where kicks sometimes are required. This technique is effectively Eight Trigrams Empty Palm but performed through the sole of one’s foot. By thrusting their foot in a straight forward kick, the user will release a “vacuum shell” of compressed air towards their opponent. As the foot is not nearly as dexterous as one’s hand, this technique is not used to directly strike at the opponent’s Tenketsu. It instead is used to forcibly knock them off their feet with a much greater force than the hand equivalent. This vacuum shell is a cone that is 2 meters in diameter. This will knock the opponent back 7 meters should it connect. However, should they possess a Strength equal to or higher than this technique’s Power, this knock back is reduced by half.
    Weakness: N/A

    Name: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Strike (八卦空撃 Hakke Kuugeki)
    Rank: B
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: Varies
    Range: Contact
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga, Personal
    Requirements: Byakugan (to see Tenketsu)
    Parent Technique: Eight Trigrams One Body Blow, Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven, Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: One of the most important aspects of learning the Gentle Fist is learning to control each and every individual Tenketsu across the body. This is necessary to perform the clan’s ultimate defense “The Revolving Heaven,” its signature ranged attack of “Vacuum Palm,” or the niche “One Body Blow.” By using the fundaments of these techniques as a guide, the Hyuuga may further learn to release very precise bursts of chakra from specific tenketsu across their body to attack their opponent unexpectedly. This allows the Hyuuga to perform most of their Gentle Fist techniques through their tenketsu. Doing so increases the cost of the technique by 1 Rank. However, they may not perform the more combo-driven techniques such as 64 Palms (and its related forms).
    Weakness: Techniques performed this way still hold the weaknesses of their parent technique, abet at just a higher cost. May not be used to perform more complex-combo oriented Gentle Fist techniques, such as 64 Palms.

    Name: Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Vacuum Palms (八卦三十二空掌, Hakke Sanjūni Kuushō)
    Rank: B
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 10
    Range: 0m-10m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga Clan, Personal
    Requirements: Stage 2 Byakugan (to see Tenketsu)
    Parent Technique: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm, Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: A combination of two signature techniques of the Hyuuga clan, Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Vacuum Palms is essentially an optionally ranged version of the standard Thirty-Two Palms technique. This allows the user to close off 32 chakra points from the opponents chakra pathway system from a distance. This eliminates the opponent’s ability to utilize chakra, makes movement difficult, and prevents the use of A-Rank and above techniques for a total of six posts.

    Once someone enters the range of the user’s field of divination, they will assume a Gentle Fist stance before beginning to deliver the attack. This boosts the user’s Coordination and Speed by two plusses (++) for the duration of the thirty-two strikes. Because of the nature of this technique, the use of vacuum palms and physical strikes are completely interchangeable. This enables the user to continue their assault as long as they are within 5 meters of the user should they try to escape or to spread the barrage out to multiple people. This takes a full post to complete.

    • First, two consecutive strikes to make two. This seals away an initial 2 total chakra.
    • Second, another two consecutive strikes to make four. At this point in time, the opponent suffers the standard 4 points of total chakra reduction from four tenketsu being sealed.
    • Third, four consecutive strikes to make eight. This tacks on the sealing away of 4 more chakra points.
    • Fourth, eight consecutive strikes to make sixteen. This adds another 8 sealed chakra points.
    • Fifth, another sixteen consecutive strikes in succession to make a total of thirty-two. At the apex of the technique, the opponent is knocked 5 meters away and 16 more points of the opponent's total chakra are sealed from use. This technique drops their Coordination & Speed by one minus (-), and lasts six posts with the rest of the tenketsu.

    Assuming a user is able to land all thirty-two strikes, this seals away a total of 32 points of chakra from the opponent for the duration specified above. If they're able to escape the technique beforehand, they only suffer based on the amount of vacuum strikes/palms they were struck with.
    Weaknesses: Stated above


    Last edited by Ojii-San on Mon May 31, 2021 2:36 pm; edited 1 time in total


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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa Sat May 29, 2021 5:01 pm

    Ojii-San wrote:Name: Sixteen-Point Barrage (Juurokuten Danmaku ,十六点弾幕)
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Range: 0m-1m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga, Personal
    Requirements: Byakugan, Intelligence of C-Rank
    Parent Technique: Jyuuken
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description:  After analyzing the way chakra flows through their opposition’s body, the Hyuuga will take note of the important tenketsu that defines their preferred method of attack. This is a process that takes at least 2 posts of battle to accomplish. After making note of these tenketsu, the user will burst forward at ++ Speed and quickly perform a barrage of 16 strikes against the opponent. While this does not seal away chakra like most Jyuuken techniques, it directly limits the flow of chakra needed to perform a certain Skill. This removes any cost reduction the Skill may of had and then increases the cost of it by 1 Rank. This may only be used to hinder one Skill at a time. This effect lasts for 6 posts.
    Weakness: The user is required to focus on the chakra points required to use a skill. Because of that, the opponent must be using said skill over the course of 2 posts they need to gather information.

    This needs to be at least A-Rank to remove the reduction and then perhaps S-Rank if you wish to increase its cost.



    Name: Eight Trigrams Deflecting Palm (八卦偏針掌, Hakke Henshinsho)
    Rank: C
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: Varies
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga, Open
    Requirements: Byakugan
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: By using their Byakugan to perceive everything around them, the Hyuuga will focus chakra into their palms to greatly increase their durability. As long as their Coordination is higher than the attack’s Speed, they can effectively swat it away. The cost of this technique depends on the cost of the technique the user is redirecting. This is considered one tier stronger against Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, and Bukijutsu. However, it is one tier weaker against Ninjutsu.
    Weakness: N/A

    This should be based on Power not Speed, and it shouldn't be one rank stronger with respect to other physical styles.



    Name: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Kick (八卦空蹴り Hakke Kuukeri)
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: User’s Coordination -1 Tier
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga Clan, Open
    Requirements: Byakugan
    Parent Technique: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: While Jyuukenpo does typically prefer palm strikes as its main form of attacking and defending against their opponents, there comes a time where kicks sometimes are required. This technique is effectively Eight Trigrams Empty Palm but performed through the sole of one’s foot. By thrusting their foot in a straight forward kick, the user will release a “vacuum shell” of compressed air towards their opponent. As the foot is not nearly as dexterous as one’s hand, this technique is not used to directly strike at the opponent’s Tenketsu. It instead is used to forcibly knock them off their feet with a much greater force than the hand equivalent. This vacuum shell is a cone that is 2 meters in diameter. This will knock the opponent back 7 meters should it connect. However, should they possess a Strength equal to or higher than this technique’s Power, this knock back is reduced by half.
    Weakness: N/A

    Approved.


    Name: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Strike (八卦空撃 Hakke Kuugeki)
    Rank: B
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: Varies
    Range: Contact
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga, Personal
    Requirements: Byakugan (to see Tenketsu)
    Parent Technique: Eight Trigrams One Body Blow, Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven, Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: One of the most important aspects of learning the Gentle Fist is learning to control each and every individual Tenketsu across the body. This is necessary to perform the clan’s ultimate defense “The Revolving Heaven,” its signature ranged attack of “Vacuum Palm,” or the niche “One Body Blow.” By using the fundaments of these techniques as a guide, the Hyuuga may further learn to release very precise bursts of chakra from specific tenketsu across their body to attack their opponent unexpectedly. This allows the Hyuuga to perform any of their Gentle Fist techniques through their tenketsu. Doing so increases the cost of the technique by 1 Rank.
    Weakness: Techniques performed this way still hold the weaknesses of their parent technique, abet at just a higher cost.


    Denied as they let's a Hyuuga execute any jutsu from any point in their body which defeats some of the balance limitations and drawbacks of jutsu like 64 palm.


    Name: Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Vacuum Palms (八卦三十二空掌, Hakke Sanjūni Kuushō)
    Rank: B
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 10
    Range: 0m-10m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga Clan, Personal
    Requirements: Stage 2 Byakugan (to see Tenketsu)
    Parent Technique: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm, Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: A combination of two signature techniques of the Hyuuga clan, Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Vacuum Palms is essentially an optionally ranged version of the standard Thirty-Two Palms technique. This allows the user to close off 32 chakra points from the opponents chakra pathway system from a distance. This eliminates the opponent’s ability to utilize chakra, makes movement difficult, and prevents the use of A-Rank and above techniques for a total of six posts.

    Once someone enters the range of the user’s field of divination, they will assume a Gentle Fist stance before beginning to deliver the attack. This boosts the user’s Coordination and Speed by two plusses (++) for the duration of the thirty-two strikes. Because of the nature of this technique, the use of vacuum palms and physical strikes are completely interchangeable. This enables the user to continue their assault as long as they are within 5 meters of the user should they try to escape or to spread the barrage out to multiple people. This takes a full post to complete.

    • First, two consecutive strikes to make two. This seals away an initial 2 total chakra.
    • Second, another two consecutive strikes to make four. At this point in time, the opponent suffers the standard 4 points of total chakra reduction from four tenketsu being sealed.
    • Third, four consecutive strikes to make eight. This tacks on the sealing away of 4 more chakra points.
    • Fourth, eight consecutive strikes to make sixteen. This adds another 8 sealed chakra points.
    • Fifth, another sixteen consecutive strikes in succession to make a total of thirty-two. At the apex of the technique, the opponent is knocked 5 meters away and 16 more points of the opponent's total chakra are sealed from use. This technique drops their Coordination & Speed by one minus (-), and lasts six posts with the rest of the tenketsu.

    Assuming a user is able to land all thirty-two strikes, this seals away a total of 32 points of chakra from the opponent for the duration specified above. If they're able to escape the technique beforehand, they only suffer based on the amount of vacuum strikes/palms they were struck with.
    Weaknesses: Stated above

    This needs to be an A or S-Ranked Technique


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    Post by Ojii-San Mon May 31, 2021 2:39 pm

    Sixteen Point Barrage wrote:This needs to be at least A-Rank to remove the reduction and then perhaps S-Rank if you wish to increase its cost.
    Removed then.

    Eight Trigrams Deflecting Palm wrote:This should be based on Power not Speed, and it shouldn't be one rank stronger with respect to other physical styles.
    Edited. Speed changes to Power. Removed aspects of physical vs ninjutsu.

    Eight Trigrams Vacuum Strike wrote:Denied as they let's a Hyuuga execute any jutsu from any point in their body which defeats some of the balance limitations and drawbacks of jutsu like 64 palm.
    Editted to allow straight forward Gentle Fist, but not combo-oriented ones (like 64 Palms).

    32 Vacuum Palms wrote:This needs to be an A or S-Ranked Technique
    Both parent techniques are C-Rank. I'm just effectively combining them. That's why I made it B-Rank.


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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa Sat Jun 05, 2021 1:57 am

    Ojii-San wrote:Name: Eight Trigrams Deflecting Palm (八卦偏針掌, Hakke Henshinsho)
    Rank: C/quote
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: Varies
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga, Open
    Requirements: Byakugan
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: By using their Byakugan to perceive everything around them, the Hyuuga will focus chakra into their palms to greatly increase their durability. As long as their Coordination is higher than the attack’s Power, they can effectively swat it away. The cost of this technique depends on the cost of the technique the user is redirecting.
    Weakness: N/A

    This will unfortunatley have to be denied upon further examination. Its kinda a catch-all jutsu disappatiation technique that can potentially nullify any attack.


    Name: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Kick (八卦空蹴り Hakke Kuukeri)
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: User’s Coordination -1 Tier
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga Clan, Open
    Requirements: Byakugan
    Parent Technique: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: While Jyuukenpo does typically prefer palm strikes as its main form of attacking and defending against their opponents, there comes a time where kicks sometimes are required. This technique is effectively Eight Trigrams Empty Palm but performed through the sole of one’s foot. By thrusting their foot in a straight forward kick, the user will release a “vacuum shell” of compressed air towards their opponent. As the foot is not nearly as dexterous as one’s hand, this technique is not used to directly strike at the opponent’s Tenketsu. It instead is used to forcibly knock them off their feet with a much greater force than the hand equivalent. This vacuum shell is a cone that is 2 meters in diameter. This will knock the opponent back 7 meters should it connect. However, should they possess a Strength equal to or higher than this technique’s Power, this knock back is reduced by half.
    Weakness: N/A

    Approved.



    Name: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Strike (八卦空撃 Hakke Kuugeki)
    Rank: B
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: Varies
    Range: Contact
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga, Personal
    Requirements: Byakugan (to see Tenketsu)
    Parent Technique: Eight Trigrams One Body Blow, Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven, Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: One of the most important aspects of learning the Gentle Fist is learning to control each and every individual Tenketsu across the body. This is necessary to perform the clan’s ultimate defense “The Revolving Heaven,” its signature ranged attack of “Vacuum Palm,” or the niche “One Body Blow.” By using the fundaments of these techniques as a guide, the Hyuuga may further learn to release very precise bursts of chakra from specific tenketsu across their body to attack their opponent unexpectedly. This allows the Hyuuga to perform most of their Gentle Fist techniques through their tenketsu. Doing so increases the cost of the technique by 1 Rank. However, they may not perform the more combo-driven techniques such as 64 Palms (and its related forms).
    Weakness: Techniques performed this way still hold the weaknesses of their parent technique, abet at just a higher cost. May not be used to perform more complex-combo oriented Gentle Fist techniques, such as 64 Palms.

    Still denied for the reasons stated above. You cannot have a catch-all "this allows you to execute all of Jyuukenpo" from any part of your body. That's OP.


    Name: Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Vacuum Palms (八卦三十二空掌, Hakke Sanjūni Kuushō)
    Rank: B
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 10
    Range: 0m-10m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Hyuuga Clan, Personal
    Requirements: Stage 2 Byakugan (to see Tenketsu)
    Parent Technique: Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm, Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: A combination of two signature techniques of the Hyuuga clan, Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Vacuum Palms is essentially an optionally ranged version of the standard Thirty-Two Palms technique. This allows the user to close off 32 chakra points from the opponents chakra pathway system from a distance. This eliminates the opponent’s ability to utilize chakra, makes movement difficult, and prevents the use of A-Rank and above techniques for a total of six posts.

    Once someone enters the range of the user’s field of divination, they will assume a Gentle Fist stance before beginning to deliver the attack. This boosts the user’s Coordination and Speed by two plusses (++) for the duration of the thirty-two strikes. Because of the nature of this technique, the use of vacuum palms and physical strikes are completely interchangeable. This enables the user to continue their assault as long as they are within 5 meters of the user should they try to escape or to spread the barrage out to multiple people. This takes a full post to complete.

    • First, two consecutive strikes to make two. This seals away an initial 2 total chakra.
    • Second, another two consecutive strikes to make four. At this point in time, the opponent suffers the standard 4 points of total chakra reduction from four tenketsu being sealed.
    • Third, four consecutive strikes to make eight. This tacks on the sealing away of 4 more chakra points.
    • Fourth, eight consecutive strikes to make sixteen. This adds another 8 sealed chakra points.
    • Fifth, another sixteen consecutive strikes in succession to make a total of thirty-two. At the apex of the technique, the opponent is knocked 5 meters away and 16 more points of the opponent's total chakra are sealed from use. This technique drops their Coordination & Speed by one minus (-), and lasts six posts with the rest of the tenketsu.

    Assuming a user is able to land all thirty-two strikes, this seals away a total of 32 points of chakra from the opponent for the duration specified above. If they're able to escape the technique beforehand, they only suffer based on the amount of vacuum strikes/palms they were struck with.
    Weaknesses: Stated above

    Still extremely powerful, has to be A or S-Rank.


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