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    Post by Hagane Thu Jul 16, 2020 1:10 am

    All previously approved, link at bottom.

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    Post by Ryuko Sat Jul 18, 2020 1:10 am

    Name: Konton no Yaiba ('Blade of Chaos')
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 5m
    Speed: User's Coordination
    Element: Wind
    Skill: Ken-Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Sword, Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: Blade of Wind
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: After paying the chakra cost, with each swing of the user's sword, a second Blade of Wind is formed from a random diction of the user's choosing within his personal space outwards up to 5 meters towards the target, this a highly compressed blade of wind featuring a razor sharp edge. These Blades of Wind do A Rank damage, a bit weaker then its parent technique. By a shift of the user's foot on the ground, they can release a somewhat powerful blast of air from their body, enough to knock anyone without B rank strength away, blasting them 10m back. If this is used--the Jutsu has ended.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    - This was pulled by Chi on the previous site . You can't have a technique that can created limitless A-Rank attacks for each swing of your sword. You'll need to make it a set amount, or limit this in some way to prevent infinite projectiles from being sent out.

    Name: Daraku no Tsubasa ('Wings of the Fallen')
    Rank: S
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: N/A
    Speed: User's Coordination
    Element: Fuuton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Minimum C-Rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: Forming a Tiger hand Seal, Feathers will begin to materialize around the user before collecting behind them, starting at their shoulder blades before working their way up to form a pair of wings. These wings can be white, black, or one of each color, depending on the morality of the user over the course of their life. With these wings the user is able to fly, the height and speed of which depending on the user's Coordination. The wings have a fairly large wingspan, about 5m across.

    C: 25 m.
    B: 100 m.
    A: 250 m.
    S: 500 m.

    Weaknesses: Fire Techs will destroy the wings, as while they appear to be made of feathers, these feathers are still made up of Fuuton Chakra.

    This needs to be fixed so that it runs on a mix of Speed and Coordination and not just Coordination so that Speed doesn't just become a dump stat when in flight. Generally for flight Speed determines how fast you can get to point A-B and Coordination determines how good your handling it for doing stuff like changing direction


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    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: A
    Perception: B
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    Post by Hagane Mon Jul 20, 2020 12:38 pm

    Blades of Chaos: Edited to be more balanced, giving 5 swings/air blades for the activation cost, and up to 10 more by paying the upkeep cost up to twice.
    Name: Konton no Yaiba ('Blade of Chaos')
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 5m
    Speed: User's Coordination
    Element: Wind
    Skill: Ken-Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Sword, Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: Blade of Wind
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: After paying the chakra cost, for the next five swings of the user's sword, a second Blade of Wind is formed from a random diction of the user's choosing within his personal space outwards up to 5 meters towards the target, this a highly compressed blade of wind featuring a razor sharp edge. These Blades of Wind do A Rank damage, a bit weaker then its parent technique. If the user has not used another technique, they may pay the upkeep cost for another 5 swings, up to two more times.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Wings of the Fallen: Made it in line with Desert Suspension. Desert Suspension is in the bloodlines library, only a D rank technique, and can allow up to six people to fly at once on three separate clouds of sand, and still flies at -1 Coordination to their speed. So I'll accept going to that, -1 Tier to Coordination in regards to speed to be in line with that jutsu...which I remind you is D rank, this is higher rank, mine allows only one person to fly and carry another where that one allows up to six, and mine I believe is more easily destroyed...I think thats beyond fair, in fact I think I should be allowed the full Coord speed considering my jutsu can't do half of what that D rank one can. But I'll accept nerfing it to be only as fast as other already approved flying techniques...I will not accept lowering it further, I'm not having my S rank Technique be even that much worse then a D rank any scrub with Magnet Release can use fresh out the academy.

    Name: Daraku no Tsubasa ('Wings of the Fallen')
    Rank: S
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: N/A
    Speed: User's Coordination -1 Tier
    Element: Fuuton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Minimum C-Rank Coordination, Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: Forming a Tiger hand Seal, Feathers will begin to materialize around the user before collecting behind them, starting at their shoulder blades before working their way up to form a pair of wings. These wings can be white, black, or one of each color, depending on the morality of the user over the course of their life. With these wings the user is able to fly. The wings have a fairly large wingspan, about 5m across. The height the user may fly at is dependent on their Coordination, starting from C rank.

    C: 25 m.
    B: 100 m.
    A: 250 m.
    S: 500 m.

    Weaknesses: Fire Techs will destroy the wings, as while they appear to be made of feathers, these feathers are still made up of Fuuton Chakra.
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    Post by Chen Kimyōnakama Sat Jul 25, 2020 6:06 pm

    Staff has discussed this thoroughly and we have decided that Desert Suspension is a Kazehana Clan Exclusive that requires 2 Skill Points and a 1,000 Experience investment. It is not an equitable comparison at all. Denied for the reasons set forth above by Ryuko


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    Post by Hagane Wed Jul 29, 2020 4:58 am

    Name: Daraku no Tsubasa ('Wings of the Fallen')
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: N/A
    Speed: User's Speed + 1 Tier++
    Element: Fuuton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Minimum C-Rank Coordination, Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: Forming a Tiger hand Seal, Feathers will begin to materialize around the user before collecting behind them, starting at their shoulder blades before working their way up to form a pair of wings. These wings can be white, black, or one of each color, depending on the morality of the user over the course of their life. With these wings the user is able to fly. The wings have a fairly large wingspan, about 5m across. The height the user may fly at is capped at 500m.

    Weaknesses: Fire Techs will destroy the wings, as while they appear to be made of feathers, these feathers are still made up of Fuuton Chakra.


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    Post by Nyguyen Uchiha Thu Jul 30, 2020 5:39 pm

    Hagane wrote:
    Name: Daraku no Tsubasa ('Wings of the Fallen')
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: N/A
    Speed: User's Speed + 1 Tier++
    Element: Fuuton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Minimum C-Rank Coordination, Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: Forming a Tiger hand Seal, Feathers will begin to materialize around the user before collecting behind them, starting at their shoulder blades before working their way up to form a pair of wings. These wings can be white, black, or one of each color, depending on the morality of the user over the course of their life. With these wings the user is able to fly. The wings have a fairly large wingspan, about 5m across. The height the user may fly at is capped at 500m.

    Weaknesses: Fire Techs will destroy the wings, as while they appear to be made of feathers, these feathers are still made up of Fuuton Chakra.

    What are the wings made out of?


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    Post by Nyguyen Uchiha Sat Aug 01, 2020 2:12 am

    Hagane wrote:
    Name: Daraku no Tsubasa ('Wings of the Fallen')
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: N/A
    Speed: User's Speed + 1 Tier++
    Element: Fuuton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Minimum C-Rank Coordination, Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: Forming a Tiger hand Seal, Feathers will begin to materialize around the user before collecting behind them, starting at their shoulder blades before working their way up to form a pair of wings. These wings can be white, black, or one of each color, depending on the morality of the user over the course of their life. With these wings the user is able to fly. The wings have a fairly large wingspan, about 5m across. The height the user may fly at is capped at 500m.

    Weaknesses: Fire Techs will destroy the wings, as while they appear to be made of feathers, these feathers are still made up of Fuuton Chakra.

    Approved


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    Post by Haruko Kaguya Sat Aug 01, 2020 3:01 am

    Hagane wrote:Blades of Chaos: Edited to be more balanced, giving 5 swings/air blades for the activation cost, and up to 10 more by paying the upkeep cost up to twice.
    Name: Konton no Yaiba ('Blade of Chaos')
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 5m
    Speed: User's Coordination
    Element: Wind
    Skill: Ken-Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Sword, Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: Blade of Wind
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: After paying the chakra cost, for the next five swings of the user's sword, a second Blade of Wind is formed from a random diction of the user's choosing within his personal space outwards up to 5 meters towards the target, this a highly compressed blade of wind featuring a razor sharp edge. These Blades of Wind do A Rank damage, a bit weaker then its parent technique. If the user has not used another technique, they may pay the upkeep cost for another 5 swings, up to two more times.
    Weaknesses: N/A


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    Post by Nyguyen Uchiha Fri Aug 07, 2020 4:52 pm

    Haruko Kaguya wrote:
    Hagane wrote:Blades of Chaos: Edited to be more balanced, giving 5 swings/air blades for the activation cost, and up to 10 more by paying the upkeep cost up to twice.
    Name: Konton no Yaiba ('Blade of Chaos')
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 5m
    Speed: User's Coordination
    Element: Wind
    Skill: Ken-Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Sword, Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: Blade of Wind
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: After paying the chakra cost, for the next five swings of the user's sword, a second Blade of Wind is formed from a random diction of the user's choosing within his personal space outwards up to 5 meters towards the target, this a highly compressed blade of wind featuring a razor sharp edge. These Blades of Wind do A Rank damage, a bit weaker then its parent technique. If the user has not used another technique, they may pay the upkeep cost for another 5 swings, up to two more times.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Approved.


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    Post by Hagane Wed Jun 16, 2021 1:00 pm

    This isn't exactly an update, note for whenever a staff does see this.
    Nyg has un-approved the flying jutsu, so I went ahead and removed it from his list. While in there, I realized I never updated the Blades of Chaos to fit the approved version in the post above this note. So I updated that too. No changes not already approved (or unapproved in the case of the one now gone jutsu) was made, you can cross check it all if you want.


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