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Kim Chang-Min
Rin Matoi
Yumi
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Yumi's Workshop
Yumi- Posts : 201
Join date : 2018-01-31
Age : 30
Character File
Skills & Elements: Genjutsu, Ijutsu, Chemistry, Fuuinjutsu, Engineering
Class: C
Ryo: 94,500
- Post n°26
Re: Yumi's Workshop
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- Strength: E
- Constitution: D
- Stamina: D
- Speed: E
- Coordination: D
- Intelligence: B
- Perception: D
- Item Locations: seet update sheet
- x1 concealed Tanto at the back of sash hidden by the bow.
- Strength: E
Copycat- Posts : 461
Join date : 2017-10-29
Character File
Skills & Elements: Katon, Raiton, Doton, Ijutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu & Fuuinjutsu
Class: A
Ryo: 1,105,125
- Post n°27
Re: Yumi's Workshop
Name: Night of the Ripper
Rank: A
Power: N/A
Activation Cost: 15cp
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 0-30m
Speed: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Exclusive (Taught by creator)
Requirements: Genjutsu
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Ram
Description: The Night of the Ripper is an illusion that can be triggered by the user performing the needed hand seal and lock onto their chosen target.
Once successfully cast, darkness will spread out consuming anyone affected by the illusion trapping them within. The illusion mixes in with the time of day if its day clouds will roll in turning the sky black. At night the moon will turn red. A thick mist begins to roll in rising up into the air, permeating the air with a heavy frost. A chill will roll of the spine of those within as if they are being watched. Now and then they will momentarily see a pair of blood red eyes looking at them only to vanish the moment they are spotted, to make it seem like the target was just seeing things.
The illusion attacks ones mind, to install a deep fear in them. The mist around their feet will part revealing cobblestone street. The sound of metal grinding on stone will ring in their ears as a shadow appears before them. The shadow is tall, over six feet, hunched over so its possible it is close to seven feet. Their arms are long, with what appears to be long blades attached to their fingers. As the shadow steps forward, their form will be illuminated. The shadow is a horribly grotesque man with burn marks all over his body wearing a black and red striped jumper. As for those blades on his fingers, they are his fingers. The blades are each distinct with blood dripping from them.
The figure's red eyes will glow before it lunges forward at a speed the target can't comprehend. They find themselves unable to act as decaying hands will have broken through the cobblestone street to latch onto their legs. Countless arms will reach out, hands latching onto the enemies legs keeping them rooted. The figure will appear before them and swipe with a single bladed hand, piercing deep into their torso and rip out their intestines.
The illusion will trigger the receptors in the brain, to make the target thing they have actually been hurting, causing pain to course through their body from the impacted area. The brain will think the target is dying, causing their body to go cold. When they finally do die in the illusion they will reappear unhurt back where they started, bound and facing off against the shadow.
Weaknesses: Rooted to spot when used
Name: Burning Man
Rank: A
Power: N/A
Activation Cost: 15cp
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 0-50m
Speed: N/A
Skill: Genjutsu
Classification: Exclusive (Taught by creator)
Requirements: Genjutsu
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Tiger
Description: The Night of the Ripper is an illusion that can be triggered by the user performing the needed hand seal and releasing a pulse of chakra over a large area. The chakra is inlaid into the surroundings, casting the illusion onto anyone within that area, to cast the technique on as many targets as possible.
Once cast the user will appear to breath in before exhaling, unleashing fire shaped into a literal sea of flame, which covers a wide range. The massive wall of fire will surge forward engulfing everything, scorching the earth and tearing it apart. Nothing will be spared as the sea of fire collapses onto those caught within the illusion. The flames will sear away at those caught within burning them slowly but surely. The illusion is so intense that it attempts to affect the user's mind, triggering it to make the brain think that the body is actually being burnt. This will cause the enemy to feel pain through their body. The illusion even fools the brain into thinking it can feel the intense heat of the flames on the skin.
In the illusion flesh will burn away to the point it will turn to ash, falling off as the body degrades. The illusion will only stop when it is broken or when the entire body has been burnt to ash.
Weaknesses: Rooted to spot when used
Approved.
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"Not everyone's perfect... but sometimes the world seems like it'd be better off if they were."
Updates | Application
- Stats:
- Strength: C+
Constitution: C
Stamina: A
Speed: B
Coordination: A
Intelligence: B
Perception: A
Akame- Posts : 741
Join date : 2016-12-15
Character File
Skills & Elements: None
Class: A
Ryo:
- Post n°28
Re: Yumi's Workshop
Name: Sealing Art: Amateur Chakra Storage Seal
Rank: D
Power: N/A
Activation Cost: 3cp on Creation | 1cp to place | 1cp to activate (Unsealing Technique)
Upkeep Cost: 0
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuuinjutsu
Classification: Exclusive (Taught by creator)
Requirements: Fuuinjutsu, Unsealing Technique
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A low ranking seal that requires the user to draw onto sealing paper with sealing ink. The seal array is based around the kanji for 'chakra' and 'storage' put together with many overlapping seals. Once the formula has been created the user then presses the tag against flesh. The seal will transfer from the paper and burn into the user's skin creating a matching pattern. Once placed the seal will draw chakra from the user's body into itself, storing it away for later use. The seal absorbs 2 units of chakra every post. The wielder can fill the seal up by directly channelling chakra into it.
A maximum of 10 points of chakra can be stored within the seal. When released the chakra will pour back into the body filling up one's reserves when they are running low. Primarily to be used on the wearer is beginning to run low on chakra.
Weaknesses: Seal must be prepared beforehand. Once the stored chakra is released the seal will break away, requiring a new seal to be placed. A maximum of 2 Amateur Chakra Storage Seal can be placed on the body. Can be placed in conjuncture with similar seals.
Name: Sealing Art: Adapt Chakra Storage Seal
Rank: C
Power: N/A
Activation Cost: 5cp on Creation | 3cp to place | 1cp to activate (Unsealing Technique)
Upkeep Cost: 0
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuuinjutsu
Classification: Exclusive (Taught by creator)
Requirements: Fuuinjutsu, Unsealing Technique.
Parent Technique: Sealing Art: Amateur Chakra Storage Seal
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A low ranking seal that requires the user to draw onto sealing paper with sealing ink. The seal array is based around the kanji for 'chakra' and 'storage' put together with many overlapping seals. Once the formula has been created the user then presses the tag against flesh. The seal will transfer from the paper and burn into the user's skin creating a matching pattern. Once placed the seal will draw chakra from the user's body into itself, storing it away for later use. the seal absorbs 5 units of chakra every post. The wielder can fill the seal up by directly channelling chakra into it.
A maximum of 20 points of chakra can be stored within the seal. When released the chakra will pour back into the body filling up one's reserves when they are running low. Primarily to be used on the wearer is beginning to run low on chakra.
Weaknesses: Seal must be prepared beforehand. Once the stored chakra is released the seal will break away, requiring a new seal to be placed. A maximum of 1 Adapt Chakra Storage Seal can be placed on the body. Can be placed in conjuncture with similar seals.
Name: Sealing Art: Intermediate Chakra Storage Seal
Rank: B
Power: N/A
Activation Cost: 10cp on Creation | 5cp to place | 1cp to activate (Unsealing Technique)
Upkeep Cost: 0
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Fuuinjutsu
Classification: Exclusive (Taught by creator)
Requirements: Fuuinjutsu, Unsealing Technique
Parent Technique: Sealing Art: Amateur Chakra Storage Seal
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A seal that requires the user to draw onto sealing paper with sealing ink. The seal array is based around the kanji for 'chakra' and 'storage' put together with many overlapping seals. Once the formula has been created the user then presses the tag against flesh. The seal will transfer from the paper and burn into the user's skin creating a matching pattern. Once placed the seal will draw chakra from the user's body into itself, storing it away for later use. The seal absorbs 5 units of chakra every post. The wielder can fill the seal up by directly channelling chakra into it.
A maximum of 30 points of chakra can be stored within the seal. When released the chakra will pour back into the body filling up one's reserves when they are running low. Primarily to be used on the wearer is beginning to run low on chakra.
Weaknesses: Seal must be prepared beforehand. Once the stored chakra is released the seal will break away, requiring a new seal to be placed. A maximum of 1 Intermediate Chakra Storage Seal can be placed on the body. Can be placed in conjuncture with similar seals.
These are unapproved. In total these can give out 70 points of stamina when used in conjunction with each other which is essentially a free tier of stamina. Any techniques utilizing these as a basis will need reworked to function in a different manner. You can, however, attempt something similar as an enchantment. There are far more drawbacks and limitations to enchantments than there are in comparison to regular fuuinjutsu. Sorry for any inconvenience!
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- Character Name: Akame Sasumi
Experience: 0/4200
Renown: 3000
Ryo: 0
Stats:- Strength: C
- Constitution: C
- Stamina: B+ (wealthy)
- Speed: C
- Coordination: A
- Intelligence: A
- Perception: B
Limit Break Points:- Physical: 2
- Technique: 0
- Destiny: 1
Link to Character Updates: https://gladiusnarutorp.forumotion.com/t219-tsuyo-s-updates#1371 - Strength: C
"Death comes for everyone. I'm just moving you to the front of the line."