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    Yami Kaguya
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    Post by Yami Kaguya Sat Sep 01, 2018 7:18 pm

    Kenjutsu
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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Mon Sep 03, 2018 10:16 am

    Lazy Sword Style should conform to the rules found here regarding boosts. Keep in mind that physical styles (Tai, Buki, and Ken) can have upkeeps two ranks lower than normal. So an S-Rank is 25 CP you may have its upkeep be 10 CP per post. However, lazy style's upkeep caps at 5 CP which is a no go.


    Light Aura: Should cost more chakra see rules above.

    Spark Shot: Lower Range

    Light Flash: How long does it last?

    Light Shield: C-Rank and above should be able to destroy this.


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    Post by Yami Kaguya Mon Sep 03, 2018 7:13 pm

    Fixed the upkeep cost of Lazy Sword Style

    Raised Light auras activation to 3.

    Fixed up Light Shield

    Added the duration for Light Flash

    Spark shot's range I'm quoting this jutsu from the Raiton Techniques list, both are same rank with same power and speed, whose range is equal.

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    Post by Yami Kaguya Thu Sep 06, 2018 5:01 am

    Added a new technique, Sword Concept. Placed it as first for the list of Kenjutsu technique.


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    Post by Copycat Tue Sep 11, 2018 1:57 am

    Name:Sword Concept
    Rank: E-S (Each level must be individually trained)
    Power: Equal to technique rank
    Activation Cost: E = 1, D = 3, C = 5, B = 10, A = 15, S = 25
    Upkeep Cost: E= 1, D = 1, C = 1, B = 3, A = 5, S = 10
    Range: Melee
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu (Unique Booster)
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Sword Concept is more of an idea than technique, it is where one achieves enlightment over the sword. Sword Concept follows the idea of truly mastering the sword and becoming one with it and it becomes one with you. By practising, sleeping and eating by your sword, constantly keepings it in contact as he mediatate over the profoundness that is the Art of Swordsmanship all to achieve enlightment. By achieving enlightment one can unleash the true power of a sword.

    By breathing in your breath becomes as sharp as a sword ad an aura surrounds you and your blade(s). This aura appears slim and sharp, refined like a sword that gives the user the appearance that they have become an actual sword. Just looking at the user and their sword someone will feel as if there is no sword and swordsman just a sword. This can be considered the ultimate enlightenment to the art of swordsmanship, as it adds the power of the technique to one's own sword. (Example D rank Sword Concept is D rank power. D rank power + users strength)

    E Rank: + Speed
    D Rank (150 Words): + Speed, + Strength
    C Rank (200 Words): ++ Speed, + Strength
    B Rank (250 Words): +1 Tier Speed, + Strength,
    A Rank (300 Words): +1 Tier Speed, ++ Strength
    S Rank (350 Words): +1 Tier Speed, +1 tier Strength

    Every time the Sword Concept is trained it creates its own individual technique at the rank it was trained with power equal to that rank.
    Weaknesses: Each level must be trained, creating a separate technique which replaces the old technique. Example: Start with E sword concept, train D rank sword concept. D rank sword concept over rights E rank Sword Concept removing it. The user only possesses D rank Sword Concept now.

    Name: Lazy Sword Style
    Rank: E-S (Each level must be individually trained)
    Power: Equal to Users Strength
    Activation Cost: N/A
    Upkeep Cost: E= 1, D = 1, C = 1, B = 3, A = 5, S = 10
    Range: Melee
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: A style of swordsmanship that reflects its owner's lazy mannerisms. Attacks appear lazy in nature, with barely any effort put into them, but at the final conclusion, they turn serious, attacking with full strength. The Lazy Sword focuses on conserving ones physical attributes such as speed, endurance and stamina, to only use them for a finishing strike. When one attacks with the Lazy Sword it is often to finish the fight of as quickly as possible. By conserving one's strengths, the user of the lazy sword will dodge with bare effort, simply attempting to avoid attacks by moving an inch or so out of the way, using minimal movement to dodge.

    The idea is to gradually gain momentum in a fight, starting off from the weakest blows, gradually increasing strength with every strike. By gathering momentum it is designed to allow the user to attempt to overwhelm the foe. Every retaliation when used appears weak and effortless, using the bare minimum to fight back until they have gathered enough momentum for the final blow. Momentum is used to ensure killing blows end the fight in a single hit.

    Nature chakra can also be channelled into the Lazy Sword Style to increase its lethality.

    E Rank: + Coordination
    D Rank (150 Words): + Coordination, + Speed
    C Rank (200 Words): ++ Coordination, + Speed
    B Rank (250 Words): ++ Coordination, ++ Speed,
    A Rank (300 Words): ++ Coordination, ++ Speed, + Strength
    S Rank (350 Words): +1 Tier Coordination, ++ Speed, + Strength

    Every time the Lazy Sword style is trained it creates its own individual technique at the rank it was trained with power equal to that rank.
    Weaknesses: Each level must be trained, creating a separate technique.

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Lazy Step
    Rank: D
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost: 1cp
    Range: Melee
    Speed: Self
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Lazy Step is a movement technique designed to allow minimal effort when moving, dodging and attacking. The move uses the most simplest of forms when utilised alongside the Lazy Sword Style. Boosts users speed by ++
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Lazy Jab
    Rank: D
    Power: D + Users Strength
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost: 1cp
    Range: Melee
    Speed: Self
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Lazy Jab is rather simple in its design, the user simplies jabs forward with their sword in a lazy motion, before taking the enemy by surprise by increasing the strength and speed behind the single jab. Boosts users speed by ++
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Lazy Cut
    Rank: D
    Power: D + Users Strength
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Self
    Speed: Self
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Lazy Cut is just a simple downward slash of the blade, that when used the user will first hold back their strength, making the swing appear slow and weak. But at the last moment the sword strike speeds up to the user's desired speed, this is done to catch someone off guard. Boosts strength by ++ when used.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Lazy Fold
    Rank: D
    Power: D + Users Strength
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Melee
    Speed: Self
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Lazy Fold is a two-fold attack, with the first designed to mislead the enemy. This can use one blade or two depending on the user's preference. The user will swing their blade lazily at their enemy appearing to use no effort, swinging it on a rising curve. The first strike is a feint and is usually easy to dodge. Once dodged the user will stomp a foot into the ground and lunge, bringing the sword back around on a falling curve. Boosts users coordination by ++
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Lazy Cry
    Rank: D
    Power: D + Users Strength
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-10m
    Speed: D-C
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Lazy Cry is a chakra based sword attack. The user will channel chakra into their blade; their chakra will appear sluggish like their own personality. The user then swings the blade, however, they want, firing a slow-moving arc of blue chakra that is 2ms long. The arc of chakra moves initially at D rank speed, but after covering a 1m distance it rapidly speeds up reaching C rank speed.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Spark
    Rank: D
    Power: D + Users Strength
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost: 1cp
    Range: 0-1m
    Speed: Self
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style, Raiton
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user channels a small amount of lightning nature chakra into their blade, coating it ever so slightly. Whenever they attack this lightning will jump from the blade towards the target to shock them, as long as they are within a 1m range of the sword. The lightning always works to empower the strength of the user's sword through the use of the lightning element. Each slash will send lightning coursing into the enemy’s body on every hit, dealing added damage.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Two Fold Slash
    Rank: D
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Melee
    Speed: C
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Two-Fold Slash is one of the more serious moves in the Lazy Sword Style. It is considered a basic killing move to finish an enemy off quickly. The user will channel chakra into their sword and will swing downwards once with their sword, but on the swing, two sword-like slashes of chakra appear from the blade to strike the enemy two times.  Boosts Coordination by ++
    Weaknesses: The two sword slashes of chakra can't be directed

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Three Fold Slash
    Rank: C
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 5cp
    Upkeep Cost: 0
    Range: Melee
    Speed: B
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Three-Fold Slash is one of the more serious moves in the Lazy Sword Style. It is considered a basic killing move to finish an enemy off quickly. The user will channel chakra into their sword and swing downwards once with their sword, but on the swing, three sword-like slashes of chakra appear from the blade to strike the enemy three times. Boosts users Coordination by ++ and Speed by +
    Weaknesses: The three sword slashes of chakra can't be directed

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Lazy Lunge
    Rank: C
    Power: C + Users Strength
    Activation Cost: 5cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Melee
    Speed: Self
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Lazy Lunge is a lunging technique, a simple attack in its design. The user will lunge, forward in a lazy manner, crossing the distance towards an opponent, but once in striking range will lunge again this time with all their might at full speed, thrusting their sword forward. Boosts users speed by 1 Tier
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Lazy Swipe
    Rank: C
    Power: C + Users Strength
    Activation Cost: 5cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Melee
    Speed: Self
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Lazy Swipe is just a simple sidewards swing of the blade, that when used the user will first hold back their strength, making the swing appear slow and weak. But at the last moment the sword strike speeds up to the user's desired speed, this is done to catch someone off guard. Boosts speed by ++ and coordination by + when used.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Lazy Draw
    Rank: C
    Power: C + Users Strength
    Activation Cost: 5cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Melee
    Speed: Self
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Lazy Draw is just a simple draw of the user's blade and striking with it. The swordsman will step forward on their dominate leg and dash towards their enemy launching forward with great speed. Once in range the user will draw their blade with great speed, aiming to slice their foe in two. Boosts speed by ++ on charge. Boosts speed for sword drawing by 1 Tier.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Lazy Slash
    Rank: C
    Power: C + Users Strength
    Activation Cost: 5cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Melee
    Speed: Self
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Lazy slash is just a simple downward slash of the blade, that when used the user will first hold back their strength, making the swing appear slow and weak. But at the last moment the sword strike speeds up to the user's desired speed, this is done to catch someone off guard. Boosts strength by ++ and coordination by + when used.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Lazy Beheading
    Rank: C
    Power: B + Users Strength
    Activation Cost: 5cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Melee
    Speed: Users
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The Lazy Beheading is another killing move designed to finish an enemy off in one blow. The user will lazily swing their sword, aiming at their target's next. The sword seems slow as the user is moving at their full speed, but suddenly the blade accelerates with the intent to take the enemies head.  Boosts Speed by ++, boosts Coordination by +
    Weaknesses: The two sword slashes of chakra can't be directed

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Thunder Slash
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-10m
    Speed: C
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Kenjutsu,
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user channels lightning nature chakra into their blade, creating thin coat. The wielder then swings the blade firing a crescent shaped slash of yellow lightning towards their target.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lazy Sword Style: Instant Reflex
    Rank: D
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: 0
    Range: Melee
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Kenjutsu,
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Lazy Sword Style
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Through the use of lightning nature chakra, the user can stimulate the muscles and nervous system of their body to forcibly returns the user to attack stance after they are thrown off-balance by a previous attack. It's effective for dodging enemy attacks but puts a large burden on the user's body.
    Weaknesses: Instant reflex puts a large strain on the user's body. The number of times the Instant Reflex can be activated in battle depends on the wielder's constitution, a higher constitution the more uses before the body damages itself. 1 use over the user's limits will cause minor tears in the body's muscles. 2 uses over the user's limit will cause bones to break. 3 uses over the user's limits will make ligaments tear, bones shatter, muscles rip and blood cells to rupture. 4 uses over the limit can permanently cripple the user.

    Constitution Chart:

    • E Constitution: 0 Times
    • D Constitution: 1 Time
    • C Constitution: 3 Times
    • B Constitution: 5 Times
    • A Constitution: 10 Times
    • S Constitution: 15 Times
    • X Constitution: Unlimited


    Name: Spark Aura
    Rank: E
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 1cp
    Upkeep Cost: 1cp
    Range: Self
    Speed: Self
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Raiton
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user coats themselves in a thin layer of lightning boosting speed by +
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Spark
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-20m
    Speed: D
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Raiton
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user channels lightning into the palm of their hand before shooting a spark of lightning towards their target.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Light Aura
    Rank: D
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost: 1cp
    Range: Self
    Speed: Self
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Raiton
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user coats themselves in a thin layer of lightning boosting speed by + and Coordination by +
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Spark Shot
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-50m
    Speed: C
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Raiton
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user points their fingers like a gun towards a target and shoots a small tennis shaped ball of lightning at them.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Lightning Arrow
    Rank: D
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-30m
    Speed: C
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Raiton
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user brings their hands together channelling lightning chakra between their fingertips. Blue lightning begins to jump back and forth between these fingers which are then launched at a target which takes the shape of a 1.5m long blue arrow made of lighting.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Light Flash
    Rank: D
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-20m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Raiton
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user channels lightning around their body and releases it in the shape of a bright explosive flash. This flash is incredibly bright, designed to temporarily blind or inhibat the vision of the user's foes, giving the wielder time to attack while the foe is caught off guard. Temporarily blinds for 1 post.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Light Shield
    Rank: D
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 3cp
    Upkeep Cost: 1cp
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Raiton
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around their body to coat them in a thin aura. This lightning coat acts as a defensive shield to block incoming attacks of similar power. As long as the aura isn't broken the user can continue to channel chakra into it, repairing the damage. D rank strength attacks deal 25% to the protective aura. C rank attacks deal 100% damage against the shield breaking it, but the damage is still absorbed on breakage. B rank and above instantly break it and carry on at full strength.
    Weaknesses: N/A

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