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    Hanabi’s Custom Techniques

    Hanabi Uchiha
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    Post by Hanabi Uchiha Wed Nov 16, 2022 7:45 am

    Ember Dragon
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    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 3 (optional)
    Range: 120 m
    Speed: Rank C
    Element: Fire
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi to teach the Jutsu.
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Tiger -> Snake -> Dragon -> Bird
    Description: When the user combines these hand seals together, a large dragon, with a snakes body (a Chinese dragon to be exact), comes from the back of the user, creating a large Ember Dragon. Although this comes straight from the source, the activation cost will take a hit on the user. This dragon is roughly 10x15x25FT (WxHxL), burning everything in its path that’s flammable. The dragon goes forth onto its opponent and either disperses, engulfing the user and searing the skin on the body or combusts, leaving 6 exploding little dragons to attack and explode near any targets the user chooses. These dragons can be at random or if the user wants to pay an additional 3 chakra, force the dragons to a certain area OR make them explode manually with coordination taking a -1 tier to coordination.
    Weaknesses: Water


    Division
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    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep: 3
    Range: Close Combat
    Speed: C
    Element: —
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi
    Hand Seals: Lion
    Description:

    upon using this Kenjutsu Technique, the user will gain a +1 tier in strength. The user may use this as a defensive mechanism to push back any enemies surrounding them. While in this stance, the user has an advantage of using their sword as a shield by placing the flat side of the sword and pushing the target away and or countering their melee attack.

    Weakness: Long range, Elemental Jutsu’s, Boosts only applied when holding a sword.


    Name: Pheonix Wings
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5 (ea. Slash v.1)
    Upkeep Cost: 3 (v.2 only)
    Range: 90 m
    Speed: C
    Element: Koton
    Skill: Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Katon, Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu, Hanabi
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description:

    V.1 The user uses very light and precise movements when they step and slash. As the fire becomes enraged with the oxygen through movement, the user can create fiery slashes that can go travel up to 90 m in a straight line. If the user is skilled enough, they can make the slashes curve with a disadvantage of going 60 m.

    V.2 The user creates Phoenix wings from fire that form on the users back, giving them a +1 tier to speed. This will be active until the user decides to end it or they fall below 50% stamina. This ability allows the user to be light on their feet, allowing them to make longer jumps at faster speeds, not giving them flight but giving them a boost while in air by jumping.
    Weaknesses: Water, close range

    (Versions 1 and 2 CANNOT be used at the same time. Only one at a time may be used each use.)


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    Name: Uchiha, Hanabi
    Uchiha Clan Leader
    Age: 20
    Gender: Female
    Rank: Jounin A
    Village: Konoha
    Titles: The Golden Flower of Konoha, Dragon Queen

    Renown: 9,200

    Experience: 
    Total - 4798
    unused exp - 8

    Ryo:  335,000

    Stats:
    Strength: D
    Constitution: D (C)
    Stamina: B
    Speed: B+ (A+)
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: C (B with Sharingan)

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    Post by Masaru Wed Nov 30, 2022 11:09 pm

    Hanabi Inuzaka wrote:Ember Dragon
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    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 2 (optional)
    Range: 120 m
    Speed: Rank C
    Element: Fire
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi to teach the Jutsu.
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Tiger -> Snake -> Dragon -> Bird
    Description: When the user combines these hand seals together, a large dragon, with a snakes body (a Chinese dragon to be exact), comes from the back of the user, creating a large Ember Dragon. Although this comes straight from the source, the activation cost will take a hit on the user. This dragon is roughly 10x15x25 (WxHxL), burning everything in its path that’s flammable. The dragon goes forth onto its opponent and either disperses, engulfing the user and searing the skin on the body or combusts, leaving 6 exploding little dragons to attack and explode near any targets the user chooses. These dragons can be at random or if the user wants to pay an additional 2 chakra, force the dragons to a certain area. The dragons can explode manually if the user desires.
    Weaknesses: Water


    Division
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    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep: 3
    Range: Close Combat
    Speed: C
    Element: —
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi
    Hand Seals: Lion
    Description:

    upon using this Kenjutsu Technique, the user will gain a level in strength and stamina. The user may use this as a defensive mechanism to push back any enemies surrounding them. While in this stance, the user has an advantage of dodging and countering. Their sword may be used as a shield by placing the flat side of the sword and pushing the target away and or countering their melee attack.

    Weakness: Long range, Elemental Jutsu’s


    Name: Engulf
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 2
    Upkeep Cost: 4
    Range: Transfer
    Speed: C
    Element: Katon
    Skill: ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: katon, ninjutsu, Hanabi
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: The user channels some chakra into the weapon they wield. The weapon is then engulfed in a fiery flame, able to use certain techniques during this time. The Upkeep is costly with other techniques being used but when used correctly, it can be quite powerful. The User can choose to pay an additional 2 chakra to make the flames hotter and bigger.
    Weaknesses: Water


    Name: Pheonix Wings
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 2 per slash
    Range: 90 m
    Speed: C
    Element: Koton
    Skill: Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu, Hanabi.
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Katon, Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu, Hanabi
    Parent Technique: Engulf
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description:
    The user uses very light and precise movements when they step and slash. As the fire becomes enraged with the oxygen through movement, the user can create fiery slashes that can go travel up to 90 m in a straight line. If the user is skilled enough, they can make the slashes curve.
    Weaknesses: Water, close range

    Ember Dragon - Upkeep cost of a C-Rank tech is 3 not 2, also on the (wxhxl) is that inches/cm/feet/meters? Please specify, also if you want to free form the little dragons (control where they go) the speed will need to be -1 tier of your coordination as with all free forms.

    Division - need more details on this one, as in how much the boosts and advantages are. Please remember that as a C-Rank tech it would only be able to boost stats by a Max of 1 tier so make sure to take that into account.

    Engulf - activation of a C-Rank tech is 5 not 2 and upkeep is 3 not 4. Also just a note you can surround your blade in flames with the chakra flow technique... In case you didn't know. If you're looking for something more specific to fire that is fine but might still look at chakra flow to see ideas.

    [b Phoenix Wings[/b] - again Upkeep for C-Rank is 3. Also you will not be able to move at 90m/s with a technique sorry. The speed of the technique is more for itself not the user. You can however reword this to boost your speed by +1 tier but that's about it.


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    Post by Masaru Thu Dec 15, 2022 2:01 pm

    Hanabi Inuzaka wrote:Ember Dragon
    ________________

    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 3 (optional)
    Range: 120 m
    Speed: Rank C
    Element: Fire
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi to teach the Jutsu.
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Tiger -> Snake -> Dragon -> Bird
    Description: When the user combines these hand seals together, a large dragon, with a snakes body (a Chinese dragon to be exact), comes from the back of the user, creating a large Ember Dragon. Although this comes straight from the source, the activation cost will take a hit on the user. This dragon is roughly 10x15x25FT (WxHxL), burning everything in its path that’s flammable. The dragon goes forth onto its opponent and either disperses, engulfing the user and searing the skin on the body or combusts, leaving 6 exploding little dragons to attack and explode near any targets the user chooses. These dragons can be at random or if the user wants to pay an additional 3 chakra, force the dragons to a certain area OR make them explode manually with coordination taking a -1 tier to coordination.
    Weaknesses: Water


    Division
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    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep: 3
    Range: Close Combat
    Speed: C
    Element: —
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi
    Hand Seals: Lion
    Description:

    upon using this Kenjutsu Technique, the user will gain a +1 tier in strength. The user may use this as a defensive mechanism to push back any enemies surrounding them. While in this stance, the user has an advantage of using their sword as a shield by placing the flat side of the sword and pushing the target away and or countering their melee attack.

    Weakness: Long range, Elemental Jutsu’s, Boosts only applied when holding a sword.


    Name: Pheonix Wings
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5 (ea. Slash v.1)
    Upkeep Cost: 3 (v.2 only)
    Range: 90 m
    Speed: C
    Element: Koton
    Skill: Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Katon, Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu, Hanabi
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description:

    V.1 The user uses very light and precise movements when they step and slash. As the fire becomes enraged with the oxygen through movement, the user can create fiery slashes that can go travel up to 90 m in a straight line. If the user is skilled enough, they can make the slashes curve with a disadvantage of going 60 m.

    V.2 The user creates Phoenix wings from fire that form on the users back, giving them a +1 tier to speed. This will be active until the user decides to end it or they fall below 50% stamina. This ability allows the user to be light on their feet, allowing them to make longer jumps at faster speeds, not giving them flight but giving them a boost while in air by jumping.
    Weaknesses: Water, close range

    (Versions 1 and 2 CANNOT be used at the same time. Only one at a time may be used each use.)

    Approved


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    Post by Hanabi Uchiha Thu Dec 15, 2022 9:42 pm

    Crimson Wolf Fang:


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    _________________
    Name: Uchiha, Hanabi
    Uchiha Clan Leader
    Age: 20
    Gender: Female
    Rank: Jounin A
    Village: Konoha
    Titles: The Golden Flower of Konoha, Dragon Queen

    Renown: 9,200

    Experience: 
    Total - 4798
    unused exp - 8

    Ryo:  335,000

    Stats:
    Strength: D
    Constitution: D (C)
    Stamina: B
    Speed: B+ (A+)
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: C (B with Sharingan)

    Current attunement -
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    Dread Shroud - Active <+1 CON>
    Phantom Steps - Active <+1 SPD>
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    Post by Masaru Tue Dec 27, 2022 1:06 am

    Hanabi Inuzaka wrote:
    Name: Three Sword Style
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: N/A
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: N.A/Close Combat
    Speed: C
    Element: None
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret, Konoha Exclusive
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Hanabi, Theee Swords, C SPD, B Coord
    Parent Technique: None
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: The user gets within this stance, holding their swords in their hands over the sword that is held within their mouth on either side. In this stance, the user gains +1 tier to their Speed, allowing them to create quick attacks.
    Weaknesses: Ninjutsu is a big weakness due to every limb being almost occupied. The user is unable to do any ninjutsus unless they free one hand before getting into the style. (Example: Hanabi holds one sword in her mouth and another in her hand, using her free hand to perform a hand string of seals. Once she finishes the seals, she picks up her last sword and goes for an attack). If you are to perform hand seals, you MUST have the one handed jutsu UA.

    Name: Oni Giri (鬼ギリ)
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: None
    Upkeep Cost: None
    Range: Long Range
    Speed: C
    Element:None
    Skill:Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi, Kenjutsu
    Parent Technique: Three Sword Style
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: When the user is in the TSS, they are able to produce this attack, apply their speed and coordination together when lunging at the target from 15m away. Using this technique will treat the users speed +1 tier. When this attack hits a target, the user will swipe both swords across the chest, providing an X mark with a horizontal slice across the chest as well due to the sword in the mouth. This can often be used as a fatal blow considering where they aim the sword, it may land on the throat.
    Weaknesses: Ninjutsu

    Name: Burning Cross
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Contact
    Speed: C
    Element: Koton
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi, Kenjutsu, Koton
    Parent Technique: Three Sword Style
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Lion
    Description: A variation of the Oni giri tech, the user will do the same thing but in this variation, the enemy will be lit on fire. (Refer to Oni Giri) The opponent will be on fire for 5 rounds, taking D rank damage.
    Weaknesses: Suiton, Ninjutsu. If the opponent is hit with B rank water jutsu or higher, the opponent is no longer on fire.

    Name: Split Fear
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: LoS (gen), Long range
    Speed: C
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu, Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Gen, Ken
    Parent Technique: Three Sword Style
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user puts their hand swords over their mouth blade and swings forth a forward descending slash with them while darting towards the opponent. When the user uses this attack, the aura of one’s fear is shown behind him, overwhelming then and putting weight on their chest from fear. This gives the opponent temporary paralysis, lasting only one post. Countdown for this Genjutsu is 3 posts, once they see the person place the swords over their mouth, the countdown will begin.
    Weaknesses: If the user loses sight for more than 5 seconds, the genjutsu will end. As long as the LoS remains, the genjutsu will remain in place unless the opponent has Genjutsu Kai. The user must remain still, not paralyzed, to make the genjutsu take full effect as well as keep a LoS of 25m to keep this Genjutsu Active. The user may adjust their body and move their hands but should not break the LoS or move in a general direction.

    Name:Phoenix Twirl
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Long Range
    Speed: B
    Element: Koton
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Ken, Koton, TSS
    Parent Technique: TSS, Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: Bird, Tiger
    Description: When using these hand signs before holding the swords, the user may use this technique to lunge at the target, twirling while creating an imitation of Phoenix wings as they twirl. To start this jutsu, the user must do the coordinating hand signs, grab their swords and place them over one of their shoulders (exception being the mouth sword). The user then will lunge at the opponent, twirling their body simultaneously, creating fire onto the swords through chakra flow, giving the user the ability to produce Phoenix wings. As the user comes in contact, they will make a diagonal cut onto the opponent while the wings wrap around them, doing C rank Fire damage. The user does not burn but instead has the lingering effect of heat all over their body.  
    Weaknesses:Suiton (A or higher)

    Name: Ember Wolves
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: C
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi, Katon
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Dog>Tiger
    Description: They are loyal to the user and will obey every command. These wolves can inflict C type physical damage as well as D type fire damage causing a singe or a burn open the opponent. If a wolf decreases to 0 HP, the wolf will howl and explode where it’s at. Each howl can be used to boost the other wolves with an advantage on speed (Cannot be stacked no more than 3, giving it a +1 tier). These boosts will last 2 posts with each boost falling off accordingly. Only 5 can be summoned at a time.
    Weaknesses:

    future reference don't need all the stuff at the top, also this is more than 5 techniques... I'll let it slide this time but please be mindful of the 5 custom techs for submission at a time.

    Three Sword Style: Ok so I am going to need you to explain how holding a sword in your mouth boosts your speed by 1 tier, because anyone with B coord can do that. Please give a description of how it actually works.

    Oni Giri: this needs to be stated that you would lung forward in a straight line, so dodging out of the way would effectively be a weakness.

    Burning Cross: Thats not how it works, if you want to do damage over multiple post you are going to need to pay an upkeep, this would also be a Ninjutsu as it is not effecting the sword but the person you are striking and continuing away from the sword. also you don't have Koton.

    Split Fear: So this would not be a Ken either. this would simply be a Gen, seeing the swords would be the trigger. I am also going to say to put this at B-Rank

    Phoenix Twirl: check your spelling you don't have Koton, you have Katon

    Ember Wolves: if you are creating 5 wolves, you will not be able to have each of them dealing C and D rank damage for a C rank. Raise the rank or massively lower the damage


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    Post by Masaru Mon Jan 02, 2023 6:54 pm

    Name: Three Sword Style
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: N/A
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: N.A/Close Combat
    Speed: C
    Element: None
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret, Konoha Exclusive
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, Hanabi Exclusive, Theee Swords, C SPD, B Coord
    Parent Technique: None
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: The user gets within this stance, holding their swords in their hands over the sword that is held within their mouth on either side. In this stance, the user gains +1 tier to their Speed, allowing them to create quick attacks.
    Weaknesses: Ninjutsu is a big weakness due to every limb being almost occupied. The user is unable to do any ninjutsus unless they free one hand before getting into the style. (Example: Hanabi holds one sword in her mouth and another in her hand, using her free hand to perform a hand string of seals. Once she finishes the seals, she picks up her last sword and goes for an attack). If you are to perform hand seals, you MUST have the one handed jutsu UA.

    I do not see any change from the last modding... Please give a description of how it actually works. Additionally if you are able to free your hand to use ninjutsu then not being able to use ninjutsu is effectively redundant as a weakness.


    Name: Oni Giri (鬼ギリ)
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: None
    Upkeep Cost: None
    Range: Long Range
    Speed: C
    Element:None
    Skill:Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi Exclusive, Kenjutsu
    Parent Technique: Three Sword Style
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: When the user is in the TSS, they are able to produce this attack, apply their speed and coordination together when lunging at the target from 15m away. Using this technique will treat the users coordination +1 tier. When this attack hits a target, the user will swipe both swords across the chest, providing an X mark with a horizontal slice across the chest as well due to the sword in the mouth. This can often be used as a fatal blow considering where they aim the sword, it may land on the throat.
    Weaknesses: Ninjutsu, dodging

    You still need to state that you are lunging in a 'Straight Line' at the target

    Name: Burning Cross
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Contact
    Speed: C
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi Exclusive, Kenjutsu, Katon
    Parent Technique: Three Sword Style
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Lion
    Description: A variation of the Oni giri tech, the user will do the same thing but in this variation, the enemy will be lit on fire. (Refer to Oni Giri) The opponent will be on fire for 5 rounds, taking D rank damage.
    Weaknesses: Suiton, Ninjutsu. If the opponent is hit with B rank water jutsu or higher, the opponent is no longer on fire.

    At this point, I am starting to feel as though you did not read All of my last modding which is why I am breaking each one up this time.

    This would be Ninjutsu not Kenjutsu as it is not effecting the sword but someone else away from the sword. It's applied through through a sword it isn't a ken tech its NINJUTSU

    Name: Split Fear
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: LoS (gen), Long range
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Gen, Three Sword Style, Hanabi Exclusive
    Parent Technique: Three Sword Style
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user puts their hand swords over their mouth blade and swings forth a forward descending slash with them while darting towards the opponent. When the user uses this attack, the aura of one’s fear is shown behind him, overwhelming then and putting weight on their chest from fear. This gives the opponent temporary paralysis, lasting only one post. Countdown for this Genjutsu is 3 posts, once they see the person place the swords over their mouth, the countdown will begin.
    Weaknesses: If the user loses sight for more than 5 seconds, the genjutsu will end. As long as the LoS remains, the genjutsu will remain in place unless the opponent has Genjutsu Kai. The user must remain still, not paralyzed, to make the genjutsu take full effect as well as keep a LoS of 25m to keep this Genjutsu Active. The user may adjust their body and move their hands but should not break the LoS or move in a general direction.

    LoS(gen) is not a range, even library genjutsu that are based on sight have a range please specify the range. Also putting paralysis only lasts for 1 post in the description and than saying it remains in place as long as line of sight is maintained in the weakness seems a little like you are saying a weakness of this is as long as you maintain LoS you can extend it past the 1 post, which is not a weakness.

    Name:Phoenix Twirl
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Long Range
    Speed: B
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Ken, Katon, TSS, Hanabi Exclusive
    Parent Technique: TSS, Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: Bird, Tiger
    Description: When using these hand signs before holding the swords, the user may use this technique to lunge at the target, twirling while creating an imitation of Phoenix wings as they twirl. To start this jutsu, the user must do the coordinating hand signs, grab their swords and place them over one of their shoulders (exception being the mouth sword). The user then will lunge at the opponent, twirling their body simultaneously, creating fire onto the swords through chakra flow, giving the user the ability to produce Phoenix wings. As the user comes in contact, they will make a diagonal cut onto the opponent while the wings wrap around them, doing C rank Fire damage. The user does not burn but instead has the lingering effect of heat all over their body.  
    Weaknesses:Suiton (A or higher)

    I will wait until TSS is approvable before I give the verdict on this as if you can't do hand seals using TSS this tech would clash with its own style.

    Name: Ember Wolves
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: B
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Hanabi Exclusive, Katon
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Dog>Tiger
    Description: They are loyal to the user and will obey every command. These wolves can inflict B type physical damage as well as D type fire damage causing a singe or a burn upon the opponent. If a wolf decreases to 0 HP, the wolf will howl and explode where it’s at. Each howl can be used to boost the other wolves with an advantage on speed (Cannot be stacked no more than 3, giving it a +1 tier). These boosts will last 2 posts with each boost falling off accordingly. Only 5 can be summoned at a time.

    Weaknesses: Suiton (S rank or higher to one tap the wolves)

    I said Raise the Rank OR Lower the Damage. Not raise the rank and the damage. A B rank tech cannot do B rank damage and D rank damage 5 times any more than a C rank tech can do C and D rank damage 5 times. so I will reiterate...MASSIVELY LOWER THE DAMAGE! also remove the boost to speed, you cannot increase the speed of your jutsu with the same jutsu.


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    Post by Nozomi Sat Jan 07, 2023 8:07 pm

    Name: Crimson Wolf Fang
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5 CP
    Upkeep Cost: 3 CP/Post
    Range: Melee
    Speed: --
    Element: --
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: 3 swords in inventory, B Rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: --
    Hand Seals: --
    Description: This is a unique stance. The user places a single sword in their mouth while dual wielding swords in their hands. This stance requires years of practice in this style as it can seem clunky and awkward to those just attempting to use it, requiring a certain amount of mental processing to coordinate all three weapons at once. However, once the user has mastered the art, they become masters of the stance and will become like a flurrying storm, timing their strikes with perfection and precision. A master of the stance is capable of performing three consecutive strikes with each of the weapons or they would be able to strike with each three, precisely, at the exact same time. Due to the mastery of this technique and the fluid and fast movements, the user will gain +1 Coordination to their Kenjutsu attacks while in this stance.
    Weaknesses: Due to both of the user's hands having weapons equipped in them, the user will be incapable of performing handseals while equipped with swords in both hands. Due to the user's mouth being occupied, they are incapable of intelligible speech and may not perform Ninjutsu requiring the user's mouth (such as Great Fireball).

    This is a stance, it doesn't require an Activation cost, only an upkeep. Stances are unique in that way.


    Name: Burning Wheel
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10 CP
    Upkeep Cost: --
    Range: Melee Range
    Speed: --
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: The user's weapon must be under the effect of Chakra Flow: Fire
    Parent Technique: Crimson Wolf Fang
    Hand Seals: --
    Description: While the user's weapon is bathed in fire from Chakra Flow, They quickly jump towards the target within Melee Range and completely turns their body horizontally and delivers a lightning fast spinning slash, striking the target with all three blades turning into a wheel of fire for a series of slashes amounting to nearly 33 slashes in total. The flames cauterize every slash wound instantly burning the newly exposed flesh. This deals B Rank Fire damage to the target. After performing the spinning wheel, the user quickly lands upon their feet and readies themselves for the next attack.
    Weaknesses: Due to the awkward body position, the user is quite vulnerable while performing the technique. They will be unable to react to any attacks during this time. General Chakra Flow: Fire weaknesses.
    Approved

    Name: Dance of the Crimson Wolf
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10 CP
    Upkeep Cost: 5 CP
    Range: 50 meters
    Speed: User's Coordination
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: --
    Parent Technique: --
    Hand Seals: Dog, Dragon, Bird, Horse, Rat, Ram
    Description: The user performs the pre-requisite handseals, the user places both hands (with the first two fingers pointed skywards) up to their mouth and the user breathes out a bath of flames. From the bath of flames, a burning wolf of crimson fire would run out of and run strike at it's target, typically aiming for the jugular. Once the attack hits, the Crimson wolf will deal C Power damage and light the target on fire. This will deal C Power Fire damage to the target, per post, for as long as they remain on fire.
    The user may, at time of casting, make the crimson wolf more agile. Doing so will reduce it's speed by -1 Tier of Coordination, but will allow the Wolf to continue hunting every round until it hits the target. The wolf will take 1 additional attempt every post to hit the target. The jutsu will be maintained as long as the wolf continues to chase.
    Weaknesses: If the target is covered in a water jutsu of A Rank or higher, the flames would be instantly extinguished. If the wolf, itself, is covered in an A Rank or higher water jutsu, it will be extinguished.
    Katon is weak to Suiton, so water jutsu of a lower rank should actually be able to extinguish, not a higher one.
    "The user may, at time of casting, make the crimson wolf more agile. Doing so will reduce it's speed by -1 Tier of Coordination," Speed isn't based on Coordination, it's based on Speed. Since this is going off of your coordination for it's speed, all you need to say is 'reduce its speed by 1 tier'.

    Name: The Wild Hunt
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10 CP
    Upkeep Cost: 5 CP/Post
    Range: 0-25 meters
    Speed: User's Speed
    Element: --
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: --
    Parent Technique: Crimson Wolf Fang
    Hand Seals: --
    Description: The user quickly dashes towards the target and just slightly passed them before performing a quick and low spin with their weapons, slicing at the target's legs to deal B Rank weapon damage, targeting the Achilles Tendon specifically. This will cause the target to lose -1 Tier of Speed for 5 posts.
    Weaknesses: The user will remain vulnerable for a short time after the attack due to having their back turned to the enemy. The user will remain vulnerable to attacks until the user begins to spin.
    Kenjutsu and physical styles are dependent on your strength stat/ weapon to determine damage. When it comes to simple maneuvers such as this, you don't need to specify the damage it does unless an element is enhancing the base damage you're doing.
    Reduce the speed loss to "3 posts, or until healed, whichever comes first".
    Also, this is a Maneuver, so it shouldn't have an upkeep, just an activation cost.

    ame: Omega Wolf
    Rank: B
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 10 CP
    Upkeep Cost: 5 CP/Post
    Range: 0-5m of the user
    Speed: -1 User's Coordination
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: --
    Parent Technique: Dance of the Crimson Wolf
    Hand Seals: Rabbit, Dog, Rat, Dog, Snake, Dog
    Description: This is an aura. Once the user performs the pre-requisite handseals, they summon a fiery manifestation of a wolf that appears to have the same level of Sharingan that the user possesses. This wolf will stand by the user's side for the entirety of it's duration. Once someone who the user deems as the enemy gets within 5 meters of the user, the Omega Wolf lashes out and attempts to strike the target. Upon a successful strike, the Omega Wolf will deal C Rank Power Fire damage to the target. The following round, if the target is still within 5 meters of the user, the wolf will go in for another attack. This will continue for all targets the user deems as an enemy.
    OOC Note: This is just an aura with a physical manifestation of the damage over time. This is not a summon as it cannot act on it's own other than attacking everything it deems an enemy within range.
    Weaknesses: This creation can be extinguished with an A Rank water technique. Long range attacks, outside of the Omega Wolf's range, will cause the target to easily avoid damage. The Wolf does not possess the Sharingan, that's only for aesthetic flare.
    Suiton is strong against Katon. A Suiton of 1 rank lower than the power of your jutsu cancels it out, and one of equal power overpowers it.


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    Post by Nozomi Sat Jan 07, 2023 10:35 pm

    Hanabi Inuzaka wrote:
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    Post by Nozomi Sat Jan 07, 2023 10:37 pm

    Name: The Wild Hunt
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10 CP
    Upkeep Cost: —
    Range: 0-25 meters
    Speed: User's Speed
    Element: --
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: --
    Parent Technique: Crimson Wolf Fang
    Hand Seals: --
    Description: The user quickly dashes towards the target and just slightly passed them before performing a quick and low spin with their weapons, slicing at the target's legs to deal B Rank weapon damage, targeting the Achilles Tendon specifically. This will cause the target to lose -1 Tier of Speed for 3 posts, or until healed, whichever comes first.
    Weaknesses: The user will remain vulnerable for a short time after the attack due to having their back turned to the enemy. The user will remain vulnerable to attacks until the user begins to spin.
    Unapproved, forgot to remove the mention about dealing B rank weapon damage. Pure kenjutsu damage is always dependent on the weapon you use and the strength behind those strikes.


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    Post by Airi Ohara Mon Jan 09, 2023 2:52 am

    Hanabi Inuzaka wrote:

    Name: The Wild Hunt
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10 CP
    Upkeep Cost: —
    Range: 0-25 meters
    Speed: User's Speed
    Element: --
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: --
    Parent Technique: Crimson Wolf Fang
    Hand Seals: --
    Description: The user quickly dashes towards the target and just slightly passed them before performing a quick and low spin with their weapons, slicing at the target's legs, targeting the Achilles Tendon specifically. This will cause the target to lose -1 Tier of Speed for 3 posts, or until healed, whichever comes first.
    Weaknesses: The user will remain vulnerable for a short time after the attack due to having their back turned to the enemy. The user will remain vulnerable to attacks until the user begins to spin.
    It was fixed so it is now
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    Post by Hanabi Uchiha Tue Jan 24, 2023 10:26 pm



    Name: Mōsō-Tekina (喪祖的な)
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Hanabi Exclusive
    Requirements: One Tomoe
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird, Tiger
    Description: This genjutsu creates random shadows in the corners of the enemies vision and creating a unpleasend feeling of getting attacked any second from an unknown direction. This allows the opponent to be at a disadvantage, constantly paranoid about the things around them. They will view everything around them, feeling as though somebody is always watching them. This causes their perception to take a decrease in one tier. This sets in when the opponent see’s the first hand sign. It will take 2 posts to set in and it deals a one time hit of B rank Psychological Damage.
    Weaknesses: This can be taken out with Genjutsu Kai, the opponent stepping out of the radius or the user being knocked out.




    Name: Bukimina Noizu(不気味なノイズ)
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 0-50m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Hanabi Exclusive
    Requirements: Bell
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: When the target hears the users Bell, the genjutsu will start to take place, taking 2 posts to set in. Once this genjutsu sets in, the opponent will begin hearing clicking around him, the position of the noise occasionally changing sides or even range. Sometimes can be heard from behind while other times being away. This will lower the opponents perception by 1 tier and deal b rank psychological damage (one time).
    Weaknesses: Genjutsu Kai, user being knocked out.


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    Post by Airi Ohara Sat Jan 28, 2023 6:24 pm

    Hanabi Inuzaka wrote:

    Name: Mōsō-Tekina (喪祖的な)
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Hanabi Exclusive
    Requirements: One Tomoe
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird, Tiger
    Description: This genjutsu creates random shadows in the corners of the enemies vision and creating a unpleasend feeling of getting attacked any second from an unknown direction. This allows the opponent to be at a disadvantage, constantly paranoid about the things around them. They will view everything around them, feeling as though somebody is always watching them. This causes their perception to take a decrease in one tier and one negative. It will take 2 posts to set in.
    Weaknesses: This can be taken out with Genjutsu Kai, the opponent stepping out of the radius or the user being knocked out.




    Name: Bukimina Noizu(不気味なノイズ)
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 0-50m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Hanabi Exclusive
    Requirements: Bell
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: When the target hears the users Bell, the genjutsu will start to take place, taking 2 posts to set in. Once this genjutsu sets in, the opponent will begin hearing clicking around him, the position of the noise occasionally changing sides or even range. Sometimes can be heard from behind while other times being away. This will lower the opponents perception by 1 tier and one negative.
    Weaknesses: Genjutsu Kai, user being knocked out.
    +Moso: Requires some kind of medium -- such as seeing the user's handseals, etc etc. Needs that. B Rank Genjutsu debuff is also just -1 Tier.
    +Bukimina: Same thing with the Genjutsu debuffing.


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    Post by Airi Ohara Sat Jan 28, 2023 7:22 pm

    Hanabi Inuzaka wrote:

    Name: Mōsō-Tekina (喪祖的な)
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Hanabi Exclusive
    Requirements: One Tomoe
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird, Tiger
    Description: This genjutsu creates random shadows in the corners of the enemies vision and creating a unpleasend feeling of getting attacked any second from an unknown direction. This allows the opponent to be at a disadvantage, constantly paranoid about the things around them. They will view everything around them, feeling as though somebody is always watching them. This causes their perception to take a decrease in one tier. This sets in when the opponent see’s the first hand sign. It will take 2 posts to set in.
    Weaknesses: This can be taken out with Genjutsu Kai, the opponent stepping out of the radius or the user being knocked out.




    Name: Bukimina Noizu(不気味なノイズ)
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 0-50m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Hanabi Exclusive
    Requirements: Bell
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: When the target hears the users Bell, the genjutsu will start to take place, taking 2 posts to set in. Once this genjutsu sets in, the opponent will begin hearing clicking around him, the position of the noise occasionally changing sides or even range. Sometimes can be heard from behind while other times being away. This will lower the opponents perception by 1 tier.
    Weaknesses: Genjutsu Kai, user being knocked out.
    Approved


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    Post by Airi Ohara Sun Jan 29, 2023 4:04 pm

    Hanabi Inuzaka wrote:

    Name: Mōsō-Tekina (喪祖的な)
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Hanabi Exclusive
    Requirements: One Tomoe
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird, Tiger
    Description: This genjutsu creates random shadows in the corners of the enemies vision and creating a unpleasend feeling of getting attacked any second from an unknown direction. This allows the opponent to be at a disadvantage, constantly paranoid about the things around them. They will view everything around them, feeling as though somebody is always watching them. This causes their perception to take a decrease in one tier. This sets in when the opponent see’s the first hand sign. It will take 2 posts to set in and it deals a one time hit of B rank Psychological Damage.
    Weaknesses: This can be taken out with Genjutsu Kai, the opponent stepping out of the radius or the user being knocked out.




    Name: Bukimina Noizu(不気味なノイズ)
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 0-50m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Hanabi Exclusive
    Requirements: Bell
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: When the target hears the users Bell, the genjutsu will start to take place, taking 2 posts to set in. Once this genjutsu sets in, the opponent will begin hearing clicking around him, the position of the noise occasionally changing sides or even range. Sometimes can be heard from behind while other times being away. This will lower the opponents perception by 1 tier and deal b rank psychological damage (one time).
    Weaknesses: Genjutsu Kai, user being knocked out.
    Psychological damage added.
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    Post by Hanabi Uchiha Thu Feb 02, 2023 5:21 pm


    Name: Endwalker
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-90m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Ram, Hare, Rat
    Description: The opponent(s) are taken to a separate place, an empty room with only a door. The targets will open the door and see a hallway that turns to the right and continue on, seeing a few doors on both sides of the walls and a door at the end of the hall way. The first round would be normal but as they were to enter through the door at the end of the hall way, they would see the same sight only this time, duller and a bit darker, like the lights had started to fade. The more times they go through, the more intense and deranged the loop gets, enough to start seeing doors shut, eyes looking through the picture frames on the walls and someone’s breath showing on the windows. This takes 2 posts to set in and each round is one post. This genjutsu lasts for 4 posts and with the fourth post, the target will see a deranged person, almost twitching and shaking. Once the target gets close enough, it will come at them at B speed. This will deal B rank Psychological damage. (The most deranged is the 4th post))
    Weaknesses: User getting knocked out, Genjutsu Kai


    Name: White Noise
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird, Snake, Ox
    Description: When the user performs the requisite hand seals, the afflicted opponents will feel a sudden pulse throughout their body, unaware of what just happened. After the pulse, it’ll take 2 posts to set this genjutsu in. Once the genjutsu takes place, the opponents body will start to feel numb going from feet to head, almost like their body has fallen asleep. They will find themselves unable to walk properly, as if they had sat down for a long time and feeling has been regained within their legs. They will feel needles on the bottom of their feet, making it hard to walk as well as move in general. This will last 2 posts and reduce their speed by one tier.
    Weaknesses: User getting knocked out, Genjutsu Kai


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    Post by Nozomi Thu Feb 02, 2023 9:45 pm

    Hanabi Inuzaka wrote:
    Name: Endwalker
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-90m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Ram, Hare, Rat
    Description: The opponent(s) are taken to a separate place, an empty room with only a door. The targets will open the door and see a hallway that turns to the right and continue on, seeing a few doors on both sides of the walls and a door at the end of the hall way. The first round would be normal but as they were to enter through the door at the end of the hall way, they would see the same sight only this time, duller and a bit darker, like the lights had started to fade. The more times they go through, the more intense and deranged the loop gets, enough to start seeing doors shut, eyes looking through the picture frames on the walls and someone’s breath showing on the windows. This takes 2 posts to set in and each round is one post. This genjutsu lasts for 4 posts and with the fourth post, the target will see a deranged person, almost twitching and shaking. Once the target gets close enough, it will come at them at B speed. This will deal B rank Psychological damage. (The most deranged is the 4th post))
    Weaknesses: User getting knocked out, Genjutsu Kai


    Name: White Noise
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: B
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird, Snake, Ox
    Description: When the user performs the requisite hand seals, the afflicted opponents will feel a sudden pulse throughout their body, unaware of what just happened. After the pulse, it’ll take 2 posts to set this genjutsu in. Once the genjutsu takes place, the opponents body will start to feel numb going from feet to head, almost like their body has fallen asleep. They will find themselves unable to walk properly, as if they had sat down for a long time and feeling has been regained within their legs. They will feel needles on the bottom of their feet, making it hard to walk as well as move in general. This will last 2 posts and reduce their speed by one tier.
    Weaknesses: User getting knocked out, Genjutsu Kai
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    Post by Hanabi Uchiha Thu Mar 09, 2023 7:01 am

    Secret Technique:

    Beauty In Disguise:

    Blade Pulse:


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    Post by Airi Ohara Sat Mar 11, 2023 10:55 pm

    Hanabi Uchiha wrote:
    Secret Technique:

    Beauty In Disguise:

    Blade Pulse:
    :: The Genjutsu. Please readjust the weaknesses
    ::Blade Pulse- damage is determined by the weapon(s) used. Please remove that line. What I can allow is that that you can gain +1 tier of strength bonus, for the jutsu, if the target is under the effect of Beauty In Disguise.


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    Post by Airi Ohara Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:10 pm

    Hanabi Uchiha wrote:
    Secret Technique:

    Beauty In Disguise:

    Blade Pulse:
    Hanabi’s Custom Techniques 5CUsWMA


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    Post by Hanabi Uchiha Sun Mar 12, 2023 1:17 pm


    Name: Domain Expansion: Graveyard
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 125m around user
    Speed: S
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Genjutsu
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bell Ring
    Description: When an opponent hears Hanabi’s bell, the countdown for this Genjutsu will start (3 posts). Once the count down is done, Hanabi can activate this Genjutsu whenever by saying the command word “End”. Once she says the word, the world around them will quickly warp into a graveyard, causing any outside people to not see what Hanabi and the afflicted opponents will see. The power in itself isn’t so much damaging, however it is the hardness of this jutsu. Within this realm, Hanabi is able to manipulate how she attacks and even manipulate the amount of pain the opponent feels in this Genjutsu. (To clarify, they will FEEL pain mentally but it will not be afflicted physically.)

    She will be able to:

    1. Take away one’s nose
    2. Take away one’s ears
    3. Take away one’s mouth
    4. Take away one’s eyes

    This will leave them completely vulnerable, unable to use these senses, causing a gradual increase of D rank Psych damage over time, increasing damage by one rank with each post maintained, equaling out to A rank total psych damage. While within this domain expansion, they lose -1 tier and 2 negatives to Perception. Because of this type of Genjutsu, it will end when one realizes they’re in one. If they cannot differ from reality to Genjutsu, Hanabi has the ability to end it herself by saying the command word “Release”. This Genjutsu is considered a perception based Genjutsu.
    Weaknesses: Genjutsu Kai (if possible), User gets knocked out.

    Name: Blade Warp
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: Users Speed
    Element:
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu
    Parent Technique: Blade Pulse (Combo)
    Hand Seals:
    Description: Hanabi is able to use this Technique in relation to Blade Pulse and can only be used with Blade Pulse for its full power. Using it without blade pulse is an automatic 1 rank debuff (A rank). From any point (in air, on ground), Hanabi is able to let off a series of slashes, which does not affect the opponent until Hanabi has landed, making the Opponent have a misconception that they have yet to be hit. Once Hanabi lands, the target will be affected by weapon damage. Successful combo will result in the target being affected by -1 Tier to their Constitution while this jutsu is maintained and will give 2 advantages to Hanabi’s Speed.  the user may bounce around from target to target within the 100m range.
    Weaknesses: Cannot be used to the fullest without Blade Pulse, Higher Perception and Coord to successfully block/dodge this attack. People who are aimed next can have a chance reaction to dodge out of the way. Without Blade Pulse, the attack will be -1 rank lower than weapon damage and only cause 2 negatives to the targets con.


    Name: Special Technique: Golden Flower
    Rank: B/A/S
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: B/A/S
    Upkeep Cost: one rank lower than activation cost
    Range: 100m
    Speed: S
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A golden flower of any kind on Hanabi
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: After Hanabi forms the bird sign, the target is required to lay eyes upon the Golden Flower upon Hanabi. This jutsu has a 2 Post Countdown. At the end of the countdown, the target(s) will begin seeing golden flower petals floating down to the ground. The opponent will begin feeling drowsy with Hanabi sitting on the ground in front of them. They will feel compelled, in this illusion, to lay their head upon Hanabi's lap as her hands caress their face and begin to sing them a melody. As the melody continues to play in the targets' head, they will feel themselves sinking below the ground as they grow further and further into sleep. Upon the second post, they will fall into a deep sleep that will last for 3 posts.

    Weakness: Due to the way this Genjutsu is set up, anyone outside of the jutsu's radius will be affected. One could bring a sleeping target outside of the range to instantly wake them up. The pain of an attack that is 1 Rank higher than the target's Constitution may awaken the target prematurely. (Does not include targets with S Rank Constitution -- those who cannot feel pain).


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    Post by Airi Ohara Sun Mar 12, 2023 3:00 pm

    Hanabi Uchiha wrote:
    Name: Domain Expansion: Graveyard
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 125m around user
    Speed: Instant
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Genjutsu
    Parent Technique: Genjutsu: Sharingan
    Hand Seals: Command Word “End” to activate the Genjutsu.
    Description: When an opponent looks into Hanabi’s eyes, the countdown for this Genjutsu will start (3 posts). Once the count down is done, Hanabi can activate this Genjutsu whenever by saying the command word “End”. Once she says the word, the world around them will quickly warp into a graveyard, causing any outside people to not see what Hanabi and the afflicted opponents will see. The power in itself isn’t so much damaging, however it is the hardness of this jutsu. Within this realm, Hanabi is able to manipulate how she attacks and even manipulate the amount of pain the opponent feels in this Genjutsu. (To clarify, they will FEEL pain mentally but it will not be afflicted.)

    She will be able to:

    1. Take away one’s nose
    2. Take away one’s ears
    3. Take away one’s mouth
    4. Take away one’s eyes

    This will leave them completely vulnerable, unable to use these senses, causing a gradual increase of D rank Psych damage over time, increasing damage by one rank with each post maintained, equaling out to A rank total psych damage. While within this domain expansion, they lose -1 tier and 2 negatives to Perception. Because of this type of Genjutsu, it will end when one realizes they’re in one. If they cannot differ from reality to Genjutsu, Hanabi has the ability to end it herself by saying the command word “Release”.
    Weaknesses: Genjutsu Kai (if possible), Higher Sharingan than Hanabi, User gets knocked out.

    Name: Blade Warp
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20 (optional)
    Range: 100m
    Speed: Users Speed
    Element: Any (optional)
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu
    Parent Technique: Blade Pulse (Combo)
    Hand Seals:
    Description: Hanabi is able to use this Technique in relation to Blade Pulse and can only be used with Blade Pulse for its full power. Using it without blade pulse is an automatic 1 rank debuff (A rank). From any point (in air, on ground), Hanabi is able to let off a series of slashes, which does not affect the opponent until Hanabi has landed, making the Opponent have a misconception that they have yet to be hit. Once Hanabi lands on the ground, the attack will hit and cause S rank damage if done successfully with Blade Pulse. Without Blade Pulse, it will do A rank damage. Successful combo will result in a -1 tier to constitution until the end of thread or otherwise stated and 2 advantages to Hanabi’s Speed. Without Blade Pulse, this will only cause 2 negatives to the opponents Con. This attack can also be bounced to another opponent with an upkeep cost of 20.
    Weaknesses: Cannot be used to the fullest without Blade Pulse, Higher Perception and Coord to successfully block/dodge this attack. People who are aimed next can have a chance reaction to dodge out of the way.
    :: Graveyard - State somewhere that this is a Perception based Genjutsu.
    :: Blade Warp -
    1) Change Range to 0-100m. This'll give you room to stop any time within that 100m, otherwise you'll be moving the entire distance
    2) Remove what's in Element. This can be used regardless of chakra flow.
    3) "Once Hanabi lands, the target will be affected by weapon damage"
    4) Without Blade Pulse, the weapon damage is treated as -1 Rank lower.
    5) Change "Successful combo will result in a -1 tier to constitution until the end of thread" to "Successful combo will result in the target being affected by -1 Tier to their Constitution while this jutsu is maintained.
    6) Change "This attack can also be bounced to another opponent with an upkeep cost of 20." to "the user may bounce around from target to target within the 100m range"
    7) Everything that specifically states "without Blade Pulse" should be in the weakness of this jutsu.


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    Post by Airi Ohara Wed Mar 15, 2023 2:00 am

    Hanabi Uchiha wrote:
    Name: Domain Expansion: Graveyard
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 125m around user
    Speed: Instant
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Genjutsu
    Parent Technique: Genjutsu: Sharingan
    Hand Seals: Command Word “End” to activate the Genjutsu.
    Description: When an opponent looks into Hanabi’s eyes, the countdown for this Genjutsu will start (3 posts). Once the count down is done, Hanabi can activate this Genjutsu whenever by saying the command word “End”. Once she says the word, the world around them will quickly warp into a graveyard, causing any outside people to not see what Hanabi and the afflicted opponents will see. The power in itself isn’t so much damaging, however it is the hardness of this jutsu. Within this realm, Hanabi is able to manipulate how she attacks and even manipulate the amount of pain the opponent feels in this Genjutsu. (To clarify, they will FEEL pain mentally but it will not be afflicted.)

    She will be able to:

    1. Take away one’s nose
    2. Take away one’s ears
    3. Take away one’s mouth
    4. Take away one’s eyes

    This will leave them completely vulnerable, unable to use these senses, causing a gradual increase of D rank Psych damage over time, increasing damage by one rank with each post maintained, equaling out to A rank total psych damage. While within this domain expansion, they lose -1 tier and 2 negatives to Perception. Because of this type of Genjutsu, it will end when one realizes they’re in one. If they cannot differ from reality to Genjutsu, Hanabi has the ability to end it herself by saying the command word “Release”. This Genjutsu is considered a perception based Genjutsu.
    Weaknesses: Genjutsu Kai (if possible), Higher Sharingan than Hanabi, User gets knocked out.

    Name: Blade Warp
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: Users Speed
    Element:
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu
    Parent Technique: Blade Pulse (Combo)
    Hand Seals:
    Description: Hanabi is able to use this Technique in relation to Blade Pulse and can only be used with Blade Pulse for its full power. Using it without blade pulse is an automatic 1 rank debuff (A rank). From any point (in air, on ground), Hanabi is able to let off a series of slashes, which does not affect the opponent until Hanabi has landed, making the Opponent have a misconception that they have yet to be hit. Once Hanabi lands, the target will be affected by weapon damage. Successful combo will result in the target being affected by -1 Tier to their Constitution while this jutsu is maintained and will give 2 advantages to Hanabi’s Speed.  the user may bounce around from target to target within the 100m range.
    Weaknesses: Cannot be used to the fullest without Blade Pulse, Higher Perception and Coord to successfully block/dodge this attack. People who are aimed next can have a chance reaction to dodge out of the way. Without Blade Pulse, the attack will be -1 rank lower than weapon damage and only cause 2 negatives to the targets con.
    :: Graveyard: Need a speed
    :: Blade Warp: Since this is now maintaining, need a maintain cost.


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    Post by Airi Ohara Wed Mar 22, 2023 7:56 pm

    Hanabi Uchiha wrote:
    Name: Domain Expansion: Graveyard
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 125m around user
    Speed: S
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Genjutsu
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bell Ring
    Description: When an opponent hears Hanabi’s bell, the countdown for this Genjutsu will start (3 posts). Once the count down is done, Hanabi can activate this Genjutsu whenever by saying the command word “End”. Once she says the word, the world around them will quickly warp into a graveyard, causing any outside people to not see what Hanabi and the afflicted opponents will see. The power in itself isn’t so much damaging, however it is the hardness of this jutsu. Within this realm, Hanabi is able to manipulate how she attacks and even manipulate the amount of pain the opponent feels in this Genjutsu. (To clarify, they will FEEL pain mentally but it will not be afflicted physically.)

    She will be able to:

    1. Take away one’s nose
    2. Take away one’s ears
    3. Take away one’s mouth
    4. Take away one’s eyes

    This will leave them completely vulnerable, unable to use these senses, causing a gradual increase of D rank Psych damage over time, increasing damage by one rank with each post maintained, equaling out to A rank total psych damage. While within this domain expansion, they lose -1 tier and 2 negatives to Perception. Because of this type of Genjutsu, it will end when one realizes they’re in one. If they cannot differ from reality to Genjutsu, Hanabi has the ability to end it herself by saying the command word “Release”. This Genjutsu is considered a perception based Genjutsu.
    Weaknesses: Genjutsu Kai (if possible), User gets knocked out.

    Name: Blade Warp
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: Users Speed
    Element:
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu
    Parent Technique: Blade Pulse (Combo)
    Hand Seals:
    Description: Hanabi is able to use this Technique in relation to Blade Pulse and can only be used with Blade Pulse for its full power. Using it without blade pulse is an automatic 1 rank debuff (A rank). From any point (in air, on ground), Hanabi is able to let off a series of slashes, which does not affect the opponent until Hanabi has landed, making the Opponent have a misconception that they have yet to be hit. Once Hanabi lands, the target will be affected by weapon damage. Successful combo will result in the target being affected by -1 Tier to their Constitution while this jutsu is maintained and will give 2 advantages to Hanabi’s Speed.  the user may bounce around from target to target within the 100m range.
    Weaknesses: Cannot be used to the fullest without Blade Pulse, Higher Perception and Coord to successfully block/dodge this attack. People who are aimed next can have a chance reaction to dodge out of the way. Without Blade Pulse, the attack will be -1 rank lower than weapon damage and only cause 2 negatives to the targets con.


    Name: Special Technique: Golden Flower
    Rank: B/A/S
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: B/A/S
    Upkeep Cost: one rank lower than activation cost
    Range: 100m
    Speed: S
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A golden flower of any kind on Hanabi
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: After Hanabi makes the bird sign and  the user lays eyes on a golden flower on Hanabi, the countdown will begin on this Genjutsu. This countdown goes for 2 posts and lasts 3. When this is activated, the opponent will see golden flower petals that look real but when they brush against the opponent, they will get cut with E rank damage. These are minor cuts, acting as a paper cut. The opponent will slowly find themselves falling into Hanabi’s lap, her hands caressing their face while she sings a melody. As the melody continues for these three posts, the opponent finds themselves falling asleep, unable to fight it this lullaby that lulls them to sleep. The opponent will feel themselves sinking below the floor, feeling trapped and unable to move. Upon the 3rd post, this will cause the given ranks psychological damage, mentally hurting them. If the Genjutsu is successful, the opponent will be asleep for 3 posts. In order to wake up the opponent, they must inflict pain that’s at least C rank damage. This Genjutsu is a perception based Genjutsu.
    Weaknesses: Genjutsu Kai, The user is knocked out. Due to the way this Genjutsu is set up, if anyone outside of the radius is available, all afflicted opponents can get them out by bringing them outside of the radius or forcing them awake.

    Graveyard: Approved
    Blade Warp: Approved
    Golden Flower: This is worded a bit strangely. My suggestion:
    After Hanabi forms the bird sign, the target is required to lay eyes upon the Golden Flower upon Hanabi. This jutsu has a 2 Post Countdown. At the end of the countdown, the target(s) will begin seeing golden flower petals floating down to the ground. The opponent will begin feeling drowsy with Hanabi sitting on the ground in front of them. They will feel compelled, in this illusion, to lay their head upon Hanabi's lap as her hands caress their face and begin to sing them a melody. As the melody continues to play in the targets' head, they will feel themselves sinking below the ground as they grow further and further into sleep. Upon the second post, they will fall into a deep sleep that will last for 3 posts.

    Weakness: Due to the way this Genjutsu is set up, anyone outside of the jutsu's radius will be affected. One could bring a sleeping target outside of the range to instantly wake them up. The pain of an attack that is 1 Rank higher than the target's Constitution may awaken the target prematurely. (Does not include targets with S Rank Constitution -- those who cannot feel pain).


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    Post by Airi Ohara Wed Mar 22, 2023 9:05 pm

    Hanabi Uchiha wrote:
    Name: Domain Expansion: Graveyard
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 125m around user
    Speed: S
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Genjutsu
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bell Ring
    Description: When an opponent hears Hanabi’s bell, the countdown for this Genjutsu will start (3 posts). Once the count down is done, Hanabi can activate this Genjutsu whenever by saying the command word “End”. Once she says the word, the world around them will quickly warp into a graveyard, causing any outside people to not see what Hanabi and the afflicted opponents will see. The power in itself isn’t so much damaging, however it is the hardness of this jutsu. Within this realm, Hanabi is able to manipulate how she attacks and even manipulate the amount of pain the opponent feels in this Genjutsu. (To clarify, they will FEEL pain mentally but it will not be afflicted physically.)

    She will be able to:

    1. Take away one’s nose
    2. Take away one’s ears
    3. Take away one’s mouth
    4. Take away one’s eyes

    This will leave them completely vulnerable, unable to use these senses, causing a gradual increase of D rank Psych damage over time, increasing damage by one rank with each post maintained, equaling out to A rank total psych damage. While within this domain expansion, they lose -1 tier and 2 negatives to Perception. Because of this type of Genjutsu, it will end when one realizes they’re in one. If they cannot differ from reality to Genjutsu, Hanabi has the ability to end it herself by saying the command word “Release”. This Genjutsu is considered a perception based Genjutsu.
    Weaknesses: Genjutsu Kai (if possible), User gets knocked out.

    Name: Blade Warp
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: Users Speed
    Element:
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu
    Parent Technique: Blade Pulse (Combo)
    Hand Seals:
    Description: Hanabi is able to use this Technique in relation to Blade Pulse and can only be used with Blade Pulse for its full power. Using it without blade pulse is an automatic 1 rank debuff (A rank). From any point (in air, on ground), Hanabi is able to let off a series of slashes, which does not affect the opponent until Hanabi has landed, making the Opponent have a misconception that they have yet to be hit. Once Hanabi lands, the target will be affected by weapon damage. Successful combo will result in the target being affected by -1 Tier to their Constitution while this jutsu is maintained and will give 2 advantages to Hanabi’s Speed.  the user may bounce around from target to target within the 100m range.
    Weaknesses: Cannot be used to the fullest without Blade Pulse, Higher Perception and Coord to successfully block/dodge this attack. People who are aimed next can have a chance reaction to dodge out of the way. Without Blade Pulse, the attack will be -1 rank lower than weapon damage and only cause 2 negatives to the targets con.


    Name: Special Technique: Golden Flower
    Rank: B/A/S
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: B/A/S
    Upkeep Cost: one rank lower than activation cost
    Range: 100m
    Speed: S
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A golden flower of any kind on Hanabi
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: After Hanabi forms the bird sign, the target is required to lay eyes upon the Golden Flower upon Hanabi. This jutsu has a 2 Post Countdown. At the end of the countdown, the target(s) will begin seeing golden flower petals floating down to the ground. The opponent will begin feeling drowsy with Hanabi sitting on the ground in front of them. They will feel compelled, in this illusion, to lay their head upon Hanabi's lap as her hands caress their face and begin to sing them a melody. As the melody continues to play in the targets' head, they will feel themselves sinking below the ground as they grow further and further into sleep. Upon the second post, they will fall into a deep sleep that will last for 3 posts.

    Weakness: Due to the way this Genjutsu is set up, anyone outside of the jutsu's radius will be affected. One could bring a sleeping target outside of the range to instantly wake them up. The pain of an attack that is 1 Rank higher than the target's Constitution may awaken the target prematurely. (Does not include targets with S Rank Constitution -- those who cannot feel pain).
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    Airi Ohara wrote:
    Secret Technique:

    Jutsu pulled. Needs a duration for the Stamina debuff (or seriously, just roll it in with the genjutsu) duration. Can set it to 3 post duration if you do. Also remove the S Rank psych damage.


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