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    The Silent

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    Post by Irui Mikiri Fri Jul 24, 2020 6:11 pm

    Scream into the Void, and the Void will scream back.

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    The Silent Empty Re: The Silent

    Post by Nyguyen Uchiha Thu Jul 30, 2020 5:47 pm

    Irui wrote:
    Scream into the Void, and the Void will scream back.

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    Post by Irui Mikiri Sat Aug 22, 2020 9:05 am


    Summon Name: Genshi, the Terror Unborn
    Rank: E
    Appearance:

    Yog-Sothoth, by Giacomo Tappainer:

    Genshi, the Terror Unborn, is a mass of thick, viscous fluid, that appears to shift from oily to tar like in consistency. Approximately a gallon of Genshi can be called to the field, although greater quantities could be  produced if required. Genshi is the beginning of The Silent's horrifying lifecycle. Direct observation of Genshi will reveal black mouths, tentacles, orifices, and proto-claws manifesting and vanishing at random across its surface as it bubbles. The longer Genshi gestates, the more diverse and strange its features seem to become. Dr. [REDACTED] notes their assistants described bioluminescence, flickerings, and pulsations over time.

    Genshi's liquid state can be used to great, but subtle effect to contaminate areas, assassinate targets, or create a diversion.

    Dr. [REDACTED] described Genshi's makeup as an "extremely volatile organic compound". Released from the Mikiri's Kama, Genshi can be procured in amounts as small as a drop, to a gallon at a time. Normally. Genshi uniquely possesses the "Gestation" ability, which allows it to consume chakra and cannibalize cellular tissue, and chemical energy, before mutating into one of The Silent's lineages.  Irui has learned to incorporate Genshi into a multitude of forms, from clones, to using it as a subtle weapon.

    Element: None

    Skill(s): None

    Unique Ability:

    Gestation: Activate "Gestation" when Genshi appears on the field in any quantity the caster desires. When "Gestation" is active, Genshi will absorb 5 CP its Host (either Caster or Opponent) each turn. Each turn increase Genshi's rank by +1, it cannot attack until it reaches Rank C or higher  (its stats do not change). When Genshi reaches Rank C or higher, Genshi can Gestate into a registered/trained member of this contract (Of equivalent rank or lower).

    In other words, use Gestation to charge a summoning, and pay for its cost, then turn Genshi into that summoning when the required turns have been met. Only one summoning can be Gestated from a Genshi at a time.

    As a cost, Genshi's stats, techniques, element, and skills cannot be claimed at registration.

    Abomination: Genshi is a unique lifeform, never seen before on Earth. Genshi cannot be destroyed unless attacked directly until reaching Rank C.  Likewise, Genshi cannot attack until Rank C. All players besides the Caster, or those who have seen Genshi before, will assume Genshi is a Material or Chemical.

    Stats:
    Strength: E
    Constitution: E
    Stamina: E
    Speed: E
    Coordination: E
    Intelligence: E
    Perception: E

    Techniques Known: N/A


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    Post by Irui Mikiri Sat Aug 22, 2020 2:13 pm

    Summon Name: Tholziek, Conduit of the Void
    Rank: S

    Appearance:


    Tholziek, the so-called Conduit of The Void, is a great and terrifying sight to behold. Much of its body is contained within a large triangular crown of ivory, from which massive black tentacles flow from its center. Bisecting the carapace of its crown is a trench, speckled with shimmering red sphjeres. These bioluminescent organs could be construed for eyes, burning with their own internal light, ring the edge of its crown. Buttressing its body are a series of globular organs, separated by a flowing skirt-like mantle. Tholziek's tentacles or filaments are another oddity, bisecting and branching in irregular patterns like veins or roots, with faintly luminescent tips. Despite its jellyfish like appearance, Tholziek towers over the land and water on its anti-gravity organs, allowing itself to slowly crawl over the landscape.

    Tholziek's hunger for resources cannot be quenched, evidenced by its constant consumption of water from the atmosphere and land. From the top of its mantle, collected water is vented as a form of vapor; stripping the environment of precious resources and discarding them. Tholziek's powers have manifested as Water Release, allowing it to shift the tide of battle by controlling a highly valuable resource in an unorthodox manner: desiccation.

    Element: Water
    Skill(s): Medical [Default: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu]
    Stats: 20 Raises

    Unique Abilities:

    Horror: Tholziek is an otherworldly entity, that defies the natural order. Inflict Horror to all opponents as an Intelligence de-buff of -2. Neither Tholziek or it's opponent's may attack this turn. [10 CP]

    Proportionate  Tholziek's attacks are proportional to its body size, and receive a +250m range and a +1 in Power. As a result, Tholziek suffers from gigantism, being a colossal entity comes with being an easy target. All opponents acquire a +1 Perception boost  (capped at B) for the explicit purpose of tracking. This does not increase awareness for Genjutsu.

    Stats: (20 Raises)
    Strength: B [3]
    Constitution:  A [4]
    Stamina: B [3]
    Speed: D [1]
    Coordination: B [3]
    Intelligence: B [3]
    Perception: B [3]


    Techniques:


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    The Silent Empty Re: The Silent

    Post by Irui Mikiri Fri Aug 28, 2020 5:04 pm

    Bump. Filler words and things.


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    The Silent Empty Re: The Silent

    Post by Sayuri Sat Aug 29, 2020 7:48 pm

    Irui wrote:

    Summon Name: Genshi, the Terror Unborn
    Rank: E
    Appearance:

    Yog-Sothoth, by Giacomo Tappainer:

    Genshi, the Terror Unborn, is a mass of thick, viscous fluid, that appears to shift from oily to tar like in consistency. Approximately a gallon of Genshi can be called to the field, although greater quantities could be produced if required. Genshi is the beginning of The Silent's horrifying lifecycle. Direct observation of Genshi will reveal black mouths, tentacles, orifices, and proto-claws manifesting and vanishing at random across its surface as it bubbles. The longer Genshi gestates, the more diverse and strange its features seem to become. Dr. [REDACTED] notes their assistants described bioluminescence, flickerings, and pulsations over time.

    Genshi's liquid state can be used to great, but subtle effect to contaminate areas, assassinate targets, or create a diversion.

    Dr. [REDACTED] described Genshi's makeup as an "extremely volatile organic compound". Released from the Mikiri's Kama, Genshi can be procured in amounts as small as a drop, to a gallon at a time. Normally. Genshi uniquely possesses the "Gestation" ability, which allows it to consume chakra and cannibalize cellular tissue, and chemical energy, before mutating into one of The Silent's lineages. Irui has learned to incorporate Genshi into a multitude of forms, from clones, to using it as a subtle weapon.

    Element: None

    Skill(s): None

    Unique Ability:

    Gestation: Activate "Gestation" when Genshi appears on the field in any quantity the caster desires. When "Gestation" is active, Genshi will absorb 5 CP its Host (either Caster or Opponent) each turn. Each turn increase Genshi's rank by +1, it cannot attack until it reaches Rank C or higher (its stats do not change). When Genshi reaches Rank C or higher, Genshi can Gestate into a registered/trained member of this contract (Of equivalent rank or lower).

    In other words, use Gestation to charge a summoning, and pay for its cost, then turn Genshi into that summoning when the required turns have been met. Only one summoning can be Gestated from a Genshi at a time.

    As a cost, Genshi's stats, techniques, element, and skills cannot be claimed at registration.

    Abomination: Genshi is a unique lifeform, never seen before on Earth. Genshi cannot be destroyed unless attacked directly until reaching Rank C. Likewise, Genshi cannot attack until Rank C. All players besides the Caster, or those who have seen Genshi before, will assume Genshi is a Material or Chemical.

    Stats:
    Strength: E
    Constitution: E
    Stamina: E
    Speed: E
    Coordination: E
    Intelligence: E
    Perception: E

    Techniques Known: N/A
    Genshi, the Terror Unborn
    *The UA’s for all summons on this contract must be contract wide, rather than individual UA’s for each summon. The listed UA - Gestation - could be restyled as a jutsu, however it should not be unique to the summon if it does not fall under the contract.
    *Absorbing CP should come from the caster, not any opponents. Without this limitation it would enable summoning higher ranked summons at virtually no cost to the caster.
    *It does not explicitly state that Genshi ever stops absorbing chakra, the implication being that it does not. This should be clarified.
    *The line; "All players besides the Caster, or those who have seen Genshi before, will assume Genshi is a Material or Chemical." feels a bit god-moddy. This could use a bit of rewording.
    *”Approximately a gallon of Genshi can be called to the field, although greater quantities could be produced if required.” How much can be summoned? Is there a maximum and if so what is it? What are the requirements to summon more than a gallon?

    Irui wrote:
    Summon Name: Tholziek, Conduit of the Void
    Rank: S

    Appearance:


    Tholziek, the so-called Conduit of The Void, is a great and terrifying sight to behold. Much of its body is contained within a large triangular crown of ivory, from which massive black tentacles flow from its center. Bisecting the carapace of its crown is a trench, speckled with shimmering red sphjeres. These bioluminescent organs could be construed for eyes, burning with their own internal light, ring the edge of its crown. Buttressing its body are a series of globular organs, separated by a flowing skirt-like mantle. Tholziek's tentacles or filaments are another oddity, bisecting and branching in irregular patterns like veins or roots, with faintly luminescent tips. Despite its jellyfish like appearance, Tholziek towers over the land and water on its anti-gravity organs, allowing itself to slowly crawl over the landscape.

    Tholziek's hunger for resources cannot be quenched, evidenced by its constant consumption of water from the atmosphere and land. From the top of its mantle, collected water is vented as a form of vapor; stripping the environment of precious resources and discarding them. Tholziek's powers have manifested as Water Release, allowing it to shift the tide of battle by controlling a highly valuable resource in an unorthodox manner: desiccation.

    Element: Water
    Skill(s): Medical [Default: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu]
    Stats: 20 Raises

    Unique Abilities:

    Horror: Tholziek is an otherworldly entity, that defies the natural order. Inflict Horror to all opponents as an Intelligence de-buff of -2. Neither Tholziek or it's opponent's may attack this turn. [10 CP]

    Proportionate Tholziek's attacks are proportional to its body size, and receive a +250m range and a +1 in Power. As a result, Tholziek suffers from gigantism, being a colossal entity comes with being an easy target. All opponents acquire a +1 Perception boost (capped at B) for the explicit purpose of tracking. This does not increase awareness for Genjutsu.

    Stats: (20 Raises)
    Strength: B [3]
    Constitution: A [4]
    Stamina: B [3]
    Speed: D [1]
    Coordination: B [3]
    Intelligence: B [3]
    Perception: B [3]


    Techniques:

    Tholziek, Conduit of the Void
    *As with the other one, the UA’s for all summons under this contract must be contract wide and not unique on top of the summons allotted jutsu.
    *Proportionate: While having Tholziek’s attacks increase in range seems fine, essentially making it an X-Rank summon does not. All opponents within the range of his attacks should receive +1 tier to Perception (with no cap) for the purposes of tracking it. This will also need to be restyled as it cannot be a UA specific to this summon and not others.
    *Horror: See above regarding UA’s that don’t fall under the contract. This will also need clarification as to the length of time that the effect may last. How long does the debuff stay? At what point are Tholziek and it’s opponents able to resume attacking? Or are they?
    *Water Style: Desiccation of The Promised Land - The amount of water that can be consumed and then subsequently stored needs clarification. I would like to see a hard number put on the amount of filaments, and therefore opponents that can be damaged by them, that Tholziek has access to for this jutsu. Since this has an upkeep cost, I assume the intention is to do this over multiple posts - if so when does the 3 turn immunity begin and/or end?
    *Water Style: Arrival of The Drowned Mountains: "Drowned Mountains" Power has a base of S, if Tholziek can pay the upkeep cost of "Promised Land" for an additional 3 turns (100+ CP), change its Power to X.” ← this part must be removed.


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    The Silent Empty Re: The Silent

    Post by Irui Mikiri Sun Aug 30, 2020 3:26 pm

    [spoiler]
    Sayuri wrote:
    Irui wrote:

    Summon Name: Genshi, the Terror Unborn
    Rank: E
    Appearance:

    Yog-Sothoth, by Giacomo Tappainer:

    Genshi, the Terror Unborn, is a mass of thick, viscous fluid, that appears to shift from oily to tar like in consistency. Approximately a gallon of Genshi can be called to the field, although greater quantities could be  produced if required. Genshi is the beginning of The Silent's horrifying lifecycle. Direct observation of Genshi will reveal black mouths, tentacles, orifices, and proto-claws manifesting and vanishing at random across its surface as it bubbles. The longer Genshi gestates, the more diverse and strange its features seem to become. Dr. [REDACTED] notes their assistants described bioluminescence, flickerings, and pulsations over time.

    Genshi's liquid state can be used to great, but subtle effect to contaminate areas, assassinate targets, or create a diversion.

    Dr. [REDACTED] described Genshi's makeup as an "extremely volatile organic compound". Released from the Mikiri's Kama, Genshi can be procured in amounts as small as a drop, to a gallon at a time. Normally. Genshi uniquely possesses the "Gestation" ability, which allows it to consume chakra and cannibalize cellular tissue, and chemical energy, before mutating into one of The Silent's lineages.  Irui has learned to incorporate Genshi into a multitude of forms, from clones, to using it as a subtle weapon.

    Element: None

    Skill(s): None

    Unique Ability:

    Gestation: Activate "Gestation" when Genshi appears on the field in any quantity the caster desires. When "Gestation" is active, Genshi will absorb 5 CP its Host (either Caster or Opponent) each turn. Each turn increase Genshi's rank by +1, it cannot attack until it reaches Rank C or higher  (its stats do not change). When Genshi reaches Rank C or higher, Genshi can Gestate into a registered/trained member of this contract (Of equivalent rank or lower).

    In other words, use Gestation to charge a summoning, and pay for its cost, then turn Genshi into that summoning when the required turns have been met. Only one summoning can be Gestated from a Genshi at a time.

    As a cost, Genshi's stats, techniques, element, and skills cannot be claimed at registration.

    Abomination: Genshi is a unique lifeform, never seen before on Earth. Genshi cannot be destroyed unless attacked directly until reaching Rank C.  Likewise, Genshi cannot attack until Rank C. All players besides the Caster, or those who have seen Genshi before, will assume Genshi is a Material or Chemical.

    Stats:
    Strength: E
    Constitution: E
    Stamina: E
    Speed: E
    Coordination: E
    Intelligence: E
    Perception: E

    Techniques Known: N/A
    Genshi, the Terror Unborn
    *The UA’s for all summons on this contract must be contract wide, rather than individual UA’s for each summon. The listed UA - Gestation - could be restyled as a jutsu, however it should not be unique to the summon if it does not fall under the contract.
    *Absorbing CP should come from the caster, not any opponents. Without this limitation it would enable summoning higher ranked summons at virtually no cost to the caster.
    *It does not explicitly state that Genshi ever stops absorbing chakra, the implication being that it does not. This should be clarified.
    *The line; "All players besides the Caster, or those who have seen Genshi before, will assume Genshi is a Material or Chemical." feels a bit god-moddy. This could use a bit of rewording.
    *”Approximately a gallon of Genshi can be called to the field, although greater quantities could be  produced if required.” How much can be summoned? Is there a maximum and if so what is it? What are the requirements to summon more than a gallon?

    Irui wrote:
    Summon Name: Tholziek, Conduit of the Void
    Rank: S

    Appearance:


    Tholziek, the so-called Conduit of The Void, is a great and terrifying sight to behold. Much of its body is contained within a large triangular crown of ivory, from which massive black tentacles flow from its center. Bisecting the carapace of its crown is a trench, speckled with shimmering red sphjeres. These bioluminescent organs could be construed for eyes, burning with their own internal light, ring the edge of its crown. Buttressing its body are a series of globular organs, separated by a flowing skirt-like mantle. Tholziek's tentacles or filaments are another oddity, bisecting and branching in irregular patterns like veins or roots, with faintly luminescent tips. Despite its jellyfish like appearance, Tholziek towers over the land and water on its anti-gravity organs, allowing itself to slowly crawl over the landscape.

    Tholziek's hunger for resources cannot be quenched, evidenced by its constant consumption of water from the atmosphere and land. From the top of its mantle, collected water is vented as a form of vapor; stripping the environment of precious resources and discarding them. Tholziek's powers have manifested as Water Release, allowing it to shift the tide of battle by controlling a highly valuable resource in an unorthodox manner: desiccation.

    Element: Water
    Skill(s): Medical [Default: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu]
    Stats: 20 Raises

    Unique Abilities:

    Gestate: If Genshi has been on the field for 5 turns or more, Gestate into

    Proportionate  Tholziek's attacks are proportional to its body size, and receive a +250m range. As a result, Tholziek suffers from gigantism, being a colossal entity comes with being an easy target. All opponents acquire a +1 Perception boost  (capped at B) for the explicit purpose of tracking. This does not increase awareness for Genjutsu.

    Stats: (20 Raises)
    Strength: B [3]
    Constitution:  A [4]
    Stamina: B [3]
    Speed: D [1]
    Coordination: B [3]
    Intelligence: B [3]
    Perception: B [3]


    Techniques:

    Tholziek, Conduit of the Void
    *As with the other one, the UA’s for all summons under this contract must be contract wide and not unique on top of the summons allotted jutsu.  
    *Proportionate: While having Tholziek’s attacks increase in range seems fine, essentially making it an X-Rank summon does not. All opponents within the range of his attacks should receive +1 tier to Perception (with no cap) for the purposes of tracking it. This will also need to be restyled as it cannot be a UA specific to this summon and not others.
    *Horror:  See above regarding UA’s that don’t fall under the contract. This will also need clarification as to the length of time that the effect may last. How long does the debuff stay? At what point are Tholziek and it’s opponents able to resume attacking? Or are they?
    *Water Style: Desiccation of The Promised Land - The amount of water that can be consumed and then subsequently stored needs clarification. I would like to see a hard number put on the amount of filaments, and therefore opponents that can be damaged by them, that Tholziek has access to for this jutsu. Since this has an upkeep cost, I assume the intention is to do this over multiple posts - if so when does the 3 turn immunity begin and/or end?
    *Water Style: Arrival of The Drowned Mountains: "Drowned Mountains" Power has a base of S, if Tholziek can pay the upkeep cost of "Promised Land" for an additional 3 turns (100+ CP), change its Power to X.” ← this part must be removed.  


    1. Regarding Gestate, here is how I envision Genshi working: 

    Its a microbial, parasitic organism. If it can remain on the field for X-number of turns, Irui can "Gestate" Genshi into another Summoning. Irui has already performed the Spiritualism pre-requisite for a Summoning, and holds the contract, thus the two most vital components of a Summoning have already been met. Genshi just needs an adequate supply of chakra to properly Gestate.  However placing it as a unique ability doesn't make sense, in hindsight, so I'll convert it into a jutsu.

    2. Regarding a second ability for the contract, I might as well put "Chakra Absorption" to match the theme and lore. That way the whole contract matches, and it ties into Gestation, which would then tie in the rule of Chakra Absorption. I think this is a decent work-around.

    3. I checked with Staff on the Proportional issue, and while it makes sense that Summons by default would have proportionally scaled techniques, Nyg is concerned about Summons and techniques getting too complicated with technique-scaling. So I'll instead register larger equivalents if required.

    4. I'll make edits to Tholziek and Genshi


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    The Silent Empty Re: The Silent

    Post by Irui Mikiri Sun Aug 30, 2020 9:37 pm

    Irui wrote:

    Summon Name: Genshi, the Terror Unborn
    Rank: D
    Appearance:

    Yog-Sothoth, by Giacomo Tappainer:

    Genshi, the Terror Unborn, is a mass of thick, viscous fluid, that appears to shift from oily to tar like in consistency. Approximately a gallon of Genshi can be called to the field, although greater quantities could be  produced if required. Genshi is the beginning of The Silent's horrifying lifecycle. Direct observation of Genshi will reveal black mouths, tentacles, orifices, and proto-claws manifesting and vanishing at random across its surface as it bubbles. The longer Genshi gestates, the more diverse and strange its features seem to become. Dr. [REDACTED] notes their assistants described bioluminescence, flickerings, and pulsations over time.

    Genshi's liquid state can be used to great, but subtle effect to contaminate areas, assassinate targets, or create a diversion.

    Dr. [REDACTED] described Genshi's makeup as an "extremely volatile organic compound". Released from the Mikiri's Kama, Genshi can be procured in amounts as small as a drop, to a gallon at a time. Normally. Genshi uniquely possesses the "Gestation" ability, which allows it to consume chakra and cannibalize cellular tissue, and chemical energy, before mutating into one of The Silent's lineages.  Irui has learned to incorporate Genshi into a multitude of forms, from clones, to using it as a subtle weapon.

    Element: Water

    Skill(s): Medical
    Stats:
    Strength: E
    Constitution: E
    Stamina: D
    Speed: E
    Coordination: E
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: E

    Techniques Known:


    Name: Gestation Ability
    Rank: C
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: -
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range:. Self
    Speed: -
    Element: Unknown
    Skill: Medical, Summoning
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: Contract with The Silent
    Parent Technique: Spiritualism Technique
    Hand Seals:
    Description: When Genshi the Terror Unborn enters the field, automatically activate this as an ability. ctivate "Gestation" when Genshi appears on the field in any quantity the caster desires. When "Gestation" is active, Genshi will absorb 5 CP its Host (either Caster or Opponent) each turn. Each turn increase Genshi's rank by +1, it cannot attack until it reaches Rank C or higher  (its stats do not change). When Genshi reaches Rank C or higher, Genshi can Gestate into a registered/trained member of this contract (Of equivalent rank or lower).

    In other words, use Gestation to charge a summoning, and pay for its cost, then turn Genshi into that summoning when the required turns have been met. Only one summoning can be Gestated from a Genshi at a time.

    Weaknesses: Activated automatically when Genshi appears from Irui's Kama (See Contract). Genshi is frail and helpless as it gestates, it cannot attack until Rank C and must absorb chakra in order to gestate into a higher form of the Silent. It is utterly defenseless and must rely on a flow of chakra from the Summoner or Host in order to transform into a higher creature. Weak naturally to Earth Style.




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    The Silent Empty Re: The Silent

    Post by Irui Mikiri Thu Sep 10, 2020 9:54 pm

    Irui wrote:
    Summon Name: Tholziek, Conduit of the Void
    Rank: S

    Appearance:

    Tholziek, the so-called Conduit of The Void, is a great and terrifying sight to behold. Much of its body is contained within a large triangular crown of ivory, from which massive black tentacles flow from its center. Bisecting the carapace of its crown is a trench, speckled with shimmering red sphjeres. These bioluminescent organs could be construed for eyes, burning with their own internal light, ring the edge of its crown. Buttressing its body are a series of globular organs, separated by a flowing skirt-like mantle. Tholziek's tentacles or filaments are another oddity, bisecting and branching in irregular patterns like veins or roots, with faintly luminescent tips. Despite its jellyfish like appearance, Tholziek towers over the land and water on its anti-gravity organs, allowing itself to slowly crawl over the landscape.

    Tholziek's hunger for resources cannot be quenched, evidenced by its constant consumption of water from the atmosphere and land. From the top of its mantle, collected water is vented as a form of vapor; stripping the environment of precious resources and discarding them. Tholziek's powers have manifested as Water Release, allowing it to shift the tide of battle by controlling a highly valuable resource in an unorthodox manner.

    Element: Water
    Skill(s): Medical [Default: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu]
    Stats: 20 Raises

    Stats: (20 Raises)
    Strength: B [3]
    Constitution:  A [4]
    Stamina: B [3]
    Speed: D [1]
    Coordination: B [3]
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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Mon Sep 14, 2020 7:29 pm

    Desiccation is specific to Scorch Release and thus you cannot use Water Release to reproduce that effect.


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    Post by Irui Mikiri Thu Sep 17, 2020 8:15 pm

    Shimiko Chinoike wrote:Desiccation is specific to Scorch Release and thus you cannot use Water Release to reproduce that effect.

    Tholziek uses water release to draw water from the landscape using Water Style, and holding it within itself. While doing so, Tholziek is temporarily immune to Water Style techniques as his body will absorb it. "Desiccation" acts like a straw essentially, and refers to Tholziek basically drinking the water. Tholziek then releases all this water through Drowned Mountains.

    Scorch Release from the Wiki wrote:
    Scorch Release (灼遁, Shakuton, Viz: Scorch Style) is a nature transformation kekkei genkai. When Sasuke Uchiha and Naruto Uzumaki combine their fire and wind-natured techniques, the resulting technique is dubbed "Scorch Release",[1] suggesting those are its component natures. Pakura of Sunagakure uses Scorch Release to heat up a target's body, causing all the liquid in their body to evaporate and leave them as a desiccated corpse. In the anime, her Scorch Release is weak against Water Release.[2]


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    Post by Nyguyen Uchiha Thu Sep 17, 2020 8:56 pm

    The mechanism is indeed different but the effect is the exact same. My suggestion would be to perhaps say that rather than remove water, he finds a way to over-saturate his opponents with it?


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    Post by Irui Mikiri Fri Sep 18, 2020 7:50 pm

    Nyguyen Uchiha wrote:The mechanism is indeed different but the effect is the exact same. My suggestion would be to perhaps say that rather than remove water, he finds a way to over-saturate his opponents with it?

    Forget it.

    I picked everything from the library.


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    Post by Irui Mikiri Sun Sep 27, 2020 10:41 am

    If this concept is difficult, then please state it. I can easily use the Vulture contract which has already been approved.


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    Post by Irui Mikiri Sat Oct 03, 2020 2:31 pm


    So its now October, I made Tholziek use only Library techs.


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sun Oct 04, 2020 6:31 am

    Last sentence still mentions decissitation


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    Shimiko Chinoike wrote:Last sentence still mentions decissitation


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    Summon Name: Tholziek, Conduit of the Void
    Rank: S

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    Tholziek, the so-called Conduit of The Void, is a great and terrifying sight to behold. Much of its body is contained within a large triangular crown of ivory, from which massive black tentacles flow from its center. Bisecting the carapace of its crown is a trench, speckled with shimmering red sphjeres. These bioluminescent organs could be construed for eyes, burning with their own internal light, ring the edge of its crown. Buttressing its body are a series of globular organs, separated by a flowing skirt-like mantle. Tholziek's tentacles or filaments are another oddity, bisecting and branching in irregular patterns like veins or roots, with faintly luminescent tips. Despite its jellyfish like appearance, Tholziek towers over the land and water on its anti-gravity organs, allowing itself to slowly crawl over the landscape.

    Tholziek's hunger for resources cannot be quenched, evidenced by its constant consumption of water from the atmosphere and land. From the top of its mantle, collected water is vented as a form of vapor; stripping the environment of precious resources and discarding them. Tholziek's powers have manifested as Water Release, allowing it to shift the tide of battle by controlling a highly valuable resource in an unorthodox manner.

    Element: Water
    Skill(s): Medical [Default: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu]
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    Constitution:  A [4]
    Stamina: B [3]
    Speed: D [1]
    Coordination: B [3]
    Intelligence: B [3]
    Perception: B [3]


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