Kumogakure Village Updates

Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure No Sato
Name of Current Leader: Seigi Chinoike
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 12 million ryo
Ending Funds: 1,390,000

Total Income:

• Resources:
  
• Item 1: Crops Level 2 (1 used) (500k Ryo)
  
• --Amount: 50,000 (starting next month)
  
• Item 2: Fishery Level 4 (2 used) (1m Ryo)
  
• --Amount: 100,000 (starting next month)
  
• Item 3: Livestock Level 2 (1 used)(500k Ryo)
  
• --Amount: 50,000 (starting next month)
  
• Item 4: Metals Level 2 (1 used)(500k Ryo)
  
• --Amount: 50,000 (starting next month)
  
• Item 5: Wood Level 1 (500k Ryo)
  
• --Amount: 50,000 (starting next month)
  
• --Item 6: Village Income
  
• --Amount: 300,000 (starting next month)
  

Cost for Resource Gathering Site Contruction: 2.5 Million Ryo

Total Expenses: 10,610,000 ryo

• Defenses: S-Rank Walls | A-Rank Secrecy | Sensing Barrier
  
• --Amount: 360,000
  
• Buildings: 1 Village (4M) | 5 Resource Collection Sites (2.5M) | 1 Administration (250k) | 1 Academy (300k) | Training Area (250k) |Barracks (450k) | Hospital (500k) | Market (250k) | Vault (250k) | Sensory Center (500k) | Defense Coordination Center (450k) |
  
• --Amount: 9,700,000 ryo
  
• Repairs:
  
• --Amount:
  
• NPCs: 10 A-rank Guard Groups (150k) | 10 A-rank Assault Groups (300k)
  
• --Amount: 450,000 ryo
  
• Item 1: Raikage's Salary
  
• --Amount: 100,000
  
• Item 2:
  
• --Amount:
  
• Item 3:
  
• --Amount:
  

Resource Collection Sites cost 500k a piece, so five of them should be 2.5M, rather than 3M.

The Amount portions of the template are for the sections directly above them, and aren't cumulative. So you're correct on Defenses, but Buildings shouldn't take the 360k from Defenses into account.

Resources aren't listed unless they're being collected on. So you bought five collection sites this month and you can have the subforums or topics for those sites added after the update is approved, but you'll wait until next month to list your resources and the amount gained from them on your update. The same goes for your village income. Essentially, everything under the Income section can be omitted until next month.

Everything else looks good!

I think I fixed everything.

The Amount under Buildings should be: 9,700,000 Ryo.

Total Expenses should be: 10,610,000 Ryo.

Ending Funds should be: 1,390,000 Ryo.

All else is fine.

Edited

Approved! Get in contact with me if you want any changes to your Village/Land Forums.

Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Calypso Tethys
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,390,000
Ending Funds: 1,680,000

Total Income:

• Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood
  
• --Amount: 600,000
  
• Item 1: Crops (1)
  
• --Amount: 100,000
  
• Item 2: Fishery (2)
  
• --Amount: 200,000
  
• Item 3: Livestock (1)
  
• --Amount: 100,000
  
• Item 4: Metal (1)
  
• --Amount: 100,000
  
• Item 5: Wood (1)
  
• --Amount: 100,000
  

Total Expenses:

• Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy
  
• --Amount: 40,000
  
• Buildings: Village
  
• --Amount: 20,000
  
• Repairs: N/A
  
• --Amount: N/A
  
• NPCs: 10 A-Rank Gaurd Groups
  
• --Amount: 150,000
  
• Item 1: Raikage Salary
  
• --Amount: 100,000
  

The totals for Income and for Expenses go after the bold "Total Income:" and "Total Expenses:".

It all adds up fine, though. Approved.

Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,680,000
Ending Funds: 1,651,000

Total Income: 800,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 2: Fishery (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 3: Livestock (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 4: Metal (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 829,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 5 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 5 B Rank Guard Groups, 1 C rank Guard Group, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group
--Amount: 189,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Player Character Salaries
--Amount: Chuunin- 15,000x2 (Yui and Simon)
--Amount: Genin- 10,000x5 (Ryuko, Natsuru, Shimiko, Sora, Rumehi)
Item 3: Dirt Roads
--Amount: 500,000

Nariko wrote:Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,680,000
Ending Funds: 1,651,000

Total Income: 800,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 2: Fishery (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 3: Livestock (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 4: Metal (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 829,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 5 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 5 B Rank Guard Groups, 1 C rank Guard Group, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group
--Amount: 189,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Player Character Salaries
--Amount: Chuunin- 15,000x2 (Yui and Simon)
--Amount: Genin- 10,000x5 (Ryuko, Natsuru, Shimiko, Sora, Rumehi)
Item 3: Dirt Roads
--Amount: 500,000

Approved

NPC Groups:

Inner Village/ Gates:

Outer Village/ Open Roads:

Nariko wrote:NPC Groups:

Inner Village/ Gates:

Outer Village/ Open Roads:

Approved

Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,651,000
Ending Funds: 282,000

Total Income: 800,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 2: Fishery (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 3: Livestock (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 4: Metal (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 2,249,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 5 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 5 B Rank Guard Groups, 1 C rank Guard Group, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group
--Amount: 189,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Resource Collection Sites x4 (1 crop, 1 fish, 1 livestock, 1 metal)
--Amount: 2,000,000

Nariko wrote:Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,651,000
Ending Funds: 282,000

Total Income: 800,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 2: Fishery (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 3: Livestock (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 4: Metal (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 2,249,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 5 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 5 B Rank Guard Groups, 1 C rank Guard Group, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group
--Amount: 189,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Resource Collection Sites x4 (1 crop, 1 fish, 1 livestock, 1 metal)
--Amount: 2,000,000

Approved

Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 282,000
Ending Funds: 1,233,000

Total Income: 1,200,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 2: Fishery (3)
--Amount: 300,000
Item 3: Livestock (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 4: Metal (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 249,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 5 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 5 B Rank Guard Groups, 1 C rank Guard Group, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group
--Amount: 189,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0

Nariko wrote:Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 282,000
Ending Funds: 1,233,000

Total Income: 1,200,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 2: Fishery (3)
--Amount: 300,000
Item 3: Livestock (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 4: Metal (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 249,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 5 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 5 B Rank Guard Groups, 1 C rank Guard Group, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group
--Amount: 189,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0

Approved

Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,233,000
Ending Funds: 1,523,000

Total Income: 1,200,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 2: Fishery (3)
--Amount: 300,000
Item 3: Livestock (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 4: Metal (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 910,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 12 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 15 B Rank Guard Groups, 5 C rank Guard Group, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 5 B rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group, 4 A rank Scout Groups
--Amount: 650,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Kumo Shinobi Salary
--Amount: Natsuru - 50k, Ryuko - 50k, Saia - 50k, Simon - 50k TOTAL 200,000

Nariko wrote:Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,233,000
Ending Funds: 1,523,000

Total Income: 1,200,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 2: Fishery (3)
--Amount: 300,000
Item 3: Livestock (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 4: Metal (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 910,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 12 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 15 B Rank Guard Groups, 5 C rank Guard Group, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 5 B rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group, 4 A rank Scout Groups
--Amount: 650,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Kumo Shinobi Salary
--Amount: Natsuru - 50k, Ryuko - 50k, Saia - 50k, Simon - 50k TOTAL 200,000

Approved

Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,523,000
Ending Funds: 1,883,000

Total Income: 1,200,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 2: Fishery (3)
--Amount: 300,000
Item 3: Livestock (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 4: Metal (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 840,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 12 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 15 B Rank Guard Groups, 5 C rank Guard Group, 5 D rank Guard Groups, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 5 B rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group, 4 A rank Scout Groups
--Amount: 680,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Kumo Shinobi Salary
--Amount: Natsuru - 10k, Ryuko - 10k, Saia - 10k, Simon - 10k, Sora - 10k, Morikawa - 10k, Shimiko - 40k TOTAL: 100k

Nariko wrote:Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,523,000
Ending Funds: 1,883,000

Total Income: 1,200,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 2: Fishery (3)
--Amount: 300,000
Item 3: Livestock (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 4: Metal (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 840,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 12 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 15 B Rank Guard Groups, 5 C rank Guard Group, 5 D rank Guard Groups, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 5 B rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group, 4 A rank Scout Groups
--Amount: 680,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Kumo Shinobi Salary
--Amount: Natsuru - 10k, Ryuko - 10k, Saia - 10k, Simon - 10k, Sora - 10k, Morikawa - 10k, Shimiko - 40k TOTAL: 100k

approved

Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,883,000
Ending Funds: 2,203,000

Total Income: 1,200,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 2: Fishery (3)
--Amount: 300,000
Item 3: Livestock (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 4: Metal (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 880,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 12 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 15 B Rank Guard Groups, 5 C rank Guard Group, 5 D rank Guard Groups, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 5 B rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group, 4 A rank Scout Groups
--Amount: 680,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Kumo Shinobi Salary
--Amount: Natsuru - 10k, Ryuko - 10k, Saia - 10k, Simon - 15k, Sora - 10k, Morikawa - 20k, Shimiko - 10k, Iro - 15k, Ayano - 20k, Tori - 10k, Soh -10k TOTAL: 140k

Nariko wrote:Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 1,883,000
Ending Funds: 2,203,000

Total Income: 1,200,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 2: Fishery (3)
--Amount: 300,000
Item 3: Livestock (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 4: Metal (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 880,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 12 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 15 B Rank Guard Groups, 5 C rank Guard Group, 5 D rank Guard Groups, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 5 B rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group, 4 A rank Scout Groups
--Amount: 680,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Kumo Shinobi Salary
--Amount: Natsuru - 10k, Ryuko - 10k, Saia - 10k, Simon - 15k, Sora - 10k, Morikawa - 20k, Shimiko - 10k, Iro - 15k, Ayano - 20k, Tori - 10k, Soh -10k TOTAL: 140k

Approved

Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 2,203,000
Ending Funds: 2,523,000

Total Income: 1,200,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 2: Fishery (3)
--Amount: 300,000
Item 3: Livestock (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 4: Metal (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 880,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 12 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 15 B Rank Guard Groups, 5 C rank Guard Group, 5 D rank Guard Groups, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 5 B rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group, 4 A rank Scout Groups
--Amount: 680,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Kumo Shinobi Salary
--Amount: 140,000

Iro Fujio - 25,000 ryo
Ayano Aishi - 20,000 ryo
Morikawa Miriki - 20,000 ryo
Simon Kageyama - 15,000 ryo
Natsuru Senou - 10,000 ryo
Shimiko Chinoike - 10,000 ryo
Ryuko Rose - 10,000 ryo
Bayushi Sojima - 10,000 ryo
Yagami Soh - 10,000 ryo
Tori Kou - 10,000 ryo

Nariko wrote:Village/Organization Name: Kumogakure
Name of Current Leader: Nariko Mizushima
Base Size: Village
Lands Settled: Land of Lightning
Starting Funds: 2,203,000
Ending Funds: 2,523,000

Total Income: 1,200,000

Resources: Crops, Fishery, Livestock, Metal, Wood, Village Income
Item 1: Crops (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 2: Fishery (3)
--Amount: 300,000
Item 3: Livestock (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 4: Metal (2)
--Amount: 200,000
Item 5: Wood (1)
--Amount: 100,000
Item 6: Village Income
--Amount: 200,000


Total Expenses: 880,000

Defenses: A-Rank Secrecy (Village)
--Amount: 40,000
Buildings: Village
--Amount: 20,000
Repairs: N/A
--Amount: N/A
NPCs: 12 A-Rank Guard Groups, 1 Free A rank Guard Group, 15 B Rank Guard Groups, 5 C rank Guard Group, 5 D rank Guard Groups, 1 A Rank Counter Espionage, 5 B rank Counter Espionage, 1 B Rank Scout Group, 4 A rank Scout Groups
--Amount: 680,000
Item 1: Raikage Salary
--Amount: 0
Item 2: Kumo Shinobi Salary
--Amount: 140,000

Iro Fujio - 25,000 ryo
Ayano Aishi - 20,000 ryo
Morikawa Miriki - 20,000 ryo
Simon Kageyama - 15,000 ryo
Natsuru Senou - 10,000 ryo
Shimiko Chinoike - 10,000 ryo
Ryuko Rose - 10,000 ryo
Bayushi Sojima - 10,000 ryo
Yagami Soh - 10,000 ryo
Tori Kou - 10,000 ryo

Approved

NPC Groups:

Inner Village/ Gates:

Outer Village/ Open Roads:

Scouts to be Deployed: