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    Post by Asami Yokai Sun Sep 02, 2018 10:18 pm

    [妖怪 - Yōkai]
    [Clan Location: Kumogakure]
    [Bloodline Name & Type: KKG/Doujutsu - Spiritual Path]
    [Current Clan Leader: Ashtoreth Yokai (NPC)]

    • Asami Yokai
    • Yoko Oni



    Clan History/Description
    The Yokai believe themselves to be descendants of ancient spirits from whom they claim their name, spirits of various abilities and supernatural powers who, the clan believes, became their Mothers and Fathers. The Yokai have, as a result, also considered themselves to be separate from ordinary Humans and often refer to themselves as "Autosaidā" or "Outsider" when speaking about their relationship with the rest of Humanity and the Shinobi World in general. It is only recently that the Yokai have chosen to attempt integrating themselves into ordinary society, mainly due to a sharp decline in their numbers due to many members venturing off into unknown lands and never returning or persecution from a populace scared of those unlike themselves. As a result, Yokai of all 'Paths' as they call their separate Bloodlines have begun to congregate in Shinobi Villages - namely Kumogakure - and have begun to make themselves known and assert themselves as valuable members of their respective communities and prove that unlike the legends that have tainted their names for generations, they can coexist with normal Humans if given the chance.

    Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics
    The Yokai are a varied clan who are separated into "Paths" that are believed, at least by the majority of the Clan Members, to be gifted onto the individual Yokai at birth and which represent different aspects of their believed Demonic Heritage. These Paths are as follows:

    The Oni:
    Mainly warriors and those of hearty build, Oni are unparalleled among the rest of the Clan in their physical prowess and usually exhibit the most demonic features of all the Paths, making them the most easily recognizable members as well as perhaps the most infamous as well.

    They can be identified by a typically red skin-tone, as well as horns upon their heads in some cases. This, combined with their often muscular builds and a rather large size, make them an intimidating presence on the battlefield.

    The Tengu:
    Cunning craftsmen who tend to avoid confrontation, the Yokai of the Tengu Path are believed to be some of the most intelligent of the clan's members and have a knack for creation as well as perfection of items. They are also well-known as being the most Human among the three Paths and as a result, can easily integrate themselves into regular human society without too much trouble.

    They are identified by a slender, almost malnourished build, although this can be mitigated if the Tengu cares properly for their body despite the natural aversion to doing so.

    The Baku:
    Pale, intimidating visages who are masters of illusion and deceit. These Yokai are believed to descend from ancestors who once fed on the dreams and nightmares of Humans. They are most easily recognized by their dark auras and eyes that seem to be filled with stars and galaxies which turn red when utilizing their particular Devil's Eye techniques.

    They are most identified by their aforementioned pale skin, however, they also are known to have unnaturally pristine complexions and wings that have caused some to mistake them for angels - usually only once.

    Bloodline Description & Abilities
    Once a Yokai is born, they are gifted with the blessings of a patron/matron spirit who bestows upon them gifts unique to the Path that has been determined for them. This Path cannot be changed and one cannot receive gifts of more than one path, however, all Yokai receive a base Doujutsu from which their powers evolve depending on their Path and alter the appearance of their Doujutsu accordingly.

    The Base Doujutsu, known as "悪魔の目" or "Devil's Eye", is a Doujutsu which at the base level does not have many effects in its natural state, however, it is not without certain benefits:

    When activated, the Devil's Eye grants the user a + to Perception as well as a + to the Power of Fire techniques while it remains active. The Devil's Eye appears, at its base form, as if the corner of the user's eyes were leaking out an ethereal flame which dissipates into the air near them. This flame does not produce heat nor is tangible, however, it is a representation of the owner's demonic ancestry. It costs nothing to activate the Devil's Eye, however, an upkeep cost of 0.1 is required to keep the Eye active.

    The Paths each grant their own benefits and drawbacks depending on the birthright which a User was gifted with; each of these being detailed below:

    Path Of The Oni:


    Path Of The Tengu:


    Path Of The Baku:


    Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks
    - Only one Bloodline Path can be obtained.
    - Once taken, a Path cannot be changed.
    - Each Path has individual strengths/weaknesses.


    Clan Techniques
    Oni Path:
    Tengu Path:
    Baku Path:



    Last edited by Asami Yokai on Sat Sep 08, 2018 11:47 am; edited 4 times in total
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    Join date : 2017-10-29

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Katon, Raiton, Doton, Ijutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu & Fuuinjutsu
    Class: A
    Ryo: 1,105,125

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    Post by Copycat Sun Sep 02, 2018 10:46 pm

    Change it so that the passive Intelligence raises that the Tengu path get applies to Coordination instead; this'll ultimately be more beneficial for them later down the line since they'll end up with a full Coordination boost at stage 3. Also note that their passive quality boost cannot push over into X quality; X items are kinda intended to be in a limited quantity.

    Have the stage 3 augmentation lower the effectiveness of Genjutsu: Kai usage by one rank rather than completely barring it off.

    Other than that this looks good.


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    Post by Asami Yokai Sun Sep 02, 2018 10:52 pm

    Edits have been made.


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    Skills & Elements: Katon, Raiton, Doton, Ijutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu & Fuuinjutsu
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    Post by Copycat Sun Sep 02, 2018 10:55 pm

    Asami Yokai wrote:
    [妖怪 - Yōkai]
    [Clan Location: Kumogakure]
    [Bloodline Name & Type: KKG/Doujutsu - Spiritual Path]
    [Current Clan Leader: Ashtoreth Yokai (NPC)]

    • Asami Yokai



    Clan History/Description
    The Yokai believe themselves to be descendants of ancient spirits from whom they claim their name, spirits of various abilities and supernatural powers who, the clan believes, became their Mothers and Fathers. The Yokai have, as a result, also considered themselves to be separate from ordinary Humans and often refer to themselves as "Autosaidā" or "Outsider" when speaking about their relationship with the rest of Humanity and the Shinobi World in general. It is only recently that the Yokai have chosen to attempt integrating themselves into ordinary society, mainly due to a sharp decline in their numbers due to many members venturing off into unknown lands and never returning or persecution from a populace scared of those unlike themselves. As a result, Yokai of all 'Paths' as they call their separate Bloodlines have begun to congregate in Shinobi Villages - namely Kumogakure - and have begun to make themselves known and assert themselves as valuable members of their respective communities and prove that unlike the legends that have tainted their names for generations, they can coexist with normal Humans if given the chance.

    Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics
    The Yokai are a varied clan who are separated into "Paths" that are believed, at least by the majority of the Clan Members, to be gifted onto the individual Yokai at birth and which represent different aspects of their believed Demonic Heritage. These Paths are as follows:

    The Oni:
    Mainly warriors and those of hearty build, Oni are unparalleled among the rest of the Clan in their physical prowess and usually exhibit the most demonic features of all the Paths, making them the most easily recognizable members as well as perhaps the most infamous as well.

    They can be identified by a typically red skin-tone, as well as horns upon their heads in some cases. This, combined with their often muscular builds and a rather large size, make them an intimidating presence on the battlefield.

    The Tengu:
    Cunning craftsmen who tend to avoid confrontation, the Yokai of the Tengu Path are believed to be some of the most intelligent of the clan's members and have a knack for creation as well as perfection of items. They are also well-known as being the most Human among the three Paths and as a result, can easily integrate themselves into regular human society without too much trouble.

    They are identified by a slender, almost malnourished build, although this can be mitigated if the Tengu cares properly for their body despite the natural aversion to doing so.

    The Baku:
    Pale, intimidating visages who are masters of illusion and deceit. These Yokai are believed to descend from ancestors who once fed on the dreams and nightmares of Humans. They are most easily recognized by their dark auras and eyes that seem to be filled with stars and galaxies which turn red when utilizing their particular Devil's Eye techniques.

    They are most identified by their aforementioned pale skin, however, they also are known to have unnaturally pristine complexions and wings that have caused some to mistake them for angels - usually only once.

    Bloodline Description & Abilities
    Once a Yokai is born, they are gifted with the blessings of a patron/matron spirit who bestows upon them gifts unique to the Path that has been determined for them. This Path cannot be changed and one cannot receive gifts of more than one path, however, all Yokai receive a base Doujutsu from which their powers evolve depending on their Path and alter the appearance of their Doujutsu accordingly.

    The Base Doujutsu, known as "悪魔の目" or "Devil's Eye", is a Doujutsu which at the base level does not have many effects in its natural state, however, it is not without certain benefits:

    When activated, the Devil's Eye grants the user a + to Perception as well as a + to the Power of Fire techniques while it remains active. The Devil's Eye appears, at its base form, as if the corner of the user's eyes were leaking out an ethereal flame which dissipates into the air near them. This flame does not produce heat nor is tangible, however, it is a representation of the owner's demonic ancestry. It costs nothing to activate the Devil's Eye, however, an upkeep cost of 0.1 is required to keep the Eye active.

    The Paths each grant their own benefits and drawbacks depending on the birthright which a User was gifted with; each of these being detailed below:

    Path Of The Oni:


    Path Of The Tengu:


    Path Of The Baku:


    Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks
    - Only one Bloodline Path can be obtained.
    - Once taken, a Path cannot be changed.
    - Each Path has individual strengths/weaknesses.


    Clan Techniques
    TBA


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    Post by Asami Yokai Sat Sep 08, 2018 11:47 am

    As per discussion with Admin "Nyg", Edits have been made.

    See the Quote for details labeled in bold.

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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sat Sep 08, 2018 12:46 pm

    Asami Yokai wrote:As per discussion with Admin "Nyg", Edits have been made.

    See the Quote for details labeled in bold.

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