Ghost's Ninja Way

Name: Trio Clay Assault [Formation]
Rank: C-S
Power:C-S
Activation Cost: C [5] B [10] A[15] S[30]
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 50 M
Speed: Coordination stat (-1)
Element: Blast Release 
Skill: Ninjutsu 
Classification: Clan Exclusive 
Requirements: Blast Release 
Parent Technique:C1
Hand Seals: Preparation: Snake → Tiger | Detonation: Seal of Confrontation
Description: Using the infamous Kinjutsu and Blast Release. The user can now use more bombs for less the clay. Instead of molding one Clay creation using the Kinjustu. The user can now create 3 C1 Clay creations at once. They do not share the Same charka and thus are thier own Clay C1 creations. With each Clay C1 created they can be set off separately or all together at a 1 time Cost of 1 Cp after creating the C1. 


Weakness: Bakuton is weak against Lightning Release as the electricity inherent in the element can sometimes short circuit and nullify the reactive components in Explosion Release. Blast Release is thus one rank weaker than Lightning Release. Generally, Lightning Release techniques one rank above that of an Explosion Release technique after this weakness is applied will delay detonation for a single post. Lightning Release techniques two ranks above will nullify Explosion Release techniques entirely such that the explosion will not occur at all and chakra spent on the technique is lost. Kotōshura clan members have an unlimited supply of free clay due to their family's line of work, however they must find a way to carry and store large quantities in order to use Explosive Clay techniques. Generally a fair amount can be carried on their person but massive quantities are usually sealed so as to prevent them from running out in the midst of a prolonged battle. While close quarters Bakuton techniques generally prevent the user from being harmed by their own attacks, those techniques that utilize a catalyst for remote detonation (such as Explosive Clay techniques) do not afford the user such protection. As a result, the user must take care not to blow themselves up with their own jutsu.

Ghost wrote:Name: Trio Clay Assault [Formation]
Rank: C Rank
Power: D to S
Activation Cost: C [5] to B [10]
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 50 M
Speed: Coordination stat
Element: Blast Release 
Skill: Ninjutsu 
Classification: Clan Exclusive 
Requirements: Blast Release 
Parent Technique:C1
Hand Seals: Preparation: Snake → Tiger | Detonation: Seal of Confrontation
Description: Using the infamous Kinjutsu and Blast Release. The user can now use more bombs for less the clay. Instead of molding one Clay creation using the Kinjustu. The user can now create 3 C1 Clay creations at once. They do not share share the Same charka and thus are thier own Clay C1 creations. With each Clay C1 created they can be set off separately or all together at a 1 time Cost of 1 Cp after creating the C1. 


Weakness: Bakuton is weak against Lightning Release as the electricity inherent in the element can sometimes short circuit and nullify the reactive components in Explosion Release. Blast Release is thus one rank weaker than Lightning Release. Generally, Lightning Release techniques one rank above that of an Explosion Release technique after this weakness is applied will delay detonation for a single post. Lightning Release techniques two ranks above will nullify Explosion Release techniques entirely such that the explosion will not occur at all and chakra spent on the technique is lost. Kotōshura clan members have an unlimited supply of free clay due to their family's line of work, however they must find a way to carry and store large quantities in order to use Explosive Clay techniques. Generally a fair amount can be carried on their person but massive quantities are usually sealed so as to prevent them from running out in the midst of a prolonged battle. While close quarters Bakuton techniques generally prevent the user from being harmed by their own attacks, those techniques that utilize a catalyst for remote detonation (such as Explosive Clay techniques) do not afford the user such protection. As a result, the user must take care not to blow themselves up with their own jutsu.

You have power as D-S, which is fine, but you should list the activation cost as the same (D-S).

Speed should be 1 less than (1-) coordination

Bump its added

Ghost wrote:Name: Trio Clay Assault [Formation]
Rank: C-S
Power:C-S
Activation Cost: C [5] B [10] A[15] S[30]
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 50 M
Speed: Coordination stat (-1)
Element: Blast Release 
Skill: Ninjutsu 
Classification: Clan Exclusive 
Requirements: Blast Release 
Parent Technique:C1
Hand Seals: Preparation: Snake → Tiger | Detonation: Seal of Confrontation
Description: Using the infamous Kinjutsu and Blast Release. The user can now use more bombs for less the clay. Instead of molding one Clay creation using the Kinjustu. The user can now create 3 C1 Clay creations at once. They do not share the Same charka and thus are thier own Clay C1 creations. With each Clay C1 created they can be set off separately or all together at a 1 time Cost of 1 Cp after creating the C1. 


Weakness: Bakuton is weak against Lightning Release as the electricity inherent in the element can sometimes short circuit and nullify the reactive components in Explosion Release. Blast Release is thus one rank weaker than Lightning Release. Generally, Lightning Release techniques one rank above that of an Explosion Release technique after this weakness is applied will delay detonation for a single post. Lightning Release techniques two ranks above will nullify Explosion Release techniques entirely such that the explosion will not occur at all and chakra spent on the technique is lost. Kotōshura clan members have an unlimited supply of free clay due to their family's line of work, however they must find a way to carry and store large quantities in order to use Explosive Clay techniques. Generally a fair amount can be carried on their person but massive quantities are usually sealed so as to prevent them from running out in the midst of a prolonged battle. While close quarters Bakuton techniques generally prevent the user from being harmed by their own attacks, those techniques that utilize a catalyst for remote detonation (such as Explosive Clay techniques) do not afford the user such protection. As a result, the user must take care not to blow themselves up with their own jutsu.

Approved

Name: Centipede Assault [Formation]
Rank: C-A
Power:C-A
Activation Cost: C [5] B [10] A[15] 
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 100 M
Speed: Coordination stat (-1)
Element: Blast Release 
Skill: Ninjutsu 
Classification: Clan Exclusive 
Requirements: Blast Release 
Parent Technique:C1
Hand Seals: Preparation: Snake → Tiger | Detonation: Seal of Confrontation
Description: Using the infamous Kinjutsu and Blast Release. The user will mold a centipede which can become up to 9 meters in length that is made out of C1 clay. The creature can act and move like the bug of its nature. The main goal is for the centipede to wrap around the target. In order to  break out the target Strength must be stronger then the user strength. Upon grabbing whole of the target they will be Bind for 2 post or until the user blows up the clay creation. Or if the target is able to break out.




Weakness: Bakuton is weak against Lightning Release as the electricity inherent in the element can sometimes short circuit and nullify the reactive components in Explosion Release. Blast Release is thus one rank weaker than Lightning Release. Generally, Lightning Release techniques one rank above that of an Explosion Release technique after this weakness is applied will delay detonation for a single post. Lightning Release techniques two ranks above will nullify Explosion Release techniques entirely such that the explosion will not occur at all and chakra spent on the technique is lost. Kotōshura clan members have an unlimited supply of free clay due to their family's line of work, however they must find a way to carry and store large quantities in order to use Explosive Clay techniques. Generally a fair amount can be carried on their person but massive quantities are usually sealed so as to prevent them from running out in the midst of a prolonged battle. While close quarters Bakuton techniques generally prevent the user from being harmed by their own attacks, those techniques that utilize a catalyst for remote detonation (such as Explosive Clay techniques) do not afford the user such protection. As a result, the user must take care not to blow themselves up with their own jutsu.

I'd make the strength check relative to the power of the technique rather than your intelligence.

I changed it up 

Bump

Nozomi wrote:I'd make the strength check relative to the power of the technique rather than your intelligence.

Same thing as I said here, the Strength check (targets) should be against the Power of the technique. The user's Strength doesn't factor into the technique.

I changed that im confused on what you are asking me to change