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    Post by Takano Uzumaki Tue Jul 06, 2021 10:29 pm

    Approved Techniques:

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    Post by Takano Uzumaki Tue Jul 06, 2021 10:32 pm

    Name: Restriction Tag Seal
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 20m
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Blank Sealing Paper
    Parent Technique: Explosive Tag Seal
    Hand Seals: Snake
    Description: A variant of the Explosive tag seal. Instead of packing chakra into the tag to produce an explosive reaction, the tag is instead pre-loaded with a simple restriction seal, in order to lock down an opponent’s movement. Once contact is made (either through direct application or by the projectile it is attached to piercing the opponent’s body), sealing marks will begin to spread across the opponent’s body, with multiple sealing tags simply compounding upon each other. This applies a (--) to the target’s speed. This can be activated in one of two ways.
    1.) Igniting the tag with chakra or heat. This results in a slow burn and a four second delay allowing the user to benefit from the delay by throwing them greater distances, how far dependent on the user's method.
    2.) Detonating the tag remotely using chakra. To do this, the user must make direct contact with the sealing tag to apply their chakra to the tag. This allows them to detonate the sealing tag remotely with the Snake hand seal. The range on this method is only twenty meters from the user.
    Weaknesses: Like any normal explosive tag, the tag must first be brought into physical contact with an opponent in order to be effective. By paying a chakra cost equivalent to the rank of the seal, or simply overpowering the seal with C rank strength, the seal can be effectively broken.

    Name: Creeping Snake Seal
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 50m
    Speed: B
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: 6. Snake > Ram > Ox > Hare > Hare > Boar > Tiger > Bird > Horse
    Description: The user forms the necessary seals, and slams their hands onto a circular sealing circle (either drawn prior or created with chakra ink). Four lines of sealing marks then sprout from the circle, and begin to creep across the ground towards the target the user directs, giving the fuuinjutsu the appearance of snakes slithering across the ground. If a sealing line contacts any part of the target’s body, it begins to creep up their body, slowly encircling it and gradually slowing down movement. The more sealing lines make contact, the more movement is restricted, debuffing the opponent’s movement by a tier (additional sealing lines merely make the technique harder to break). By paying an additional B rank worth of chakra, the user can sprout another four seal lines to be directed at will.
    Weaknesses: If the target has a strength stat of at least one tier higher than the intelligence of the user, they can physically break out of the technique after one post. If the discrepancy is any higher, they can free themselves within the same post. Otherwise, by expelling a B rank’s worth of chakra, they can flush the sealing marks off of them. These countermeasures must be deployed for every additional sealing line that makes contact with them.
    The Creeping Snake Seal can only move across flat surfaces, and is not three-dimensional. If the target does not touch any surface marked with the sealing line, they can effectively avoid the technique. In order to change the movement of the sealing lines, the user must make contact with the original sealing array. Otherwise, they will continue to move along their pre-determined paths.

    Name: String Light Formation
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 5m
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Dragon > Monkey > Rat > Monkey > Boar > Dog
    Description: Upon flowing chakra to a previously created sealing array, a pattern of sealing marks forms around the user, taking the form of a series of concentric circles, with several lines intersecting them. A pale green barrier then forms on the outermost circle, forming a relatively weak but easily deployable barrier against all sort of harm, taking B rank strength or jutsu to permanently destroy it. If a jutsu is fired at it that exceeds its ability to harm, it nonetheless subtracts a B rank’s worth of damage from the attack.
    Weaknesses: Unlike other barrier ninjutsu, there is no way to pass through the created barrier once it is deployed: it either is destroyed by an attack, or it is canceled by the user in which case it will need to be cast again to bring back up. The barrier is cylindrical with an open top, so it is possible to simply bypass the barrier entirely

    Name: Drizzle
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 50m
    Speed: B
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification:
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death
    Hand Seals: Horse > Ram > Hare > Horse > Boar > Dog
    Description: Essentially a long-range variant of the Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death technique. By sacrificing some of the technique’s raw penetrative ability, the user can instead fire the needles at distant targets, blowing holes through foes with the technique’s sheer speed and power.
    Weaknesses: -


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    Post by Nozomi Thu Jul 08, 2021 8:51 pm

    Name: Restriction Tag Seal
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 20m
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Blank Sealing Paper
    Parent Technique: Explosive Tag Seal
    Hand Seals: Snake
    Description: A variant of the Explosive tag seal. Instead of packing chakra into the tag to produce an explosive reaction, the tag is instead pre-loaded with a simple restriction seal, in order to lock down an opponent’s movement. Once contact is made (either through direct application or by the projectile it is attached to piercing the opponent’s body), sealing marks will begin to spread across the opponent’s body, with multiple sealing tags simply compounding upon each other. This applies a (--) to the target’s speed. This can be activated in one of two ways.
    1.) Igniting the tag with chakra or heat. This results in a slow burn and a four second delay allowing the user to benefit from the delay by throwing them greater distances, how far dependent on the user's method.
    2.) Detonating the tag remotely using chakra. To do this, the user must make direct contact with the sealing tag to apply their chakra to the tag. This allows them to detonate the sealing tag remotely with the Snake hand seal. The range on this method is only twenty meters from the user.
    Weaknesses: Like any normal explosive tag, the tag must first be brought into physical contact with an opponent in order to be effective. By paying a chakra cost equivalent to the rank of the seal, or simply overpowering the seal with C rank strength, the seal can be effectively broken.

    As this doesn't explode, or detonate, please adjust the language of the activation methods to remove mention of them. As it wouldn't explode, method 1 doesn't really make sense either for a delayed reaction, since it needs to be applied directly to a person.

    Name: Creeping Snake Seal
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 50m
    Speed: B
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: 6. Snake > Ram > Ox > Hare > Hare > Boar > Tiger > Bird > Horse
    Description: The user forms the necessary seals, and slams their hands onto a circular sealing circle (either drawn prior or created with chakra ink). Four lines of sealing marks then sprout from the circle, and begin to creep across the ground towards the target the user directs, giving the fuuinjutsu the appearance of snakes slithering across the ground. If a sealing line contacts any part of the target’s body, it begins to creep up their body, slowly encircling it and gradually slowing down movement. The more sealing lines make contact, the more movement is restricted, debuffing the opponent’s movement by a tier (additional sealing lines merely make the technique harder to break). By paying an additional B rank worth of chakra, the user can sprout another four seal lines to be directed at will.
    Weaknesses: If the target has a strength stat of at least one tier higher than the intelligence of the user, they can physically break out of the technique after one post. If the discrepancy is any higher, they can free themselves within the same post. Otherwise, by expelling a B rank’s worth of chakra, they can flush the sealing marks off of them. These countermeasures must be deployed for every additional sealing line that makes contact with them.
    The Creeping Snake Seal can only move across flat surfaces, and is not three-dimensional. If the target does not touch any surface marked with the sealing line, they can effectively avoid the technique. In order to change the movement of the sealing lines, the user must make contact with the original sealing array. Otherwise, they will continue to move along their pre-determined paths.

    You mention that more lines make it harder to break out of. Can you elaborate?

    Name: String Light Formation
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 5m
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Dragon > Monkey > Rat > Monkey > Boar > Dog
    Description: Upon flowing chakra to a previously created sealing array, a pattern of sealing marks forms around the user, taking the form of a series of concentric circles, with several lines intersecting them. A pale green barrier then forms on the outermost circle, forming a relatively weak but easily deployable barrier against all sort of harm, taking B rank strength or jutsu to permanently destroy it. If a jutsu is fired at it that exceeds its ability to harm, it nonetheless subtracts a B rank’s worth of damage from the attack.
    Weaknesses: Unlike other barrier ninjutsu, there is no way to pass through the created barrier once it is deployed: it either is destroyed by an attack, or it is canceled by the user in which case it will need to be cast again to bring back up. The barrier is cylindrical with an open top, so it is possible to simply bypass the barrier entirely

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    Name: Drizzle
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 50m
    Speed: B
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification:
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death
    Hand Seals: Horse > Ram > Hare > Horse > Boar > Dog
    Description: Essentially a long-range variant of the Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death technique. By sacrificing some of the technique’s raw penetrative ability, the user can instead fire the needles at distant targets, blowing holes through foes with the technique’s sheer speed and power.
    Weaknesses: -

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    Post by Takano Uzumaki Sun Jul 11, 2021 1:05 pm

    Edited

    Name: Restriction Tag Seal
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 20m
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Blank Sealing Paper
    Parent Technique: Explosive Tag Seal
    Hand Seals: Snake
    Description: A variant of the Explosive tag seal. Instead of packing chakra into the tag to produce an explosive reaction, the tag is instead pre-loaded with a simple restriction seal, in order to lock down an opponent’s movement. Once contact is made, (either through direct application or by the projectile it is attached to piercing the opponent’s body), and the tag is activated, sealing marks will begin to spread across the opponent’s body, with multiple sealing tags simply compounding upon each other. This applies a (--) to the target’s speed.

    Once applied, the user can activate the tag remotely using chakra. To do this, the user must make direct contact with the sealing tag to apply their chakra to the tag. This allows them to activate the sealing tag remotely with the Snake hand seal. The range of activation is only twenty meters from the user.

    Weaknesses: Like any normal explosive tag, the tag must first be brought into physical contact with an opponent in order to be effective. By paying a chakra cost equivalent to the rank of the seal, or simply overpowering the seal with C rank strength, the seal can be effectively broken.


    Name: Creeping Snake Seal
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 50m
    Speed: B
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: 6. Snake > Ram > Ox > Hare > Hare > Boar > Tiger > Bird > Horse
    Description: The user forms the necessary seals, and slams their hands onto a circular sealing circle (either drawn prior or created with chakra ink). Four lines of sealing marks then sprout from the circle, and begin to creep across the ground towards the target the user directs, giving the fuuinjutsu its trademark appearance of snakes slithering across the ground.

    If a sealing line makes physical contact with any part of the user's body, the sealing marks will quickly begin to spread across the target's body, paralyzing them. The seal restrains the target with a strength equivalent to C++, with each additional sealing line that makes contact increasing the check by one + (i.e. two lines B, three lines B+ and so on).

    Weaknesses: The Creeping Snake Seal can only move across flat surfaces, and is not three-dimensional. If the target does not touch any surface marked with the sealing line, they can effectively avoid the technique. In order to change the movement of the sealing lines, the user must make contact with the original sealing array. Otherwise, they will continue to move along their pre-determined paths.

    As soon as the first line activates on the target, they can immediately contest the binding and break it as long as they are able to, avoiding any additional lines that have not made contact yet and thereby the increased strength check.


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    Post by Nozomi Wed Jul 14, 2021 10:28 pm

    Name: Restriction Tag Seal
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 20m
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Blank Sealing Paper
    Parent Technique: Explosive Tag Seal
    Hand Seals: Snake
    Description: A variant of the Explosive tag seal. Instead of packing chakra into the tag to produce an explosive reaction, the tag is instead pre-loaded with a simple restriction seal, in order to lock down an opponent’s movement. Once contact is made, (either through direct application or by the projectile it is attached to piercing the opponent’s body), and the tag is activated, sealing marks will begin to spread across the opponent’s body, with multiple sealing tags simply compounding upon each other. This applies a (--) to the target’s speed.

    Once applied, the user can activate the tag remotely using chakra. To do this, the user must make direct contact with the sealing tag to apply their chakra to the tag. This allows them to activate the sealing tag remotely with the Snake hand seal. The range of activation is only twenty meters from the user.

    Weaknesses: Like any normal explosive tag, the tag must first be brought into physical contact with an opponent in order to be effective. By paying a chakra cost equivalent to the rank of the seal, or simply overpowering the seal with C rank strength, the seal can be effectively broken.
    Approved

    For Creeping Snake Seal:
    If any additional sealing lines make contact with the target however, the cost to break the seal increases by one (+).
    Can you specify exactly how much it's increased by per sealing line? That's a little open to interpretation. It could be read that each additional line increases the cost by 1 (A total of 3 additional cost). It could be read that it increases the cost by one +, in which case only by all 4 hitting would it increase at all, since there's no B+ or B++ jutsu 'cost'. Or it could be read that it increases by One, but also a plus, so if all four hits it's a full cost higher, but otherwise it's only marginally more expensive.

    Also, how would it be possible that only one or two hit? If you're paralyzed regardless of how many hit, then wouldn't all hit anyhow?


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    Post by Takano Uzumaki Wed Jul 21, 2021 11:19 pm

    Edited Creeping Snake Seal for clarity and made it a strength check


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    Post by Nozomi Wed Aug 04, 2021 8:43 am

    Takano Uzumaki wrote:Edited

    Name: Restriction Tag Seal
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 20m
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Blank Sealing Paper
    Parent Technique: Explosive Tag Seal
    Hand Seals: Snake
    Description: A variant of the Explosive tag seal. Instead of packing chakra into the tag to produce an explosive reaction, the tag is instead pre-loaded with a simple restriction seal, in order to lock down an opponent’s movement. Once contact is made, (either through direct application or by the projectile it is attached to piercing the opponent’s body), and the tag is activated, sealing marks will begin to spread across the opponent’s body, with multiple sealing tags simply compounding upon each other. This applies a (--) to the target’s speed.

    Once applied, the user can activate the tag remotely using chakra. To do this, the user must make direct contact with the sealing tag to apply their chakra to the tag. This allows them to activate the sealing tag remotely with the Snake hand seal. The range of activation is only twenty meters from the user.

    Weaknesses: Like any normal explosive tag, the tag must first be brought into physical contact with an opponent in order to be effective. By paying a chakra cost equivalent to the rank of the seal, or simply overpowering the seal with C rank strength, the seal can be effectively broken.


    Name: Creeping Snake Seal
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 50m
    Speed: B
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: 6. Snake > Ram > Ox > Hare > Hare > Boar > Tiger > Bird > Horse
    Description: The user forms the necessary seals, and slams their hands onto a circular sealing circle (either drawn prior or created with chakra ink). Four lines of sealing marks then sprout from the circle, and begin to creep across the ground towards the target the user directs, giving the fuuinjutsu its trademark appearance of snakes slithering across the ground.

    If a sealing line makes physical contact with any part of the user's body, the sealing marks will quickly begin to spread across the target's body, paralyzing them. The seal restrains the target with a strength equivalent to C++, with each additional sealing line that makes contact increasing the check by one + (i.e. two lines B, three lines B+ and so on).

    Weaknesses: The Creeping Snake Seal can only move across flat surfaces, and is not three-dimensional. If the target does not touch any surface marked with the sealing line, they can effectively avoid the technique. In order to change the movement of the sealing lines, the user must make contact with the original sealing array. Otherwise, they will continue to move along their pre-determined paths.

    As soon as the first line activates on the target, they can immediately contest the binding and break it as long as they are able to, avoiding any additional lines that have not made contact yet and thereby the increased strength check.
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