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    Ryūzōji Natsuki [Jutsu Creation]

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    Post by Natsuki Tue Dec 01, 2020 4:13 pm

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    Name: Thunder Breathing: First Form - Thunder Clap & Flash
    Rank: C-rank
    Power: B-rank
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Sword in Sheathe
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: The user with their weapon sheathed, inhales a deep breath added extra oxygen to their blood and channeling raiton energy through-out their body, then user then dashes forward at blinding speed enhanced by the raiton enegry and makes a single weapon strike at their target, usually followed by the user sheathing their sword again but not always.

    this technique enchances the users speed by +1 tier of speed and +1 advantage of coordination for the strike that occurs.

    Weaknesses: This technique requires user to A) have their sword sheathed and B) take a brief moment to collect themselves and breath, thus suffers under the pressure of relentless attacks, because if the user cannot find the space they need to activate the technique it's useless.

    Name: Lightning Release: Quick Step
    Rank: C-rank
    Power: B-rank
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: ---
    Speed: ---
    Element: ---
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret - Aura Buff
    Requirements:---
    Parent Technique: ---
    Hand Seals: ---
    Description: A Simple technique where the user channels Raiton through their body in order to increase their speed. While this primarily increases their movement speed, it also helps their action speed as well, granting them a +1 tier to speed, and a +1 Advantage to coordination
    Weaknesses: ---

    Name: Thunder Breathing: Fifth Form - Heat Lightning
    Rank: C-rank
    Power: B-rank
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: ---
    Range: ---
    Speed: ---
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification:Secret
    Requirements: Sword in Sheathe
    Parent Technique: Thunder Breathing: First Form - Thunder Clap & Flash
    Hand Seals: ---
    Description: Much like the first form of the breathing technique this form is focused on a singular powerful slash, however this technique is more meant for an opponent that's already close range, but largely focuses on power and the speed of the swing over the user rushing in.

    By channeling Raiton into the blade, shoots the blade out of their sheathe, creating a powerful slash that is at not only +1 tier to strength, but also +1 Advantage to Coordination.  Furthermore the jutsu is so powerful that when it cuts through a jutsu the sheer force of the strike disperses any jutsu it overpowers.
    Weaknesses: Much like it's parent technique the jutsu requires the user to have their sword sheathed and and to take a deep breath to channel the energy within themselves before the swing, and as such makes it difficult to get off under a relentless assault.

    Name: Trick Clash
    Rank: C-rank
    Power: D-rank
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: ---
    Range: Self - Touch - 15m
    Speed: User's Coordination
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Kenjutsu - Taijutsu
    Classification: Seceret
    Requirements: ---
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: ---
    Description: An advanced form of Chakra flow where the user channels a surplus amount of Raiton into their sword, for the sole purpose of clashing with their opponent. When the user clashes weapons with their opponents and their opponent has a weapon capable of conducting electricity the raiton will flow into the other blade and surge shocking the other person causing them D-rank burns at all points of contact with the weapon, and forcing them to drop it.

    If the user has taijutsu, the user can simply cause this effect by grabbing the opponents weapon and flowing chakra into it.

    finally, the user can simply channel this water and it will spread across the water up to 15m  and it will apply the burns to all those in contact with the water.
    Weaknesses: Unfortunately because ninjutsu isn't used for this the user is also affected by the technique, while their own blade is safe as the outward flow of raiton is coming from their hand, any contact with the other blade will effect them. Likewise, the hand being used for the taijutsu portion of this technique is safe, but any other point of contact will effect the user. As for the water flow, any portion of the user touching the water receives the damage.

    WIP:


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    Ryūzōji Natsuki [Jutsu Creation] Empty Re: Ryūzōji Natsuki [Jutsu Creation]

    Post by Kensai Sat Dec 05, 2020 3:36 pm

    Natsuki wrote:Name: Thunder Breathing: First Form - Thunder Clap & Flash
    Rank: C-rank
    Power: B-rank
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Sword in Sheathe
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: The user with their weapon sheathed, inhales a deep breath added extra oxygen to their blood and channeling raiton energy through-out their body, then user then dashes forward at blinding speed enhanced by the raiton enegry and makes a single weapon strike at their target, usually followed by the user sheathing their sword again but not always.

    this technique enchances the users speed by +1 tier of speed and +1 advantage of coordination for the strike that occurs.

    Weaknesses: This technique requires user to A) have their sword sheathed and B) take a brief moment to collect themselves and breath, thus suffers under the pressure of relentless attacks, because if the user cannot find the space they need to activate the technique it's useless.

    Name: Thunder Breathing: Fifth Form - Heat Lightning
    Rank: C-rank
    Power: B-rank
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: ---
    Range: ---
    Speed: ---
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification:Secret
    Requirements: Sword in Sheathe
    Parent Technique: Thunder Breathing: First Form - Thunder Clap & Flash
    Hand Seals: ---
    Description: Much like the first form of the breathing technique this form is focused on a singular powerful slash, however this technique is more meant for an opponent that's already close range, but largely focuses on power and the speed of the swing over the user rushing in.

    By channeling Raiton into the blade, shoots the blade out of their sheathe, creating a powerful slash that is at not only +1 tier to strength, but also +1 Advantage to Coordination.  Furthermore the jutsu is so powerful that when it cuts through a jutsu the sheer force of the strike disperses any jutsu it overpowers.
    Weaknesses: Much like it's parent technique the jutsu requires the user to have their sword sheathed and and to take a deep breath to channel the energy within themselves before the swing, and as such makes it difficult to get off under a relentless assault.

    Approved!~

    Natsuki wrote:Name: Lightning Release: Quick Step
    Rank: C-rank
    Power: B-rank
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: ---
    Speed: ---
    Element: ---
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret - Aura Buff
    Requirements:---
    Parent Technique: ---
    Hand Seals: ---
    Description: A Simple technique where the user channels Raiton through their body in order to increase their speed. While this primarily increases their movement speed, it also helps their action speed as well, granting them a +1 tier to speed, and a +1 Advantage to coordination
    Weaknesses: ---

    This can't be a C Rank with B Rank power, B Rank boosts and zero drawbacks. Make it B Rank, or adjust everything to C Rank.


    Natsuki wrote:Name: Trick Clash
    Rank: C-rank
    Power: D-rank
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: ---
    Range: Self - Touch - 15m
    Speed: User's Coordination
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Kenjutsu - Taijutsu
    Classification: Seceret
    Requirements: ---
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: ---
    Description: An advanced form of Chakra flow where the user channels a surplus amount of Raiton into their sword, for the sole purpose of clashing with their opponent. When the user clashes weapons with their opponents and their opponent has a weapon capable of conducting electricity the raiton will flow into the other blade and surge shocking the other person causing them D-rank burns at all points of contact with the weapon, and forcing them to drop it.

    If the user has taijutsu, the user can simply cause this effect by grabbing the opponents weapon and flowing chakra into it.

    finally, the user can simply channel this water and it will spread across the water up to 15m  and it will apply the burns to all those in contact with the water.
    Weaknesses: Unfortunately because ninjutsu isn't used for this the user is also affected by the technique, while their own blade is safe as the outward flow of raiton is coming from their hand, any contact with the other blade will effect them. Likewise, the hand being used for the taijutsu portion of this technique is safe, but any other point of contact will effect the user. As for the water flow, any portion of the user touching the water receives the damage.

    This should have a coordination check for the opponent to be able to not drop the weapon, and likely a constitution check against the shock.


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