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    Nee-san's Creations

    Kim Chang-Min
    Kim Chang-Min


    Posts : 1141
    Join date : 2016-12-07

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Earth Release, Steel Release, Fuuninjutsu, Misc. Crafting, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu, Sensory, Kugutsu
    Class: X
    Ryo: 750,000 Ryo

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    Post by Kim Chang-Min Tue Oct 03, 2017 7:25 pm

    Name: Z Shades
    Rank: C
    Material: Tin | 500 ryo per 10 lbs - Enough to make 20 pairs of shades
    Description: A simple pair of shades tin shades that can be sewn to the sides of Nee-san's head harmlessly to prevent falling from movement during battle. The shades contain special lenses that are layered with simplistic Fuuninjutsu allowing the user to perceive and analyze movement in a more efficient manner. These shades grant a ++ to Perception while worn.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: 3 Days

    Name: Vaporizer
    Rank: E
    Material: idk like a small bit of wood and plastic? Let's just say its like 10 Ryo?
    Description: A simple vaporizer used to smoke stuff with. It has a simple fuuninjutsu that heats up smokable stuff.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: 1 Days

    Name: Z Gloves
    Rank: C
    Material: Small Leather Hide | 100 ryo ea. 1'x2'
    Description: A small green and black leather glove layered with Fuuinjutsu allowing the storage of up to 10 puppets inside that can be instantly summoned at will. The Fuuninjutsu also invigorates the user's hands with chakra allowing for an additional ++ to Coordination for the purpose of using one's hands.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: 3
    Rin Matoi
    Rin Matoi


    Posts : 1252
    Join date : 2016-12-07

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Bukijutsu | Weapon Crafting
    Class: D
    Ryo: 0

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    Post by Rin Matoi Wed Oct 04, 2017 8:12 pm

    Nee-san Tetsudashi wrote:Name: Z Shades
    Rank: C
    Material: Tin | 500 ryo per 10 lbs - Enough to make 20 pairs of shades
    Description: A simple pair of shades tin shades that can be sewn to the sides of Nee-san's head harmlessly to prevent falling from movement during battle. The shades contain special lenses that are layered with simplistic Fuuninjutsu allowing the user to perceive and analyze movement in a more efficient manner. These shades grant a ++ to Perception while worn.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: 3 Days

    Name: Vaporizer
    Rank: E
    Material: idk like a small bit of wood and plastic? Let's just say its like 10 Ryo?
    Description: A simple vaporizer used to smoke stuff with. It has a simple fuuninjutsu that heats up smokable stuff.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: 1 Days

    Name: Z Gloves
    Rank: C
    Material: Small Leather Hide | 100 ryo ea. 1'x2'
    Description: A small green and black leather glove layered with Fuuinjutsu allowing the storage of up to 10 puppets inside that can be instantly summoned at will. The Fuuninjutsu also invigorates the user's hands with chakra allowing for an additional ++ to Coordination for the purpose of using one's hands.
    Requirement:  N/A
    Crafting Time: 3

    These are all enchantments, not misc. crafts. If you still wish go register these use the enchantment template. It will also require Fuuinjutsu.
    Kim Chang-Min
    Kim Chang-Min


    Posts : 1141
    Join date : 2016-12-07

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Earth Release, Steel Release, Fuuninjutsu, Misc. Crafting, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu, Sensory, Kugutsu
    Class: X
    Ryo: 750,000 Ryo

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    Post by Kim Chang-Min Wed Oct 04, 2017 8:24 pm

    Name: Z Shades
    Rank: C
    Function: Passive
    Price: 20,000
    Description: A simple pair of shades tin shades that can be sewn to the sides of Nee-san's head via Steel Release chakra harmlessly to prevent falling from movement during battle. The shades contain special lenses that are layered with simplistic Fuuninjutsu allowing the user to perceive and analyze movement in a more efficient manner. This seal grants a ++ to Perception when activated.
    Charges: 15 uses

    Name: Vaporizer
    Rank: E
    Function: Passive
    Price: 20,000
    Description: (This is what the enchantment does.)
    Charges: (Posts or usages?)

    Name: Vaporizer
    Rank: E
    Function: Passive
    Price: 10 Ryo
    Description: A simple vaporizer used to smoke stuff with. It has a simple fuuninjutsu that heats up smokable stuff.
    Charges: Infinite

    Name: Z Gloves
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price: 20,000
    Description: A small green and black leather glove layered with Fuuinjutsu allowing the storage of up to 10 puppets inside that can be instantly summoned at will. The Fuuninjutsu also invigorates the user's hands with chakra allowing for an additional ++ to Coordination for the purpose of using one's hands when activated.
    Charges: 15 uses
    Rin Matoi
    Rin Matoi


    Posts : 1252
    Join date : 2016-12-07

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    Skills & Elements: Bukijutsu | Weapon Crafting
    Class: D
    Ryo: 0

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    Post by Rin Matoi Thu Oct 05, 2017 12:26 am

    Nee-san Tetsudashi wrote:Name: Z Shades
    Rank: C
    Function: Passive
    Price: 20,000
    Description: A simple pair of shades tin shades that can be sewn to the sides of Nee-san's head via Steel Release chakra harmlessly to prevent falling from movement during battle. The shades contain special lenses that are layered with simplistic Fuuninjutsu allowing the user to perceive and analyze movement in a more efficient manner. This seal grants a ++ to Perception when activated.
    Charges: 15 uses

    Name: Vaporizer
    Rank: E
    Function: Passive
    Price: 10 Ryo
    Description: A simple vaporizer used to smoke stuff with. It has a simple fuuninjutsu that heats up smokable stuff.
    Charges: Infinite

    B-rank is minimum for enchantments.

    Overall I'm generally against enchantments being used to grant stat boosts because:

    A) Enchantments are long in duration
    B) Have very little drawback
    C) Can easily be pieced together to grant boosts in all stats

    The only reason I could see myself approving an enchantment that provides stat boosts is if it makes perfect sense and has some sort of drawback. Using fuuinjutsu or chakra as a cheap excuse won't fly. If you want stat boosts, see: Chemistry.


    As for the vaporizer there's really no need to register that. Omit that part.


    Name: Z Gloves
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price: 20,000
    Description: A small green and black leather glove layered with Fuuinjutsu allowing the storage of up to 10 puppets inside that can be instantly summoned at will. The Fuuninjutsu also invigorates the user's hands with chakra allowing for an additional ++ to Coordination for the purpose of using one's hands when activated.
    Charges: 15 uses


    Same thing about stats as above.
    Kim Chang-Min
    Kim Chang-Min


    Posts : 1141
    Join date : 2016-12-07

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Earth Release, Steel Release, Fuuninjutsu, Misc. Crafting, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu, Sensory, Kugutsu
    Class: X
    Ryo: 750,000 Ryo

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    Post by Kim Chang-Min Mon Dec 25, 2017 5:36 am

    Chrysochlorous Secret Technique: Nano-Puppetry
    This set of creations actually encompasses puppet registrations, technique registrations, and misc crafting as the style spans a lot of distinct and different disciplines.


    Spoiler:
    Rin Matoi
    Rin Matoi


    Posts : 1252
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    Skills & Elements: Bukijutsu | Weapon Crafting
    Class: D
    Ryo: 0

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    Post by Rin Matoi Thu Dec 28, 2017 12:33 pm

    Nee-san Tetsudashi wrote:
    Chrysochlorous Secret Technique: Nano-Puppetry
    This set of creations actually encompasses puppet registrations, technique registrations, and misc crafting as the style spans a lot of distinct and different disciplines.


    Spoiler:



    Nano-Spools and Nano-Sentinels are items I will be against. Due to their highly diminutive size it will be very easy to abuse this. It would also not make sense for Neesan, the user, to appropriately control his creations due to their size. In the end it seems like a bootlegged, broken Magnet Release.


    I will allow the concept of Nano-Engineering, being able to break down materials and reshape/reconstruct them using the Iwagakure Kinjutsu. But essentially making puppets and manipulating them with nano-strings is a no-go.
    Makahshi Kereko
    Makahshi Kereko


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    Join date : 2017-09-13

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    Post by Makahshi Kereko Fri Dec 29, 2017 6:00 am

    Masuyo Kaede wrote:
    Nee-san Tetsudashi wrote:
    Chrysochlorous Secret Technique: Nano-Puppetry
    This set of creations actually encompasses puppet registrations, technique registrations, and misc crafting as the style spans a lot of distinct and different disciplines.


    Spoiler:



    Nano-Spools and Nano-Sentinels are items I will be against. Due to their highly diminutive size it will be very easy to abuse this. It would also not make sense for Neesan, the user, to appropriately control his creations due to their size. In the end it seems like a bootlegged, broken Magnet Release.


    I will allow the concept of Nano-Engineering, being able to break down materials and reshape/reconstruct them using the Iwagakure Kinjutsu. But essentially making puppets and manipulating them with nano-strings is a no-go.

    Oof Marone! Could I just make it ninjutsu as opposed to puppetry? And just have the controlled via thought as opposed to microscopic chakra strings?


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    "Makahshi Kereko. But to you my name is Pit, and you're not talking your way out of me"

    Strength: C
    Constitution: C
    Stamina: A
    Speed: B
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: B
    Rin Matoi
    Rin Matoi


    Posts : 1252
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    Skills & Elements: Bukijutsu | Weapon Crafting
    Class: D
    Ryo: 0

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    Post by Rin Matoi Sat Dec 30, 2017 9:13 pm

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