Some Shit

Approved:

Also the references to being able to eat honeycombs and have them explode to effect the target might be better if you made that a separate technique. I'd prefer it if you focused this technique just on the absorption aspects and then you can make a separate technique for how the bees process and expel the chakra (via explosive honey attacks or by honey products that can be ingested by the user). If you want to keep that process in this same technique it needs to be a lot clearer and more defined (the size of the blast radius, how much sap is produced how big the honeycomb itself is etc etc)

honeycomb spheres 2 inches in diameter

honey spheres to explode with the same effect and definition as Dark flame except in a spherical burst rather then as a directed cone.

Explosive range is determined at 2 meters times rank, for example an A rank would have a range of 10meters

Shinoskay wrote:Name: Dark Yin Convergence
   Rank: D/C/B/A
   Power: -
   Activation Cost: -
   Upkeep Cost: -
   Range:
   Speed: -
   Element: Yin/Dark Release
   Skill: Bloodline
   Classification: Bloodline
   Requirements: Dark Release/Hidan Bee summoning
   Parent Technique: -
   Hand Seals: -
   Description: "
Using a combination of Dark Release and Bee Summoning one is able to infuse the devouring effects of Dark release into the users bees while also reshaping what is devoured to new and unique effect.

At D rank, allows Constructed Bee's to act as a conduit for devouring following the same mechanics as Inhaling maw, or highest known bloodline absorbing/devouring learned, except for using the bee's as the conduit. Chakra devoured in this way can either be infused into the bees or turned into either a sap or honeycomb spheres 2 inches in diameter. may devour or absorb as appropriate, per inhaling maw, and then the bees, sap, or honeycomb spheres may be consumed or absorbed to restore chakra as if done so using inhaling maw or highest dark release used to absorb the chakra. While bees are absorbing techniques, the user is capped at D-Rank Speed and C rank Coordination.

Once one learns Dark Flame, they may advance this technique to C rank where in addition to Dark Flames normal effects one is now also able to direct infused bees or honey spheres to explode with the same effect and definition as Dark flame except in a spherical burst rather then as a directed cone. Sap works per normal Dark flame but is meant to be used through techniques.  At this stage, bees may absorb from half a meter away. Explosive range is determined at 2 meters times rank, for example an A rank would have a range of 10meters. Honeycombs and sap may now be used from Dark Release users own seals or mouth via chakra devoured by the same without needing to through Bees. While bees are absorbing techniques, the user is capped at C-Rank Speed and C rank coordination

One may advance this technique to B rank when they learn Chimera and at B rank Sap, infused bee, or Honeycomb sphere chakra may be used, as conduits, for the jutsu it came from to target applicable targets, as if one was using Chimera dark release normally. at this stage, bees may may literally eat other chakra constructs(must bite to do so) and anything made, influenced, or sustained by chakra(including puppets) to absorb and convert it into chakra in addition to how Chimera normally works. To use the jutsu as intended, either smear it on the target, eat it or have target eat it, or have the bee 'attack' the target in an applicable manner, means, or method. Dark Release user may now make Sap or Honey Comb Spheres from own Chakra pool without the need to devour foreign chakra. While bees are absorbing techniques, the user is capped at C-Rank Speed and C rank coordination

One may advance this thechnique to A rank by knowing Any A rank Hidan Technique and the previous rank of this technique. At this rank Kamizuru constructs may absorb chakra equal to their numbers, making each one committed to the action infused (forming an infused swarm), per post while moving if needed, as well as Kikachu chakra absorption skills act as only one rank higher. can can now absorb/devour up to 1 meters away. At this Rank, each Hidan Bee in an infused swarm can count as .1 chakra, or 1 chakra if infused, and used as chakra for jutsu for directing Hidan Bee's. If an infused bee is holding the chakra for 1 whole jutsu rather then been a part of an infused swarm then it may be expended for the amount of chakra of the jutsu rather then just 1 chakra. While bees are absorbing techniques, the user is capped at B-Rank Speed but no longer capped in coordination.

In all ranks, Kamizuru/Yin/Bloodline may incorporate this technique where applicable, any Kamizuru/Yin/Bloodline Technique may be used per highest qualifying rank of this technique. Kamizuru/Yin jutsu may not absorb Jutsu above B rank, if absorbed Katon would have been enough to destroy absorbing Kamizuru/Yin jutsu then the absorbing entity will be destroyed upon absorbing.



   Weaknesses:
Per Hidan bee summon:
The Aburame clan has the advantage against the Kamizuru if wielding Kikachu, Kikachu chakra absorption skills act as two ranks higher when used against any bee skill.

Fire release does +1 damage to bee's

Per Dark Release:
Dark release user must have the appropriate fighting style.
Bees will take a post, minimum, to absorb and they must be stationary.

Shinoskay wrote:Name: Puppet Vision
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: E
Upkeep Cost: .1
Range: Chakra thread range
Speed: N/A
Element: Kugutsu
Skill: Kugutsu
Classification: Kugutsu
Requirements: Kugutsu
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: -
Description: by connecting a chakra thread to the back of an artificial eye, in a manner like an optic nerve, one is able to use chakra to pick up light the same way a normal eye does to see through said artificial eye. this tech does not create the eye.
Weaknesses: In order to see through this eye, the user must close one of their actual eyes.

Name: Chakra Thread Suppression
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Self, threads
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Sensory/Kugutsu
Classification: Kugutsu
Requirements: Chakra Suppression/Chakra Threads
Parent Technique: Sensing Technique/Chakra Suppression/Chakra Threads
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to suppress their or their Chakra threads to the point that it becomes so fine it is invisible to the unassisted eye. That is to say, without a means to sense chakra beyond standard vision, you will not see the chakra threads. In Addition, kugutsu jutsu up to C rank will not break chakra suppression do to the ability to suppress its presence.
Weaknesses: Offensive uses of chakra threads requires too much power too be suppressed, as such if you use chakra threads, specifically chakra threads, to physically harm someone then they will break suppression and both be detectable as well as visible. So long as you are not causing damage, though, with chakra threads then it will remain suppressed. While in use, changes 'The strings can be cut by any chakra based or infused weapon or technique C Rank or greater' into 'The strings can be cut by any chakra based or infused weapon or technique D Rank or greater'

Shinoskay wrote:Name: Ninja Leap
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: 0
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: -
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Tree climbing/Surface walking
Hand Seals: None
Description: By applying the revers of tree climbing or surface walking as one jumps or lands, effectively repelling the earth, one's jump and landing is improved. Chakra aids the jump to spring one up with the additional momentum and speed to add 30 meters to ones jump as well as as they land the repelling force will mitigate and aid in rotating the force of motion for 30 meters a second worth of force.
Weaknesses: -

Shinoskay wrote:Name: Transparency jutsu
Rank: D-rank
Power: D-rank
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: .1
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification:
Requirements:
Parent Technique:
Hand Seals: None
Description: A simple jutsu first invented by a perv in his beginning years as a shinobi. "Renders the user invisible,,,, ...allows the user to spy on others without being noticed...." As described, will conceal the users appearance from sight using a cloak of chakra
Weaknesses:

Name: Surface Hiding Technique
Rank: B-rank
Power: -
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: 5 per post only while actively moving around
Range: Self/touch
Speed: equal to users coordination -2
Element: -
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification:
Requirements: Chakra Suppression/transparency jutsu
Parent Technique: Chakra Suppression/transparency jutsu
Hand Seals: None
Description: "the user can phase through their surroundings, allowing them to quickly avoid an incoming attack and can travel undetected as well." Allows one to move into a surface area, so long as it is not made by someone's jutsu unless that person permits you (Cannot bypass chakra-based substances/barriers unless creator allows you), Cannot phase through moving aspects of their surroundings (i.e weapons). Can use chakra suppression while not moving since no cost. Phasing occurs at coord -2 tiers in speed capped at C speed.
Weaknesses:

Name: Puppeteers Taekwondo
Rank: D
Power: C
Activation Cost:.5
Upkeep Cost: .1
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Element: None
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification:
Requirements: Taijutsu/surface walking or tree climbing
Parent Technique: none
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A puppeteer uses their hands for chakra threads and so the hands are often dedicated, for a puppeteer the best option for taijutsu is using the legs in combination with chakra threads. because a Puppeteers focus in close quarters combat is to lure a foe or to just get away, this style focuses on endurance, defense, and speed. Using weak, weaker then normal, amounts of chakra in the feet one can switch between pivoting and sliding to mitigate attacks, to solidifying ones stance or reinforcing a short attack... all to mitigate damage on ones self while maximizing focus and allowing for sudden attacks with some power behind the attack.

D - Rank: Speed +, Perception +
When Striking: Strength gains + and coordination gets --
When not striking: Constitution gains +
Weaknesses: N/A

Name: Expanded Chakra Suppression
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: .5 per ally per post
Range: Self/allies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Sensory
Classification: Open
Requirements: Chakra Suppression
Parent Technique: Sensing Technique, Chakra Suppression
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: exactly like its parent technique except for now the user may suppress both their and their allies chakra up to a number of people equal to the number of ranks the user has above D rank.
Weaknesses: same as parent technique

Name: Beecorder
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: n/a
Upkeep Cost: n/a
Range: Kamizuru bee
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Kamizuru
Classification: Kamizuru
Requirements: Kamizuru
Parent Technique: Apis Cerana
Hand Seals: Kamizuru Clan seal
Description: One of the flaws of using a bee to scout is that information gathered is limited to what a bee can perceive and understanding, as well as what can be communicated, and finally by what can be understood from the bee. Rather then play a game of musical chairs trying to figure out if the bee was chased by a bird or seen by an enemy ninja, one can instead have the bee use its unique chakra construct nature combined with its bee physiology one can cause the bee to record the vibrations of sound and then play it back by using a coordinated combinations of vibrations between its wings, legs, thorax, and antenna to produce the recorded sound.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Acoustic Telephone
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: E
Upkeep Cost: .1
Range: Chakra thread range
Speed: N/A
Element: Kugutsu
Skill: Kugutsu
Classification: Kugutsu
Requirements: Kugutsu, Puppet Vision
Parent Technique: Puppet Vision
Hand Seals: -
Description: By attaching a chakra thread between your ear and someone else's and using that as a conduit for sound vibrations, you may share each others hearing through that ear as well as to talk to, and hear, each other directly as if whispering directly into each others ears. Since this passes the vibrations directly into each others ear, the sound sent will not be heard by anyone else around the person receiving the sound.
Weaknesses: -

Shinoskay wrote:Typo error, id just put it how its suppose to be in my approved list but I dont know if this typo changes the way you thought it worked. I am going to put the approved version in and use it but id like this typo fix version to be approved so I can put this in instead:

Name: Expanded Chakra Suppression
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: .5 per ally per post
Range: Self/allies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Sensory
Classification: Open
Requirements: Chakra Suppression
Parent Technique: Sensing Technique, Chakra Suppression
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: exactly like its parent technique except for now the user may suppress both their and their allies chakra up to a number of people equal to the number of ranks above D rank coordination.
Weaknesses: same as parent technique


I meant for this to have an additional line but adhd struck again and the line was overlooked. "taking with you up to an additionally ally or person sized object per rank above D rank coordination". Again going to put and used the approved version, I am fine with not having this jutsu edited to include that line.

Shinoskay wrote:Name: Surface Hiding Technique
Rank: B-rank
Power: -
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: 5 per post only while actively moving around
Range: Self/touch
Speed: equal to users coordination -2
Element: -
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification:
Requirements: Chakra Suppression/transparency jutsu
Parent Technique: Chakra Suppression/transparency jutsu
Hand Seals: None
Description: "the user can phase through their surroundings, allowing them to quickly avoid an incoming attack and can travel undetected as well." Allows one to move into a surface area, taking with you up to an additionally ally or person sized object per rank above D rank coordination, so long as it is not made by someone's jutsu unless that person permits you (Cannot bypass chakra-based substances/barriers unless creator allows you), Cannot phase through moving aspects of their surroundings (i.e weapons). Can use chakra suppression while not moving since no cost. Phasing occurs at coord -2 tiers in speed capped at C speed.
Weaknesses:

Shinoskay wrote:Insect Name: Scout Bee
Rank: C
Power: C
Constitution: D +
Speed: C Rank
Strength: E
Perception: B
Intelligence: D (but can be semi directed by creator)
Coordination: D
Range: 100m from user, Sensory per jutsu
Cost: .5 chakra per bee, up to 10 bee's may be made per use of this jutsu
Skill: Sensory Ninjutsu
Requirements: 100 EXP, Apis Cerana
Abilities: Unlike the Basic Apis Cerana, this is a scout bee designed to be able to both travel farther and to perceive better. When not using Sensory technique these bee's may passively sense for up to 3 posts with a range of 300m before they become a basic Apis Cerana but they may be given chakra to enhance the time they may use Sensory, they will be able to use sensory technique so long as they have the chakra to pay for it. These bee's may go beyond the 100 range, each post they are outside of that range they lose 1 chakra and will dissolve when they run out, they may send information back to the user up to 500m and will do so immediately upon destruction if such occurs.
Drawbacks:
The Aburame clan has the advantage against the Kamizuru if wielding Kikachu, Kikachu chakra absorption skills act as two ranks higher when used against any bee skill.

Fire release does +1 damage to bee's

Shinoskay wrote:Insect Name: Messenger bee
Rank: C
Power: C
Constitution: D
Speed: A
Strength: E
Perception: B
Intelligence: D
Coordination: B
Range: 100m from user, Sensory per jutsu
Cost: 10
Skill: Ninjutsu
Requirements: 100 EXP, Apis Cerana
Abilities: One of the few jutsu and construct's that will last outside of the thread it was made in, This bee is starts off as being made as a scroll that one can write into before it then turns into a bee to fly off towards the intended recipient. It is solely intent on doing all it can to get to its recipient, it's travel times are halfed, and upon reaching its recipient it will turn into the scroll and at this point it will no longer last outside of the thread it turns into a scroll during. That is to say, once it is received it will just be a jutsu made scroll that dissolves at thread end.

In order to direct the bee, one must know the recipients chakra signature, or have the dna of that person. They send the bee to a general sub forum where it will begin tracking for that person and it will either stay there for up to 30 days before finally dissolving if it is unable to find a person with that chakra signature or dna.
Drawbacks:
The Aburame clan has the advantage against the Kamizuru if wielding Kikachu, Kikachu chakra absorption skills act as two ranks higher when used against any bee skill.

Fire release does +1 damage to bee's

Shinoskay wrote:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Armour
http://narutofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release_Chakra_Mode
http://narutofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release_Armor

Shinoskay wrote:
Name: Water Cloak armor
Rank: C
Power: -
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: E
Range: self/touch
Speed: -
Element: Suiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description:
May expell a small amount of chakra which will act as a coating of water, or actual water, over their torso or over any armor they'd already be wearing. If the user is not wearing any armor, it will temporarily grant a boost of 1 tier their constitution, grant an extra rank of quality to the worn armor. May use on an ally. Decreases the power of attacks against target by your coordination stat as the water chakra pushes the offensive attempts away and increases taijutsu by the same for the same reason. If the water armor is moved 30 meters away, or is released, it will dissipate, can be used on up number of targets equal to number of ranks in coordination stat.

Shinoskay wrote:Name: Spider Weaving threads
rank: C
Cost:
Range: 2 m.
Speed: Coordination
Element: Non
Skill: Kugutsu
Classification: Kugutsu
Requirement: Chakra Threads, Spider Silk
Parent Technique: Chakra Threads
Handseals: -
Description: Having trade in the use of creating and manipulating chakra threads to manipulate objects, one is able to learn to use spider threads like chakra threads. These spider threads work all the same way as chakra threads except because they require an actual physical medium, so long as you start the thread with the spider silk it is considered to have been with you enough time to be attuned with your chakra and so can be manipulated like threads so long as you are touching a part of it. Any Chakra thread technique can be used through spider silk manipulated in this way, The drawback for chakra threads is overwritten from whatever it normally takes to break into 'The strings can be cut by any chakra based or infused weapon or technique one Rank higher or greater then rank of spider silk/spider silk item' and any technique that would normally lower this from the parent jutsu instead read as 'The strings can be cut by any chakra based or infused weapon or technique same Rank or greater then rank of spider silk/spider silk item'.

http://narutofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Chakra_Flow

Shinoskay wrote:
I would like bees wax clone to be changed to what I have written below.



Name:Bee's wax Clone
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 1 mile
Speed: One rank lower than the users
Element: N/A
Skill: N/A
Classification: Clan technique
Requirements: Kamizuru Clan
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Clan Specific
Description: works much like shadow clone except for more how stated. By using the clans ability to make was and constucts as a medium, the user can create one or more clones of themselves. they start without chakra but if they have a way to get it then they are limited only by whatever limits the original has. While the clones can perform techniques, . The clones can also be used as medium to perform other Clan/Bloodline, none chakra, or element-less techniques. The clones can be created anywhere within a 25 m. range of the user, and can go up to a mile from the user. Clones can appear to bleed but major wounds will cause them to dissolve.

Shinoskay wrote:Name: The Authority of Regency of Count Volseig
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 1 chakra or 1/4 ounce of blood
Upkeep Cost:
1/4 ounce of blood every number of rounds per summon rules
Range: 0-5 meters
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kuchiyose
Classification: Kuchiyose
Requirements: Regency of Count Volseig
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description:
By grasping, holding, placing your palm on, or commanding an object; One can infuse the object with energy resembling the magic the count used to put a soul into animated objects. This act calls a soul loyal to the count to temporarily enter that to be animated and even if that thing is destroyed the soul will return to where it came from. The rank of the animated object becomes up to the equivalent of the summoners Stamina rank in summon rank without any techniques but it can do things logical for the object it animates (Candles spitting fire for instance) and its stats are determine by the item and are equal to the summons rank where it isnt determined by item.

Shinoskay wrote:Name: Lightning Flash Creation Summon
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost:
3 chakra or a drop of blood to summon, 10 chakra to 'de-summon' to send item back. A drop of blood to mark item for summon
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range:
Per Summon/0-1 meter
De-summoning sends back to where summoned from
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Kuchiyose
Classification: Open
Requirements: Kuchiyose
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Allows you to summon blood marked objects to you, as well as to send them back to where they were summoned from.
Weaknesses: N/A

I am a bit confused here. Where is the spider silk coming from? Why does it override the weakness stated in the Chakra Strings technique? I'm not inclined to have spider silk do that unless it is a custom-made spider silk which would need to be created via the Chemistry system.