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    Post by Shin~ Sun Aug 26, 2018 10:48 pm

    Name: Shin Yuki
    Age: 20
    Gender: Male
    Rank: Jounin
    Village: Kirigakure
    Bloodline: N/A

    Experience: 4850/5000

    Ryo: 25k

    Items:
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    Skills:
    - Ninjutsu
    - Fuinjutsu

    Elements:
    - Water
    - Wind
    - Ice

    Jutsu:

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    A-rank
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    B-rank
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    C-rank
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    D-rank
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    Stats:

    Strength: E
    Constitution: D
    Stamina: B
    Speed: A
    Coordination: B
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: B

    Unique Abilities:

    One-handed Seals: Because to his high levels of chakra control Shin is able to form hand seals using only a single hand, although while doing so he loses 1 tier of Coordination for the hand forming the seals.

    Wealth of Experience: Due to everything that Shin has been through in the past he has quite a bit more experience than one would expect from someone of his age and rank. This takes the form of 1850 exp boost during creation, all of which must be paid back.

    Wealth of Knowledge: Due to his position as heir to the Yuki Clan Shin has access to far more knowledge than a normal shinobi, resulting in him being able to learn techniques up to 1 rank higher than what his class and intelligence would allow. The downside is that because he has access to this knowledge people expect more from him than they do from others. Shin must earn 10% more exp than others in order to advance in class

    Ninjutsu Mastery: Due to a mixture of Shin’s high levels of chakra control and all of the time that he has spent practicing his Ninjutsu skills he is able to perform any Ninjutsu technique for chakra equal to 1 rank below the technique used. This however does have a drawback, as he has become so accustomed to using Ninjutsu that any Fuinjutsu techniques that he uses costs 1 rank higher than it usually would.

    Impenetrable Ice: The Ice of the Yuki clan was well known throughout the nations for its versatility, strength and durability, but the durability of the Ice was still quite inferior to the steel of the Tetsudashi Clan. Shin has spent years honing his Ice Release, and in these years he had discovered a way to increase the durability of his Ice to previously unseen levels. For a total of 4 posts Shin is able to increase the durability of his Ice Release techniques by one tier. When the 4 posts are over this ability goes on a cooldown, and during that cooldown the durability of Shin’s Ice Release techniques are reduced by 1 tier.

    Overcharge: All techniques generally follow one simple concept, the stronger the jutsu the more chakra it takes to use them. Thus Shin felt it stands to reason that if one simply added more chakra into a technique than was required, said technique would become more powerful. Shin is able to increase the power of any technique that he knows by 1 rank, although doing so has the drawback of raising the cost of said technique by 1 rank.

    Forced Activation: Very similar in concept to Overcharge, Shin is able to use any Ninjutsu that he knows how to perform without the need of hand seals, but this has the downside of increasing the cost of said technique by 1 rank. It should be noted that due to how this ability works, it is impossible to use in tandem with Overcharge.


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    • Physical: 0
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 2


    Renown: 3000

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    Post by Shin~ Sun Aug 26, 2018 10:59 pm

    Update Type: General

    Information: Changing one of the Unique Abilities I started with

    Old UA

    Wealth of Knowledge: Due to his position as heir to the Yuki Clan Shin has access to far more knowledge than a normal shinobi, resulting in him being able to learn Ninjutsu up to 1 rank higher than what his class would allow. The downside is that due to how complex these techniques are he is unable to truly understand how to perform them perfectly, and as such the cost of the techniques learnt this way are increased by 1 rank

    New UA

    Wealth of Knowledge: Due to his position as heir to the Yuki Clan Shin has access to far more knowledge than a normal shinobi, resulting in him being able to learn techniques up to 1 rank higher than what his class and intelligence would allow. The downside is that because he has access to this knowledge people expect more from him than they do from others. Shin must earn 10% more exp than others in order to advance in class

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    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Katon, Raiton, Doton, Ijutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu & Fuuinjutsu
    Class: A
    Ryo: 1,105,125

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    Post by Copycat Mon Aug 27, 2018 2:29 am

    Shin wrote:Update Type: General

    Information: Changing one of the Unique Abilities I started with

    Old UA

    Wealth of Knowledge: Due to his position as heir to the Yuki Clan Shin has access to far more knowledge than a normal shinobi, resulting in him being able to learn Ninjutsu up to 1 rank higher than what his class would allow. The downside is that due to how complex these techniques are he is unable to truly understand how to perform them perfectly, and as such the cost of the techniques learnt this way are increased by 1 rank

    New UA

    Wealth of Knowledge: Due to his position as heir to the Yuki Clan Shin has access to far more knowledge than a normal shinobi, resulting in him being able to learn techniques up to 1 rank higher than what his class and intelligence would allow. The downside is that because he has access to this knowledge people expect more from him than they do from others. Shin must earn 10% more exp than others in order to advance in class

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    Not sure if you're allowed to change your UA after you've already been approved but it hasn't been long since then. Approved for the time being but don't take my word for it.


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    Post by Shin~ Sat Sep 01, 2018 1:59 am

    Update Type: General

    Information: Changing one of my skills from Genjutsu to Fuinjutsu (which I have been told I can do by a member of staff due to the two week grace period). This change also means I need to modify the drawback of one of my UA's.

    Old UA

    Ninjutsu Mastery: Due to a mixture of Shin’s high levels of chakra control and all of the time that he has spent practicing his Ninjutsu skills he is able to perform any Ninjutsu technique for chakra equal to 1 rank below the technique used. This however does have a drawback, as he has become so accustomed to using Ninjutsu that any Genjutsu techniques that he uses end up costing chakra equal to 1 rank higher than the rank of the technique itself

    New UA

    Ninjutsu Mastery: Due to a mixture of Shin’s high levels of chakra control and all of the time that he has spent practicing his Ninjutsu skills he is able to perform any Ninjutsu technique for chakra equal to 1 rank below the technique used. This however does have a drawback, as he has become so accustomed to using Ninjutsu that any Fuinjutsu techniques that he uses end up costing chakra equal to 1 rank higher than the rank of the technique itself

    Link: N/A
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    Post by Ryuko Sat Sep 01, 2018 9:42 am

    Shin wrote:Update Type: General

    Information: Changing one of my skills from Genjutsu to Fuinjutsu (which I have been told I can do by a member of staff due to the two week grace period). This change also means I need to modify the drawback of one of my UA's.

    Old UA

    Ninjutsu Mastery: Due to a mixture of Shin’s high levels of chakra control and all of the time that he has spent practicing his Ninjutsu skills he is able to perform any Ninjutsu technique for chakra equal to 1 rank below the technique used. This however does have a drawback, as he has become so accustomed to using Ninjutsu that any Genjutsu techniques that he uses end up costing chakra equal to 1 rank higher than the rank of the technique itself

    New UA

    Ninjutsu Mastery: Due to a mixture of Shin’s high levels of chakra control and all of the time that he has spent practicing his Ninjutsu skills he is able to perform any Ninjutsu technique for chakra equal to 1 rank below the technique used. This however does have a drawback, as he has become so accustomed to using Ninjutsu that any Fuinjutsu techniques that he uses end up costing chakra equal to 1 rank higher than the rank of the technique itself

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    Sorry but Denied. The drawback has to be a skill you already have in your possession and you don't have Fuinjutsu so you can't switch to it.


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    Constitution: B
    Stamina: A-> A++ (Arch Angel's Tiara)
    Speed: B
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: A
    Perception: B
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    Post by Shin~ Sat Sep 01, 2018 12:00 pm

    Maybe read the first portion of the information section?
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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sat Sep 01, 2018 12:16 pm

    This is fine but keep in mind you will be paying an extra ranks worth of chakra with respect to the cost of the technique not its rank. So if a technique is ranked B but costs an A rank amount of chakra, you will be paying an S Rank amount of chakra. Just keep that in mind. Once you confirm you are aware of that this will be approved.


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    Post by Shin~ Sun Sep 02, 2018 3:09 am

    I am aware of that, and I will change the wording a little to actually reflect that (as my current wording is quite bad and doesn't reflect that)
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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sun Sep 02, 2018 3:26 am

    Shin wrote:Update Type: General

    Information: Changing one of my skills from Genjutsu to Fuinjutsu (which I have been told I can do by a member of staff due to the two week grace period). This change also means I need to modify the drawback of one of my UA's.

    Old UA

    Ninjutsu Mastery: Due to a mixture of Shin’s high levels of chakra control and all of the time that he has spent practicing his Ninjutsu skills he is able to perform any Ninjutsu technique for chakra equal to 1 rank below the technique used. This however does have a drawback, as he has become so accustomed to using Ninjutsu that any Genjutsu techniques that he uses end up costing chakra equal to 1 rank higher than the rank of the technique itself

    New UA

    Ninjutsu Mastery: Due to a mixture of Shin’s high levels of chakra control and all of the time that he has spent practicing his Ninjutsu skills he is able to perform any Ninjutsu technique for chakra equal to 1 rank below the technique used. This however does have a drawback, as he has become so accustomed to using Ninjutsu that any Fuinjutsu techniques that he uses end up costing chakra equal to 1 rank higher than the rank of the technique itself

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