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    Post by Tōri Sun Dec 10, 2023 2:21 pm

    Name: Tōri Senju | 千手一族 東里
    Age: 27
    Gender: Male
    Village: Konohagakure
    Rank: Jōnin
    Title:

    Clan: Senju
    Bloodline: Senju | Uzumaki
    • Strong Lifeforce Level 2 | 250 exp
    • Adamantine Chains | 500 exp
    • Mokuton | 1000 exp

    Element(s): Mokuton | Doton | Suiton
    Skill(s): Fūinjutsu | Ninjutsu (Mokuton) | Kuchiyose | Bukijutsu

    Stats
    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C → B++ (Uzumaki + Senju)
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: C
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: C


    Unique Abilities:

    Senju Clan Armor: Tōri’s mom commissioned a set of armor to commemorate his promotion to Jōnin that will be worked on with the help of his mother alongside the armorer (custom B-grade armor with a custom A-rank enchantment placed by Tōri). The payment is covered by Tōri’s mom, but for her time she places an even greater debt on him than the armor’s cost
    Maternal Price: Tōri’s mother does not offer her time freely, demanding double the price of the commissioned piece as payment for her help. This amount must be paid in full before any Ryo can be earned in any way

    All Tangled Up: Hair jutsu receive a rank increase in potency, not to exceed A-rank
    Brittle Boulders: Defensive Doton jutsu receive a rank decrease in potency to no lower than E-rank

    Gentle Waves: Non-offensive Suiton jutsu receive a one rank cost reduction, no effect above A-rank
    Crashing Waves: Offensive Suiton jutsu receive a one rank cost increase, no effect below D-rank

    Look, One Hand!: Can perform one-handed seals
    Slow Solo: One-handed seals are performed with a one rank reduction to Coordination

    Double Inheritance: Receives 1450 extra exp to spend at character creation
    Twice the Responsibility: Must pay off the 1450 exp dept before exp can be earned properly

    Appearance:
    A well-shaven beard points downward from the dominating, bright-red head of hair that sits atop Tōri’s head, equally red eyes stare out with a calculating coldness to them. Not wanting to expose his obnoxiously loud hair color (as he puts it) Tōri tends to wear a black bandana over his hair with a large black scarf fitted over his flak jacket when on duty to mute the flashy color any amount. While off duty the only real change is the doffing of the bandana and flak jacket, leaving behind some random ensemble of clothes beneath his usual black scarf. Standing at 5’10” Tōri has an unassuming frame with his light build, not appearing to pose any serious physical threat to any real contenders.


    Tōri Senju Uzu_pi10


    History:
    Tōri was born to shinobi from two villages, the result of an inexplicable event from a mission gone terribly wrong. Susumi Senju and Yuuichi Uzumaki met on intersecting missions from their respective villages in the Land of Iron, set up by a third party and surrounded by a horde of samurai mercenaries after engaging. As numbers swiftly dropped on both sides the two enemies were forced into a corner by the new assailants, pivoting back-to-back and fighting their way out together. Both sustained heavy injuries, but due to their inherited fortitudes they persevered and slowly recovered while watching one another while in pursuit by the remaining mercenary gang. It was during this time of hiding and running that the two grew close, close enough to forget their hidden village affiliations for a time and conceive Tōri.

    Once recovered, the two struggled to face the reality they found themselves in with Susumi showing signs of being pregnant. Their time in hiding had them push the thought away until it was right before them, leading to a hasty decision of leaving their villages and settling somewhere far from their homes as a family. This dream remained as such, for shortly after his birth Tōri lost his father to the relentless mercenaries who finally caught up with them. Yuuichi was cut down in his sleep in an attack at night, flinging Susumi into a bloody rage as she protected her newborn. Cradling Tōri in a mokuton sling, she drenched many branches with the assailant's blood until both mother and child were as red as the newborn's tuft of hair. Stories still circulate about the Bloody Willow in the Land of Iron from that night, now twisted into more fiction than fact.

    Susumi and the baby returned to Konoha afterwards, giving a detailed report of the failed mission and how Tōri came to be. While Susumi was reprimanded, the village had an opportunity to use this new development to access the secrets of an outside clan. All in all there wasn’t more than a slap on the wrist for her actions and Susumi was able to resume duty shortly after, as long as Tōri was groomed into a model shinobi. Thus paved the path for Tōri’s childhood, prepared and laid out before he ever had a real thought or spoken word.

    Thankfully Tōri had a knack for chakra control that he displayed early on as well as a tremendous reserve of chakra, an inheritance from his parents' short-lived love. This served well but also created additional pressure from his mother to perform well, who was no saint or paragon of patience herself in parenting. She did her best with Tōri, though motherhood was never a path she sought to take and her unpreparedness was quite apparent. As an active Jōnin she stuck to what she knew and went about training Tōri from a young age. A rigorous and demanding routine was established and grown over time, though when out on missions Tōri took every opportunity to rebel.

    His rebelling started rather pathetically, skipping out on a number of reps when conditioning alone in the house and staying up and eating in bed. This quickly escalated once he met like-minded individuals in class. This all began shortly after joining the shinobi academy, a topic he was quite sore on and argued often with his mother about. Deep down he knew that it was what he wanted to do, but he hated being told every detail of his life and wanted something real he could control. This aversion to the academy was quelled after his first week, enjoying the opportunity to excel and show off in front of anyone who wasn’t his mother was something he found extraordinarily satisfying. In particular he found a knack for the sealing arts and pursued it with a fiery passion. His friction with Susumi shifted onto other topics, never truly dying as he continued to make excuses for his resentment towards her.

    At the age of nine he graduated the academy, now a full-fledged shinobi he was assigned a team and sensei who he would be training with instead of his mother. Or at least that’s what he thought, for in-between missions Susumi had a new form of training for him; unlocking his potential as a Senju and accessing the same mokuton chakra she could. There was no instant gratification with this process, it was something that would take him many years to absorb and access. What did happen was the erosion of his ill feelings towards his mother, realizing there were far worse childhoods to be had and other wisdoms that come with the slow crawl of age.

    For several years Tōri and his team grew and learned together in harmony, until one mission where they were ambushed and their sensei taken out right before them. It was in this moment of heightened emotion that he first accessed mokuton chakra, creating an opening for them to escape with the newly awakened power. It should have been a moment of triumph, one he always imagined with his team or mother, but now was tainted with this bloodied event. After successfully returning after the failed mission a funeral was held for their fallen comrade. In a moment of vulnerability he told his teammates about the history of his parents and his own twin heritage that he carried after the funeral. One stormed off, having personal vendettas against the mist village while the other embraced him and accepted him for who he is.

    This moment hardened Tōri, knowing fully well beforehand the possibility of rejection but to experience it from one so close made him cautious of all relationships and their fragility. They received a replacement teacher, but never really got their mojo back as a team. It was in this turbulent state that they entered the chunnin exams, an experience that they barely survived and both his teammates quit being shinobi after as they just couldn’t hack it. This felt like a whole other abandonment after his teammate ignored him from his confession, leaving him feeling alone and unsure. Thankfully his new sensei took him under his wing and focused on his sealing arts as a form of distraction, there was no time for running thoughts when dealing with complex seals.

    Building his confidence back up he attended the next chunnin exams with a newfound zeal, having progressed significantly since last time and passing with flying colors at the age of fifteen. Wearing his new flak jacket with pride Tōri strove to make his new mentor proud with the new responsibility he now had. Command suited Tōri, he always had an eye for tactics as he would often be the one to come up with plans in his old team. During these many years as a chunnin Tōri grew into a full adult, growing out of his gawky and awkward frame and sporting a trimmed beard upon his face.

    In his twenties he finally learned to access his father’s bloodline, a moment that overwhelmed him with emotion in a way he hadn’t expected. His father had left him a scroll his mother had recently given him outlining the training Uzumaki traditionally took to access this deeper power that he dove into with much enthusiasm. He kept this newfound skill a secret as he continued to train, eyes set on reaching the summit that was being promoted to Jōnin. It was known to all within the shinobi village that the kage was the strongest of them all, but in his eyes Susumi had always had a strength above them. To reach the same heights as her would be to conquer his perceivable world, leaving an exciting and wondrous unknown to go forth into.

    After honing his mind and body after several more years Tōri petitioned for the promotion and was able to display his polished skills and finally reached the same rank as his mother. As a reward she gifted him a new set of armor, one they would build with their powers combined alongside a talented armorer.

    Personality:
    Tōri is an incredibly cautious individual, a trait that serves him well in the line of duty but is a constant source of annoyance to himself in social situations. An area that seemingly ignores this core part of his being is with food, trying all manner of foods despite having a weak constitution for spices. While born the pickiest of eaters, Tōri finally grew out of this childish behavior and began striving to try new things to make up for the lost time. Unfortunately he also has a determination to recreate the meals he eats at restaurants back at home, as he’s completely tone-deaf in terms of tasting his food and usually results in a mangled mess of ingredients. While the Land of Fire isn’t known for its cold winters or climate, Tōri finds an odd satisfaction in bundling up for cold and wet weather. Whenever the fiery land begins to cool Tōri finds himself taking more walks and spending an inordinate amount of time outside, well past what others would find comfortable in such a season. Most people would consider Tōri a serious person, though while off the clock he tries to lighten up and has even been known to throw some seriously terrible puns around.

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    Post by Hanabi Uchiha Mon Dec 11, 2023 11:59 am

    Previous approval:

    REMOVING APPROVAL.

    Character violates the following,

    1. You need to have passed an Activity Check (AC) to make a Jounin character
    2. You need to have passed an AC to have a dual KKG character.

    In total, you would need to have passed 2 AC's in order to have thus character valid. Please make any adjustments towards thus character if need be or keep it on the side until then.


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    Gender: Female
    Rank: Jounin A
    Village: Konoha
    Titles: The Golden Flower of Konoha, Dragon Queen

    Renown: 9,200

    Experience: 
    Total - 4798
    unused exp - 8

    Ryo:  335,000

    Stats:
    Strength: D
    Constitution: D (C)
    Stamina: B
    Speed: B+ (A+)
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: C (B with Sharingan)

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    Post by Tōri Mon Dec 11, 2023 12:46 pm

    I shall bide my time and re-emerge in March Very Happy


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    Post by Tōri Fri Mar 08, 2024 3:18 pm

    I hath returned, registering once more!

    Tōri Senju Giphy

    And by back I clearly mean once this activity check is over later in the month. 'cause I can totally read and got that far in the ac post.

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    Name: Tōri Senju | 千手一族 東里
    Age: 27
    Gender: Male
    Village: Konohagakure
    Rank: Jōnin
    Title:

    Clan: Senju
    Bloodline: Senju | Uzumaki
    • Strong Lifeforce Level 2 | 250 exp
    • Adamantine Chains | 500 exp
    • Mokuton | 1000 exp

    Element(s): Mokuton | Doton | Suiton | Raiton (3 skill points)
    Skill(s): Fūinjutsu | Ninjutsu (Mokuton) (2 skill points) (holding onto 1 skill point)

    Stats
    • Strength: D (150)
    • Constitution: C (450)
    • Stamina: C → B++ (Uzumaki + Senju) (450)
    • Speed: D (150)
    • Coordination: C (450)
    • Intelligence: C (450)
    • Perception: C (450)


    Unique Abilities:

    Senju Clan Armor: Tōri’s mom commissioned a set of armor to commemorate his promotion to Jōnin that will be worked on with the help of his mother alongside the armorer (custom A-grade armor). The payment is covered by Tōri’s mom, but for her time she demands the price of the commissioned piece as payment for her help. This amount must be paid in full before any Ryo can be earned in any way

    All Tangled Up: Hair jutsu receive a one rank cost reduction. Defensive Doton jutsu receive a one rank cost increase

    Coarse Fibers: Hair jutsu receive a one rank increase in potency. Defensive Doton jutsu receive a one rank decrease in potency.

    Gentle Waves: Non-offensive Suiton jutsu receive a one rank cost reduction. Offensive Suiton jutsu receive a one rank cost increase

    Herald of the Oasis: Suiton jutsu used on land receive a one rank increase in potency. Offensive Doton jutsu are reduced in potency by one rank.

    In Concert: Raiton jutsu that are used while in or with Suiton jutsu or natural water receive a one rank cost reduction. Raiton jutsu when used out of or without Suiton jutsu or natural water receive a one rank cost increase

    Bookworm: Has access to learning jutsu of one rank higher. WC for training jutsu increased by 50

    Look, One Hand: Can perform one-handed seals. One-handed seals are performed with a one rank reduction to Coordination

    Double Inheritance: Receives 750 extra exp to spend at character creation. Must pay off 375 exp dept before exp can be earned properly due to the amount being 50% or less to the next class

    Appearance:
    A well-shaven beard points downward from the dominating, bright-red head of hair that sits atop Tōri’s head that waterfalls down to his back, equally red eyes stare out with a calculating watchfulness to them. His long hair is tied in the back with a small tuft of hair left unbound in the front that leaves him with some long bangs. Tōri tends to wear a kimono when on and off duty, the only real difference being his flak jacket when on mission. With his new set of armor Tōri tends to swap the flak jacket with the shinobi armor when on missions. Standing at 5’10” Tōri has an unassuming frame with his light build, not appearing to pose any serious physical threat.


    Tōri Senju Ai_tor12


    History:
    Tōri was born to shinobi from two villages, the result of an inexplicable event from a mission gone terribly wrong. Susumi Senju and Yuuichi Uzumaki met on intersecting missions from their respective villages in the Land of Iron, set up by a third party and surrounded by a horde of samurai mercenaries after engaging. As numbers swiftly dropped on both sides the two enemies were forced into a corner by the new assailants, pivoting back-to-back and fighting their way out together. Both sustained heavy injuries, but due to their inherited fortitudes they persevered and slowly recovered while watching one another while in pursuit by the remaining mercenary gang. It was during this time of hiding and running that the two grew close, close enough to forget their hidden village affiliations for a time and conceive Tōri.

    Once recovered, the two struggled to face the reality they found themselves in with Susumi showing signs of being pregnant. Their time in hiding had them push the thought away until it was right before them, leading to a hasty decision of leaving their villages and settling somewhere far from their homes as a family. This dream remained as such, for shortly after his birth Tōri lost his father to the relentless mercenaries who finally caught up with them. Yuuichi was cut down in his sleep in an attack at night, flinging Susumi into a bloody rage as she protected her newborn. Cradling Tōri in a mokuton sling, she drenched many branches with the assailant's blood until both mother and child were as red as the newborn's tuft of hair. Stories still circulate about the Bloody Willow in the Land of Iron from that night, now twisted into more fiction than fact.

    Susumi and the baby returned to Konoha afterwards, giving a detailed report of the failed mission and how Tōri came to be. While Susumi was reprimanded, the village had an opportunity to use this new development to access the secrets of an outside clan. All in all there wasn’t more than a slap on the wrist for her actions and Susumi was able to resume duty shortly after, as long as Tōri was groomed into a model shinobi. Thus paved the path for Tōri’s childhood, prepared and laid out before he ever had a real thought or spoken word.

    Thankfully Tōri had a knack for chakra control that he displayed early on as well as a tremendous reserve of chakra, an inheritance from his parents' short-lived love. This served well but also created additional pressure from his mother to perform well, who was no saint or paragon of patience herself in parenting. She did her best with Tōri, though motherhood was never a path she sought to take and her unpreparedness was quite apparent. As an active Jōnin she stuck to what she knew and went about training Tōri from a young age. A rigorous and demanding routine was established and grown over time, though when out on missions Tōri took every opportunity to rebel.

    His rebelling started rather pathetically, skipping out on a number of reps when conditioning alone in the house and staying up and eating in bed. This quickly escalated once he met like-minded individuals in class. This all began shortly after joining the shinobi academy, a topic he was quite sore on and argued often with his mother about. Deep down he knew that it was what he wanted to do, but he hated being told every detail of his life and wanted something real he could control. This aversion to the academy was quelled after his first week, enjoying the opportunity to excel and show off in front of anyone who wasn’t his mother was something he found extraordinarily satisfying. In particular he found a knack for the sealing arts and pursued it with a fiery passion. His friction with Susumi shifted onto other topics, never truly dying as he continued to make excuses for his resentment towards her.

    At the age of nine he graduated the academy, now a full-fledged shinobi he was assigned a team and sensei who he would be training with instead of his mother. Or at least that’s what he thought, for in-between missions Susumi had a new form of training for him; unlocking his potential as a Senju and accessing the same mokuton chakra she could. There was no instant gratification with this process, it was something that would take him many years to absorb and access. What did happen was the erosion of his ill feelings towards his mother, realizing there were far worse childhoods to be had and other wisdoms that come with the slow crawl of age.

    For several years Tōri and his team grew and learned together in harmony, until one mission where they were ambushed and their sensei taken out right before them. It was in this moment of heightened emotion that he first accessed mokuton chakra, creating an opening for them to escape with the newly awakened power. It should have been a moment of triumph, one he always imagined with his team or mother, but now was tainted with this bloodied event. After successfully returning after the failed mission a funeral was held for their fallen comrade. In a moment of vulnerability he told his teammates about the history of his parents and his own twin heritage that he carried after the funeral. One stormed off, having personal vendettas against the mist village while the other embraced him and accepted him for who he is.

    This moment hardened Tōri, knowing fully well beforehand the possibility of rejection but to experience it from one so close made him cautious of all relationships and their fragility. They received a replacement teacher, but never really got their mojo back as a team. It was in this turbulent state that they entered the chunnin exams, an experience that they barely survived and both his teammates quit being shinobi after as they just couldn’t hack it. This felt like a whole other abandonment after his teammate ignored him from his confession, leaving him feeling alone and unsure. Thankfully his new sensei took him under his wing and focused on his sealing arts as a form of distraction, there was no time for running thoughts when dealing with complex seals.

    Building his confidence back up he attended the next chunnin exams with a newfound zeal, having progressed significantly since last time and passing with flying colors at the age of fifteen. Wearing his new flak jacket with pride Tōri strove to make his new mentor proud with the new responsibility he now had. Command suited Tōri, he always had an eye for tactics as he would often be the one to come up with plans in his old team. During these many years as a chunnin Tōri grew into a full adult, growing out of his gawky and awkward frame and sporting a trimmed beard upon his face.

    In his twenties he finally learned to access his father’s bloodline, a moment that overwhelmed him with emotion in a way he hadn’t expected. His father had left him a scroll his mother had recently given him outlining the training Uzumaki traditionally took to access this deeper power that he dove into with much enthusiasm. He kept this newfound skill a secret as he continued to train, eyes set on reaching the summit that was being promoted to Jōnin. It was known to all within the shinobi village that the kage was the strongest of them all, but in his eyes Susumi had always had a strength above them. To reach the same heights as her would be to conquer his perceivable world, leaving an exciting and wondrous unknown to go forth into.

    After honing his mind and body after several more years Tōri petitioned for the promotion and was able to display his polished skills and finally reached the same rank as his mother. As a reward she gifted him a new set of armor, one they would build with their powers combined alongside a talented armorer.

    Personality:
    Tōri is an incredibly cautious individual, a trait that serves him well in the line of duty but is a constant source of annoyance to himself in social situations. An area that seemingly ignores this core part of his being is with food, trying all manner of foods despite having a weak constitution for spices. While born the pickiest of eaters, Tōri finally grew out of this childish behavior and began striving to try new things to make up for the lost time. Unfortunately he also has a determination to recreate the meals he eats at restaurants back at home, as he’s completely tone-deaf in terms of tasting his food and usually results in a mangled mess of ingredients. While the Land of Fire isn’t known for its cold winters or climate, Tōri finds an odd satisfaction in bundling up for cold and wet weather. Whenever the fiery land begins to cool Tōri finds himself taking more walks and spending an inordinate amount of time outside, well past what others would find comfortable in such a season. Most people would consider Tōri a serious person, though while off the clock he tries to lighten up and has even been known to throw some seriously terrible puns around.

    Roleplay Sample:
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    Post by Airi Ohara Fri Mar 08, 2024 3:27 pm

    7 more days. Resubmit after the AC is over in 7 days. Seeya then o/


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    Post by Tōri Sat Mar 16, 2024 8:02 am

    This time for sure ~

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    Character Name: Tōri Senju
    Character Age: 27
    Character Sex: Male
    Character Appearance:
    A well-shaven beard points downward from the dominating, bright-red head of hair that sits atop Tōri’s head that waterfalls down to his back, equally red eyes stare out with a calculating watchfulness to them. His long hair is tied in the back with a small tuft of hair left unbound in the front that leaves him with some long bangs. Tōri tends to wear a kimono when on and off duty, the only real difference being his flak jacket when on mission. Tōri tends to don the traditional flak jacket when on missions, preferring more comfortable attire when at the village. Standing at 5’10” Tōri has an unassuming frame with his light build, not appearing to pose any serious physical threat.

    Tōri Senju Tori_p11


    Character Personality:
    Tōri is an incredibly cautious individual, a trait that serves him well in the line of duty but is a constant source of annoyance to himself in social situations. An area that seemingly ignores this core part of his being is with food, trying all manner of foods despite having a weak constitution for spices. While born the pickiest of eaters, Tōri finally grew out of this childish behavior and began striving to try new things to make up for the lost time. Unfortunately he also has a determination to recreate the meals he eats at restaurants back at home, as he’s completely tone-deaf in terms of tasting his food and usually results in a mangled mess of ingredients. While the Land of Fire isn’t known for its cold winters or climate, Tōri finds an odd satisfaction in bundling up for cold and wet weather. Whenever the fiery land begins to cool Tōri finds himself taking more walks and spending an inordinate amount of time outside, well past what others would find comfortable in such a season. Most people would consider Tōri a serious person, though while off the clock he tries to lighten up and has even been known to throw some seriously terrible puns around.
    Character History:
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    Roleplay Sample:
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    **Affiliation Information**
    Starting Village:  Konohagakure
    Character's Rank: Jōnin
    Character's Title: -

    **Combat Information
    Character's Clan: Senju
    Character's Bloodline: Senju | Uzumaki
    Character's Skills: Ninjutsu (Mokuton) | Fūinjutsu
    Character's Elements: Mokuton | Suiton | Doton | Raiton
    Character's Unique Abilities:

    Look, One Hand: Can perform one-handed seals. One-handed seals are performed with a one rank reduction to Coordination

    Double Inheritance: Receives 1100 extra exp to spend at character creation. Must pay off 1100 exp dept before spendable exp can be earned at all

    **Stats**
    Strength: D (150 exp)
    Constitution: D (150 exp)
    Stamina: B → A++ (Uzumaki + Senju) (950 exp)
    Speed: C (450 exp)
    Coordination: D (150 exp)
    Intelligence: C (450 exp)
    Perception: C (450 exp)

    **Other EXP Expenditures**
    • Mokuton | 1000 exp
    • Strong Lifeforce Level 3 | 500 exp
    • Adamantine Chains | 500 exp


    Last edited by Tōri on Sun Mar 17, 2024 4:03 pm; edited 3 times in total


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    Post by Son'Rei Sat Mar 16, 2024 11:57 pm

    Alright, so as a Starting B-Class you have 6 skills points.

    1 goes to the Uzumaki Clan
    1 goes to a base element of Mokuton (Suiton or Doton)

    These 2 points are required, the other 4 points can go to the choices you have (Nin, Fuuin, other element of Mokuton, Raiton) but you wont have a skill point left over to save for later.

    Hair jutsu isn't a category that you decrease, you can however make it Non-elemental as hair techs would fall under that category.

    The decrease would need to be all Doton not just defensive.

    Same with herald of the oasis, it would have to be all Doton not just offensive. You can only have 1 decrease Doton in this way.

    Bookworm: we no longer allow UAs that increases the rank of tech you can learn as it infringes upon the bonus that high intelligence offer. So this one will be a no.

    Fix these things and we will take another look.


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    Post by Tōri Sun Mar 17, 2024 9:01 am

    Alrighty, should be all fixed up then! Thanks for the assist Very Happy I decided to just remove the troublesome UAs, swap Doton for the Uzumaki skill point allocation and nabbed Kuchiyose to not have any left over.


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    Post by Son'Rei Sun Mar 17, 2024 11:05 am

    Tōri wrote:Alrighty, should be all fixed up then! Thanks for the assist Very Happy I decided to just remove the troublesome UAs, swap Doton for the Uzumaki skill point allocation and nabbed Kuchiyose to not have any left over.

    Unfortunately without doton you won't have access to Mokuton as you have to have both base elements to have the advanced element so you will either have to have doton or reallocate the 1k exp you spent on Mokuton


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    Post by Tōri Sun Mar 17, 2024 4:04 pm

    Yeah that makes sense lol, got 'er fixed up again. Swapped Kuchi for Doton to patch that error up.


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    Tōri wrote:This time for sure ~

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    Character Name: Tōri Senju
    Character Age: 27
    Character Sex: Male
    Character Appearance:
    A well-shaven beard points downward from the dominating, bright-red head of hair that sits atop Tōri’s head that waterfalls down to his back, equally red eyes stare out with a calculating watchfulness to them. His long hair is tied in the back with a small tuft of hair left unbound in the front that leaves him with some long bangs. Tōri tends to wear a kimono when on and off duty, the only real difference being his flak jacket when on mission. Tōri tends to don the traditional flak jacket when on missions, preferring more comfortable attire when at the village. Standing at 5’10” Tōri has an unassuming frame with his light build, not appearing to pose any serious physical threat.

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    Character Personality:
    Tōri is an incredibly cautious individual, a trait that serves him well in the line of duty but is a constant source of annoyance to himself in social situations. An area that seemingly ignores this core part of his being is with food, trying all manner of foods despite having a weak constitution for spices. While born the pickiest of eaters, Tōri finally grew out of this childish behavior and began striving to try new things to make up for the lost time. Unfortunately he also has a determination to recreate the meals he eats at restaurants back at home, as he’s completely tone-deaf in terms of tasting his food and usually results in a mangled mess of ingredients. While the Land of Fire isn’t known for its cold winters or climate, Tōri finds an odd satisfaction in bundling up for cold and wet weather. Whenever the fiery land begins to cool Tōri finds himself taking more walks and spending an inordinate amount of time outside, well past what others would find comfortable in such a season. Most people would consider Tōri a serious person, though while off the clock he tries to lighten up and has even been known to throw some seriously terrible puns around.
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    **Affiliation Information**
    Starting Village:  Konohagakure
    Character's Rank: Jōnin
    Character's Title: -

    **Combat Information
    Character's Clan: Senju
    Character's Bloodline: Senju | Uzumaki
    Character's Skills: Ninjutsu (Mokuton) | Fūinjutsu
    Character's Elements: Mokuton | Suiton | Doton | Raiton
    Character's Unique Abilities:

    Look, One Hand: Can perform one-handed seals. One-handed seals are performed with a one rank reduction to Coordination

    Double Inheritance: Receives 1100 extra exp to spend at character creation. Must pay off 1100 exp dept before spendable exp can be earned at all

    **Stats**
    Strength: D (150 exp)
    Constitution: D (150 exp)
    Stamina: B → A++ (Uzumaki + Senju) (950 exp)
    Speed: C (450 exp)
    Coordination: D (150 exp)
    Intelligence: C (450 exp)
    Perception: C (450 exp)

    **Other EXP Expenditures**
    • Mokuton | 1000 exp
    • Strong Lifeforce Level 3 | 500 exp
    • Adamantine Chains | 500 exp


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