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    Touka Hozuki: Custom Techs

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    Post by Touka Hozuki Sun Jan 08, 2023 6:48 pm

    Water Fang:

    Ebbing Wave:

    Ebbing Wave Break:


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    Post by Airi Ohara Mon Jan 09, 2023 3:00 am

    Touka Hozuki wrote:
    Water Fang:
    C Ranks may only boost a maximum of +1 tier total or a total of +++ (3 advantages). Please fix this. Upkeep cost is too high. Upkeep for a C Rank is 3. Classification is usually either Open or Secret. Open can be learned by others (with your permission) and Secret are your specific jutsu (which you can teach)

    Touka Hozuki wrote:
    Ebbing Wave:
    The speed stated (the ++ to user's speed) doesn't usually account for attacks at Melee Range. You could place in the jutsu, itself, that the user gains ++ to their Speed until the jutsu ends. For now, change the Speed: to N/A. Classification is usually either "Open" or "Secret" usually. It's obviously a custom since it's here. Can just truncate the weakness to "Can't be used the same post that Water Fang is activated" to alleviate confusion.

    Touka Hozuki wrote:
    Ebbing Wave Break:
    What do you mean by Speed being "Same Rank?" If you mean User's Speed, please place it as "User's Speed" instead. Same thing with Classification either "Open" or "Secret". Same note about weakness as well.


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    Post by Touka Hozuki Mon Jan 09, 2023 6:35 am

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    Post by Airi Ohara Mon Jan 09, 2023 4:27 pm

    Touka Hozuki wrote:
    Water Fang:

    Ebbing Wave:

    Ebbing Wave Break:
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