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    Post by Fro Mon Dec 12, 2022 11:17 pm

    Name:Explosion seal
    Rank: B
    Power: E-B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: C
    Element:N/A
    Skill:N/A
    Requirements: Fuuin
    Parent Technique: CDS- ETS
    Hand Seals: Snake-boar-monkey
    Description: The user can store (5) chakra per post on a seal that’s already been placed on a surface or to another person it can store a maximum of (35) per seal if you over fill the seal it will explode automatically. If the seal explodes from over filling it then the range increases by an additional 5 feet. The seal cannot be over filled from a foe only from the caster. The compressed chakra stays until the user releases the seal or over fills it and a explosion in a 3 foot radius in all directions. The explosion spreads even downwards destroying the seal in the process the explosion is strong enough to be able to blow back  enemies “C rank str and lower.”

    Weaknesses: the user is considered open during the casting time and will take a rank up on damage when hit. The seal itself does not have chakra in it the chakra starts being stored the post after the seal has been placed by either stealing it from a foe or feeding it some of your own. The seal destroys itself once activated or over filled.


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    Post by Masaru Thu Dec 15, 2022 1:56 pm

    Fro wrote:Name:Explosion seal
    Rank: B
    Power: E-B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: C
    Element:N/A
    Skill:N/A
    Requirements: Fuuin
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Snake-boar-monkey
    Description: The user stores chakra into a seal that’s already been placed to a maximum of (35) per seal once the chakra is stored it compresses until the user releases the seal and a explosion wherever the seal originated outwards being able to blow back strong foes.

    Weaknesses: the user is considered open during the casting time and will take a rank up on damage when hit. The seal itself does not have chakra on it but must have someone put chakra in it either by stealing it and feeding it to the seal somehow or putting it themselves once placedAnd

    So I like where you are going, it looks as though you are trying to cross the chakra drain seal with the explosive tag seal. If that is the case both techs should be listed as the parent tech. Additionally that would mean that you would need both techs in order to learn this. That aside the chakra drain needs more definition for instance the Chakra drain seal states it's 5 chakra per post, so stating something along those lines would work. 5 chakra per post to a max of 35 which is when the detonation happens. This also needs better description of the blast such as radius damage etc. Finally, it seems that your weaknesses cut off with an and... I am not sure if that is a typo or if you intended to add more to it.


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    Post by Masaru Thu Dec 15, 2022 4:08 pm

    Fro wrote:Name:Explosion seal
    Rank: B
    Power: E-B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: C
    Element:N/A
    Skill:N/A
    Requirements: Fuuin
    Parent Technique: CDS- ETS
    Hand Seals: Snake-boar-monkey
    Description: The user can store (5) chakra per post on a seal that’s already been placed on a surface or to another person it can store a maximum of (35) per seal if you over fill the seal it will explode automatically. If the seal explodes from over filling it then the range increases by an additional 5 feet. The seal cannot be over filled from a foe only from the caster. The compressed chakra stays until the user releases the seal or over fills it and a explosion in a 3 foot radius in all directions. The explosion spreads even downwards destroying the seal in the process the explosion is strong enough to be able to blow back  enemies “C rank str and lower.”

    Weaknesses: the user is considered open during the casting time and will take a rank up on damage when hit. The seal itself does not have chakra in it the chakra starts being stored the post after the seal has been placed by either stealing it from a foe or feeding it some of your own. The seal destroys itself once activated or over filled.

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    Post by Fro Mon Jan 09, 2023 8:22 pm

    Name: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot
    Rank:A
    Power:A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost:N/A
    Range:10 meters
    Speed:A
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    classification: open
    Requirements: Doton
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: snake ox rat
    Description: This technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out 15x10 feet spikes which attack the target from four separate directions in an attempt to skewer the opponent making it harder to evade.
    Weaknesses:N/A


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    Post by Airi Ohara Mon Jan 09, 2023 8:41 pm

    Fro wrote:Name:skewer
    Rank:C
    Power:C
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost:N/A
    Range:30 meters
    Speed:C
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    classification: open
    Requirements: Doton
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Bird - Ram
    Description: This technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out 15x10 feet spikes which attack the target from four separate directions in an attempt to skewer the opponent making it harder to evade.
    Weaknesses:N/A
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    Post by Fro Mon Jan 09, 2023 9:15 pm

    Name:Earth Release: Practice Brick Technique (Enclosing Wall)
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep: 5
    Element:Doton
    Classification: open
    Range:2 meter’s in front of the user
    Speed: C
    Handseals: Ram → Tiger → Snake → Dog
    Description:The user creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence, manipulating pre-existing ground to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. Though weak, the walls can serve as a makeshift blockade when formed by several users, slowing down large, powerful attacks. The walls are 20 meters wide, 5 meters thick, the wall Can go up to a height of 100 meters. Wall hardness is C rank

    OOC:


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    Post by Airi Ohara Mon Jan 09, 2023 9:41 pm

    Fro wrote:Name:Earth Release: Practice Brick Technique (Enclosing Wall)
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep: 5
    Element:Doton
    Classification: open
    Range:Can go up to a height of 100 meters
    Speed: B
    Handseals: Ram → Tiger → Snake → Dog
    Description:The user creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence, manipulating pre-existing ground to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. Though weak, the walls can serve as a makeshift blockade when formed by several users, slowing down large, powerful attacks. The walls are 20 meters wide.

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    Please place the height of the wall in the description. I need you to put how far you can place it in the range. Like between you and how far away can the wall be placed. Reduce Speed to C. Add "wall hardness is C Rank"


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    Post by Fro Mon Jan 09, 2023 10:04 pm

    Name: Earth corridor
    Rank:A
    Power:A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep cost:10
    Range:50 meters
    Speed:A
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Classification:learn from fro
    Requirements: preexisting earth and hands on ground after hand seals are complete
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Bird - Ram- rat - dog
    Description: A technique that causes the surrounding earth to rise up over any person within a 60 meter diameter area, creating a dome that is 40 meters high over whoever is caught in it. This dome, whether open or close will have a toughness of A. The user may have have 2 variants of the dome:
    > Open: There is a 3 meter diameter opening at the top so those outside of the dome create a choke point and can fling jutsu inside of the dome
    > Closed: The dome completely encloses itself, trapping all within inside of the dome.

    Weaknesses:the user must keep hands on the ground until the dome is complete or the jutsu falls apart


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    Post by Airi Ohara Wed Jan 11, 2023 12:59 am

    Fro wrote:Name:Earth Release: Practice Brick Technique (Enclosing Wall)
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep: 5
    Element:Doton
    Classification: open
    Range:in front of the user
    Speed: C
    Handseals: Ram → Tiger → Snake → Dog
    Description:The user creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence, manipulating pre-existing ground to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. Though weak, the walls can serve as a makeshift blockade when formed by several users, slowing down large, powerful attacks. The walls are 20 meters wide, 10 meters thick, the wall Can go up to a height of 100 meters. Wall hardness is C rank

    OOC:
    You need to state how far away from the user it can be created. I need some kind of range. 0-X meters, etc.
    I also don't know about it being 10 meters thick. That's almost 30 feet thick. That's a bit excessive for a C Rank. 3 meters thick maybe.

    Fro wrote:Name: Earth corridor
    Rank:A
    Power:A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep cost:10
    Range:50 meters
    Speed:A
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Requirements: preexisting earth and hands on ground after hand seals are complete
    classification: iwa exclusive
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Bird - Ram- rat - dog
    Description: A technique that causes the surrounding earth to rise up over a target, creating a cavern. The user can leave

    - an opening to allow attacks to enter through the exit to cut off any way of the target to avoid them being hit
    - or close it up completely to prevent escape. Dimensions are a height of 60 meters and 40 meters in width with a toughness of A.

    Weaknesses:the user must keep hands on the ground until the dome is complete or the jutsu falls apart
    So this cannot be made into a village exclusive, but can be made into an Open jutsu. Also, state how big the opening would be.


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    Post by Airi Ohara Wed Jan 11, 2023 6:45 pm

    Fro wrote:Name:Earth Release: Practice Brick Technique (Enclosing Wall)
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep: 5
    Element:Doton
    Classification: open
    Range:2 meter’s in front of the user
    Speed: C
    Handseals: Ram → Tiger → Snake → Dog
    Description:The user creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence, manipulating pre-existing ground to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. Though weak, the walls can serve as a makeshift blockade when formed by several users, slowing down large, powerful attacks. The walls are 20 meters wide, 5 meters thick, the wall Can go up to a height of 100 meters. Wall hardness is C rank

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    Fro wrote:Name: Earth corridor
    Rank:A
    Power:A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep cost:10
    Range:50 meters
    Speed:A
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Classification:learn from fro
    Requirements: preexisting earth and hands on ground after hand seals are complete
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Bird - Ram- rat - dog
    Description: A technique that causes the surrounding earth to rise up over any person within a 60 meter diameter area, creating a dome that is 40 meters high over whoever is caught in it. This dome, whether open or close will have a toughness of A. The user may have have 2 variants of the dome:
    > Open: There is a 3 meter diameter opening at the top so those outside of the dome create a choke point and can fling jutsu inside of the dome
    > Closed: The dome completely encloses itself, trapping all within inside of the dome.

    Weaknesses:the user must keep hands on the ground until the dome is complete or the jutsu falls apart

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    Post by Airi Ohara Thu Jan 12, 2023 4:19 am

    Airi Ohara wrote:
    Fro wrote:Name:Earth Release: Practice Brick Technique (Enclosing Wall)
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep: 5
    Element:Doton
    Classification: open
    Range:2 meter’s in front of the user
    Speed: C
    Handseals: Ram → Tiger → Snake → Dog
    Description:The user creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence, manipulating pre-existing ground to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. Though weak, the walls can serve as a makeshift blockade when formed by several users, slowing down large, powerful attacks. The walls are 20 meters wide, 5 meters thick, the wall Can go up to a height of 100 meters. Wall hardness is C rank

    OOC:

    Fro wrote:Name: Earth corridor
    Rank:A
    Power:A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep cost:10
    Range:50 meters
    Speed:A
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Classification:learn from fro
    Requirements: preexisting earth and hands on ground after hand seals are complete
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Bird - Ram- rat - dog
    Description: A technique that causes the surrounding earth to rise up over any person within a 60 meter diameter area, creating a dome that is 40 meters high over whoever is caught in it. This dome, whether open or close will have a toughness of A. The user may have have 2 variants of the dome:
    > Open: There is a 3 meter diameter opening at the top so those outside of the dome create a choke point and can fling jutsu inside of the dome
    > Closed: The dome completely encloses itself, trapping all within inside of the dome.

    Weaknesses:the user must keep hands on the ground until the dome is complete or the jutsu falls apart

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    Post by Fro Mon Jan 16, 2023 8:22 pm

    Name: earth style muddy wave
    Rank: B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost:5
    Range:20 meters
    Speed:B
    Element:Doton
    Skill:ninjutsu
    Requirements:N/A
    classification: Closed
    dimensions:15 meter wide only reaches 20 meters
    Parent Technique:N/A
    Hand Seals:Rat-Dog-snake-boar
    Description:when the user completes the hand signs they fill their mouth with Doton element once release it turns into a mud wave that washes over anything in-front if used in a mountain area it creates a rock slide and damage to the surrounding area’s. The user can decide to keep paying an extra upkeep to continue the attack dealing one rank lower in damage to anyone caught inside the waves.
    Weaknesses:

    Name:earth drilling spears
    Rank:B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost:10
    Upkeep cost:0
    Range:30 meters
    Speed:B
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Requirements:N/A
    classification:Closed
    dimensions:5 meter wide spike and 3 meter long
    Parent Technique: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot for Earth Drilling Spears
    Hand Seals:Bird - Ram - boar
    Description: This technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out just like the parent technique spikes which attack the target from four separate directions in an attempt to drill into the opponent making it harder to evade. Spinning at 1,500 rpm this can cause a heavy damage to anything it comes in contact with. If it hits a target head on the spin force would selerate anything weaker then it’s power rank in two. If the target isn’t hit directly the target or object to get flung in a random location unless they have strength to fight agents the rotation.
    Weaknesses:


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    Post by Airi Ohara Mon Jan 16, 2023 9:11 pm

    Fro wrote:Name: earth style muddy wave
    Rank: B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost:5
    Range:20 meters
    Speed:B
    Element:Doton
    Skill:ninjutsu
    Requirements:N/A
    classification: Closed
    dimensions:15 meter wide only reaches 20 meters
    Parent Technique:N/A
    Hand Seals:Rat-Dog-snake-boar
    Description:when the user completes the hand signs they fill their mouth with Doton element once release it turns into a mud wave that washes over anything in-front if used in a mountain area it creates a rock slide and damage to the surrounding area’s.
    Weaknesses:
    What's the upkeep cost for?

    Fro wrote:Name:earth drilling spears
    Rank:B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost:10
    Upkeep cost:0
    Range:30 meters
    Speed:B
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Requirements:N/A
    classification:Closed
    dimensions:5 meter wide spike and 3 meter long
    Parent Technique:Skewer
    Hand Seals:Bird - Ram - boar
    Description: This technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out just like the parent technique spikes which attack the target from four separate directions in an attempt to drill into the opponent making it harder to evade. Spinning at 1,500 rpm this can cause a heavy damage to anything it comes in contact with. If it hits a target head on the spin force would separate anything weaker then it’s rank and if touched the target would be hit with a strong force.
    Weaknesses:unless it hits a target or object directly it doesn’t do anything besides bludgeoning damage. And the user suffers a -1 cord penalty
    "If it hits a target head on the spin force would separate anything weaker then it’s rank and if touched the target would be hit with a strong force."
    What does this mean? Can you reword and clarify.
    The weakness also needs to be changed as missing shouldn't still deal damage. It either hits or it doesn't. You can remove the -1 Coordination penalty from the weakness as well.


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    Post by Airi Ohara Mon Jan 16, 2023 9:47 pm

    Fro wrote:Name:skewer
    Rank:C
    Power:C
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost:N/A
    Range:30 meters
    Speed:C
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    classification: open
    Requirements: Doton
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Bird - Ram
    Description: This technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out 15x10 feet spikes which attack the target from four separate directions in an attempt to skewer the opponent making it harder to evade.
    Weaknesses:N/A
    So, new information has been brought up and this jutsu is very similar to Earth Release: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot. The staff would like you to:
    1) Rename the jutsu to Earth Release: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot
    2) Maintain Classification to Open
    3) Change the Handseals to: Snake - Ox - Rat
    4) Change the range to (0-10m)
    All those changes are brought up on the wiki. I would also suggest copy/pasting the description from the Wiki article linked to you.

    Fro wrote:Name: earth style muddy wave
    Rank: B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost:5
    Range:20 meters
    Speed:B
    Element:Doton
    Skill:ninjutsu
    Requirements:N/A
    classification: Closed
    dimensions:15 meter wide only reaches 20 meters
    Parent Technique:N/A
    Hand Seals:Rat-Dog-snake-boar
    Description:when the user completes the hand signs they fill their mouth with Doton element once release it turns into a mud wave that washes over anything in-front if used in a mountain area it creates a rock slide and damage to the surrounding area’s. The user can decide to keep paying an extra upkeep to continue the attack.
    Weaknesses:

    Name:earth drilling spears
    Rank:B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost:10
    Upkeep cost:0
    Range:30 meters
    Speed:B
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Requirements:N/A
    classification:Closed
    dimensions:5 meter wide spike and 3 meter long
    Parent Technique:Skewer
    Hand Seals:Bird - Ram - boar
    Description: This technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out just like the parent technique spikes which attack the target from four separate directions in an attempt to drill into the opponent making it harder to evade. Spinning at 1,500 rpm this can cause a heavy damage to anything it comes in contact with. If it hits a target head on the spin force would selerate anything weaker then it’s power rank in two. If the target isn’t hit directly the target or object to get flung in a random location unless they have strength to fight agents the rotation.
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    And change the Parent Technique to Earth Release: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot for Earth Drilling Spears


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    Post by Airi Ohara Mon Jan 16, 2023 11:42 pm

    Fro wrote:Name: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot
    Rank:A
    Power:A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost:N/A
    Range:10 meters
    Speed:A
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    classification: open
    Requirements: Doton
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: snake ox rat
    Description: This technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out 15x10 feet spikes which attack the target from four separate directions in an attempt to skewer the opponent making it harder to evade.
    Weaknesses:N/A

    Fro wrote:Name: earth style muddy wave
    Rank: B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep cost:5
    Range:20 meters
    Speed:B
    Element:Doton
    Skill:ninjutsu
    Requirements:N/A
    classification: Closed
    dimensions:15 meter wide only reaches 20 meters
    Parent Technique:N/A
    Hand Seals:Rat-Dog-snake-boar
    Description:when the user completes the hand signs they fill their mouth with Doton element once release it turns into a mud wave that washes over anything in-front if used in a mountain area it creates a rock slide and damage to the surrounding area’s. The user can decide to keep paying an extra upkeep to continue the attack dealing one rank lower in damage to anyone caught inside the waves.
    Weaknesses:

    Name:earth drilling spears
    Rank:B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost:10
    Upkeep cost:0
    Range:30 meters
    Speed:B
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Requirements:N/A
    classification:Closed
    dimensions:5 meter wide spike and 3 meter long
    Parent Technique: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot for Earth Drilling Spears
    Hand Seals:Bird - Ram - boar
    Description: This technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out just like the parent technique spikes which attack the target from four separate directions in an attempt to drill into the opponent making it harder to evade. Spinning at 1,500 rpm this can cause a heavy damage to anything it comes in contact with. If it hits a target head on the spin force would selerate anything weaker then it’s power rank in two. If the target isn’t hit directly the target or object to get flung in a random location unless they have strength to fight agents the rotation.
    Weaknesses:
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    Post by Fro Sun Feb 05, 2023 2:51 am

    Name: earth whips
    Rank:B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost:10
    Upkeep cost:5
    Range:15 meters
    Speed:-1 Tier user’s coordination
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Requirements:C cord
    classification:closed
    dimensions:
    Parent Technique:N/A
    Hand Seals:Dog - Rat - Boar
    Description:the user creates whips from the earth around them that moves to the owners will, being able to conjure two whips at a time as far as 3 meter’s from the user, with each whip being 15 meters in length and 3 meters thick. Being able to wrap around the target to immobilize the target causing them to not be able to weave hand signs.
    Weaknesses:if the opponent uses brute force of B+ rank or higher they can break free easily.


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    Post by Masaru Sat Feb 11, 2023 2:46 pm

    Fro wrote:Name: earth whips
    Rank:B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost:10
    Upkeep cost:5
    Range:15 meters
    Speed:B
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Requirements:C cord
    classification:closed
    dimensions:
    Parent Technique:N/A
    Hand Seals:Dog - Rat - Boar
    Description:the user creates whips from the earth around them that moves to the owners will, being 15 meters in length and 3 meters thick. Being able to wrap around the target to immobilize the target causing them to not be able to weave hand signs.
    Weaknesses:if the opponent uses brute force of B+ rank or higher they can break free easily

    Needs to state how many whips are created and how far away from the user that they can be created. Since the Whips would be a type of freeform (you can control them individually) the speed would need to be (-1 tier the users Coordination) as is all freeform jutsu.


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    Post by Masaru Sat Feb 11, 2023 3:05 pm

    Fro wrote:Name: earth whips
    Rank:B
    Power:B
    Activation Cost:10
    Upkeep cost:5
    Range:15 meters
    Speed:B
    Element:Doton
    Skill:Ninjutsu
    Requirements:C cord
    classification:closed
    dimensions:
    Parent Technique:N/A
    Hand Seals:Dog - Rat - Boar
    Description:the user creates whips from the earth around them that moves to the owners will, being able to conjure two whips at a time as far as 15ft from the user, with each whip being 15 meters in length and 3 meters thick. Being able to wrap around the target to immobilize the target causing them to not be able to weave hand signs.
    Weaknesses:if the opponent uses brute force of B+ rank or higher they can break free easily, -1 to user cord.

    the red areas need to be adjusted.

    Speed should be -1 tier users coordination
    since we use meters as forms of measurement, go ahead and change the 15ft to 3 meters please
    I am unsure what the -1 to user coord is meant for, but its not necessarily needed


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