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    Yokai Clan | Revamp

    Kitsuki Kurahasa
    Kitsuki Kurahasa
    Genin

    Posts : 500
    Join date : 2017-09-14

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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa on Tue Mar 10, 2020 2:37 pm

    Me and Chi just talked about this last night lmao. Shadowless Flight is ABSOLUTELY getting nerfed. It is was to good even for a foundational Advanced Element Release KKG. This I can assure you.


    _________________
    Spoiler:
    Stats:
    Strength: S
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: C
    Coordination: C
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: B


    Gear
    Quantum Meruit Armour [50/46]
    Amicus Curiae [20/20 Explosions]
    100 Broadhead Arrows [C-Grade Quality]
    Evanescence
    Hua Li
    Hua Li

    Posts : 218
    Join date : 2019-12-09

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Yokai KKG, Bukijutsu, Fuinjutsu -- Wind
    Class: B
    Ryo: Yes please

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    Post by Hua Li on Tue Mar 10, 2020 2:56 pm

    That wasn't the point I was trying to get to, as it's not the only KKG that has a lot of power and options. But that said, I suppose lowering the cost isn't an option. Now, with a 15CP cost we'll change the jutsu some. T1 and T2 is redundant with that price, so no point in keeping it.


    Demon Arts, Demon Form:

    Name: Demon Arts: Demon Form
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: -
    Upkeep Cost: B [15]
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: KKG
    Classification: Clan Exclusive [Yokai]
    Requirements: T3 of any path
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals:
    Description: Even though the Yokai generally maintain a sense of humanity so as to remain (mostly) undisturbed, there are moments where they find the need to 'unleash hell' upon the world in the form of unbridled, pure-blood demonic pride. By tapping into their demonic ancestry, the yokai discards the human masquerade in favour of their demonic form. This activates the already present mutations inherent to their path, and forces them into a temporary transformation as the technique brings out their cursed bloodline in full.


    Oni

    • In this form, the oni rivals the most powerful of its kin, threading upon the pathways of the Greater Oni legends. Fully transformed, their skin is hellish red. Horns and nails turn black, and their face becomes the reflection of malefic intimidation. They receive a boost to strength (+++) and constitution (+++) and are more than eager to make the world tremble in fear. Any of their strikes causes craters to appear, further cultivating the potential the earth crumbles under the feet of opponents or that buildings collapse.



    Tengu

    • Ever closer to the greatest Tengu of lore, these creatures eschew the oni's power for increased mobility. Feathers cover their body to bring them closer to their avian heritage, and nails becomes sharpened claws to rake their opponents with in close quarters. Now light as the wind itself, the Tengu gains speed (++) and coordination (++) in this form. Growing a pair of jet-black wings to complete their demonic form, they are granted the ability of flight.



    Baku

    • Stepping into the Dreamscape of their dream-eating ancestors, the Baku become as much dream as they are reality. They gain a translucent appearance, as if channelling the astral universe through their bodies; their body mocking the thoughts of petty physics and materialistic reliance. Weapons inflict damage as if backed by lesser strength (-1 tier), while their newfound 'rules of reality' allow them to tap much easier into the insights of the eldritch Dreamscape - they gain a bonus to intelligence (++) and perception (++).


    Weaknesses: -


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    The spring morning calls
    into the haunted forest
    forgotten secrets.

    The Demon Smith:

    STATS

    • Strength: B
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C | 110
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: B

    Limits, Destiny: 3
    Renown: 3'250


    LINKS

    [x] Updates
    [x] Techniques

    [x] Lore and Plot
    [x] Theme

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    Kitsuki Kurahasa
    Kitsuki Kurahasa
    Genin

    Posts : 500
    Join date : 2017-09-14

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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa on Tue Mar 10, 2020 3:44 pm

    "their body mocking the thoughts of petty physics and materialistic reliance."

    ^ Things like this

    "Any of their strikes causes craters to appear, further cultivating the potential the earth crumbles under the feet of opponents or that buildings collapse."

    ^ And this

    I interpret to be flavor. The first is I assume not to be taken as an invitation to Kamui things and the second will depend on the user's Strength stat.


    _________________
    Spoiler:
    Stats:
    Strength: S
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: C
    Coordination: C
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: B


    Gear
    Quantum Meruit Armour [50/46]
    Amicus Curiae [20/20 Explosions]
    100 Broadhead Arrows [C-Grade Quality]
    Evanescence
    Hua Li
    Hua Li

    Posts : 218
    Join date : 2019-12-09

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Yokai KKG, Bukijutsu, Fuinjutsu -- Wind
    Class: B
    Ryo: Yes please

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    Post by Hua Li on Tue Mar 10, 2020 3:51 pm

    @Kitsuki Kurahasa wrote:"their body mocking the thoughts of petty physics and materialistic reliance."

    ^ Things like this

    "Any of their strikes causes craters to appear, further cultivating the potential the earth crumbles under the feet of opponents or that buildings collapse."

    ^ And this

    I interpret to be flavor. The first is I assume not to be taken as an invitation to Kamui things and the second will depend on the user's Strength stat.
    No, the first was with the whole 'stat reduction against weapons' in mind. We need the Baku to be capable of managing those oni and tengu.

    Second goes without say when interacting with anything that has constitution, quality or hardness. It was with the environment in mind I wrote that, as those tend to have no ranks.


    _________________


    Yokai Clan | Revamp - Page 2 33388010
    The spring morning calls
    into the haunted forest
    forgotten secrets.

    The Demon Smith:

    STATS

    • Strength: B
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C | 110
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: B

    Limits, Destiny: 3
    Renown: 3'250


    LINKS

    [x] Updates
    [x] Techniques

    [x] Lore and Plot
    [x] Theme

    HL: #009966 | AL: #ab6c55
    Kitsuki Kurahasa
    Kitsuki Kurahasa
    Genin

    Posts : 500
    Join date : 2017-09-14

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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa on Tue Mar 10, 2020 4:04 pm

    t was with the environment in mind I wrote that, as those tend to have no ranks.


    *^ True but if someone's Str is boosted to D as a result of this tech they can't create creaters.


    _________________
    Spoiler:
    Stats:
    Strength: S
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: C
    Coordination: C
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: B


    Gear
    Quantum Meruit Armour [50/46]
    Amicus Curiae [20/20 Explosions]
    100 Broadhead Arrows [C-Grade Quality]
    Evanescence
    Hua Li
    Hua Li

    Posts : 218
    Join date : 2019-12-09

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Yokai KKG, Bukijutsu, Fuinjutsu -- Wind
    Class: B
    Ryo: Yes please

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    Post by Hua Li on Tue Mar 10, 2020 4:07 pm

    @Kitsuki Kurahasa wrote:t was with the environment in mind I wrote that, as those tend to have no ranks.


    *^ True but if someone's Str is boosted to D as a result of this tech they can't create creaters.
    Ooh, like that. Makes sense. I'll take it out to prevent confusion. And change some of the baku's description.


    Demon Arts, Demon Form:

    Name: Demon Arts: Demon Form
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: -
    Upkeep Cost: B [15]
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: KKG
    Classification: Clan Exclusive [Yokai]
    Requirements: T3 of any path
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals:
    Description: Even though the Yokai generally maintain a sense of humanity so as to remain (mostly) undisturbed, there are moments where they find the need to 'unleash hell' upon the world in the form of unbridled, pure-blood demonic pride. By tapping into their demonic ancestry, the yokai discards the human masquerade in favour of their demonic form. This activates the already present mutations inherent to their path, and forces them into a temporary transformation as the technique brings out their cursed bloodline in full.


    Oni

    • In this form, the oni rivals the most powerful of its kin, threading upon the pathways of the Greater Oni legends. Fully transformed, their skin is hellish red. Horns and nails turn black, and their face becomes the reflection of malefic intimidation. They receive a boost to strength (+++) and constitution (+++) and are more than eager to make the world tremble in fear.



    Tengu

    • Ever closer to the greatest Tengu of lore, these creatures eschew the oni's power for increased mobility. Feathers cover their body to bring them closer to their avian heritage, and nails becomes sharpened claws to rake their opponents with in close quarters. Now light as the wind itself, the Tengu gains speed (++) and coordination (++) in this form. Growing a pair of jet-black wings to complete their demonic form, they are granted the ability of flight.



    Baku

    • Stepping into the Dreamscape of their dream-eating ancestors, the Baku become as much dream as they are reality. They gain a translucent appearance, as if channelling the astral universe through their bodies. Their body mocking the thoughts of petty physics and materialistic reliance, weapons inflict damage to them as if backed by lesser strength (-1 tier). And their newfound connection to the Dreamscape allows them easier access to its eldritch insights - they gain a bonus to intelligence (++) and perception (++).


    Weaknesses: -


    _________________


    Yokai Clan | Revamp - Page 2 33388010
    The spring morning calls
    into the haunted forest
    forgotten secrets.

    The Demon Smith:

    STATS

    • Strength: B
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C | 110
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: B

    Limits, Destiny: 3
    Renown: 3'250


    LINKS

    [x] Updates
    [x] Techniques

    [x] Lore and Plot
    [x] Theme

    HL: #009966 | AL: #ab6c55
    Kitsuki Kurahasa
    Kitsuki Kurahasa
    Genin

    Posts : 500
    Join date : 2017-09-14

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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa on Tue Mar 10, 2020 4:16 pm

    @Hua Li wrote:
    @Kitsuki Kurahasa wrote:t was with the environment in mind I wrote that, as those tend to have no ranks.


    *^ True but if someone's Str is boosted to D as a result of this tech they can't create creaters.
    Ooh, like that. Makes sense. I'll take it out to prevent confusion. And change some of the baku's description.


    Demon Arts, Demon Form:

    Name: Demon Arts: Demon Form
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: -
    Upkeep Cost: B [15]
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: KKG
    Classification: Clan Exclusive [Yokai]
    Requirements: T3 of any path
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals:
    Description: Even though the Yokai generally maintain a sense of humanity so as to remain (mostly) undisturbed, there are moments where they find the need to 'unleash hell' upon the world in the form of unbridled, pure-blood demonic pride. By tapping into their demonic ancestry, the yokai discards the human masquerade in favour of their demonic form. This activates the already present mutations inherent to their path, and forces them into a temporary transformation as the technique brings out their cursed bloodline in full.


    Oni

    • In this form, the oni rivals the most powerful of its kin, threading upon the pathways of the Greater Oni legends. Fully transformed, their skin is hellish red. Horns and nails turn black, and their face becomes the reflection of malefic intimidation. They receive a boost to strength (+++) and constitution (+++) and are more than eager to make the world tremble in fear.



    Tengu

    • Ever closer to the greatest Tengu of lore, these creatures eschew the oni's power for increased mobility. Feathers cover their body to bring them closer to their avian heritage, and nails becomes sharpened claws to rake their opponents with in close quarters. Now light as the wind itself, the Tengu gains speed (++) and coordination (++) in this form. Growing a pair of jet-black wings to complete their demonic form, they are granted the ability of flight.



    Baku

    • Stepping into the Dreamscape of their dream-eating ancestors, the Baku become as much dream as they are reality. They gain a translucent appearance, as if channelling the astral universe through their bodies. Their body mocking the thoughts of petty physics and materialistic reliance, weapons inflict damage to them as if backed by lesser strength (-1 tier). And their newfound connection to the Dreamscape allows them easier access to its eldritch insights - they gain a bonus to intelligence (++) and perception (++).


    Weaknesses: -

    Approved. If you haven't already, place wthis with the rest of the techs and i will move this into the Yokai Clan.


    _________________
    Spoiler:
    Stats:
    Strength: S
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: C
    Coordination: C
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: B


    Gear
    Quantum Meruit Armour [50/46]
    Amicus Curiae [20/20 Explosions]
    100 Broadhead Arrows [C-Grade Quality]
    Evanescence
    Hua Li
    Hua Li

    Posts : 218
    Join date : 2019-12-09

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Yokai KKG, Bukijutsu, Fuinjutsu -- Wind
    Class: B
    Ryo: Yes please

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    Post by Hua Li on Tue Mar 10, 2020 4:20 pm

    That's been done now.
    And thanks for the hard work.


    _________________


    Yokai Clan | Revamp - Page 2 33388010
    The spring morning calls
    into the haunted forest
    forgotten secrets.

    The Demon Smith:

    STATS

    • Strength: B
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C | 110
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: B

    Limits, Destiny: 3
    Renown: 3'250


    LINKS

    [x] Updates
    [x] Techniques

    [x] Lore and Plot
    [x] Theme

    HL: #009966 | AL: #ab6c55

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