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    Post by Bryn Sat Sep 23, 2017 6:48 pm

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    Post by Bryn Sat Sep 23, 2017 7:30 pm

    Name: Efficiency
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price:  40,000 ryo
    Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility by one-third.
    Charges: 20 posts


    Name: Cleaver
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
    Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability.
    Charges: 20 uses



    Name: Cries of Tartarus
    Rank: S
    Function: Passive
    Price: 500,000 ryo
    Description: The Cries of Tartarus is a high level enchantment meant exclusively for swords. While unsheathed, a sword enchanted with Cries of Tartarus emits a constant and ear-splitting cacophony of screaming voices that anybody within five-hundred meters is susceptible to, some so high that they can seemingly break glass. The wielder is immune to these screams as long as they are holding the sword. This screaming intensifies every post it is unsheathed for three posts where it reaches its maximum sound level.

    First Post: The screaming is loud enough that communication can only happen by screaming over the sounds of the screams. The noise reduces the Perception of those afflicted by --, not affecting tracking abilities.

    Second Post: The screaming has reached almost impossible levels of sound, causing those with less than B tier Constitution to have their ears begin bleeding. Communication through sound is impossible, and only the loudest of sounds such as huge explosions can be heard over the enchantment. Perception for those with less than B tier Constitution is reduced by one tier, while B tier and above retain only a --. However, those with less than C tier intelligence do not have the mental capacity to endure such a mental attack and are paralyzed with fear.

    Final Post and beyond: The screaming is absolutely incredible, loud enough that the eardrums of those with less than B tier Constitution rupture from the noise. This incites deafness, reducing Perception by a full two tiers. Those with A tier Constitution receive the maximum penalty from the second post as well as bleeding ears, while S rank Constitution is able to endure the screaming and keeps the minimum debuff of --. The intelligence threshold remains the same.
    Charges: 60 posts

    Name: Battery Pack
    Rank: A
    Function: Passive/ Active
    Price: 300,000 ryo
    Description: Battery Pack is an enchantment that passively absorbs 1 point of stamina every post from the person using the item until it reaches 30 stamina. This stamina is kept in the item as a sort of battery, allowing them to access the stamina once the "battery" is full. The "battery" can only absorb 30 points of stamina before the enchantment needs refilled, though. The user can't utilize this stamina until the battery is full, though once some is taken they do not have to use it all at once if they do not wish to.
    Charges: 30 posts, 1 Use per charge.



    Name: Bronze Kunai
    Rank: Any
    Material: Bronze
    Description: Kunai made of Bronze. The bronze has a durability that is equal to a -- of the rank of the kunai, though the copper that comprises much of the metal is very conductive to electricity. Increases the effectiveness of Raiton chakra flow techniques by one rank of power.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies
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    Post by Rin Matoi Sat Sep 23, 2017 8:33 pm

    Kameko wrote:Name: Efficiency
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price:  40,000 ryo
    Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility by one-third.
    Charges: 20 posts

    Approved.


    Name: Cleaver
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
    Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability.
    Charges: 20 uses

    How does this cut through any item of its durability or lower? Does it coat the item with elemental/chakra flow?


    Name: Cries of Tartarus
    Rank: S
    Function: Passive
    Price: 500,000 ryo
    Description: The Cries of Tartarus is a high level enchantment meant exclusively for swords. While unsheathed, a sword enchanted with Cries of Tartarus emits a constant and ear-splitting cacophony of screaming voices that anybody within five-hundred meters is susceptible to, some so high that they can seemingly break glass. The wielder is immune to these screams as long as they are holding the sword. This screaming intensifies every post it is unsheathed for three posts where it reaches its maximum sound level.

    First Post: The screaming is loud enough that communication can only happen by screaming over the sounds of the screams. The noise reduces the Perception of those afflicted by --, not affecting tracking abilities.

    Second Post: The screaming has reached almost impossible levels of sound, causing those with less than B tier Constitution to have their ears begin bleeding. Communication through sound is impossible, and only the loudest of sounds such as huge explosions can be heard over the enchantment. Perception for those with less than B tier Constitution is reduced by one tier, while B tier and above retain only a --. However, those with less than C tier intelligence do not have the mental capacity to endure such a mental attack and are paralyzed with fear.

    Final Post and beyond: The screaming is absolutely incredible, loud enough that the eardrums of those with less than B tier Constitution rupture from the noise. This incites deafness, reducing Perception by a full two tiers. Those with A tier Constitution receive the maximum penalty from the second post as well as bleeding ears, while S rank Constitution is able to endure the screaming and keeps the minimum debuff of --. The intelligence threshold remains the same.
    Charges: 60 posts

    Alright, so firstly the range needs a major overhaul. 500 meters is far too great for an enchantment of this caliber.

    The type I would like to see as Active, not Passive. Passive goes off of usages and not posts.

    Now onto the effects....this is way too overpowered as it stands. You're affecting several stats with the threat of organ damage, paralysis, as well as a stat debuff. Remember that enchantments are aides that spice up an item, and not a technique itself. Please reduce these all drastically. I'm against an AoE paralysis and damage caused by the enchantment. I will allow a Perception debuff up to a tier with resistances including Constitution.

    Edit those and I'll review it again.

    Name: Battery Pack
    Rank: A
    Function: Passive/ Active
    Price: 300,000 ryo
    Description: Battery Pack is an enchantment that passively absorbs 1 point of stamina every post from the person using the item until it reaches 30 stamina. This stamina is kept in the item as a sort of battery, allowing them to access the stamina once the "battery" is full. The "battery" can only absorb 30 points of stamina before the enchantment needs refilled, though. The user can't utilize this stamina until the battery is full, though once some is taken they do not have to use it all at once if they do not wish to.
    Charges: 30 posts, 1 Use per charge.

    I'd like this to be limited in a way so someone can't bank up ten of these guys and draw chakra from their stash when needed. You can either have it destroyed when used, or have the chakra value diminish overtime when not in use. If you choose to go with the recharging route it would also require a Fuuinjutsu user to recharge it before chakra can start being stored in the item again.


    Name: Bronze Kunai
    Rank: Any
    Material: Bronze
    Description: Kunai made of Bronze. The bronze has a durability that is equal to a -- of the rank of the kunai, though the copper that comprises much of the metal is very conductive to electricity. Increases the effectiveness of Raiton chakra flow techniques by one rank of power.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    I'd want to assume this is an enchantment. Use the template if it is. If not, the copper in bronze won't decrease the cost for lightning flow. It'll make it conduct easier for RP purposes. I'd allow you to make the enchantment cheaper when bronze is paired with the enchantment, but not allowing Bronze itself.
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    Post by Bryn Sat Sep 23, 2017 10:35 pm

    Specified the exact workings of the technique more, since it is a bit light on that. Sorry. Added a bit of a drawback, too. Also note the very small limit to uses despite the rank of the enchantment. At S rank, it's less than 25% of the standard maximum.



    Name: Cleaver
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
    Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability. It does this by taking a small amount of metal from the center of the blade, evenly dispersed to not mess with the balance even slightly, and then distributes this small amount of metal to the edge of the weapon to artificially sharpen it to the heights of physical perfection. At A rank, it makes the edge of the weapon 3 nanometers thin which is how thin obsidian can naturally get. At S rank, the enchantment is so focused that it thins the edge to 1 nanometer thick which allows it to cut the atoms of a material itself. Without that aid of an equal level of chakra, it cannot cut through chakra flowed items if the item is within 2 tiers of the rank of the enchantment in durability.
    Charges: 20 uses



    Whaaaat? This is completely fair >_> <_< >_>



    Name: Cries of Tartarus
    Rank: S
    Function: Active
    Price: 500,000 ryo
    Description: The Cries of Tartarus is a high level enchantment meant exclusively for swords. While unsheathed, a sword enchanted with Cries of Tartarus emits a constant and ear-splitting cacophony of screaming voices that anybody within fifty meters is susceptible to, some so high that they can seemingly break glass. The wielder is immune to these screams as long as they are holding the sword. The user may also control the level of the sword used, though they must step up the level gradually. This means they must first use the first post before they can use the second, and must use the second before the third. This screaming intensifies every post it is unsheathed for three posts where it reaches its maximum sound level.

    First Post: The screaming is loud enough that communication can only happen by screaming over the sounds of the screams. The noise reduces the Perception of those afflicted by -, not affecting tracking abilities.

    Second Post: The screaming has reached almost impossible levels of sound, causing those with less than B tier Constitution to have their ears begin bleeding. Communication through sound is impossible, and only the loudest of sounds such as huge explosions can be heard over the enchantment. Perception for those with less than B tier Constitution is reduced by --, while B tier and above retain only a -.

    Final Post and beyond: The screaming is absolutely incredible, loud enough that the eardrums of those with less than B tier Constitution rupture from the noise. This incites deafness, reducing Perception by a full tier. Those with B tier Constitution receive the maximum penalty from the second post as well as bleeding ears, while S rank Constitution is able to endure the screaming and keeps the minimum debuff of -. This post costs the equivalent of two posts of usage for post count purposes.
    Charges: 30 posts



    This one already requires the enchantment to be recharged after every 30 points of stamina is used, since it can only gather a maximum of 30 every charge. One point per post, and it has a 30 post maximum with one total use. That use, in this case, is using the thirty stamina.



    Name: Battery Pack
    Rank: A
    Function: Passive/ Active
    Price: 300,000 ryo
    Description: Battery Pack is an enchantment that passively absorbs 1 point of stamina every post from the person using the item until it reaches 30 stamina. This stamina is kept in the item as a sort of battery, allowing them to access the stamina once the "battery" is full. The "battery" can only absorb 30 points of stamina before the enchantment needs refilled, though. The user can't utilize this stamina until the battery is full, though once some is taken they do not have to use it all at once if they do not wish to. Every usage reduces the battery's maximum lifespan by five points until it hits zero and the enchantment ceases to function.
    Charges: 30 posts, reduced by five every recharge, 1 Use per charge.


    On the kunai:


    The copper in bronze would make bronze more conductive than just plain tin would which is what makes up the other half of bronze. Copper is the second most conductive metal on earth, having an alloy consisting of it would make electricity flow through it easier which would require less effort on the user's part. Hence, bronze weapons would decrease the amount of raiton chakra needed for a raiton element attack because a smaller amount flowing better can produce the same effect irl as a larger amount flowing slower. It's how electricity works lol. If I made the minimum rank for the effect C rank, would that suffice for it to just be a weaponry based ability since Bronze is weaker than both iron and steel in terms of durability?






    For Zoomy's concerns, edited Efficiency



    Name: Efficiency
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price:  40,000 ryo
    Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility by one-third, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item is the only one that receives this discount.
    Charges: 20 posts
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    Post by Rin Matoi Wed Sep 27, 2017 5:14 am

    Name: Cleaver
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
    Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability. It does this by taking a small amount of metal from the center of the blade, evenly dispersed to not mess with the balance even slightly, and then distributes this small amount of metal to the edge of the weapon to artificially sharpen it to the heights of physical perfection. At A rank, it makes the edge of the weapon 3 nanometers thin which is how thin obsidian can naturally get. At S rank, the enchantment is so focused that it thins the edge to 1 nanometer thick which allows it to cut the atoms of a material itself. Without that aid of an equal level of chakra, it cannot cut through chakra flowed items if the item is within 2 tiers of the rank of the enchantment in durability.
    Charges: 20 uses

    I recommend changing this to Passive. Passive means it will use a charge when striking, instead of Active, which requires you to activate the enchantment with a small amount of chakra before benefiting from it. Passive will be cheaper and give you more Charges.

    But if you're cool with how it is, Approved.

    This one already requires the enchantment to be recharged after every 30 points of stamina is used, since it can only gather a maximum of 30 every charge. One point per post, and it has a 30 post maximum with one total use. That use, in this case, is using the thirty stamina.



    Name: Battery Pack
    Rank: A
    Function: Passive/ Active
    Price: 300,000 ryo
    Description: Battery Pack is an enchantment that passively absorbs 1 point of stamina every post from the person using the item until it reaches 30 stamina. This stamina is kept in the item as a sort of battery, allowing them to access the stamina once the "battery" is full. The "battery" can only absorb 30 points of stamina before the enchantment needs refilled, though. The user can't utilize this stamina until the battery is full, though once some is taken they do not have to use it all at once if they do not wish to. Every usage reduces the battery's maximum lifespan by five points until it hits zero and the enchantment ceases to function.
    Charges: 30 posts, reduced by five every recharge, 1 Use per charge.

    Approved!


    On the kunai:


    The copper in bronze would make bronze more conductive than just plain tin would which is what makes up the other half of bronze. Copper is the second most conductive metal on earth, having an alloy consisting of it would make electricity flow through it easier which would require less effort on the user's part. Hence, bronze weapons would decrease the amount of raiton chakra needed for a raiton element attack because a smaller amount flowing better can produce the same effect irl as a larger amount flowing slower. It's how electricity works lol. If I made the minimum rank for the effect C rank, would that suffice for it to just be a weaponry based ability since Bronze is weaker than both iron and steel in terms of durability?


    Yes, Copper is a great conductor and allows electricity to flow easily. However it does not influence the value of electricity. If I run 60 volts of electricity down a copper wire it will still be 60 volts by the time it reaches the end. Just because it's copper doesn't mean it'll perform as if I ran 120 volts down the wire. It would simply just "get there" easier.

    Though as I said in my initial post, I am willing to work with this if you make an enchantment and state that using Bronze (or copper [Check out the new shop listing!] will make the enchantment more functional I will be a lot more flexible to work with, and I will be willing to take off a lot of enchantment requirements and pricing because I see and understand the rational behind using copper-based metals as a conductor for Raiton. However, as the material stands alone, I can't let it pass.



    For Zoomy's concerns, edited Efficiency


    Name: Efficiency
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price:  40,000 ryo
    Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility by one-third, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item is the only one that receives this discount.
    Charges: 20 posts

    Seeing as this is a Passive function item its language should be changed to "usages" instead of posts under the Charges field. Also, being a Passive B-rank enchantment above the average usage limit, that should be 60,000 ryo and not 10,000 ryo below the minimum.[/quote]
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    Post by Bryn Sat Oct 21, 2017 12:54 pm

    Masuyo Kaede wrote:
    Name: Cleaver
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Passive
    Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
    Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability. It does this by taking a small amount of metal from the center of the blade, evenly dispersed to not mess with the balance even slightly, and then distributes this small amount of metal to the edge of the weapon to artificially sharpen it to the heights of physical perfection. At A rank, it makes the edge of the weapon 3 nanometers thin which is how thin obsidian can naturally get. At S rank, the enchantment is so focused that it thins the edge to 1 nanometer thick which allows it to cut the atoms of a material itself. Without that aid of an equal level of chakra, it cannot cut through chakra flowed items if the item is within 2 tiers of the rank of the enchantment in durability.
    Charges: 30 uses

    I recommend changing this to Passive. Passive means it will use a charge when striking, instead of Active, which requires you to activate the enchantment with a small amount of chakra before benefiting from it. Passive will be cheaper and give you more Charges.

    But if you're cool with how it is, Approved.


    Edited


    On the kunai:


    The copper in bronze would make bronze more conductive than just plain tin would which is what makes up the other half of bronze. Copper is the second most conductive metal on earth, having an alloy consisting of it would make electricity flow through it easier which would require less effort on the user's part. Hence, bronze weapons would decrease the amount of raiton chakra needed for a raiton element attack because a smaller amount flowing better can produce the same effect irl as a larger amount flowing slower. It's how electricity works lol. If I made the minimum rank for the effect C rank, would that suffice for it to just be a weaponry based ability since Bronze is weaker than both iron and steel in terms of durability?


    Yes, Copper is a great conductor and allows electricity to flow easily. However it does not influence the value of electricity. If I run 60 volts of electricity down a copper wire it will still be 60 volts by the time it reaches the end. Just because it's copper doesn't mean it'll perform as if I ran 120 volts down the wire. It would simply just "get there" easier.

    Though as I said in my initial post, I am willing to work with this if you make an enchantment and state that using Bronze (or copper [Check out the new shop listing!] will make the enchantment more functional I will be a lot more flexible to work with, and I will be willing to take off a lot of enchantment requirements and pricing because I see and understand the rational behind using copper-based metals as a conductor for Raiton. However, as the material stands alone, I can't let it pass.


    Technically there's voltage drop to account for as well as a few other factors, so no, it may not necessarily be 60 volts by the time you reach the end of the wire. Damage is not caused by volts, damage is caused by amperage. You can flow more and retain more amps with copper than you can steel with the same amount of effort (volts in real life, rank of the technique in game) because copper is a much better conductor of electricity. It's a better conductor than iron is too, a little more than five times better actually, but it's a much softer metal and more prone to physical damage which is what this item represents. I'll make an enchantment later I guess, but what you're saying is not physically possible is quite physically possible.



    For Zoomy's concerns, edited Efficiency


    Name: Efficiency
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price:  40,000 ryo
    Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item in each thread is the only one that receives this discount.
    Charges: 20 usages

    Seeing as this is a Passive function item its language should be changed to "usages" instead of posts under the Charges field. Also, being a Passive B-rank enchantment above the average usage limit, that should be 60,000 ryo and not 10,000 ryo below the minimum.



    But I don't want to charge that much for it. I didn't know those were hard set prices, I thought they were just suggestions.









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    Name: Thin-Blade Knife
    Rank: D-S
    Material: 2 lbs for 5 knife blades (Copper, Bronze, Iron, Steel), 2 lbs of wood for the hilts and a 60" x 4" strip of cloth to wrap the hilt.
    Description: This blade is one not meant to engage in combat with, as it has a very thin blade only 1/8" thick. It is 6" long, meant to slip between ribs to get to the tender organs underneath. They're balanced in such a way that they can be accurately thrown too, increasing their versatility.
    Requirement: Weapon Crafting
    Crafting Time: 3-15 days


    Name: Eight-Point Shuriken
    Rank: D-S
    Material: 3 lbs of Copper, Bronze, Iron, or Steel for 15 shuriken
    Description: These shruiken deviate from the standard four point shuriken used by doubling the amount of points on each shuriken. This shuriken is thinner than the four-point shuriken in order to retain a similar weight as well as the length of the points.
    Requirement: Weapon Crafting
    Crafting Time: 3-15 days


    Name: Hatchet
    Rank: D-S
    Material: 1 lb of Bronze, Iron, or Steel for the head, 1 lb of wood for the handle, a 120"x4" strip of cloth to wrap the handle.
    Description: A basic hatchet with a small head and a handle that brings its length to 13". It is balanced to be more top heavy, meant to be swung rather than thrown. Great for chopping wood.
    Requirement: Weapon Crafting
    Crafting Time: 3-15 days
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    Post by Rin Matoi Sat Oct 21, 2017 3:30 pm

    Kameko wrote:Name: Cleaver
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Passive
    Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
    Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability. It does this by taking a small amount of metal from the center of the blade, evenly dispersed to not mess with the balance even slightly, and then distributes this small amount of metal to the edge of the weapon to artificially sharpen it to the heights of physical perfection. At A rank, it makes the edge of the weapon 3 nanometers thin which is how thin obsidian can naturally get. At S rank, the enchantment is so focused that it thins the edge to 1 nanometer thick which allows it to cut the atoms of a material itself. Without that aid of an equal level of chakra, it cannot cut through chakra flowed items if the item is within 2 tiers of the rank of the enchantment in durability.
    Charges: 30 uses


    Approved.



    For Zoomy's concerns, edited Efficiency


    Name: Efficiency
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price:  40,000 ryo
    Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item in each thread is the only one that receives this discount.
    Charges: 20 usages

    Seeing as this is a Passive function item its language should be changed to "usages" instead of posts under the Charges field. Also, being a Passive B-rank enchantment above the average usage limit, that should be 60,000 ryo and not 10,000 ryo below the minimum.



    But I don't want to charge that much for it. I didn't know those were hard set prices, I thought they were just suggestions.




    These are not hard set limits and do allow for some flexibility. However, your charges do go above what is considered "average" for a B-rank enchantment. You marked the price being 10k below the minimum guideline. Normally it would be 50k ryo to produce an item of the same caliber with 15 charges. But because you added 5 more charges the price would be increased with it.





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    Name: Thin-Blade Knife
    Rank: D-S
    Material: 2 lbs for 5 knife blades (Copper, Bronze, Iron, Steel), 2 lbs of wood for the hilts and a 60" x 4" strip of cloth to wrap the hilt.
    Description: This blade is one not meant to engage in combat with, as it has a very thin blade only 1/8" thick. It is 6" long, meant to slip between ribs to get to the tender organs underneath. They're balanced in such a way that they can be accurately thrown too, increasing their versatility.
    Requirement: Weapon Crafting
    Crafting Time: 3-15 days

    Name: Eight-Point Shuriken
    Rank: D-S
    Material: 3 lbs of Copper, Bronze, Iron, or Steel for 15 shuriken
    Description: These shruiken deviate from the standard four point shuriken used by doubling the amount of points on each shuriken. This shuriken is thinner than the four-point shuriken in order to retain a similar weight as well as the length of the points.
    Requirement: Weapon Crafting
    Crafting Time: 3-15 days


    Name: Hatchet
    Rank: D-S
    Material: 1 lb of Bronze, Iron, or Steel for the head, 1 lb of wood for the handle, a 120"x4" strip of cloth to wrap the handle.
    Description: A basic hatchet with a small head and a handle that brings its length to 13". It is balanced to be more top heavy, meant to be swung rather than thrown. Great for chopping wood.
    Requirement: Weapon Crafting
    Crafting Time: 3-15 days


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    Name: Efficiency
    Rank: A
    Function: Passive
    Price:  80,000 ryo
    Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item in each thread is the only one that receives this discount.
    Charges: 20 usages


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    Post by Rin Matoi Fri Nov 03, 2017 3:52 am

    Kameko wrote:Name: Efficiency
    Rank: A
    Function: Passive
    Price:  80,000 ryo
    Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item in each thread is the only one that receives this discount.
    Charges: 20 usages


    Changed rank of the enchantment as well as price to suit the new rank


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    Post by Bryn Sun Nov 26, 2017 10:43 pm

    Name: Scale Armor
    Rank: D-S
    Material: Medium Leather Hide, either 8 lbs of a metal or another Medium Hide for the scales, cloth for the inner lining.
    Description: This is simple scale armor, made using small plates of either leather or metal no larger than a couple inches layered over each other for protection from slashes and arrows. Slightly more vulnerable to puncturing and blunt weapons than regular armor would be, as the armor scales are thinner than a regular breastplate would be.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies


    Name: Arm Guards
    Rank: D-S
    Material: Small Hide, Small Leather Hide (Hard Leather) or 2 lbs of metal, cloth for interior lining.
    Description: Simple arm guards comprised a softer inner layer of leather with either another layer of either thick, hard leather laced on top or a few small plates of metal riveted to the thinner leather for the actual protection.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Shin Guards
    Rank: D-S
    Material: Medium Leather Hide, Medium Leather Hide (Hard Leather) or 4 lbs of metal, cloth for interior lining.
    Description: Similar to the Arm Guards, these are simple pieces of armor comprised of a thin inner layer of leather with either a thicker and harder layer of leather or numerous plates of armor providing the protective element.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Soft-Core Katana
    Rank: C-S
    Material: 4 lbs of steel, 1 lb of iron, 3 lb of wood, leather or cloth to wrap the hilt
    Description: This sword is the same length as the average katana, but it is wider and slightly thicker than usual which makes the blade a bit heavier than a regular one. The reason this is true is due to the way in which the sword is created. Instead of using a solid steel blade, making it rigid and inflexible, Kameko has instead created a way to forge an eastern style sword with an iron core and a steel exterior. The iron core is bolted and these bolts welded to the iron rod within the hilt, with the steel receiving the same process to secure it to the core after it is fit snugly over it.

    The result is a sword that has the strength of steel, but is more flexible than usual and makes it more prone to bend courtesy of the softer core and then snap back into place due to the steel exterior's strength. This makes the katana's durability one + higher than it normally would be with just steel alone, giving it a slight edge in direct confrontation with other weapons, though the blade is slightly more expensive, larger, and heavier than a normal katana would be.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies


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    Name: Katana
    Rank: D-S
    Material: 3 lbs of metal, 3 lbs of wood, leather or cloth to wrap the hilt
    Description: A simple katana made typically of iron or steel. Nothing special about it.
    Requirement: N/A
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    Post by Rin Matoi Sun Nov 26, 2017 11:12 pm

    Kameko wrote:Name: Scale Armor
    Rank: D-S
    Material: Medium Leather Hide, either 8 lbs of a metal or another Medium Hide for the scales, cloth for the inner lining.
    Description: This is simple scale armor, made using small plates of either leather or metal no larger than a couple inches layered over each other for protection from slashes and arrows. Slightly more vulnerable to puncturing and blunt weapons than regular armor would be, as the armor scales are thinner than a regular breastplate would be.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies


    Name: Arm Guards
    Rank: D-S
    Material: Small Hide, Small Leather Hide (Hard Leather) or 2 lbs of metal, cloth for interior lining.
    Description: Simple arm guards comprised a softer inner layer of leather with either another layer of either thick, hard leather laced on top or a few small plates of metal riveted to the thinner leather for the actual protection.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Shin Guards
    Rank: D-S
    Material: Medium Leather Hide, Medium Leather Hide (Hard Leather) or 4 lbs of metal, cloth for interior lining.
    Description: Similar to the Arm Guards, these are simple pieces of armor comprised of a thin inner layer of leather with either a thicker and harder layer of leather or numerous plates of armor providing the protective element.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Soft-Core Katana
    Rank: C-S
    Material: 4 lbs of steel, 1 lb of iron, 3 lb of wood, leather or cloth to wrap the hilt
    Description: This sword is the same length as the average katana, but it is wider and slightly thicker than usual which makes the blade a bit heavier than a regular one. The reason this is true is due to the way in which the sword is created. Instead of using a solid steel blade, making it rigid and inflexible, Kameko has instead created a way to forge an eastern style sword with an iron core and a steel exterior. The iron core is bolted and these bolts welded to the iron rod within the hilt, with the steel receiving the same process to secure it to the core after it is fit snugly over it.

    The result is a sword that has the strength of steel, but is more flexible than usual and makes it more prone to bend courtesy of the softer core and then snap back into place due to the steel exterior's strength. This makes the katana's durability one + higher than it normally would be with just steel alone, giving it a slight edge in direct confrontation with other weapons, though the blade is slightly more expensive, larger, and heavier than a normal katana would be.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Katana
    Rank: D-S
    Material: 3 lbs of metal, 3 lbs of wood, leather or cloth to wrap the hilt
    Description: A simple katana made typically of iron or steel. Nothing special about it.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies


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    Post by Bryn Sat Feb 17, 2018 1:42 pm

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    Already approved Enchantments, edited to suit new pricing. A couple new ones as well.





    Name: Knuckle Breaker
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price: 10,000, 50,000
    Description: This enchantment is intended for armor and shield usage, though it may be used to a lesser effect with weaponry. When crafting an item with this enchantment, the chakra utilized to create the enchantment weaves itself between the atoms of the item for future reinforcement. When struck, the chakra activates to increase its tensile strength and hardness many times over. The grade of the material is increased by two tiers while this enchantment still has a charge. For example, wood would have its grade increased to that of concrete with this enchantment. A and S grade materials normally cap at S++, but in exchange for forfeiture of experience for the item and quintupling the price, a S grade material may be increased to X grade.
    Charges: 30 posts


    Name: Sorcerer's Steel
    Rank: B
    Material: 3:1 ratio of Steel and Chakra Draining Metal
    Description: Sorcerer's Steel is a metal created when regular steel and Iwagakure's special chakra draining metal are forged together. The process is volatile, resulting in a yield of 25% the total amount of metal as was used to create it. For example, to make three pounds of this Kameko would need nine pounds of steel and three pounds of chakra draining metal ((9+3)/4=3). It's as hard as regular steel.

    This steel is specially attuned to enchantments, giving it the unique properties of being able to either have two enchantments woven into it or having one enchantment with double the normal uses/posts.
    Requirement: Needs an exclusive metal available only in Iwagakure
    Crafting Time: 7 days per 10 lbs of Sorcerer's Steel created


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    Post by Rin Matoi Sat Feb 17, 2018 3:48 pm

    Kameko wrote:Name: Cleaver
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 30,000 ryo or 60,000 ryo
    Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability. It does this by taking a small amount of metal from the center of the blade, evenly dispersed to not mess with the balance even slightly, and then distributes this small amount of metal to the edge of the weapon to artificially sharpen it to the heights of physical perfection. At A rank, it makes the edge of the weapon 3 nanometers thin which is how thin obsidian can naturally get. At S rank, the enchantment is so focused that it thins the edge to 1 nanometer thick which allows it to cut the atoms of a material itself. Without that aid of an equal level of chakra, it cannot cut through chakra flowed items if the item is within 2 tiers of the rank of the enchantment in durability.
    Charges: 30 uses


    Name: Battery Pack
    Rank: A
    Function: Passive/ Active
    Price: 30,000 ryo
    Description: Battery Pack is an enchantment that passively absorbs 1 point of stamina every post from the person using the item until it reaches 30 stamina. This stamina is kept in the item as a sort of battery, allowing them to access the stamina once the "battery" is full. The "battery" can only absorb 30 points of stamina before the enchantment needs refilled, though. The user can't utilize this stamina until the battery is full, though once some is taken they do not have to use it all at once if they do not wish to. Every usage reduces the battery's maximum lifespan by five points until it hits zero and the enchantment ceases to function.
    Charges: 30 posts, reduced by five every recharge, 1 Use per charge.



    Name: Efficiency
    Rank: A
    Function: Active
    Price:  25,000 ryo
    Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item in each thread is the only one that receives this discount.
    Charges: 20 usages

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    Name: Knuckle Breaker
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price: 10,000, 50,000
    Description: This enchantment is intended for armor and shield usage, though it may be used to a lesser effect with weaponry. When crafting an item with this enchantment, the chakra utilized to create the enchantment weaves itself between the atoms of the item for future reinforcement. When struck, the chakra activates to increase its tensile strength and hardness many times over. The grade of the material is increased by two tiers while this enchantment still has a charge. For example, wood would have its grade increased to that of concrete with this enchantment. A and S grade materials normally cap at S++, but in exchange for forfeiture of experience for the item and quintupling the price, a S grade material may be increased to X grade.
    Charges: 30 posts

    Change the charges terminology from posts to "usages."

    Also this would serve as an A-rank enchantment.


    Name: Sorcerer's Steel
    Rank: B
    Material: 3:1 ratio of Steel and Chakra Draining Metal
    Description: Sorcerer's Steel is a metal created when regular steel and Iwagakure's special chakra draining metal are forged together. The process is volatile, resulting in a yield of 25% the total amount of metal as was used to create it. For example, to make three pounds of this Kameko would need nine pounds of steel and three pounds of chakra draining metal ((9+3)/4=3). It's as hard as regular steel.

    This steel is specially attuned to enchantments, giving it the unique properties of being able to either have two enchantments woven into it or having one enchantment with double the normal uses/posts.
    Requirement: Needs an exclusive metal available only in Iwagakure
    Crafting Time: 7 days per 10 lbs of Sorcerer's Steel created

    Being an alloy this would require a Furnace and and Crucible (crucible for achieving the same hardness as steel.)[/quote]
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    Post by Akame Fri Feb 23, 2018 9:49 pm

    Name: Knuckle Breaker
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price: 10,000, 50,000
    Description: This enchantment is intended for armor and shield usage, though it may be used to a lesser effect with weaponry. When crafting an item with this enchantment, the chakra utilized to create the enchantment weaves itself between the atoms of the item for future reinforcement. When struck, the chakra activates to increase its tensile strength and hardness many times over. The grade of the material is increased by two tiers while this enchantment still has a charge. For example, wood would have its grade increased to that of concrete with this enchantment. A and S grade materials normally cap at S++, but in exchange for forfeiture of experience for the item and quintupling the price, a S grade material may be increased to X grade.
    Charges: 15 posts



    Halved posts to keep it B rank


    Name: Sorcerer's Steel
    Rank: B
    Material: 3:1 ratio of Steel and Chakra Draining Metal
    Description: Sorcerer's Steel is a metal created when regular steel and Iwagakure's special chakra draining metal are forged together. The process is volatile, resulting in a yield of 25% the total amount of metal as was used to create it. For example, to make three pounds of this Kameko would need nine pounds of steel and three pounds of chakra draining metal ((9+3)/4=3). It's as hard as regular steel.

    This steel is specially attuned to enchantments, giving it the unique properties of being able to either have two enchantments woven into it or having one enchantment with double the normal uses/posts.
    Requirement: Needs an exclusive metal available only in Iwagakure, furnace, crucible
    Crafting Time: 7 days per 10 lbs of Sorcerer's Steel created


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    Post by Rin Matoi Wed Feb 28, 2018 1:53 am

    Tsuyo wrote:Name: Knuckle Breaker
    Rank: B
    Function: Passive
    Price: 10,000, 50,000
    Description: This enchantment is intended for armor and shield usage, though it may be used to a lesser effect with weaponry. When crafting an item with this enchantment, the chakra utilized to create the enchantment weaves itself between the atoms of the item for future reinforcement. When struck, the chakra activates to increase its tensile strength and hardness many times over. The grade of the material is increased by two tiers while this enchantment still has a charge. For example, wood would have its grade increased to that of concrete with this enchantment. A and S grade materials normally cap at S++, but in exchange for forfeiture of experience for the item and quintupling the price, a S grade material may be increased to X grade.
    Charges: 15 posts



    Halved posts to keep it B rank


    Name: Sorcerer's Steel
    Rank: B
    Material: 3:1 ratio of Steel and Chakra Draining Metal
    Description: Sorcerer's Steel is a metal created when regular steel and Iwagakure's special chakra draining metal are forged together. The process is volatile, resulting in a yield of 25% the total amount of metal as was used to create it. For example, to make three pounds of this Kameko would need nine pounds of steel and three pounds of chakra draining metal ((9+3)/4=3). It's as hard as regular steel.

    This steel is specially attuned to enchantments, giving it the unique properties of being able to either have two enchantments woven into it or having one enchantment with double the normal uses/posts.
    Requirement: Needs an exclusive metal available only in Iwagakure, furnace, crucible
    Crafting Time: 7 days per 10 lbs of Sorcerer's Steel created


    Added requirements


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    Post by Bryn Sun Jun 17, 2018 8:29 pm

    Name: Lancelot's Bane
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 30,000-50,000 ryo
    Description: Lancelot's Bane is an enchantment that may only be applied to weapons with an edge. The wielder activates the enchantment within the weapon only when they choose to, and when it is active any wounds inflicted by it will be unable to clot for a long period of time and it also impedes healing jutsu. Ijutsu of equal rank and lower to the enchantment rank will have no effect. Higher rank ijutsu can heal the wounds over four posts, with each tier of Intelligence over B reducing the time by one post. Wounds inflicted will eventually heal on their own after one in real time month, though serious wounds will kill the wounded person before that comes to pass. Threads started in this time frame by the wounded must include this wound. A dangerous enchantment in skilled hands.
    Charges: 40 posts for both A and S rank.


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    Post by Bryn Mon Jun 25, 2018 10:03 pm

    Kameko wrote:Name: Lancelot's Bane
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 30,000-50,000 ryo
    Description: Lancelot's Bane is an enchantment that may only be applied to weapons with an edge. The wielder activates the enchantment within the weapon only when they choose to, and when it is active any wounds inflicted by it will be unable to clot for a long period of time and it also impedes healing jutsu. Ijutsu of equal rank and lower to the enchantment rank will have no effect. Higher rank ijutsu can heal the wounds over four posts, with each tier of Intelligence over B reducing the time by one post. Wounds inflicted will eventually heal on their own after one in real time month, though serious wounds will kill the wounded person before that comes to pass. Threads started in this time frame by the wounded must include this wound. A dangerous enchantment in skilled hands.
    Charges: 40 posts for both A and S rank.


    Name: Advanced Soft-Core Katana
    Rank: B-S
    Material: 4 lbs of Ebony, 1 lb of Senju Wood, 3 pounds of wood for the hilt and sheathe, leather or cloth to wrap the hilt.
    Description: This weapon is very similar to the Soft-Core Katana in its construction, however it utilizes much higher quality materials. Rather than steel forming the bulk of the blade, the black color of Ebony is chosen. Instead of iron in the core of the weapon, there is instead Senju Wood. It is just as capable of withstanding stress, however it is much more flexible. This combination of materials results in the durability of the Ebony being increased by one plus due to the blade's construction.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies


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    Post by Honiko Yoshidara Sun Jul 08, 2018 12:51 pm

    You have the rank designated as A-S but then say that Ijutsu of equal rank or lower will have no effect. Equal or lower rank in relation to what? The A Rank or the S Rank?

    Advanced Soft-Core Katana needs a Material Rank.
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    Post by Akame Sat Jul 14, 2018 3:11 pm

    Whichever rank the enchantment is. It can be either or.


    The material rank is A since it's made of Ebony.


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sat Jul 14, 2018 4:43 pm

    Say that in the registration

    Also isn't there a part of the template for Material Rank?


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    Post by Bryn Mon Aug 06, 2018 10:09 pm

    Kameko wrote:
    Kameko wrote:Name: Lancelot's Bane
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 30,000-50,000 ryo
    Description: Lancelot's Bane is an enchantment that may only be applied to weapons with an edge. The wielder activates the enchantment within the weapon only when they choose to, and when it is active any wounds inflicted by it will be unable to clot for a long period of time and it also impedes healing jutsu. Ijutsu of equal rank and lower to the enchantment rank will have no effect. Higher rank ijutsu can heal the wounds over four posts, with each tier of Intelligence over B reducing the time by one post. Wounds inflicted will eventually heal on their own after one in real time month, though serious wounds will kill the wounded person before that comes to pass. Threads started in this time frame by the wounded must include this wound. A dangerous enchantment in skilled hands.
    Charges: 40 posts for both A and S rank.


    Name: Advanced Soft-Core Katana
    Rank: B-S
    Material: 4 lbs of Ebony, 1 lb of Senju Wood, 3 pounds of wood for the hilt and sheathe, leather or cloth to wrap the hilt.
    Material Rank: A++
    Description: This weapon is very similar to the Soft-Core Katana in its construction, however it utilizes much higher quality materials. Rather than steel forming the bulk of the blade, the black color of Ebony is chosen. Instead of iron in the core of the weapon, there is instead Senju Wood. It is just as capable of withstanding stress, however it is much more flexible. This combination of materials results in the durability of the Ebony being increased by one plus due to the blade's construction.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Yari
    Rank: C-S
    Material: Wood for the haft of the spear, 2 lbs of metal or other suitable material for the blade
    Material Rank: B+ for a steel weapon
    Description: Your basic straight yari. Nothing special about it, just a spear to stab people with.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Quarterstaff
    Rank: C-S
    Material: Wood, 1 lb of metal or other suitable material for optional shods
    Material Rank: D+ (Increases to rank of metal with shods)
    Description: A quarterstaff roughly six feet in length, with longer lengths available upon request. Nothing special.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Manriki
    Rank: C-S
    Material: 9.5 lbs of a metal, usually steel
    Material Rank: B+ for steel
    Description: A manriki that is six feet in length with one two lb weight on each end. The chain can be lengthened to whatever the customer wishes, but each foot of chain adds 1.25 lbs of metal to the material used.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Flak Jacket Inserts
    Rank: C-S
    Material: 1 lb of metal or other suitable material per insert, typically steel
    Material Rank: B+ for steel
    Description: Metal inserts for a standard Konohagakure flak jacket. Includes ten inserts per craft.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Plated Gloves
    Rank: C-S
    Material: 2 lbs of leather and 1 lb of metal or other suitable matieral per pair, typically steel
    Material Rank: C for leather, B+ for steel
    Description: A pair of leather gloves with a metal plate on the back to help block attacks from edged weapons. Usually steel plates, finger-less version available as well.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: N/A

    Name: Chokuto
    Rank: C-S
    Material: 1 lb of metal or other suitable material, some wood and either cloth or leather bindings for the hilt, 2 lbs of wood for the sheathe.
    Material Rank: B+ for steel
    Description: A basic chokuto. Used to cut and stab things.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies


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    Post by Gin Akiyama Tue Aug 07, 2018 1:50 am

    [quote="Kameko"][quote="Kameko"]
    Kameko wrote:Name: Lancelot's Bane
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 30,000-50,000 ryo
    Description: Lancelot's Bane is an enchantment that may only be applied to weapons with an edge. The wielder activates the enchantment within the weapon only when they choose to, and when it is active any wounds inflicted by it will be unable to clot for a long period of time and it also impedes healing jutsu. Ijutsu of equal rank and lower to the enchantment rank will have no effect. Higher rank ijutsu can heal the wounds over four posts, with each tier of Intelligence over B reducing the time by one post. Wounds inflicted will eventually heal on their own after one in real time month, though serious wounds will kill the wounded person before that comes to pass. Threads started in this time frame by the wounded must include this wound. A dangerous enchantment in skilled hands.
    Charges: 40 posts for both A and S rank.


    Ijutsu of equal rank and lower to the enchantment rank will have no effect.

    The enchantment should only prevent healing from Ijutsu below its current rank.

    Higher rank ijutsu can heal the wounds over four posts, with each tier of Intelligence over B reducing the time by one post.

    This should be removed. Preventing healing from lower ranking Ijutsu is all it should be. Affecting the effectiveness of an Ijutsu technique on top of that overextends boundaries.

    Wounds inflicted will eventually heal on their own after one in real time month, though serious wounds will kill the wounded person before that comes to pass.

    This is an insane duration to have on any item. That aside, I feel you would benefit more from a "per post" ordeal. 10 posts will be a reasonable value to work with.


    Name: Advanced Soft-Core Katana
    Rank: B-S
    Material: 4 lbs of Ebony, 1 lb of Senju Wood, 3 pounds of wood for the hilt and sheathe, leather or cloth to wrap the hilt.
    Material Rank: A++
    Description: This weapon is very similar to the Soft-Core Katana in its construction, however it utilizes much higher quality materials. Rather than steel forming the bulk of the blade, the black color of Ebony is chosen. Instead of iron in the core of the weapon, there is instead Senju Wood. It is just as capable of withstanding stress, however it is much more flexible. This combination of materials results in the durability of the Ebony being increased by one plus due to the blade's construction.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Although I generally allow flexibility when it comes with game logic...a wooden core is not going to fly. That just simply wouldn't work since both materials are not malleable. Just use steel instead.

    Name: Yari
    Rank: C-S
    Material: Wood for the haft of the spear, 2 lbs of metal or other suitable material for the blade
    Material Rank: B+ for a steel weapon
    Description: Your basic straight yari. Nothing special about it, just a spear to stab people with.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time:  Varies

    Name: Quarterstaff
    Rank: C-S
    Material: Wood, 1 lb of metal or other suitable material for optional shods
    Material Rank: D+ (Increases to rank of metal with shods)
    Description: A quarterstaff roughly six feet in length, with longer lengths available upon request. Nothing special.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Manriki
    Rank: C-S
    Material: 9.5 lbs of a metal, usually steel
    Material Rank: B+ for steel
    Description: A manriki that is six feet in length with one two lb weight on each end. The chain can be lengthened to whatever the customer wishes, but each foot of chain adds 1.25 lbs of metal to the material used.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Flak Jacket Inserts
    Rank: C-S
    Material: 1 lb of metal or other suitable material per insert, typically steel
    Material Rank: B+ for steel
    Description: Metal inserts for a standard Konohagakure flak jacket. Includes ten inserts per craft.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Name: Plated Gloves
    Rank: C-S
    Material: 2 lbs of leather and 1 lb of metal or other suitable matieral per pair, typically steel
    Material Rank: C for leather, B+ for steel
    Description: A pair of leather gloves with a metal plate on the back to help block attacks from edged weapons. Usually steel plates, finger-less version available as well.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: N/A

    Name: Chokuto
    Rank: C-S
    Material: 1 lb of metal or other suitable material, some wood and either cloth or leather bindings for the hilt, 2 lbs of wood for the sheathe.
    Material Rank: B+ for steel
    Description: A basic chokuto. Used to cut and stab things.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Approved


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    Post by Akame Wed Aug 08, 2018 5:44 pm

    Kameko wrote:
    Kameko wrote:
    Kameko wrote:Name: Lancelot's Bane
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 30,000-50,000 ryo
    Description: Lancelot's Bane is an enchantment that may only be applied to weapons with an edge. The wielder activates the enchantment within the weapon only when they choose to, and when it is active any wounds inflicted by it will be unable to clot for a long period of time and it also impedes healing jutsu. Ijutsu of lower rank to the enchantment rank will have no effect. Wounds inflicted will eventually begin heal on their own after ten IC posts, though serious wounds will kill the wounded person before that comes to pass. Threads started in this time frame by the wounded must include this wound. A dangerous enchantment in skilled hands.
    Charges: 40 posts for both A and S rank.


    Name: Advanced Soft-Core Katana
    Rank: B-S
    Material: 4 lbs of Ebony, 1 lb of steel, 3 pounds of wood for the hilt and sheathe, leather or cloth to wrap the hilt.
    Material Rank: A++
    Description: This weapon is very similar to the Soft-Core Katana in its construction, however it utilizes much higher quality materials. Rather than steel forming the bulk of the blade, the black color of Ebony is chosen. Instead of iron in the core of the weapon, there is instead steel. It is just as capable of withstanding stress as a solid ebony blade is, however it is much more flexible. This combination of materials results in the durability of the Ebony being increased by one plus due to the blade's construction.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies


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    Post by Copycat Thu Aug 16, 2018 11:00 pm

    Tsuyo wrote:
    Kameko wrote:
    Kameko wrote:
    Kameko wrote:Name: Lancelot's Bane
    Rank: A-S
    Function: Active
    Price: 30,000-50,000 ryo
    Description: Lancelot's Bane is an enchantment that may only be applied to weapons with an edge. The wielder activates the enchantment within the weapon only when they choose to, and when it is active any wounds inflicted by it will be unable to clot for a long period of time and it also impedes healing jutsu. Ijutsu of lower rank to the enchantment rank will have no effect. Wounds inflicted will eventually begin heal on their own after ten IC posts, though serious wounds will kill the wounded person before that comes to pass. Threads started in this time frame by the wounded must include this wound. A dangerous enchantment in skilled hands.
    Charges: 40 posts for both A and S rank.


    Name: Advanced Soft-Core Katana
    Rank: B-S
    Material: 4 lbs of Ebony, 1 lb of steel, 3 pounds of wood for the hilt and sheathe, leather or cloth to wrap the hilt.
    Material Rank: A++
    Description: This weapon is very similar to the Soft-Core Katana in its construction, however it utilizes much higher quality materials. Rather than steel forming the bulk of the blade, the black color of Ebony is chosen. Instead of iron in the core of the weapon, there is instead steel. It is just as capable of withstanding stress as a solid ebony blade is, however it is much more flexible. This combination of materials results in the durability of the Ebony being increased by one plus due to the blade's construction.
    Requirement: N/A
    Crafting Time: Varies

    Approved unless a higher staff member interjects.


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