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    Iyoshi Uchiha

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    Iyoshi Uchiha Empty Iyoshi Uchiha

    Post by Guest Tue May 22, 2018 3:40 pm

    Name: Iyoshi Uchiha
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Village: Konahagakure
    Rank: Genin
    Title:

    Clan: Uchiha
    Bloodline: Sharingan (locked)
    Element(s): Fire
    Skill(s): Ninjutsu

    Stats 1050/1050

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: E
    • Stamina: D
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination:E
    • Intelligence:D
    • Perception: D



    Unique Abilities:


    Appearance:
    Appearance :


    History: Born into the Uchiha clan he had 6 siblings and he was the youngest of them all. They all were competitive siblings who would have fun and race to see who was the fastest. He learnt a lot from his family and proceeds to do. His parents died normally when Iyoshi was a young kid and he was moved to live with his uncle and auntie. He hasn’t seen his older siblings for more than five years. That didn’t mean anything to him as he strived forward and stay strong. The siblings got separated and he lives on his own know preparing to start his genin adventure.

    Personality: Iyoshi is a hot-headed shinobi who tries his best to do things correctly. He prefers things to be his way and doesn’t like others interfering his problems. Iyoshi is keen to learning and wants to serve this village. He’s a big fan of food and tends to eat a lot when the time comes in hand. Fighting is his passion and enjoys many things such as travelling throughout the nation.

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    Last edited by Iyoshi on Thu May 31, 2018 5:11 pm; edited 9 times in total
    Rin Matoi
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    Posts : 1252
    Join date : 2016-12-07

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Bukijutsu | Weapon Crafting
    Class: D
    Ryo: 0

    Iyoshi Uchiha Empty Re: Iyoshi Uchiha

    Post by Rin Matoi Sat May 26, 2018 5:42 pm

    J wrote:
    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination:E
    • Intelligence:C
    • Perception: E

    Your current EXP total for your stats will tally up to 2150 EXP. This is 1100 EXP above the starting amount for Genin, which is 1050 EXP.


    Also please ensure you follow proper formatting for your character sheet and your text are in their proper location on the registration.
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    Iyoshi Uchiha Empty Re: Iyoshi Uchiha

    Post by Guest Sat May 26, 2018 6:04 pm

    Masuyo Kaede wrote:
    J wrote:
    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination:E
    • Intelligence:C
    • Perception: E


    Your current EXP total for your stats will tally up to 2150 EXP. This is 1100 EXP above the starting amount for Genin, which is 1050 EXP.


    Also please ensure you follow proper formatting for your character sheet and your text are in their proper location on the registration.




    I believe that's good?
    Rin Matoi
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    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Bukijutsu | Weapon Crafting
    Class: D
    Ryo: 0

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    Post by Rin Matoi Sun May 27, 2018 7:14 pm


    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: E
    • Stamina: E
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination:E
    • Intelligence:E
    • Perception: E

    Again, as a Genin, you have 1050 EXP to spend. You have only spent 300 EXP with your current spending. This type of EXP must be spent towards stats.


    Also if you are choosing Genjutsu, ensure you put the skill under the skills section of the application.
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    Iyoshi Uchiha Empty Re: Iyoshi Uchiha

    Post by Guest Wed May 30, 2018 1:25 am

    Masuyo Kaede wrote:

    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: E
    • Stamina: E
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination:E
    • Intelligence:E
    • Perception: E


    Again, as a Genin, you have 1050 EXP to spend. You have only spent 300 EXP with your current spending. This type of EXP must be spent towards stats.


    Also if you are choosing Genjutsu, ensure you put the skill under the skills section of the application.



    should be done.
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    Skills & Elements: All
    Class: X
    Ryo: All of It

    Iyoshi Uchiha Empty Re: Iyoshi Uchiha

    Post by Chen Kimyōnakama Thu May 31, 2018 8:20 am

    Genjutsu is a skill, and you have it listed correctly, but it is not a unique ability, so you'll need to remove the genjutsu description from your unique ability section. If you're interested in making a unique ability, you can take a look here for some ideas.


    _________________
    Stats
    Strength: D
    Constitution: E
    Stamina: A
    Speed: D
    Coordination: D
    Intelligence: A
    Perception: S
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    Skills & Elements: All
    Class: X
    Ryo: All of It

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    Post by Chen Kimyōnakama Thu May 31, 2018 3:09 pm

    One more thing: you've got 3 Skills (Non, Gen, and Fire). Uchiha Genin only have 2 Skills. You'll need to remove one.


    _________________
    Stats
    Strength: D
    Constitution: E
    Stamina: A
    Speed: D
    Coordination: D
    Intelligence: A
    Perception: S
    Chen Kimyōnakama
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    Join date : 2012-05-28

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: All
    Class: X
    Ryo: All of It

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    Post by Chen Kimyōnakama Thu May 31, 2018 8:01 pm

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