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    Post by Nao Hyūga Sun May 05, 2024 3:34 am

    Primal Form

    Deep within every individual lies a dormant reservoir of ancient, primordial energies—a remnant of humanity's primitive past. These untamed forces, hidden beneath the veneer of civilization and the weight of societal norms, ache for release. Over countless generations, they've been suppressed by layers of control forged by rational thought and emotional restraint. It is a path fraught with peril, for the intrepid souls who dare this journey, a pathway to untapped potential emerges—a journey to unearth the natural urges lying dormant within. This path demands the relinquishing of empathy and the forsaking of consequence. But for those who embrace it, a revelation awaits: their true self—a change not just of appearance, but of their soul itself.

    In this heightened state, their hair undergoes a mesmerizing transformation, shimmering with a silvery-grey hue that seems to dance with the very essence of energy itself. Each strand elongates and spikes upwards with an unparalleled ferocity, defying the constraints of gravity as if reaching towards the heavens. Their physical form becomes a testament to newfound power, muscles swelling with an otherworldly strength that pulses beneath their skin like a dormant volcano ready to erupt. But perhaps most striking of all is the crackling magenta aura with a black core that envelops them, a tangible manifestation of untamed power that dances and flickers with an almost sentient awareness. It crackles and arcs with an electric intensity, casting shadows that seem to writhe and twist in its wake, a living testament to the boundless potential that now courses through their veins.

    This Enhanced State is akin to Sage Mode with the exception that there is no imperfect form and users are not referred to as a Sage, this enhanced state grants the following benefits:

    Primal Power:
    Primal Power, bestowed upon the user in their Primal Form, ignites their latent potential, unlocking a series of unique boosts to their physical attributes. Upon obtaining Primal Form, the user experiences an initial surge of power, granting them: +2 Unique Tiers to Coordination, +1 Unique Tier to Strength, Constitution, Speed, and Perception.

    Primal Energy:
    Primal Energy surges through the user's veins in their Primal Form, empowering their chakra manipulation and enhancing the potency of their techniques. While in this heightened state, the user has access to Primal Chakra. Primal Chakra is the energy reservoir drawn from when using Primal Form and is spent in the Primal Technique Enhancement. The amount of Primal Chakra available is based on the amount of training put into Primal Form. The Primal Chakra Pool starts out at 0 (zero) but can be increased through investment with EXP (50 exp per 10 primal chakra points). The limit to how much they can have is equal to half of the user's Base Stamina worth of Chakra.

    Example: If the user has a Base of A Stamina, this gives them 260 Chakra, their maximum amount of Primal Chakra is equal to 130. This will require 13 investments of 50 EXP each, equaling to 650 EXP

    By mixing Primal Chakra into a technique, the user is able to enhanced the Power and Effectiveness of that technique. In order to do this, the user needs to spend half of the technique's cost using their own chakra and the other half using their Primal Chakra. Doing this will increase the Power of a regular jutsu by 1 Rank. This may not be used to make the Power of a technique X Rank Power.

    Gathering Primal Chakra requires the user to remain still in meditation for 72 hours before their pool is 100%, alternatively the user can pay 250 exp to have their pool start at 50%.
    • The user may also create shadow clones to remain still and gather chakra, dispersing the clone to transfer the Primal Chakra to them. The maximum primal chakra the clones can gather is the same as their creator.
    • As Primal Chakra works the same as Sage Chakra, if the user has a way to absorb techniques and add chakra to their own pools, the same method can be used to absorb Senjutsu enhanced techniques adding the nature chakra to their Primal Chakra Pool.


    Primal Instinct:
    Primal Instinct, an innate aspect of the user's Primal Form, heightens their instinctual awareness and reflexes to unprecedented levels, allowing them to react to threats with unparalleled precision and efficiency. While in Primal Form, the user no longer has to strain their eyes or other senses to focus on an individual in order to keep up with their movements, allowing the user to easily track movements that are one rank higher than the user's perception perfectly without extra focus. Even the slightest muscle movements do not go unnoticed by the user, giving them the ability to react to things they might not have been able to otherwise. The user gains access to Defensive Precogs, granting them invaluable insights into impending dangers. The number of Defensive Precogs available to the user is determined by the rank of their Perception Stat while in Primal Form instead of their intelligence, with a maximum of 3 precogs attainable: B=1 after 4 posts, A=2 after 2 posts, S=3 instantly. This still follows the Precogs rules and only serves as a stat swap for the analyzing and Precogs.

    Primal Magic:
    Primal Magic represents the user's ability to tap into the primordial energies coursing through their being in their Primal Form, unlocking the mystical ability of flight, granting the user the freedom to soar through the skies with unmatched agility and grace.

    By channeling 5 primal chakra per post, the user gains the ability to take flight while in Primal Form. This ethereal flight enables them to defy gravity and traverse the air with ease, granting them unparalleled mobility and a strategic advantage over grounded opponents. Their speed/coordination within the air is equal to that of their speed/coordination stats while in this state.

    Upkeep:
    Maintaining the Primal Form state imposes a continuous strain on the user's chakra reserves, requiring a steady expenditure of energy to sustain its heightened abilities. However, the user can optimize the efficiency and sustainability of Primal Form, ensuring that they can unleash their full potential and dominate the battlefield with unmatched power and prowess.
    • Base Upkeep: By default, activating Primal Form incurs a chakra cost of 20 Primal Chakra per post while the state is active.
    • Enhanced Control: By paying 500 experience points, the user may decrease the chakra cost of maintaining Primal Form to 10 primal chakra per post.
    • Mastery: For an additional investment of 500 experience points, the user can further enhance Primal Form by lowering the cost to 5 primal chakra per post.


    Last edited by Nao on Tue May 14, 2024 6:07 am; edited 4 times in total


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    Post by Airi Ohara Wed May 08, 2024 5:35 pm

    Nao wrote:
    Primal Form

    Deep within every individual lies a dormant reservoir of ancient, primordial energies—a remnant of humanity's primitive past. These untamed forces, hidden beneath the veneer of civilization and the weight of societal norms, ache for release. Over countless generations, they've been suppressed by layers of control forged by rational thought and emotional restraint. It is a path fraught with peril, for the intrepid souls who dare this journey, a pathway to untapped potential emerges—a journey to unearth the natural urges lying dormant within. This path demands the relinquishing of empathy and the forsaking of consequence. But for those who embrace it, a revelation awaits: their true self—a change not just of appearance, but of their soul itself.

    In this heightened state, their hair undergoes a mesmerizing transformation, shimmering with a silvery-grey hue that seems to dance with the very essence of energy itself. Each strand elongates and spikes upwards with an unparalleled ferocity, defying the constraints of gravity as if reaching towards the heavens. Their physical form becomes a testament to newfound power, muscles swelling with an otherworldly strength that pulses beneath their skin like a dormant volcano ready to erupt. But perhaps most striking of all is the crackling magenta aura with a black core that envelops them, a tangible manifestation of untamed power that dances and flickers with an almost sentient awareness. It crackles and arcs with an electric intensity, casting shadows that seem to writhe and twist in its wake, a living testament to the boundless potential that now courses through their veins. This Enhanced State grants the following benefits:

    Primal Power:
    Primal Power, bestowed upon the user in their Primal Form, ignites their latent potential, unlocking a series of unique boosts to their physical attributes. These enhancements come in the form of: +2 Tiers to Coordination, +1 Tier to Strength, Constitution, Stamina, Speed, and Perception. However, these enhancements are not immediately accessible and must be unlocked progressively through dedication and experience.
    • Base (Free): Upon obtaining Primal Form, the user experiences an initial surge of power, granting them a +1 tier increase to both Strength and Coordination while active. This serves as the foundation upon which further enhancements are built.
    • Further Boosts: To unlock the full extent of Primal Power, the user must invest in their growth and development. Additional boosts to their stats are unlocked at a cost of 250 experience points per +1 tier increase. This means that unlocking all seven boosts requires a total investment of 1250 experience points.


    Primal Energy:
    Primal Energy surges through the user's veins in their Primal Form, empowering their chakra manipulation and enhancing the potency of their techniques. While in this heightened state, the user has the ability to toggle between chakra cost reduction and empowerment granting the user flexibility in adapting to various situations on the battlefield. Whether they choose to conserve their chakra reserves for sustained engagements or unleash a barrage of empowered techniques to overwhelm their adversaries, Primal Energy equips the user with the tools necessary to emerge victorious in the heat of battle.
    • Chakra Cost Reduction: While in Primal Form, the user benefits from a chakra cost reduction of 1 rank to the techniques they employ. This reduction is capable of stacking with other reductions the user may possess, such as those derived from specialized skills or clan abilities, allowing for a maximum cumulative reduction of 2 ranks in total. This reduction enables the user to utilize their techniques more frequently and with less strain on their chakra reserves.
    • Empowerment Option: Users possess the ability to forego the chakra reduction in exchange for a significant increase in the power of their techniques. By opting to pay the normal chakra cost of a technique, the user can empower it in a manner akin to the Focused Amplification Technique. When a technique is empowered, its power is increased by 1 rank. For example, if the empowered technique is originally rated as A-rank, it would be treated as if it were S-rank in terms of its potency and effectiveness. This enhancement allows the user to unleash devastating attacks or imbue their techniques with greater utility and versatility, providing a strategic advantage in combat scenarios.


    Primal Instinct:
    Primal Instinct, an innate aspect of the user's Primal Form, heightens their instinctual awareness and reflexes to unprecedented levels, allowing them to react to threats with unparalleled precision and efficiency. While in this state, the user gains access to Defensive Precogs, granting them invaluable insights into impending dangers without the need for conscious analysis. The number of Defensive Precogs available to the user is determined by the rank of their Perception Stat while in Primal Form, with a maximum of 5 precogs attainable: D = 1, C = 2, B = 3, A = 4, S = 5.

    Primal Magic:
    Primal Magic represents the user's ability to tap into the primordial energies coursing through their being in their Primal Form, unlocking mystical abilities beyond the realm of conventional techniques. One such ability is the power of flight, granting the user the freedom to soar through the skies with unmatched agility and grace.

    By channeling 5 chakra per post, the user gains the ability to take flight while in Primal Form. This ethereal flight enables them to defy gravity and traverse the air with ease, granting them unparalleled mobility and a strategic advantage over grounded opponents. Their speed/coordination within the air is equal to that of their coordination stat while in this state.

    Upkeep:
    Maintaining the Primal Form state imposes a continuous strain on the user's chakra reserves, requiring a steady expenditure of energy to sustain its heightened abilities. However, the user can optimize the efficiency and sustainability of Primal Form, ensuring that they can unleash their full potential and dominate the battlefield with unmatched power and prowess.
    • Base Upkeep: By default, activating Primal Form can only be accessed for 5 posts and incurs a chakra cost of 20 per post while the state is active. This expenditure reflects the intense concentration and exertion required to harness the primal energies coursing through the user's being and maintain the heightened state of transformation.
    • Enhanced Control: By paying 500 experience points, the user may decrease the chakra cost of maintaining Primal Form to 10 per post. This reduction in chakra expenditure allows for more efficient utilization of their energy reserves, enabling them to sustain the state for longer periods (10 posts) without exhausting themselves.
    • Mastery: For an additional investment of 500 experience points, the user can further enhance Primal Form by eliminating the maximum duration limit entirely and lowering the cost to 5 chakra per post. This enhancement grants the user the ability to maintain the state indefinitely so long as they have chakra to do so, allowing them to unleash their full potential without the constraints of time.

    Sorry it took so long, staff had to talk about this.
    + Primal Power:
      To start off with, 7 Tiers is a bit too much. We suggest removing the stamina buff. Stamina Buffs are generally a bit... iffy and usually we don't like forms that grant stamina. 6 is about on-par with Sage Mode.
        Further Boosts: Probably change the way this is worded to:
        To unlock the full extent of Primal Power, the user must invest in their growth and development. For 250 EXP, the user may increase the bonuses granted by entering Primal Form, by +1 Unique Tier. The stats affected are: Coordination, Constitution, Speed, and Perception. The user may only be the bonus to each stat once with Coordination capping out at +2 UQ Tiers.

    + Primal Energy:
      Going to be honest, this is a little overpowered. This reduces the cost of every technique used by 1 rank or that can be used to increase the rank of the technique by 1 rank. There is no limiting factor to doing this. Sage Mode has a limiting factor for doing this in the fact that the user has Senjutsu Chakra that limits how many techniques can have the costs reduced and Senjutsu Chakra that limits how often one could Sage Enhance their techniques. There needs to be some kind of limiting factor for Empowerment Option. Chakra Cost Reduction also needs to be tightened up to grant reduction to certain types of Skills -- This shouldn't affect all types of skills. This will be determined depending on what limiting factor you have for this.

    + Primal Instinct:
      The amount you're asking for is far too much. I would suggest making this a stat-swap, using your Perception as the base for your Precogs rather than your intelligence, following the Pre-Cogs rules -- but using Perception rather than INT. Please fix this.

    + Primal Magic:
      You're going to have to explain what your intentions are with Primal Magic with
      Primal Magic represents the user's ability to tap into the primordial energies coursing through their being in their Primal Form, unlocking mystical abilities beyond the realm of conventional techniques.

      Flight, itself, is fine but I would suggest that your Speed of flight is based on your speed and your ability to make sharp turns is based on your coordination. I wouldn't tie the two together with a single stat. This feels like it's basically the sage kata, so this is fine.

    + Upkeep:
      This is fine.


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    Post by Nao Hyūga Wed May 08, 2024 7:17 pm

    Edits made

    Reformatted to be more akin to Sage Mode with some minor word changes.

    Primal power
    Removed the stamina boost, lowering the boosts to a total of 6 and also removed the exp costs for the boosts so that it's like sage mode.

    Primal energy
    ES grants a primal chakra pool which works the same as a Senjutsu Chakra pool, must pay exp to increase the pool as well as limitations on the gathering. The user must use this pool for the enhancement of techniques, I hope this works for the limitation you requested.

    Primal Instinct
    Grants maximum of 3 Precogs while in this state depending on boosted perception.

    Primal Magic
    The idea behind it was purely for the flight, I removed the fluff text so that would be easier to understand. Edited the flight to work with both speed and coordination rather than just coordination


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    Post by Airi Ohara Wed May 08, 2024 11:12 pm

    Nao wrote:
    Primal Form

    Deep within every individual lies a dormant reservoir of ancient, primordial energies—a remnant of humanity's primitive past. These untamed forces, hidden beneath the veneer of civilization and the weight of societal norms, ache for release. Over countless generations, they've been suppressed by layers of control forged by rational thought and emotional restraint. It is a path fraught with peril, for the intrepid souls who dare this journey, a pathway to untapped potential emerges—a journey to unearth the natural urges lying dormant within. This path demands the relinquishing of empathy and the forsaking of consequence. But for those who embrace it, a revelation awaits: their true self—a change not just of appearance, but of their soul itself.

    In this heightened state, their hair undergoes a mesmerizing transformation, shimmering with a silvery-grey hue that seems to dance with the very essence of energy itself. Each strand elongates and spikes upwards with an unparalleled ferocity, defying the constraints of gravity as if reaching towards the heavens. Their physical form becomes a testament to newfound power, muscles swelling with an otherworldly strength that pulses beneath their skin like a dormant volcano ready to erupt. But perhaps most striking of all is the crackling magenta aura with a black core that envelops them, a tangible manifestation of untamed power that dances and flickers with an almost sentient awareness. It crackles and arcs with an electric intensity, casting shadows that seem to writhe and twist in its wake, a living testament to the boundless potential that now courses through their veins.

    This Enhanced State is akin to Sage Mode with the exception that there is no imperfect form and users are not referred to as a Sage, this enhanced state grants the following benefits:

    Primal Power:
    Primal Power, bestowed upon the user in their Primal Form, ignites their latent potential, unlocking a series of unique boosts to their physical attributes. Upon obtaining Primal Form, the user experiences an initial surge of power, granting them: +2 Unique Tiers to Coordination, +1 Unique Tier to Strength, Constitution, Speed, and Perception.

    Primal Energy:
    Primal Energy surges through the user's veins in their Primal Form, empowering their chakra manipulation and enhancing the potency of their techniques. While in this heightened state, the user has access to Primal Chakra. Primal Chakra is the energy reservoir drawn from when using Primal Form and is spent in the Primal Technique Enhancement. The amount of Primal Chakra available is based on the amount of training put into Primal Form. The Primal Chakra Pool starts out at 0 (zero) but can be increased through investment with EXP (50 exp per 10 primal chakra points). The limit to how much they can have is equal to half of the user's Base Stamina worth of Chakra.

    Example: If the user has a Base of A Stamina, this gives them 260 Chakra, their maximum amount of Primal Chakra is equal to 130. This will require 13 investments of 50 EXP each, equaling to 650 EXP

    By mixing Primal Chakra into a technique, the user is able to enhanced the Power and Effectiveness of that technique. In order to do this, the user needs to spend half of the technique's cost using their own chakra and the other half using their Primal Chakra. Doing this will increase the Power of a regular jutsu by 1 Rank. This may not be used to make the Power of a technique X Rank Power.

    Gathering Primal Chakra requires the user to remain still in meditation for 72 hours before their pool is 100%, alternatively the user can pay 250 exp to have their pool start at 50%.
    • The user may also create shadow clones to remain still and gather chakra, dispersing the clone to transfer the Primal Chakra to them. The maximum primal chakra the clones can gather is the same as their creator.
    • As Primal Chakra works the same as Sage Chakra, if the user has a way to absorb techniques and add chakra to their own pools, the same method can be used to absorb Senjutsu enhanced techniques adding the nature chakra to their Primal Chakra Pool.


    Primal Instinct:
    Primal Instinct, an innate aspect of the user's Primal Form, heightens their instinctual awareness and reflexes to unprecedented levels, allowing them to react to threats with unparalleled precision and efficiency. While in this state, the user gains access to Defensive Precogs, granting them invaluable insights into impending dangers without the need for conscious analysis of opponents. The number of Defensive Precogs available to the user is determined by the rank of their Perception Stat while in Primal Form instead of their intelligence, with a maximum of 3 precogs attainable: B=1, A=2, S=3.

    Primal Magic:
    Primal Magic represents the user's ability to tap into the primordial energies coursing through their being in their Primal Form, unlocking the mystical ability of flight, granting the user the freedom to soar through the skies with unmatched agility and grace.

    By channeling 5 primal chakra per post, the user gains the ability to take flight while in Primal Form. This ethereal flight enables them to defy gravity and traverse the air with ease, granting them unparalleled mobility and a strategic advantage over grounded opponents. Their speed/coordination within the air is equal to that of their speed/coordination stats while in this state.

    Upkeep:
    Maintaining the Primal Form state imposes a continuous strain on the user's chakra reserves, requiring a steady expenditure of energy to sustain its heightened abilities. However, the user can optimize the efficiency and sustainability of Primal Form, ensuring that they can unleash their full potential and dominate the battlefield with unmatched power and prowess.
    • Base Upkeep: By default, activating Primal Form incurs a chakra cost of 20 Primal Chakra per post while the state is active.
    • Enhanced Control: By paying 500 experience points, the user may decrease the chakra cost of maintaining Primal Form to 10 primal chakra per post.
    • Mastery: For an additional investment of 500 experience points, the user can further enhance Primal Form by lowering the cost to 5 primal chakra per post.

    This is basically sage mode. EZPZ approved.


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    Post by Airi Ohara Sat May 11, 2024 7:40 pm

    Airi Ohara wrote:
    Nao wrote:
    Primal Form

    Deep within every individual lies a dormant reservoir of ancient, primordial energies—a remnant of humanity's primitive past. These untamed forces, hidden beneath the veneer of civilization and the weight of societal norms, ache for release. Over countless generations, they've been suppressed by layers of control forged by rational thought and emotional restraint. It is a path fraught with peril, for the intrepid souls who dare this journey, a pathway to untapped potential emerges—a journey to unearth the natural urges lying dormant within. This path demands the relinquishing of empathy and the forsaking of consequence. But for those who embrace it, a revelation awaits: their true self—a change not just of appearance, but of their soul itself.

    In this heightened state, their hair undergoes a mesmerizing transformation, shimmering with a silvery-grey hue that seems to dance with the very essence of energy itself. Each strand elongates and spikes upwards with an unparalleled ferocity, defying the constraints of gravity as if reaching towards the heavens. Their physical form becomes a testament to newfound power, muscles swelling with an otherworldly strength that pulses beneath their skin like a dormant volcano ready to erupt. But perhaps most striking of all is the crackling magenta aura with a black core that envelops them, a tangible manifestation of untamed power that dances and flickers with an almost sentient awareness. It crackles and arcs with an electric intensity, casting shadows that seem to writhe and twist in its wake, a living testament to the boundless potential that now courses through their veins.

    This Enhanced State is akin to Sage Mode with the exception that there is no imperfect form and users are not referred to as a Sage, this enhanced state grants the following benefits:

    Primal Power:
    Primal Power, bestowed upon the user in their Primal Form, ignites their latent potential, unlocking a series of unique boosts to their physical attributes. Upon obtaining Primal Form, the user experiences an initial surge of power, granting them: +2 Unique Tiers to Coordination, +1 Unique Tier to Strength, Constitution, Speed, and Perception.

    Primal Energy:
    Primal Energy surges through the user's veins in their Primal Form, empowering their chakra manipulation and enhancing the potency of their techniques. While in this heightened state, the user has access to Primal Chakra. Primal Chakra is the energy reservoir drawn from when using Primal Form and is spent in the Primal Technique Enhancement. The amount of Primal Chakra available is based on the amount of training put into Primal Form. The Primal Chakra Pool starts out at 0 (zero) but can be increased through investment with EXP (50 exp per 10 primal chakra points). The limit to how much they can have is equal to half of the user's Base Stamina worth of Chakra.

    Example: If the user has a Base of A Stamina, this gives them 260 Chakra, their maximum amount of Primal Chakra is equal to 130. This will require 13 investments of 50 EXP each, equaling to 650 EXP

    By mixing Primal Chakra into a technique, the user is able to enhanced the Power and Effectiveness of that technique. In order to do this, the user needs to spend half of the technique's cost using their own chakra and the other half using their Primal Chakra. Doing this will increase the Power of a regular jutsu by 1 Rank. This may not be used to make the Power of a technique X Rank Power.

    Gathering Primal Chakra requires the user to remain still in meditation for 72 hours before their pool is 100%, alternatively the user can pay 250 exp to have their pool start at 50%.
    • The user may also create shadow clones to remain still and gather chakra, dispersing the clone to transfer the Primal Chakra to them. The maximum primal chakra the clones can gather is the same as their creator.
    • As Primal Chakra works the same as Sage Chakra, if the user has a way to absorb techniques and add chakra to their own pools, the same method can be used to absorb Senjutsu enhanced techniques adding the nature chakra to their Primal Chakra Pool.


    Primal Instinct:
    Primal Instinct, an innate aspect of the user's Primal Form, heightens their instinctual awareness and reflexes to unprecedented levels, allowing them to react to threats with unparalleled precision and efficiency. While in this state, the user gains access to Defensive Precogs, granting them invaluable insights into impending dangers without the need for conscious analysis of opponents. The number of Defensive Precogs available to the user is determined by the rank of their Perception Stat while in Primal Form instead of their intelligence, with a maximum of 3 precogs attainable: B=1, A=2, S=3.

    Primal Magic:
    Primal Magic represents the user's ability to tap into the primordial energies coursing through their being in their Primal Form, unlocking the mystical ability of flight, granting the user the freedom to soar through the skies with unmatched agility and grace.

    By channeling 5 primal chakra per post, the user gains the ability to take flight while in Primal Form. This ethereal flight enables them to defy gravity and traverse the air with ease, granting them unparalleled mobility and a strategic advantage over grounded opponents. Their speed/coordination within the air is equal to that of their speed/coordination stats while in this state.

    Upkeep:
    Maintaining the Primal Form state imposes a continuous strain on the user's chakra reserves, requiring a steady expenditure of energy to sustain its heightened abilities. However, the user can optimize the efficiency and sustainability of Primal Form, ensuring that they can unleash their full potential and dominate the battlefield with unmatched power and prowess.
    • Base Upkeep: By default, activating Primal Form incurs a chakra cost of 20 Primal Chakra per post while the state is active.
    • Enhanced Control: By paying 500 experience points, the user may decrease the chakra cost of maintaining Primal Form to 10 primal chakra per post.
    • Mastery: For an additional investment of 500 experience points, the user can further enhance Primal Form by lowering the cost to 5 primal chakra per post.

    This is basically sage mode. EZPZ approved.
    Upon further deliberation, staff has decided that Primal Instinct needs to be replaced. Please replace Primal Instinct with something else. If you have already claimed Primal Instinct in your Updates, you are free to get a refund for that Skill. The Entire ES isn't pulled, just Primal Instinct.

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    Post by Nao Hyūga Sun May 12, 2024 10:49 am

    Removed the Precogs from primal Instinct and made it where the user is able to track movements of 1-tier higher than their perception as though they were equal. (Capable of tracking the speed perfectly without extra focus) instead of (Can track the speed with adequate visibility, but they require constant focus on the opponent to do so.)



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    Post by Airi Ohara Sun May 12, 2024 3:48 pm

    Nao wrote:
    Primal Form

    Deep within every individual lies a dormant reservoir of ancient, primordial energies—a remnant of humanity's primitive past. These untamed forces, hidden beneath the veneer of civilization and the weight of societal norms, ache for release. Over countless generations, they've been suppressed by layers of control forged by rational thought and emotional restraint. It is a path fraught with peril, for the intrepid souls who dare this journey, a pathway to untapped potential emerges—a journey to unearth the natural urges lying dormant within. This path demands the relinquishing of empathy and the forsaking of consequence. But for those who embrace it, a revelation awaits: their true self—a change not just of appearance, but of their soul itself.

    In this heightened state, their hair undergoes a mesmerizing transformation, shimmering with a silvery-grey hue that seems to dance with the very essence of energy itself. Each strand elongates and spikes upwards with an unparalleled ferocity, defying the constraints of gravity as if reaching towards the heavens. Their physical form becomes a testament to newfound power, muscles swelling with an otherworldly strength that pulses beneath their skin like a dormant volcano ready to erupt. But perhaps most striking of all is the crackling magenta aura with a black core that envelops them, a tangible manifestation of untamed power that dances and flickers with an almost sentient awareness. It crackles and arcs with an electric intensity, casting shadows that seem to writhe and twist in its wake, a living testament to the boundless potential that now courses through their veins.

    This Enhanced State is akin to Sage Mode with the exception that there is no imperfect form and users are not referred to as a Sage, this enhanced state grants the following benefits:

    Primal Power:
    Primal Power, bestowed upon the user in their Primal Form, ignites their latent potential, unlocking a series of unique boosts to their physical attributes. Upon obtaining Primal Form, the user experiences an initial surge of power, granting them: +2 Unique Tiers to Coordination, +1 Unique Tier to Strength, Constitution, Speed, and Perception.

    Primal Energy:
    Primal Energy surges through the user's veins in their Primal Form, empowering their chakra manipulation and enhancing the potency of their techniques. While in this heightened state, the user has access to Primal Chakra. Primal Chakra is the energy reservoir drawn from when using Primal Form and is spent in the Primal Technique Enhancement. The amount of Primal Chakra available is based on the amount of training put into Primal Form. The Primal Chakra Pool starts out at 0 (zero) but can be increased through investment with EXP (50 exp per 10 primal chakra points). The limit to how much they can have is equal to half of the user's Base Stamina worth of Chakra.

    Example: If the user has a Base of A Stamina, this gives them 260 Chakra, their maximum amount of Primal Chakra is equal to 130. This will require 13 investments of 50 EXP each, equaling to 650 EXP

    By mixing Primal Chakra into a technique, the user is able to enhanced the Power and Effectiveness of that technique. In order to do this, the user needs to spend half of the technique's cost using their own chakra and the other half using their Primal Chakra. Doing this will increase the Power of a regular jutsu by 1 Rank. This may not be used to make the Power of a technique X Rank Power.

    Gathering Primal Chakra requires the user to remain still in meditation for 72 hours before their pool is 100%, alternatively the user can pay 250 exp to have their pool start at 50%.
    • The user may also create shadow clones to remain still and gather chakra, dispersing the clone to transfer the Primal Chakra to them. The maximum primal chakra the clones can gather is the same as their creator.
    • As Primal Chakra works the same as Sage Chakra, if the user has a way to absorb techniques and add chakra to their own pools, the same method can be used to absorb Senjutsu enhanced techniques adding the nature chakra to their Primal Chakra Pool.


    Primal Instinct:
    Primal Instinct, an innate aspect of the user's Primal Form, heightens their instinctual awareness and reflexes to unprecedented levels, allowing them to react to threats with unparalleled precision and efficiency. While in Primal Form, the user no longer has to strain their eyes or other senses to focus on an individual in order to keep up with their movements, allowing the user to easily track movements that are one rank higher than the user's perception perfectly without extra focus. Even the slightest muscle movements do not go unnoticed by the user, giving them the ability to react to things they might not have been able to otherwise.

    Primal Magic:
    Primal Magic represents the user's ability to tap into the primordial energies coursing through their being in their Primal Form, unlocking the mystical ability of flight, granting the user the freedom to soar through the skies with unmatched agility and grace.

    By channeling 5 primal chakra per post, the user gains the ability to take flight while in Primal Form. This ethereal flight enables them to defy gravity and traverse the air with ease, granting them unparalleled mobility and a strategic advantage over grounded opponents. Their speed/coordination within the air is equal to that of their speed/coordination stats while in this state.

    Upkeep:
    Maintaining the Primal Form state imposes a continuous strain on the user's chakra reserves, requiring a steady expenditure of energy to sustain its heightened abilities. However, the user can optimize the efficiency and sustainability of Primal Form, ensuring that they can unleash their full potential and dominate the battlefield with unmatched power and prowess.
    • Base Upkeep: By default, activating Primal Form incurs a chakra cost of 20 Primal Chakra per post while the state is active.
    • Enhanced Control: By paying 500 experience points, the user may decrease the chakra cost of maintaining Primal Form to 10 primal chakra per post.
    • Mastery: For an additional investment of 500 experience points, the user can further enhance Primal Form by lowering the cost to 5 primal chakra per post.

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    Primal Form  Empty Re: Primal Form

    Post by Airi Ohara Wed May 22, 2024 10:34 am

    Nao Hyūga wrote:
    Primal Form

    Deep within every individual lies a dormant reservoir of ancient, primordial energies—a remnant of humanity's primitive past. These untamed forces, hidden beneath the veneer of civilization and the weight of societal norms, ache for release. Over countless generations, they've been suppressed by layers of control forged by rational thought and emotional restraint. It is a path fraught with peril, for the intrepid souls who dare this journey, a pathway to untapped potential emerges—a journey to unearth the natural urges lying dormant within. This path demands the relinquishing of empathy and the forsaking of consequence. But for those who embrace it, a revelation awaits: their true self—a change not just of appearance, but of their soul itself.

    In this heightened state, their hair undergoes a mesmerizing transformation, shimmering with a silvery-grey hue that seems to dance with the very essence of energy itself. Each strand elongates and spikes upwards with an unparalleled ferocity, defying the constraints of gravity as if reaching towards the heavens. Their physical form becomes a testament to newfound power, muscles swelling with an otherworldly strength that pulses beneath their skin like a dormant volcano ready to erupt. But perhaps most striking of all is the crackling magenta aura with a black core that envelops them, a tangible manifestation of untamed power that dances and flickers with an almost sentient awareness. It crackles and arcs with an electric intensity, casting shadows that seem to writhe and twist in its wake, a living testament to the boundless potential that now courses through their veins.

    This Enhanced State is akin to Sage Mode with the exception that there is no imperfect form and users are not referred to as a Sage, this enhanced state grants the following benefits:

    Primal Power:
    Primal Power, bestowed upon the user in their Primal Form, ignites their latent potential, unlocking a series of unique boosts to their physical attributes. Upon obtaining Primal Form, the user experiences an initial surge of power, granting them: +2 Unique Tiers to Coordination, +1 Unique Tier to Strength, Constitution, Speed, and Perception.

    Primal Energy:
    Primal Energy surges through the user's veins in their Primal Form, empowering their chakra manipulation and enhancing the potency of their techniques. While in this heightened state, the user has access to Primal Chakra. Primal Chakra is the energy reservoir drawn from when using Primal Form and is spent in the Primal Technique Enhancement. The amount of Primal Chakra available is based on the amount of training put into Primal Form. The Primal Chakra Pool starts out at 0 (zero) but can be increased through investment with EXP (50 exp per 10 primal chakra points). The limit to how much they can have is equal to half of the user's Base Stamina worth of Chakra.

    Example: If the user has a Base of A Stamina, this gives them 260 Chakra, their maximum amount of Primal Chakra is equal to 130. This will require 13 investments of 50 EXP each, equaling to 650 EXP

    By mixing Primal Chakra into a technique, the user is able to enhanced the Power and Effectiveness of that technique. In order to do this, the user needs to spend half of the technique's cost using their own chakra and the other half using their Primal Chakra. Doing this will increase the Power of a regular jutsu by 1 Rank. This may not be used to make the Power of a technique X Rank Power.

    Gathering Primal Chakra requires the user to remain still in meditation for 72 hours before their pool is 100%, alternatively the user can pay 250 exp to have their pool start at 50%.
    • The user may also create shadow clones to remain still and gather chakra, dispersing the clone to transfer the Primal Chakra to them. The maximum primal chakra the clones can gather is the same as their creator.
    • As Primal Chakra works the same as Sage Chakra, if the user has a way to absorb techniques and add chakra to their own pools, the same method can be used to absorb Senjutsu enhanced techniques adding the nature chakra to their Primal Chakra Pool.


    Primal Instinct:
    Primal Instinct, an innate aspect of the user's Primal Form, heightens their instinctual awareness and reflexes to unprecedented levels, allowing them to react to threats with unparalleled precision and efficiency. While in Primal Form, the user no longer has to strain their eyes or other senses to focus on an individual in order to keep up with their movements, allowing the user to easily track movements that are one rank higher than the user's perception perfectly without extra focus. Even the slightest muscle movements do not go unnoticed by the user, giving them the ability to react to things they might not have been able to otherwise. The user gains access to Defensive Precogs, granting them invaluable insights into impending dangers. The number of Defensive Precogs available to the user is determined by the rank of their Perception Stat while in Primal Form instead of their intelligence, with a maximum of 3 precogs attainable: B=1 after 4 posts, A=2 after 2 posts, S=3 instantly. This still follows the Precogs rules and only serves as a stat swap for the analyzing and Precogs.

    Primal Magic:
    Primal Magic represents the user's ability to tap into the primordial energies coursing through their being in their Primal Form, unlocking the mystical ability of flight, granting the user the freedom to soar through the skies with unmatched agility and grace.

    By channeling 5 primal chakra per post, the user gains the ability to take flight while in Primal Form. This ethereal flight enables them to defy gravity and traverse the air with ease, granting them unparalleled mobility and a strategic advantage over grounded opponents. Their speed/coordination within the air is equal to that of their speed/coordination stats while in this state.

    Upkeep:
    Maintaining the Primal Form state imposes a continuous strain on the user's chakra reserves, requiring a steady expenditure of energy to sustain its heightened abilities. However, the user can optimize the efficiency and sustainability of Primal Form, ensuring that they can unleash their full potential and dominate the battlefield with unmatched power and prowess.
    • Base Upkeep: By default, activating Primal Form incurs a chakra cost of 20 Primal Chakra per post while the state is active.
    • Enhanced Control: By paying 500 experience points, the user may decrease the chakra cost of maintaining Primal Form to 10 primal chakra per post.
    • Mastery: For an additional investment of 500 experience points, the user can further enhance Primal Form by lowering the cost to 5 primal chakra per post.

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