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    Burittsu Canon Jutsu Locker

    Burittsu
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    Mist Jounin
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    Village : Kirigakure
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    Post by Burittsu Sat Aug 19, 2023 10:05 pm

    Jutsu

    Spoiler:


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    Life Mocks Us In The End..
    [Kenjutsu] - [Ninjutsu] - [Hyoton] - [Sensory] - [Summoning] - [Buki]
    [D-Rank: 0] - [C-Rank: 1] - [B-Rank: 4] - [A-Rank: 0] - [S-Rank: 0]

    Strength: A
    Constitution: B ~ A
    Stamina: A+
    Speed: B ~ A
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: A

    :: Saiken
    :: Samehada
    :: Leggings is S Rank granting +1 Tier to speed
    :: Chestplate is S Rank granting +1 Tier to Con
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    Post by Son'Rei Wed Nov 29, 2023 12:47 pm

    Burittsu wrote:Jutsu

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    Ok so first things first, on classification need you to change it from "Blitz Only" to something like "Saiken Exclusive" or "Saiken Host Exclusive" and in the description make it more generic with "the Host" instead of "Blitz" or "Burittsu" as future hosts of Saiken would be capable of performing these techniques.

    Santōka - how wide/big is this? You have the distance with the range but in description need more details about how big the attack is.

    Soap Bubble Ninjutsu - This Line here "The user is also capable of combining acid with his soap bubble ninjutsu." Need you to put "capable of combining acid techniques with his soap bubble Ninjutsu" this is because you have the upkeep for this tech low, so it's fine for making bubbles and whatnot but adding acid to the mix or other things would require you to pay a different cost.

    Chirōkyū - like with Santoka need to know how big/wide the stream of liquid acid is. Also on the Gaseous form need to have a radius of the gas spread.

    Blinding Bubbles Technique - need to lower the speed to B


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    Burittsu
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    Mist Jounin
    Mist Jounin
    Catnapper
    Rewarded to those who actively fought and subdued Matatabi during the Bijuu Rampage Event in 2024


    Village : Kirigakure
    Posts : 983
    Join date : 2021-03-20
    Location : Hidden Mist

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu, Hyoton, Sensory, & Summoning
    Class: S
    Ryo: 4,062,000

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    Post by Burittsu Wed Nov 29, 2023 2:20 pm

    Burittsu wrote:Jutsu

    Spoiler:


    _________________
    Burittsu Canon Jutsu Locker Aomine14

    Life Mocks Us In The End..
    [Kenjutsu] - [Ninjutsu] - [Hyoton] - [Sensory] - [Summoning] - [Buki]
    [D-Rank: 0] - [C-Rank: 1] - [B-Rank: 4] - [A-Rank: 0] - [S-Rank: 0]

    Strength: A
    Constitution: B ~ A
    Stamina: A+
    Speed: B ~ A
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: A

    :: Saiken
    :: Samehada
    :: Leggings is S Rank granting +1 Tier to speed
    :: Chestplate is S Rank granting +1 Tier to Con
    Son'Rei
    Son'Rei
    Wanderer
    Wanderer


    Posts : 230
    Join date : 2020-02-02

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    Post by Son'Rei Wed Nov 29, 2023 2:33 pm

    Burittsu wrote:
    Burittsu wrote:Jutsu

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    That checks out, Approved.


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