Welcome Guest! You have made 50 posts!

Join Our Discord! : Here After high demand from everyone, we've finally opened a Discord Chat Server for the site!
We are an AU Naruto Roleplay Forum!

3 posters

    Ghost Storm Blood

    Ghost
    Ghost
    Stone Genin
    Stone Genin


    Village : Iwagakure
    Posts : 174
    Join date : 2021-09-22

    Ghost Storm Blood Empty Ghost Storm Blood

    Post by Ghost Thu Sep 23, 2021 1:26 am

    Name: Ghost StormBlood (Kotoshura)
    Age: 20
    Gender:Male
    Village: Iwa
    Rank:D (Genin)
    Title:

    Clan:Kotoshura clan
    Bloodline:Explosion release


    Element(s): Earth and lightening
    Skill(s): Ninjustu

    Trading in 1 skills for 500 exp

    (500 exp spent on tier 1 and 2 explosion release)

    Spoiler:



    Stats1650

    • Strength:C
    • Constitution:D
    • Stamina:D
    • Speed:D
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence:C
    • Perception:D


    Unique Abilities:
    N/A


    Appearance:
    He stands about 6 5"8 inches and he is very self aware of his height. He weights in at 155 lbs. Which give him a rather lean muscle tone build. His skin tone is coffee color as his eyes are as red as the sharingan. But they are not. Its just takes on the color of them. He has sliver hair that's curly and hime has skin smoove to the touch. He wears the standard ninja attire. His head band is wrapped around his head and he wears it with pride. He keeps ninja scrolls within his jacket.


    History:
    Spoiler:


    Personality:

    Loner-He prefers to be alone as he is not a people persons. As a matter of fact he rather be alone with his puppet.

    Puppet Crazed- He thinks of his puppets on a regular. He knows all about most puppets thus far. But if he do not then he will find out about it. When he is fighting someone. He envision if they weapons or justu could fit on his puppet.

    Blood thirsty- If he fights someone he will not stop until he see blood. Until his target blood is everywhere.

    Protective- So long as he see you as a ally he will always protect that somebody. To the point he might even give his life.

    Vengeful- He is truly a person that would plot out his revenge. No matter how long it takes. He will always seek his revenge.

    Unforgiving- One of two bad traits of his. He will never forgive those who wronged him. Being in this world of ninja will do that to people.

    Chaotic- One thing he loves about this puppets he get to be chaotic with them. On or off the battlefield he knows how to make noise.

    Roleplay Sample: N/A


    Last edited by Ghost on Mon Sep 27, 2021 7:58 am; edited 12 times in total
    Kara
    Kara


    Village : Kumogakure
    Posts : 570
    Join date : 2020-02-08
    Age : 32

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Fuuton, Doton, Jiton, Chemistry, Iryojutsu, Engineering, Weaponsmith, Armorsmith, Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu, Kugutsu, Genjutsu
    Class: S
    Ryo: More than I need, less than I'd like

    Ghost Storm Blood Empty Re: Ghost Storm Blood

    Post by Kara Fri Sep 24, 2021 10:43 am

    I'm sorry, but you can't start as a Wanderer. There are Wanderer slots available however you must first have passed an Activity Check in order to request one.

    Additionally the math for your stats is incorrect. The EXP costs listed are cumulative, so a C-Tier stat would cost 450 (150 EXP from E to D, and then another 300 from D to C).

    Creating Human Puppets is not available as a UA - this is currently being reworked into a Restricted.

    I'm unsure what you mean by your second UA - since Poisons are a mechanic on site, as well as identifying them (via the Intelligence Stat, the Chemistry Skill and the Iryojutsu Skill), it currently isn't feasible to have a blanket knowledge of all of them.

    Also the Title is not applicable, since Titles are earned through renown (Which is why only higher classed starting characters may actually start with a Title).


    _________________
    Ghost Storm Blood 4J1yre2

    Mistress Kara:
    Ghost
    Ghost
    Stone Genin
    Stone Genin


    Village : Iwagakure
    Posts : 174
    Join date : 2021-09-22

    Ghost Storm Blood Empty Re: Ghost Storm Blood

    Post by Ghost Sat Sep 25, 2021 4:46 am

    Alright that should do it


    _________________
    Spoiler:


    Stats:
    Strength: C
    Constitution: C
    Stamina: C
    Speed: D
    Coordination: D
    Intelligence:B
    Perception: D
    Kara
    Kara


    Village : Kumogakure
    Posts : 570
    Join date : 2020-02-08
    Age : 32

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Fuuton, Doton, Jiton, Chemistry, Iryojutsu, Engineering, Weaponsmith, Armorsmith, Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu, Kugutsu, Genjutsu
    Class: S
    Ryo: More than I need, less than I'd like

    Ghost Storm Blood Empty Re: Ghost Storm Blood

    Post by Kara Sat Sep 25, 2021 10:36 am

    You still need to start in a Village that's open for Registration. Currently those are Konoha, Kumo, Kiri and Iwa.

    Engineering is an actual Skill. I assume you meant to put Kugutsu (Puppetry), please edit that.

    Your math for the stats is still incorrect. I'm going to link you to the appropriate guide - remember, the costs listed are cumulative. Experience & Class Information

    I'm also going to link you to the Unique Ability Guide, please keep custom UAs within the bounds of the examples given. A UA that turns a characters blood into Poison (Poison is a site mechanic and not just flavour) that debuffs anything it touches is more in the realm of techniques and not UAs. Unique Ability Guide


    _________________
    Ghost Storm Blood 4J1yre2

    Mistress Kara:
    Ghost
    Ghost
    Stone Genin
    Stone Genin


    Village : Iwagakure
    Posts : 174
    Join date : 2021-09-22

    Ghost Storm Blood Empty Re: Ghost Storm Blood

    Post by Ghost Mon Sep 27, 2021 7:58 am

    ok this should do it....


    _________________
    Spoiler:


    Stats:
    Strength: C
    Constitution: C
    Stamina: C
    Speed: D
    Coordination: D
    Intelligence:B
    Perception: D
    Shimiko Chinoike
    Shimiko Chinoike


    Posts : 2318
    Join date : 2017-09-21

    Ghost Storm Blood Empty Re: Ghost Storm Blood

    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Mon Sep 27, 2021 9:27 am

    Ghost wrote:Name: Ghost StormBlood (Kotoshura)
    Age: 20
    Gender:Male
    Village: Iwa
    Rank:D (Genin)
    Title:

    Clan:Kotoshura clan
    Bloodline:Explosion release


    Element(s): Earth and lightening
    Skill(s): Ninjustu

    Trading in 1 skills for 500 exp

    (500 exp spent on tier 1 and 2 explosion release)

    Spoiler:



    Stats1650

    • Strength:C
    • Constitution:D
    • Stamina:D
    • Speed:D
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence:C
    • Perception:D


    Unique Abilities:
    N/A


    Appearance:
    He stands about 6 5"8 inches and he is very self aware of his height. He weights in at 155 lbs. Which give him a rather lean muscle tone build. His skin tone is coffee color as his eyes are as red as the sharingan. But they are not. Its just takes on the color of them. He has sliver hair that's curly and hime has skin smoove to the touch. He wears the standard ninja attire. His head band is wrapped around his head and he wears it with pride. He keeps ninja scrolls within his jacket.


    History:
    Spoiler:


    Personality:

    Loner-He prefers to be alone as he is not a people persons. As a matter of fact he rather be alone with his puppet.

    Puppet Crazed- He thinks of his puppets on a regular. He knows all about most puppets thus far. But if he do not then he will find out about it. When he is fighting someone. He envision if they weapons or justu could fit on his puppet.

    Blood thirsty- If he fights someone he will not stop until he see blood. Until his target blood is everywhere.

    Protective- So long as he see you as a ally he will always protect that somebody. To the point he might even give his life.

    Vengeful- He is truly a person that would plot out his revenge. No matter how long it takes. He will always seek his revenge.

    Unforgiving- One of two bad traits of his. He will never forgive those who wronged him. Being in this world of ninja will do that to people.

    Chaotic- One thing he loves about this puppets he get to be chaotic with them. On or off the battlefield he knows how to make noise.

    Roleplay Sample: N/A

    Approved


    _________________
    Spoiler:

    Sponsored content


    Ghost Storm Blood Empty Re: Ghost Storm Blood

    Post by Sponsored content


      Current date/time is Sat Nov 23, 2024 11:59 pm