Kitsuki Kurahasa wrote: Hana Kaguya wrote: Uchiha Akihiro wrote:Name: Uchiha Gunbai
Item Rank: X
Material Rank: X
Units Used: Wood from the Spirit Tree
Description: The Uchiha Gunbai is a non-folding fan, carved from a unique spirit tree from which only ritualistic instruments are made. This Gunbai has been passed down between Uchiha clansmen for generations, typically being wielded by the Clan Leader. The Gunbai has the ability to allow its user to pay 10 chakra points in order to convert incoming attacks into wind nature transformation, reflecting an opponent's attack back towards them with power and speed equivalent to the attack. This ability works on both chakra based and physical attacks. In order to be able to use the ability, the Gunbai needs to make contact with the attack although this does not damage the Gunbai.
The Gunbai allows the user to utilize Wind Release techniques through it, allowing a Wind Release user to cast these techniques with a 1 tier cost reduction in terms of chakra costs.
In addition the Uchiha Gunbai allows the user to create a wind blast (without needing Wind Release to do so) which moves at S++ speed, with S-rank power and covers a 100 meters range:
- Gunbai Fanned Wind:
Name: Gunbai Fanned Wind
Rank: S-rank
Power: S-rank
Activation Cost: 30CP
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 100 meters
Speed: S++
Element: Wind Release
Skill: N/A
Classification: Artifact Exclusive Technique
Requirements: Uchiha Gunbai
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user waves their gunbai as a fan to create powerful gusts of wind, strong enough to blow away several enemies in one swing. The wind will cause pressure damage to anything caught within its path, forming a 25 meters wide wall that moves 100 meters forward. This technique can be used in combination with fire Release techniques, by having the wind carry the flames and deliver fire damage as well as wind pressure damage. Fire Techniques carried by the Uchiha Gunbai's Gunbai Fanned Wind will have their power increased by 1 rank.
Weaknesses: N/A
Approved
Unapproved,
Increase the cost to 20 CP.
And cap the techniques power it can reflect at S-Rank. (Note: Uchiha Return should probably be edited to include this caveat).
Also I'm confused you say it reflects the actual attack but in the written description it says it converts it into Wind Release.
I would have appreciated the courtesy of staff DM'ng people when you pull items or techniques that were already approved. I was about to enter a Bijuu control battle without knowing the Gunbai had been pulled and that's just not cool.
Nyg wrote:
Increase the cost to 20 CP.
I don't see why I need to do this when I compare it to other X-rank items registered on this site. Here's what a
single one does:
- Absorb up to 10 A-Rank jutsus within 30m radius, 60m effective range.
- A-rank power, which means it can neutralize S-rank techs with A-rank power.
- For no cost at all
- Not only negates activation but still drains chakra from enemies and adds that chakra to the user's reserves.
- In addition this item doesn't need to hit the jutsu, it just needs to be within 30 meters of its activation.
- requires absolutely no effort on the user's part and activates automatically
- automatically puts exhaustion penalties on enemies within 5 meters with no limit on the amount of people or any landing hit requirement to activate this effect.
- Enemies is in bold because this thing doesn't affect allies, nor does it affect allied jutsu
- Works automatically which means one can just have what is described as a "device" in their pocket and get full benefits without needing to worry about physical or any other types of constraints at all to use these thing's effects.
As a side note this is an item which
completely negates a lot of the site's Restricted Techniques within 30 meters,
unless they're used by your allies:
- Water Release: Water Mirror Technique
- Repulsion Technique
- Mind's Eye of the Kagura
- Water Release: Water–Heavens Convergence
- Jashinism (which is registered as a tech with D-rank power and while it's not clear if Jashinist immortality stops working, their regeneration certainly will)
- LRA at least the lower ranked version
This is a list I gathered quickly in 5 minutes.
We're not talking about defending from these attacks, deflecting them, or dodging them.
We're talking about
completely negating the casting of these jutsu within the 30 meters range and
absorbing the chakra directly to the user's reserves.In retrospective, having the Gunbai able to reflect an attack for 10CP seems like an equivalent ability considering the Gunbai needs to actually touch the jutsu or attack, making it impossible to use the Gunbai to reflect pincer attacks or any fast attack that strikes from multiple sides.
The Gunbai ability doesn't activate automatically either to negate the damage of an incoming attack, since the user needs to actually touch that attack with the fan, making this defence very dependent on the user's coordination and occupying at least one of the user's hands.
In addition I'd like for you to keep in mind that reflecting a technique isn't equivalent to negating the casting of a technique. Unlike the item I mentioned above, the Gunbai doesn't negate defensive techniques.
Let's compare the two:
Chakra Absorption Device | Uchiha Gunbai |
Negates the casting of all jutsu with up to A-rank power within 30 meters, except for jutsu cast by user and allies. Up to 10 jutsu per thread. | Does not negate the casting of jutsu, but reflects up to X-rank physical and chakra based attacks |
30 meters radius thus 60 meters diameter effective range | Range entirely dependant on what you can reach with the Gunbai |
Effects apply automatically within range | Requires holding the Gunbai and touching an attack with it |
Negates the activation of defensive techniques such as chakra armor jutsu, or boosting techniques | Reflects only incoming attacks |
Directly absorbs negated jutsu into user's chakra reserves | Costs 10CP per activation |
Works against multidirectional attacks | Unidirectional reflection shield vulnerable to multidirectional attacks |
Works in the user's pocket from a relatively safe distance | Needs to touch the incoming attack exposing the user to possible danger |
Needs no stats to function at 100% effectiveness | Effectiveness rather dependent on the user's coordination since it's a wielded weapon |
Has the ability to completely negate the casting of one or more Restricted Techniques at the same time and all of the abilities that come with them | It can reflect the impact of a Restricted Technique but does not negate other abilities they might grant. Can't negate the attack of a multidirectional or functionality based Restricted. |
Can selectively choose to affect enemies and not allies | A reflected attack or cast jutsu affects everyone the same. |
Automatically applies an A-rank debuff to a limitless number of opponents within 5 meters with absolutely no way to defend against it except not being within 5 meters, but conveniently doesn't debuff allies, no Chakra cost. | Applies no debuffs at all. |
I would like for my registered X-rank items to be held to the same standards as everyone else's.
Nyg wrote:And cap the techniques power it can reflect at S-Rank
It's an X-rank item, I don't see why it needs to be capped at S-rank power. We have armours registered on the site that automatically
straight up grant immunity to either blunt or piercing damage
for no cost at all regardless of
how many attacks land or
which direction they come from or
how much power they have behind them... and again require
no effort on the user's part to activate.The Gunbai is a
uni-directional barrier that once again
relies on the user's coordination to move fast enough to block,
occupies a user's hand and
has a chakra cost.
Nyg wrote:Also I'm confused you say it reflects the actual attack but in the written description it says it converts it into Wind Release.
The Gunbai converts incoming projectile speed power into Wind Release and uses that power to reflect back the attack.
So if you threw a projectile at it at S-rank speed, that speed would be turned into Str on impact, absorbed, and a wind blast would throw the projectile back at S-rank speed.
Works the same for chakra based attacks.