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    Post by Tang Hao Thu Jan 16, 2020 4:52 pm

    Name: Magnetar
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 0 - 10m
    Speed: S
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Nightmare Genjutsu
    Classification: Personal Custom
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Ram
    Description:  This genjutsu is triggered by viewing the user performing the require handseal. After the genjutsu has been triggered a hazy black fog emanates from the user and travels towards the desired target at a speed incomprehensible to the target, regardless of their perception. After being surrounded by this fog the target suddenly finds themselves in the starry void of space above a rapidly spinning neutron star known as a magnetar. The magnetic field of this magnetar seems to be so great that the target experiences terrifying feelings of free falling, distorting their sense of balance and making it difficult to stand or move with much agility. As they approach the magnetar they feel the effects of its immense magnetism, causing them to feel as though the very iron in their blood is being torn from their body. After a few moments of this their entire being is torn asunder by the magnetic forces.

    This genjutsu takes one post to go into effect, After the duration, the victim suffers S-rank psychological damage and continues to suffer S-rank psychological damage on each subsequent post so long as the upkeep is continued.

    Weaknesses: The genjutsu does not lower any of the targets stats or prevent them from moving. It does however, make it feel as though the target is freefalling without there being any feeling of their feet or body on the ground. If the target can find their bearings quick enough they can still attack the location of where they last saw the user. The user cannot move faster than D-tier Speed or utilize higher than D rank coord while this illusion is active.

    Name: Gender Bender
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range:0 - 25 m
    Speed: C
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Personal Custom
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Snake
    Description: This genjutsu is triggered by viewing the user performing the require handseal. After this genjutsu has been triggered the target suddenly feels as though they have the sexual characteristic of their opposite sex. Genetic males will suddenly appear to themselves as genetic females with all associated primary and secondary sexual characteristics. Genetic females will suddenly appear to themselves as genetic males with all associated primary and secondary sexual characteristics. This change also applies to their perceived voice. This technique can be applied to multiple people at the same time for a cost of 3 for each additional person after the first and a cost of 1 additional upkeep per post to maintain it. The ability to cast this genjutsu on multiple people assumes that all of them are looking at the user at the time of casting. In the case of multiple people being trapped in the genjutsu, each of them can see the effects applied to other trapped targets.

    Weaknesses: This genjutsu doesn't really have any combat purposes and would at most just make people uncomfortable, confused, or embarrassed. The jutsu automatically wears off after 5 posts.

    Name: Memory Removal
    Rank: B
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost:10
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Touch
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal Custom
    Requirements:  C-Tier Intelligence
    Parent Technique:Saiko Denshin (Psycho Mind Transmission)
    Hand Seals: None
    Description:The user enters the target's subconscious by placing a hand on the target's head and using their previously gathered knowledge of the target’s memories, may remove any memories or associations related to the user. These memories that are removed cannot be retrieved through the use of Psycho Mind Transmission, acting as though the memories had never existed in the first place. The user may be selective with which specific memories they remove.

    Weaknesses: Contact with the target's head must be maintained. Can only remove memories related to the user and their interactions with the target.


    Last edited by Tang Hao on Wed Jan 22, 2020 6:04 pm; edited 4 times in total


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sun Jan 19, 2020 5:08 am

    This genjutsu is triggered by emitting a chakra signal after a target has looked at the user.

    *^ Needs a specific body part. Eyes, finger, toes, etc. This goes for all of them

    Also 25 CP is too low for Magnetar. 30 CP.

    Gender Bender is fine but make it so that the illusion automatically wears off after 5 posts.



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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sun Jan 19, 2020 5:09 am

    Tang Hao wrote:
    Name: Memory Removal
    Rank: B
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost:10
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Touch
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal Custom
    Requirements:  C-Tier Intelligence
    Parent Technique:Saiko Denshin (Psycho Mind Transmission)
    Hand Seals: None
    Description:The user enters the target's subconscious by placing a hand on the target's head and using their previously gathered knowledge of the target’s memories, may remove any memories or associations related to the user. These memories that are removed cannot be retrieved through the use of Psycho Mind Transmission, acting as though the memories had never existed in the first place. The user may be selective with which specific memories they remove.

    Weaknesses: Contact with the target's head must be maintained. Can only remove memories related to the user and their interactions with the target.

    Approved.


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    Post by Tang Hao Sun Jan 19, 2020 12:29 pm

    edited with the requested changes


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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa Sun Jan 19, 2020 2:32 pm

    Magnetar and Gender bender need to follow the handseals rules. You can find those in the Jutsu Registration guide sticked in this forum.


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    Post by Tang Hao Sun Jan 19, 2020 3:09 pm

    edited again 5 words required


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    Post by Q Mon Jan 20, 2020 5:58 pm

    "incomprehensible speed" is denied. Just say "rapidly" or something that doesn't sound too godmoddy.
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    Post by Q Mon Jan 20, 2020 5:59 pm

    Tang Hao wrote:
    Name: Gender Bender
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range:0 - 25 m
    Speed: C
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Personal Custom
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Snake
    Description: This genjutsu is triggered by viewing the user performing the require handseal. After this genjutsu has been triggered the target suddenly feels as though they have the sexual characteristic of their opposite sex. Genetic males will suddenly appear to themselves as genetic females with all associated primary and secondary sexual characteristics. Genetic females will suddenly appear to themselves as genetic males with all associated primary and secondary sexual characteristics. This change also applies to their perceived voice. This technique can be applied to multiple people at the same time for a cost of 3 for each additional person after the first and a cost of 1 additional upkeep per post to maintain it. The ability to cast this genjutsu on multiple people assumes that all of them are looking at the user at the time of casting. In the case of multiple people being trapped in the genjutsu, each of them can see the effects applied to other trapped targets.

    Weaknesses: This genjutsu doesn't really have any combat purposes and would at most just make people uncomfortable, confused, or embarrassed. The jutsu automatically wears off after 5 posts.


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    Post by Tang Hao Tue Jan 21, 2020 4:14 pm

    edited as discussed 5 chars


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Wed Jan 22, 2020 1:32 am

    The user cannot move faster than D-tier Speed while this illusion is active.

    *^ D-Tier Speed AND Coordination.

    I assume the duration of this Genjutsu is for as long as you pay the upkeep?

    Also the upkeep should be 20 CP per post.


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    Post by Tang Hao Wed Jan 22, 2020 6:05 pm

    Edited and updated with proper S rank stats. Lemme know if anything else needs to be altered for this to be allowed.


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Wed Jan 22, 2020 10:52 pm

    Tang Hao wrote:Name: Magnetar
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 0 - 10m
    Speed: S
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Nightmare Genjutsu
    Classification: Personal Custom
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Ram
    Description:  This genjutsu is triggered by viewing the user performing the require handseal. After the genjutsu has been triggered a hazy black fog emanates from the user and travels towards the desired target at a speed incomprehensible to the target, regardless of their perception. After being surrounded by this fog the target suddenly finds themselves in the starry void of space above a rapidly spinning neutron star known as a magnetar. The magnetic field of this magnetar seems to be so great that the target experiences terrifying feelings of free falling, distorting their sense of balance and making it difficult to stand or move with much agility. As they approach the magnetar they feel the effects of its immense magnetism, causing them to feel as though the very iron in their blood is being torn from their body. After a few moments of this their entire being is torn asunder by the magnetic forces.

    This genjutsu takes one post to go into effect, After the duration, the victim suffers S-rank psychological damage and continues to suffer S-rank psychological damage on each subsequent post so long as the upkeep is continued.

    Weaknesses: The genjutsu does not lower any of the targets stats or prevent them from moving. It does however, make it feel as though the target is freefalling without there being any feeling of their feet or body on the ground. If the target can find their bearings quick enough they can still attack the location of where they last saw the user. The user cannot move faster than D-tier Speed or utilize higher than D rank coord while this illusion is active.

    Approved.


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