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    Post by Izumi Fri Nov 09, 2018 9:18 pm

    Name: Izumi Shimura
    Age: 16
    Gender: Female
    Village: Konohagakure no Sato
    Rank: Genin
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    Clan: N/A
    Bloodline: N/A
    Element(s): N/A
    Skill(s): Taijutsu | Ninjutsu | 1 SP Traded to Stats

    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: D


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    History:

    Izumi is a young woman hailing from the Shimura Clan. The Shimura are among the first families to join the result of the Hyuga, Senju, and Uchiha alliance: Konohagakure. Alongside the Sarutobi and Hatake, the Shimura is one of the most powerful clans in history that possesses neither hiden techniques nor a Kekkei Genkai. Like few in existence, the Shimura rose to prominence through skill and effort alone. Izumi embodies this well.

    From her earliest days, Izumi has nurtured a talent for Ninjutsu and Taijutsu rarely seen among pre-academy children. She mastered techniques normally reserved for graduation tests and managed to best others many years her senior in hand to hand combat, despite her smaller form. Most people underestimate her because of her size, even to this day, but time and again she proves them wrong.

    The Academy was a breeze and her first few experiences as Genin have done little to dissuade her opinion on the ease of being a ninja. She gets to fight, improve, and have fun all while earning a pay check. What could be better?

    Personality:

    As a Shimura, Izumi prizes hard work and honed skill. She sees the effort people put in and how much they've trained and awards them respect accordingly, regardless if they actually ever win a fight. Those born into power, natural geniuses that never have to put in the effort to succeed are, to her, life's great cheaters. They did nothing to earn their greatness and, therefore, do not deserve it. Many times in the academy did she go out of her way to put those kinds of people in their place. She may not have won every time, but she sure tried.

    Generally, Izumi keeps to herself as a quiet sort of person and because of that comes off as shy. Once a person gets to know her, though, she opens up and acts as social as any other. A little too social, sometimes.  


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sat Nov 10, 2018 12:35 pm

    -Nearly as skilled in Ninjutsu as she is in Taijutsu, Izumi is able to efficiently use Ninjutsu with a rank lower cost, but her Coordination is reduced by one tier when doing so, because techniques become harder for her to perform.

    *^ This should require an increase in chakra cost for another skill not a drop in stats. Otherwise it is not a balanced UA/Flaw combo.

    -While she can't do it yet, she's got plans and she knows she's gonna be great. Izumi is already studying Fuuinjutsu and, when she learns it, she'll be able to use it more efficiently than anyone else! The cost can be reduced a rank, but doing so will also lower her Intelligence by one tier, since she'll essentially be rushing the creation and formation of the seal, which makes it weaker.

    *^ Same as above

    -You think it stops at Fuuinjutsu? Psh, she's gonna master Genjutsu too! When she gets around to actually learning it, she'll be able to use Genjutsu at a rank lower cost than normal, but when she does that, she'll take a one tier loss to Intelligence, because the illusions will be sloppier.

    *^ Same as above.

    -Don't forget about Ijutsu! Just as with her other future-mastered Skills, Izumi will be able to use Ijutsu at a rank lower cost than normal, but when she chooses to do that, she'll take a tier reduction to Perception. This is because she's focusing more on the technique than the things happening around her, which can be bad.

    -Sensory too! When she masters Sensory, and you better believe she will, she'll be able to use those techniques at a rank lower cost than normal, but when doing that, her Perception will be reduced by a tier, since her senses aren't as focused on the environment when they're focused on efficiency.

    *^ Ditto.

    Keep in mind for the tier boosts, its capped at A. Can't use a UA tier boost to take you to S.

    -While most people stop at one handed seals, Izumi saw it as a challenge. Any old body could do hand seals with just one hand, but with no hands? That's a Shimura-level challenge. She did it, somehow, to the bewilderment of her teachers. She does need to spend time kneading and forming the chakra, though, so while she doesn't need to use her hands, the time it takes to prepare a jutsu in this way is the same as though she were forming hand seals with a two tier penalty to her Coordination.

    *^ Normally this wouldn't be approved but because you don't have a bloodline, you can make this your freebie Unique Ability. However, it needs to be more limited. It can only be for techniques ONE skill. You can remove the bit about it lowering your Coordination. Keep in mind this is only gesture-less casting however and your casting will not be instantaneous as you still need to charge and mold your chakra.


    -You might expect Izumi to be a brute force, in your face kind of girl. This isn't true. She is still a ninja and has accordingly learned (read: was forced to learn) how to infiltrate in a right and proper manner. She can appear invisible to sensory and eyesight seemingly at will, using the principles taught to her, but in so doing, her Speed and Perception are reduced by one tier. Additionally, those with greater Perception than hers are able to see through her tactics, and will see or sense her as normal.


    *^ Denied. This infringes upon multiple exclusives and Chakra Suppression (which requires the Sensory skill).


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    Post by Izumi Sat Nov 10, 2018 1:19 pm

    I'm sorry about that. I edited those abilities out. Smile


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sun Nov 11, 2018 3:01 pm

    It has been recently brought to my attention that your UA is somewhat similar to another that has been approved.

    "Silent Infiltrator: An she is an expert in sneaking around Alkaid can hide her presence for three posts to any sensory technique and perception rank equal or lower than her class, but while doing so, she loses a rank in perception for an equal amount of time."

    *^ You may re-word your UA to mirror this one. However keep in mind it is likely and possible that all players that have a version of this UA will see these UA's retracted from the site or modified in some manner. Staff will be discussing what to do soon but in the meantime since others have it its only fair you get it as well.

    The Physical Styles stacking and the ability to have multiple tier UAs will need to be discussed to see if those will be allowed. Please be patient.


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    Post by Izumi Sun Nov 11, 2018 3:09 pm

    That's okay. Thank-you. Smile


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sun Nov 11, 2018 7:26 pm

    -As the self-proclaimed master of Taijutsu, Izumi has practiced the use of many different arts and has become so familiar with them that she can flawlessly blend them together, creating her own mixed martial arts on the fly.This allows her to use more than one Taijutsu Style at a time, but doing so is more taxing than normal, causing the reduction she'd normally get to Taijutsu (according to her freebie UA) to no longer apply while she's using more than one style at a time.

    *^ This will unfortunately have to be denied. There is a strong presumption of UAs that affect a core part of our stacking rules which were written in a specific way.


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    Post by Izumi Sun Nov 11, 2018 7:41 pm

    I understand. Would I be able to keep it if I added a limit of one tier per stat from styles? I think that should stop them from stacking much. Smile


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sun Nov 11, 2018 8:41 pm

    Izumi wrote:I understand. Would I be able to keep it if I added a limit of one tier per stat from styles? I think that should stop them from stacking much. Smile

    Unfortunately that would still be denied. You cannot stack two styles ontop of each other in any capacity as they are the same class of stat boosts.


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    Post by Izumi Sun Nov 11, 2018 9:19 pm

    Okay. I changed it. Smile


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Wed Nov 14, 2018 10:21 am

    Also we have decided to make it such that a person can only have 2 UAs that boost your stats. So unfortunately you will have to cut down on those as well.


    Rule: You may only have two UAs that increase your stats and you may never have more than a two tier increase (even when split between stats or active at different times) on your UAs.


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    Post by Izumi Wed Nov 14, 2018 10:42 am

    That's okay. I took out most of them. Smile


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Wed Nov 14, 2018 12:20 pm

    "She can mask her presence to sensory techniques and perception equal to or lower than her class for up to three posts, using the principles taught to her, but in so doing, her Perception is reduced by one." <- Perception is reduce by one tier.


    Other than that this looks good and ready for approval.


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    Post by Izumi Wed Nov 14, 2018 1:08 pm

    Oops. Sorry. It's all better now. Smile


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Wed Nov 14, 2018 1:28 pm

    Izumi wrote:Name: Izumi Shimura
    Age: 16
    Gender: Female
    Village: Konohagakure no Sato
    Rank: Genin
    Title:

    Clan: N/A
    Bloodline: N/A
    Element(s): N/A
    Skill(s): Taijutsu | Ninjutsu | 1 SP Traded to Stats

    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: D


    Unique Abilities:
    Spoiler:



    Appearance:
    The Shimura Girl F25c830bbcbc64ae2ba3b243b0a9527d8fa5d277_00
    History:

    Izumi is a young woman hailing from the Shimura Clan. The Shimura are among the first families to join the result of the Hyuga, Senju, and Uchiha alliance: Konohagakure. Alongside the Sarutobi and Hatake, the Shimura is one of the most powerful clans in history that possesses neither hiden techniques nor a Kekkei Genkai. Like few in existence, the Shimura rose to prominence through skill and effort alone. Izumi embodies this well.

    From her earliest days, Izumi has nurtured a talent for Ninjutsu and Taijutsu rarely seen among pre-academy children. She mastered techniques normally reserved for graduation tests and managed to best others many years her senior in hand to hand combat, despite her smaller form. Most people underestimate her because of her size, even to this day, but time and again she proves them wrong.

    The Academy was a breeze and her first few experiences as Genin have done little to dissuade her opinion on the ease of being a ninja. She gets to fight, improve, and have fun all while earning a pay check. What could be better?

    Personality:

    As a Shimura, Izumi prizes hard work and honed skill. She sees the effort people put in and how much they've trained and awards them respect accordingly, regardless if they actually ever win a fight. Those born into power, natural geniuses that never have to put in the effort to succeed are, to her, life's great cheaters. They did nothing to earn their greatness and, therefore, do not deserve it. Many times in the academy did she go out of her way to put those kinds of people in their place. She may not have won every time, but she sure tried.

    Generally, Izumi keeps to herself as a quiet sort of person and because of that comes off as shy. Once a person gets to know her, though, she opens up and acts as social as any other. A little too social, sometimes.  


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