Kentwo Longz [Done]

Kentwo Longz wrote:

"Only The Righteous"

The Maniac  

Character Name:Kentwo Longz
Nickname:
Character Age:18
Character Gender:Male

Character Appearance:



Kentwo  is a very tall standing at 6 feet 7 inches, he is very  muscular swordman with a wild and aggressive appearance. Kentwo  has a long face with high cheekbones, enlarged canine teeth, and pronounced, hairless brow ridges. He has red eyes and stringy black hair reaching past his shoulders in length. Kentwo  haves noticeable trait in his appearance is a long, thin scar running down the left side of his face and across his left eye, inflicted on him by parents while he was still a child.

Since becoming a Shinobi, he wears the standard, black shihakushō, with the addition of white bandages across his midsection and a short-sleeved  haori with ragged ends on the sleeves and back flap. He styles his hair into stiff strands, attaching small bells at its tips, and wears a special black eyepatch over his right eye.

He can let out his hair revealing his traditional hair of aggressive long hair. More importantly Kentwo isn't to big for his own good weighing about 90 kg (198 lbs).

Character Personality:
Keen-minded:Kentwo is a highly perceptive fighter, almost immediately determining an opponent's attack patterns and weaknesses. He is a crafty tactician, effectively using his abilities to confuse his opponents. He can normally discern the motives and abilities of his opponents, and effectively uses his knowledge to end the battle in his favor. He is also very fully aware of the limits of his abilities, and anything he states in comparison to an opponent is usually justified.

Insane/Sage:Kentwo is fully capable of committing truly abhorrent and inhumane actions without feeling any shred of remorse or hesitation. Despite his demanding nature,  Kentwo is not vain like most of his fellow peer. He maintains a cautious and cool demeanor, being always in control of his actions. As he usually not the talkative one,  Kentwo spares his words and only speaks when necessary or for those he finds worthy of them.

Kentwo is an extremely composed individual. One doesn't obtain a reputation like his own by being reckless and letting things outside their own mind's pester them. While his voice isn't the voice of the knight in shining armor and is dreary and monotonous, he's very well spoken. He acts when he feels the time is right and doesn't dance to the rhythm of others if he doesn't see it yielding a reward. This can make him seem like a man of sage-like patience or a selfish hasty twat.

Paranoid:Kentwo tend to be a bit paranoid. Not sure who could be trusted he tend to question all his subordinate loyalty. His paranoid sometimes leaves him to be on guard around unfamiliar condition.  Kentwo is a very cunning fellow. He knows how to wiggle his way out of unfavourable situations, especially those involving endangerment of himself or others he is fond of.


Loyalty & Honor: Bresesker:Although he is known to be a violent man who fights for his own interest, Kentwo 's actions tend to be for the best.  Kentwo lives for battle, and enjoys a good fight more than anything. He even holds back in an effort to make any fight last longer. He claims injury and death are nothing but the price one pays for a good fight. Despite his tendency to be brutal, Zaraki usually stops a fight if his opponent is too injured to fight back. Despite this he hold loyalty to his village personal enough as old yellow.

In a Nut Shell: You don't want no smoke



Character History:
Kentwo Longz was born into Kirigakure no sato as a young orphan and the offspring of Kirigakure cruel schooling habits. Kirigakure Shinobi, born for experience, is a Kenjutsu user who focuses on utilizing inhumane skills. To utilize swordsmanship, Kentwo didn't care for other core skills he settled to master in one category. 




Utilizing his resources, he eventually became a skilled Shinobi Genin and specialist in hand-to-hand and sword combat. Thriving one is the inability to move quickly, which is a testament to endurance. 




As a poor Shinobi, he could afford much; therefore, he often strapped for straps. As a warrior first learning the strong live and the weak die, Kentwo spent many years redefining his skills.


Up to this point, Kentwo looks for ways to become stronger as Shinobi and a tool for Kirigakure no Sato.
**Affiliation Information**
Starting Village:  Kirigakure
Character's Rank: Genin
Character's Title: N/A

**Combat Information
Character's Clan: Clanless
Character's Skills: |Kenjutsu|
Character's Unique Abilities: |Big Boost,Experience Advantage,One-handed Seals, and Crafting Expertise|


**Stats**
Strength: B -> A
Constitution: C
Stamina: D
Speed: C
Coordination: B
Intelligence: D
Perception: B

**Other EXP Expenditures**
EXP Expenditures Here
1650 Exp Starting
1500 Exp + For Experience Advantage
995 Exp + Debt=

4,145 Exp to spend
_____________
Speed E -> D ->  C 450 Exp
Constitution E -> D -> C 450 Exp
Intelligence E -> D 150 Exp
Stamina E -> D 150 Exp
Strength E -> D ->  C -> B 950 Exp
Coordination E -> D ->  C -> B 950 Exp
Perception E -> D ->  C -> B 950 Exp
=4,050 dumping the rest gg
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Airi Ohara wrote:

Kentwo Longz wrote:

"Only The Righteous"

The Maniac  

Character Name:Kentwo Longz
Nickname:
Character Age:18
Character Gender:Male

Character Appearance:



Kentwo  is a very tall standing at 6 feet 7 inches, he is very  muscular swordman with a wild and aggressive appearance. Kentwo  has a long face with high cheekbones, enlarged canine teeth, and pronounced, hairless brow ridges. He has red eyes and stringy black hair reaching past his shoulders in length. Kentwo  haves noticeable trait in his appearance is a long, thin scar running down the left side of his face and across his left eye, inflicted on him by parents while he was still a child.

Since becoming a Shinobi, he wears the standard, black shihakushō, with the addition of white bandages across his midsection and a short-sleeved  haori with ragged ends on the sleeves and back flap. He styles his hair into stiff strands, attaching small bells at its tips, and wears a special black eyepatch over his right eye.

He can let out his hair revealing his traditional hair of aggressive long hair. More importantly Kentwo isn't to big for his own good weighing about 90 kg (198 lbs).

Character Personality:
Keen-minded:Kentwo is a highly perceptive fighter, almost immediately determining an opponent's attack patterns and weaknesses. He is a crafty tactician, effectively using his abilities to confuse his opponents. He can normally discern the motives and abilities of his opponents, and effectively uses his knowledge to end the battle in his favor. He is also very fully aware of the limits of his abilities, and anything he states in comparison to an opponent is usually justified.

Insane/Sage:Kentwo is fully capable of committing truly abhorrent and inhumane actions without feeling any shred of remorse or hesitation. Despite his demanding nature,  Kentwo is not vain like most of his fellow peer. He maintains a cautious and cool demeanor, being always in control of his actions. As he usually not the talkative one,  Kentwo spares his words and only speaks when necessary or for those he finds worthy of them.

Kentwo is an extremely composed individual. One doesn't obtain a reputation like his own by being reckless and letting things outside their own mind's pester them. While his voice isn't the voice of the knight in shining armor and is dreary and monotonous, he's very well spoken. He acts when he feels the time is right and doesn't dance to the rhythm of others if he doesn't see it yielding a reward. This can make him seem like a man of sage-like patience or a selfish hasty twat.

Paranoid:Kentwo tend to be a bit paranoid. Not sure who could be trusted he tend to question all his subordinate loyalty. His paranoid sometimes leaves him to be on guard around unfamiliar condition.  Kentwo is a very cunning fellow. He knows how to wiggle his way out of unfavourable situations, especially those involving endangerment of himself or others he is fond of.


Loyalty & Honor: Bresesker:Although he is known to be a violent man who fights for his own interest, Kentwo 's actions tend to be for the best.  Kentwo lives for battle, and enjoys a good fight more than anything. He even holds back in an effort to make any fight last longer. He claims injury and death are nothing but the price one pays for a good fight. Despite his tendency to be brutal, Zaraki usually stops a fight if his opponent is too injured to fight back. Despite this he hold loyalty to his village personal enough as old yellow.

In a Nut Shell: You don't want no smoke



Character History:
Kentwo Longz was born into Kirigakure no sato as a young orphan and the offspring of Kirigakure cruel schooling habits. Kirigakure Shinobi, born for experience, is a Kenjutsu user who focuses on utilizing inhumane skills. To utilize swordsmanship, Kentwo didn't care for other core skills he settled to master in one category. 




Utilizing his resources, he eventually became a skilled Shinobi Genin and specialist in hand-to-hand and sword combat. Thriving one is the inability to move quickly, which is a testament to endurance. 




As a poor Shinobi, he could afford much; therefore, he often strapped for straps. As a warrior first learning the strong live and the weak die, Kentwo spent many years redefining his skills.


Up to this point, Kentwo looks for ways to become stronger as Shinobi and a tool for Kirigakure no Sato.
**Affiliation Information**
Starting Village:  Kirigakure
Character's Rank: Genin
Character's Title: N/A

**Combat Information
Character's Clan: Clanless
Character's Skills: |Kenjutsu|
Character's Unique Abilities: |Big Boost,Experience Advantage,One-handed Seals, and Crafting Expertise|


**Stats**
Strength: B -> A
Constitution: C
Stamina: D
Speed: C
Coordination: B
Intelligence: D
Perception: B

**Other EXP Expenditures**
EXP Expenditures Here
1650 Exp Starting
1500 Exp + For Experience Advantage
995 Exp + Debt=

4,145 Exp to spend
_____________
Speed E -> D ->  C 450 Exp
Constitution E -> D -> C 450 Exp
Intelligence E -> D 150 Exp
Stamina E -> D 150 Exp
Strength E -> D ->  C -> B 950 Exp
Coordination E -> D ->  C -> B 950 Exp
Perception E -> D ->  C -> B 950 Exp
=4,050 dumping the rest gg
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UAs

+ One-Handed Seal -- there are 2 versions of one-handed seal. I know it's easy to assume it's the clanned version of one-handed seal, but can you write out that the One-Handed Seals you got is the one with the -1 Tier Coordination Penalty?
+ You don't have a crafting skill, you can't get crafting expertise.

Stats

4050 EXP used on stats

Leftover EXP

You have 95 leftover. This will not follow you. I would suggest changing your EXP Debt to be 900 rather than 995. (so you can actually get that EXP).

Kentwo Longz wrote:

"Only The Righteous"

The Maniac  

Character Name:Kentwo Longz
Nickname:
Character Age:18
Character Gender:Male

Character Appearance:



Kentwo  is a very tall standing at 6 feet 7 inches, he is very  muscular swordman with a wild and aggressive appearance. Kentwo  has a long face with high cheekbones, enlarged canine teeth, and pronounced, hairless brow ridges. He has red eyes and stringy black hair reaching past his shoulders in length. Kentwo  haves noticeable trait in his appearance is a long, thin scar running down the left side of his face and across his left eye, inflicted on him by parents while he was still a child.

Since becoming a Shinobi, he wears the standard, black shihakushō, with the addition of white bandages across his midsection and a short-sleeved  haori with ragged ends on the sleeves and back flap. He styles his hair into stiff strands, attaching small bells at its tips, and wears a special black eyepatch over his right eye.

He can let out his hair revealing his traditional hair of aggressive long hair. More importantly Kentwo isn't to big for his own good weighing about 90 kg (198 lbs).

Character Personality:
Keen-minded:Kentwo is a highly perceptive fighter, almost immediately determining an opponent's attack patterns and weaknesses. He is a crafty tactician, effectively using his abilities to confuse his opponents. He can normally discern the motives and abilities of his opponents, and effectively uses his knowledge to end the battle in his favor. He is also very fully aware of the limits of his abilities, and anything he states in comparison to an opponent is usually justified.

Insane/Sage:Kentwo is fully capable of committing truly abhorrent and inhumane actions without feeling any shred of remorse or hesitation. Despite his demanding nature,  Kentwo is not vain like most of his fellow peer. He maintains a cautious and cool demeanor, being always in control of his actions. As he usually not the talkative one,  Kentwo spares his words and only speaks when necessary or for those he finds worthy of them.

Kentwo is an extremely composed individual. One doesn't obtain a reputation like his own by being reckless and letting things outside their own mind's pester them. While his voice isn't the voice of the knight in shining armor and is dreary and monotonous, he's very well spoken. He acts when he feels the time is right and doesn't dance to the rhythm of others if he doesn't see it yielding a reward. This can make him seem like a man of sage-like patience or a selfish hasty twat.

Paranoid:Kentwo tend to be a bit paranoid. Not sure who could be trusted he tend to question all his subordinate loyalty. His paranoid sometimes leaves him to be on guard around unfamiliar condition.  Kentwo is a very cunning fellow. He knows how to wiggle his way out of unfavourable situations, especially those involving endangerment of himself or others he is fond of.


Loyalty & Honor: Bresesker:Although he is known to be a violent man who fights for his own interest, Kentwo 's actions tend to be for the best.  Kentwo lives for battle, and enjoys a good fight more than anything. He even holds back in an effort to make any fight last longer. He claims injury and death are nothing but the price one pays for a good fight. Despite his tendency to be brutal, Kentwo usually stops a fight if his opponent is too injured to fight back. Despite this he hold loyalty to his village personal enough as old yellow.

In a Nut Shell: You don't want no smoke



Character History:
Kentwo Longz was born into Kirigakure no sato as a young orphan and the offspring of Kirigakure cruel schooling habits. Kirigakure Shinobi, born for experience, is a Kenjutsu user who focuses on utilizing inhumane skills. To utilize swordsmanship, Kentwo didn't care for other core skills he settled to master in one category. 




Utilizing his resources, he eventually became a skilled Shinobi Genin and specialist in hand-to-hand and sword combat. Thriving one is the inability to move quickly, which is a testament to endurance. 




As a poor Shinobi, he could afford much; therefore, he often strapped for straps. As a warrior first learning the strong live and the weak die, Kentwo spent many years redefining his skills.


Up to this point, Kentwo looks for ways to become stronger as Shinobi and a tool for Kirigakure no Sato.
**Affiliation Information**
Starting Village:  Kirigakure
Character's Rank: Genin
Character's Title: N/A

**Combat Information
Character's Clan: Clanless
Character's Skills: |Kenjutsu|
Character's Unique Abilities: |Big Boost
- +1 Tier to Strength
Experience Advantage
- 900 EXP debt
One-Handed Seals
- -1 Tier to Coordination when performing one-handed sealsOne-handed Seals:Pretty straightforward. A player may weave hand seals with only one hand. This results in a one tier loss of Coordination for that hand regarding hand seals.

**Stats**
Strength: B
Constitution: C
Stamina: D
Speed: C
Coordination: B
Intelligence: D
Perception: B

**Other EXP Expenditures**
EXP Expenditures Here
1650 Exp Starting
1500 Exp + For Experience Advantage
900 Exp + Debt=

4,050 Exp to spend
_____________
Speed E -> D ->  C 450 Exp
Constitution E -> D -> C 450 Exp
Intelligence E -> D 150 Exp
Stamina E -> D 150 Exp
Strength E -> D ->  C -> B 950 Exp
Coordination E -> D ->  C -> B 950 Exp
Perception E -> D ->  C -> B 950 Exp
=4,050
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