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    Post by Kentwo Longz Tue May 07, 2024 10:43 am

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    Post by Kentwo Longz Tue May 14, 2024 7:30 pm

    Ready for review please!


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    Post by Airi Ohara Tue May 14, 2024 7:50 pm

    Adam wrote:





    "Do not make me repeat myself."




    Self Proclaim King


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    Character Name:Adam Aburame
    Nickname:The First
    Character Age:33
    Character Gender:Male

    Character Appearance: Adam is without question the first of his kind. Hint the name Adam his body kinda reflect humanoid appearance but have insects traits. In other words his body appearance made up of exoskeleton which is harder shell which is pretty much Adam durability skin. Adam exoskeleton is mix with various colors the main are dark pigmented areas on his arms, legs, chest, tail, and head.

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    He doesn't really reveal his true appearance at less he truly fighting to his heart content. For the sake of public eye he wear costume that hide his true appearance. His normal day to day attire resembles a grotesque caricature of a Victorian gentleman. He is round figure, he has gray skin and usually dresses in a large coat that clover his clothing, and top hat, with an enormous grin that remains fixed even when he is speaking and eating, and his eyes are permanently hidden behind a pair of pince-nez spectacles.

    He love to change up his hats, and usually seen carrying his umbrella which he seems to grew attach to. He have long gray ears making him look like some freak of nature by normal standards you can probably pick him out in crowd if you looking for him maybe.

    Many people may consider him creepy due to his physical appearance but never judge a book by the cover because it more then meet the eye if you know what I mean. The reason why his body is round is because he wrap in layers of clothes to keep his body warm from weather of the village. He wear proper boot so that he won't fall. Adam have a vast hats collection as each one is unique is made for intended purpose.

    Adam consider himself very extremely handsome, and elegant individual by whom villagers, and human's alike praise his physical appearance alone. Though it not true no one dares to insult him because of status, and position,and power he hold as clan leader head. [/i]


    Character Personality:
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    Master Tactician: Adam is a highly perceptive fighter, almost immediately determining an opponent's attack patterns and weaknesses. He is a crafty tactician, effectively using his abilities to confuse his opponents. He can normally discern the motives and abilities of his opponents, and effectively uses his knowledge to end the battle in his favor. He is also very fully aware of the limits of his abilities, and anything he states in comparison to an opponent is usually justified.


    Insane/Sage:Adam is fully capable of committing truly abhorrent and inhumane actions without feeling any shred of remorse or hesitation. Despite his demanding nature, Adam is not vain like most of his fellow peer. He maintains a cautious and cool demeanor, being always in control of his actions. As he usually not the talkative one, Adam spares his words and only speaks when necessary or for those he finds worthy of them.

    Adam is an extremely composed individual. One doesn't obtain a reputation like his own by being reckless and letting things outside their own mind's pester them. While his voice isn't the voice of the knight in shining armor and is dreary and monotonous, he's very well spoken. He acts when he feels the time is right and doesn't dance to the rhythm of others if he doesn't see it yielding a reward. This can make him seem like a man of sage-like patience or a selfish hasty twat.


    Paranoid:Adam tend to be a bit paranoid. Not sure who could be trusted he tend to question all his subordinate loyalty. His paranoid sometimes leaves him to be on guard around unfamiliar condition. Hiroko is a very cunning fellow. He knows how to wiggle his way out of unfavourable situations, especially those involving endangerment of himself or others he is fond of.

    In a Nut Shell: Adam face usually presents the face of a stotic{due to his mask}, almost emotionless observer but in several encounters he has been shown to have a very quick, often violent temper and sadistic tendencies. He took a great deal of pleasure from the idea of finally being able to punish individual that cross him. He is merciless when dealing with who cross him.

    Adam is an extremely mysterious figure. He never smiles, and rarely speaks. He has quite the intense glare and does not seem to have a problem using his skills to intimidate people into submission. Adam can be very cold, callous, and dispassionate figure, and is rather aloof, brooding, and indifferent, willing to harm both his comrades and enemies should they get in his way.  Despite this,  he is not particularly violent, and will only fight when provoked or when the situation conflict with his cause or objective.  Adam cold demeanor allows him to stay completely calm and in control in most situations, and he is not easily surprised or caught off-guard. Adam is highly perceptive, cunning, and analytical.



    Character History:
    The Aburame Clan spread  originally from Konogakure no sato as couple group members decide to spread the clan influence away from village.  Along the borders of Iwagakure no Sato an small group of Shinobi attempt the impossible repopulation.

    From that line the first was born and name Adam he was born with unquestionable birth effect. Along with further enhance his appearance he was substantially to be the first protype of the Aburame clan perfectionist.

    However the experiment was stolen and nurse in the house of Kirigakure no sato as first experiment and lastly a tool.  This entity was bloom from the heart of many man's wants and needs to be superior.

    From out the womb into test tube stick with bugs at birth and his body restructure into a creature of man desire. However as time pass his body morph entirely he was allowed to learn. To be able to study the words of the native and learn about the Shinobi world.  

    Many years of learning and finally grant freedom as citizen of Kirigakure no sato. Adam eagerly wish to ignite the in world on flames. For the corruption of man ideals of creating and monster such as him.

    **Affiliation Information**
    Starting Village:  Kirigakure
    Character's Rank: Genin
    Character's Title: N/A

    **Combat Information
    Character's Clan:  Aburame
    Character's Skills: |Ninjutsu,
    Fūinjutsu, and Doton|
    Character's Unique Abilities: |Mo-Money,One-handed Seals,Chakra Point Spending, and Field Specialist|


    **Stats**
    Strength: E
    Constitution: D
    Stamina: C
    Speed: E
    Coordination: D
    Intelligence: C
    Perception: E

    **Other EXP Expenditures**
    EXP Expenditures Here
    1650
    Starting Kikaichū
    -200 Exp Shōkaichū
    -500 Exp Kidaichū
    900 EXP Left
    Intelligence from E to C 300

    600 Exp Left
    Stamina  from E to C 300

    300 Exp Left
    Constitution & Coordination from E to D 150 Exp Each
    0 Exp
    ___________






    Before I proceed on, you cannot create an aburame character in kirigakure. Aburame is a Konoha exclusive clan
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    Post by Kentwo Longz Tue May 14, 2024 7:55 pm

    Airi Ohara wrote:
    Adam wrote:





    "Do not make me repeat myself."




    Self Proclaim King


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    Character Name:Adam Aburame
    Nickname:The First
    Character Age:33
    Character Gender:Male

    Character Appearance: Adam is without question the first of his kind. Hint the name Adam his body kinda reflect humanoid appearance but have insects traits. In other words his body appearance made up of exoskeleton which is harder shell which is pretty much Adam durability skin. Adam exoskeleton is mix with various colors the main are dark pigmented areas on his arms, legs, chest, tail, and head.

    Blah PdVI1HJ
    He doesn't really reveal his true appearance at less he truly fighting to his heart content. For the sake of public eye he wear costume that hide his true appearance. His normal day to day attire resembles a grotesque caricature of a Victorian gentleman. He is round figure, he has gray skin and usually dresses in a large coat that clover his clothing, and top hat, with an enormous grin that remains fixed even when he is speaking and eating, and his eyes are permanently hidden behind a pair of pince-nez spectacles.

    He love to change up his hats, and usually seen carrying his umbrella which he seems to grew attach to. He have long gray ears making him look like some freak of nature by normal standards you can probably pick him out in crowd if you looking for him maybe.

    Many people may consider him creepy due to his physical appearance but never judge a book by the cover because it more then meet the eye if you know what I mean. The reason why his body is round is because he wrap in layers of clothes to keep his body warm from weather of the village. He wear proper boot so that he won't fall. Adam have a vast hats collection as each one is unique is made for intended purpose.

    Adam consider himself very extremely handsome, and elegant individual by whom villagers, and human's alike praise his physical appearance alone. Though it not true no one dares to insult him because of status, and position,and power he hold as clan leader head. [/i]


    Character Personality:
    Blah IVLimad

    Master Tactician: Adam is a highly perceptive fighter, almost immediately determining an opponent's attack patterns and weaknesses. He is a crafty tactician, effectively using his abilities to confuse his opponents. He can normally discern the motives and abilities of his opponents, and effectively uses his knowledge to end the battle in his favor. He is also very fully aware of the limits of his abilities, and anything he states in comparison to an opponent is usually justified.


    Insane/Sage:Adam is fully capable of committing truly abhorrent and inhumane actions without feeling any shred of remorse or hesitation. Despite his demanding nature, Adam is not vain like most of his fellow peer. He maintains a cautious and cool demeanor, being always in control of his actions. As he usually not the talkative one, Adam spares his words and only speaks when necessary or for those he finds worthy of them.

    Adam is an extremely composed individual. One doesn't obtain a reputation like his own by being reckless and letting things outside their own mind's pester them. While his voice isn't the voice of the knight in shining armor and is dreary and monotonous, he's very well spoken. He acts when he feels the time is right and doesn't dance to the rhythm of others if he doesn't see it yielding a reward. This can make him seem like a man of sage-like patience or a selfish hasty twat.


    Paranoid:Adam tend to be a bit paranoid. Not sure who could be trusted he tend to question all his subordinate loyalty. His paranoid sometimes leaves him to be on guard around unfamiliar condition. Hiroko is a very cunning fellow. He knows how to wiggle his way out of unfavourable situations, especially those involving endangerment of himself or others he is fond of.

    In a Nut Shell: Adam face usually presents the face of a stotic{due to his mask}, almost emotionless observer but in several encounters he has been shown to have a very quick, often violent temper and sadistic tendencies. He took a great deal of pleasure from the idea of finally being able to punish individual that cross him. He is merciless when dealing with who cross him.

    Adam is an extremely mysterious figure. He never smiles, and rarely speaks. He has quite the intense glare and does not seem to have a problem using his skills to intimidate people into submission. Adam can be very cold, callous, and dispassionate figure, and is rather aloof, brooding, and indifferent, willing to harm both his comrades and enemies should they get in his way.  Despite this,  he is not particularly violent, and will only fight when provoked or when the situation conflict with his cause or objective.  Adam cold demeanor allows him to stay completely calm and in control in most situations, and he is not easily surprised or caught off-guard. Adam is highly perceptive, cunning, and analytical.



    Character History:
    The Aburame Clan spread  originally from Konogakure no sato as couple group members decide to spread the clan influence away from village.  Along the borders of Iwagakure no Sato an small group of Shinobi attempt the impossible repopulation.

    From that line the first was born and name Adam he was born with unquestionable birth effect. Along with further enhance his appearance he was substantially to be the first protype of the Aburame clan perfectionist.

    However the experiment was stolen and nurse in the house of Kirigakure no sato as first experiment and lastly a tool.  This entity was bloom from the heart of many man's wants and needs to be superior.

    From out the womb into test tube stick with bugs at birth and his body restructure into a creature of man desire. However as time pass his body morph entirely he was allowed to learn. To be able to study the words of the native and learn about the Shinobi world.  

    Many years of learning and finally grant freedom as citizen of Kirigakure no sato. Adam eagerly wish to ignite the in world on flames. For the corruption of man ideals of creating and monster such as him.

    **Affiliation Information**
    Starting Village:  Kirigakure
    Character's Rank: Genin
    Character's Title: N/A

    **Combat Information
    Character's Clan:  Aburame
    Character's Skills: |Ninjutsu,
    Fūinjutsu, and Doton|
    Character's Unique Abilities: |Mo-Money,One-handed Seals,Chakra Point Spending, and Field Specialist|


    **Stats**
    Strength: E
    Constitution: D
    Stamina: C
    Speed: E
    Coordination: D
    Intelligence: C
    Perception: E

    **Other EXP Expenditures**
    EXP Expenditures Here
    1650
    Starting Kikaichū
    -200 Exp Shōkaichū
    -500 Exp Kidaichū
    900 EXP Left
    Intelligence from E to C 300

    600 Exp Left
    Stamina  from E to C 300

    300 Exp Left
    Constitution & Coordination from E to D 150 Exp Each
    0 Exp
    ___________






    Before I proceed on, you cannot create an aburame character in kirigakure. Aburame is a Konoha exclusive clan

    Konogakure is it however can I get full grading and not just one thing lol


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    Post by Kentwo Longz Wed May 15, 2024 12:39 am

    Ready for review


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    Post by Airi Ohara Wed May 15, 2024 1:21 pm

    Oceanus wrote:





    "Okeanos The Devour"



    The Titan  


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    Character Name:Oceanus Hoshigaki
    Nickname:Cetus
    Character Age:18
    Character Gender:Male

    Character Appearance: In his dry form, Oceanus is the most humanoid of  Hoshigaki clan. He has a large, muscular being with dark-green skin on his arms, legs, and back and light skin on his chest and abdomen. He had sharp eyes, large fangs, and fins protruding from either side of his head. In place of eyebrows were small pink ovals. His attire consisted of a red speedo, an ornate crown, and a large fur-trimmed cape fastened in front with a fish-head-shaped clasp. He had heart-shaped nipples.He stand at even 7 feet tall and weight well over 350 pounds of pure muscle.

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    In his enrage or hydrate form tapping into his clan blood lust. Oceanus is large and imposing shinobi. He developed  dorsal fin running the length of his back and grew fins on his forearms and shoulders, and the fins on the side of his face grew larger. His skin turned aquamarine, and his face lost its humanoid appearance and became larger and more monstrous. In this form is vastly increase his weight and height by  100 pounds and grow to 8 feet in height.[/i]


    Character Personality:
    Keen-minded: Oceanus is a highly perceptive fighter, almost immediately determining an opponent's attack patterns and weaknesses. He is a crafty tactician, effectively using his abilities to confuse his opponents. He can normally discern the motives and abilities of his opponents, and effectively uses his knowledge to end the battle in his favor. He is also very fully aware of the limits of his abilities, and anything he states in comparison to an opponent is usually justified.

    Insane/Sage:Oceanus is fully capable of committing truly abhorrent and inhumane actions without feeling any shred of remorse or hesitation. Despite his demanding nature, Oceanus is not vain like most of his fellow peer. He maintains a cautious and cool demeanor, being always in control of his actions. As he usually not the talkative one, Oceanus spares his words and only speaks when necessary or for those he finds worthy of them.

    Oceanus is an extremely composed individual. One doesn't obtain a reputation like his own by being reckless and letting things outside their own mind's pester them. While his voice isn't the voice of the knight in shining armor and is dreary and monotonous, he's very well spoken. He acts when he feels the time is right and doesn't dance to the rhythm of others if he doesn't see it yielding a reward. This can make him seem like a man of sage-like patience or a selfish hasty twat.


    Paranoid:Oceanus tend to be a bit paranoid. Not sure who could be trusted he tend to question all his subordinate loyalty. His paranoid sometimes leaves him to be on guard around unfamiliar condition. Oceanus is a very cunning fellow. He knows how to wiggle his way out of unfavourable situations, especially those involving endangerment of himself or others he is fond of.

    In a Nut Shell: Oceanus is a very cold, callous, and dispassionate figure, and is rather aloof, brooding, and indifferent, willing to harm his comrades in addition to his enemies should they get in his way. He also tend to have a shot fuels when dealing with outsiders.



    Character History: Oceanus was born and raise in Kirigakure no sato. Due his clan abilities he stand out like a sore thumb. His parents were originally members of Kirigakure no sato both respective shinobi. However utilize his abilities in Swordsman ship and Ninjutsu capabilities.  Oceanus was interest in becoming swordmaster at a young age he often practice. Mostly Stat to himself often time working on his clan abilities and swordmanship.

    Being raise in Kirigakure was blood bath only thr strong live and survive. As freshly made Genin Oceanus spend his time alone working to improve his skills as an Shinobi .


    **Affiliation Information**
    Starting Village:  Kirigakure
    Character's Rank: Genin
    Character's Title: N/A

    **Combat Information
    Character's Clan:  Hoshigaki
    Character's Skills: |Ninjutsu,
    Kenjutsu, Raiton , and Suiton|
    Character's Unique Abilities: |Mo-Money,One-handed Seals,Chakra Point Spending, and Chemistry Expertise|


    **Stats**
    Strength: E
    Constitution: D
    Stamina: D
    Speed: E
    Coordination: E
    Intelligence: C
    Perception: E

    **Other EXP Expenditures**
    EXP Expenditures Here
    1650
    Bloodlust Control, Stage 1 |Constitution|-> 250 Exp
    Bloodlust Control, Stage 2 -> 250
    Bloodlust Control, Stage 3 -> 500
    _____________
    650 Exp
    Constitution E -> D 150 Exp
    Intelligence E -> D -C 300 Exp
    Stamina E -> D 150 Exp

    50exp ↩
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    Skills
      Skills need to be corrected. As a Genin you start with 4 skills. Elements count as skills. You currently have
        1. Hoshigaki
        2. Ninjutsu
        3. Kenjutsu
        4. Raiton
        5. Suiton
      You need to cut one of them out for now -- you can get another one as you rank-up to C here in 1000 Total EXP.

    Unique Abilities
      + Mo-Money: Please state you are getting a 100,000 ryo start with this Unique Ability
      + One-Handed Seals: Please state the effects of this as there are two variants. Since you have a Clan, you don't get the freebie variant so please copy/paste the variant with the -1 Coordination note in it.
      + Chakra Spending: Please note what gets the chakra reduction and what gets the chakra increase
      + Chemistry Expertise: You can't really make any use of this Unique Ability since you don't have the Chemistry Skill. Please remove this until you get either Medical or the Chemistry Skill.  

    + Stats
      750 EXP spent
      + Con: E -> D = 150 EXP
      + Stam: E -> D = 150
      + Intelligence: E -> D = 150 | D -> C = 300 = 450

    + Other EXP Expenditure
      + Bloodlust Control Stage 2: Constitution or Stamina, Gotta choose
      + Total spending: +1000

    + Required Fixes
      You currently have 750 + 1000 EXP = 1750 EXP -- You are given 1650. One way this can be remedied is if you take the Experience Advantage Unique Ability. You can take a 100 EXP debt to get everything you want or you can get up to 995 and further increase your stat gains. Just keep in mind, no spendable EXP is carried over.


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