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    Asashi Uchiha

    Asashi
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    Post by Asashi Sat Apr 20, 2019 9:37 pm

    Name: Asashi Uchiha
    Age: 14
    Gender: Male
    Village: Konoha
    Rank: Gennin
    Title: N/A

    Clan: Uchiha
    Bloodline: Sharingan
    Element(s): Lightning
    Skill(s): Kenjutsu

    --All 1050 have been used
    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution:D
    • Stamina:D
    • Speed:D
    • Coordination:D
    • Intelligence:D
    • Perception:D


    Unique Abilities:

    Asashi can perform hand signs with a single hand but at a rate of -1 Coordination tier


    Appearance:

    Asashi Uchiha is 5'11 and very slim. He weighs about 130 pounds and usually wears a black jacket with the Uchiha symbol on the back. He usually wears blue pants and a black shirt under his jacket, the shirt also has an uchiha symbol(Cause why not). He usually has a silver necklace with a blue crystal on it. His shoes are the normal sandals that the Shinobi wear, and his headband is around his leg or waist most of the time. He has a holster on his back for a weapon such as a Katana but he lost his a long time ago so he just carries the holster in case he finds a new one.

    History:

    Born in the village of Konoha, Asashi did not have parents. His father died when he was young and he never knew his mother. His father had given him a necklace to wear before the mission he had went on that killed him, and Asashi wears it to this day. The only other trait that made him know of his bloodline was the Sharingan. Sharingan was awakened when he was 6 years old and that is when he was told his friend, Shin Akamaru, had died of a mysterious disease.

    When Asashi was 8 years old, he practiced using swords and other weapons that he had taken from others. His practices made him good with weapons but it also meant he never focused on physical strength, so he’s not strong without them. By the time Asashi was 10 years old he was trying to become a Shinobi in hopes of honoring his dead friend whose dream was to become a Shinobi.

    At 12 years old, Asashi started attempting learning Lightning Style Release and learning techniques using it. He never had a real social life until this point in which case he started gaining fame around his school for practicing and learning his Lightning Style Release. During the time he was 12, he made a friend and went to their house. He brought his Katana to show his friend, but on the way he got pushed around and he lost it. He found the holster but not the blade.

    Personality:
    Loud, playful, tries to be funny. He’s usually a quick thinker and tries not to make a fight start. He doesn’t put up with people hurting his friends, and he is strong willed. He won’t give up simply because the enemy is stronger, he’ll try to beat someone even if the chances are slim. He’ll give his life for civilian’s he’d never met before.


    Roleplay Sample: N/A


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    Nozomi
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    Wanderer
    Wanderer


    Posts : 1560
    Join date : 2017-10-09
    Age : 29

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    Post by Nozomi Sat Apr 20, 2019 9:58 pm

    Okay, just a couple things on your UA's.

    "Asashi can perform hand signs with one hand when using sharingan but its slower and takes more chakra."
    This is ultimately unnecessary with the drawback. You can change is so that you can perform Hand Signs with a single hand (at any time) but at a rate of -1 tier of coordination. There isn't a need to increase chakra AND make them slower, AND have to use the Sharingan.

    "Asashi is Amazing at stealing and pickpocketing but sadly he’s not very good at talking his way out of punishment or lying."
    This applies more just as an RP element, and less of a UA, so it's not needed here.

    "The Necklace that Asashi wears enhances his Lightning style but weakens every other jutsu he uses including special Genjutsu and Sharingan abilities."
    This one, again, has too many drawbacks, AND having it as a necklace is more of an enchantment than a UA. However, you can just make it so that your Lightning Style jutsu are more powerful by +1 tier of power, while one of your other skills or elements is weaker by -1 tier of power.


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    Post by Nozomi Sat Apr 20, 2019 10:42 pm

    Asashi wrote:Name: Asashi Uchiha
    Age: 14
    Gender: Male
    Village: Konoha
    Rank: Gennin
    Title: N/A

    Clan: Uchiha
    Bloodline: Sharingan
    Element(s): Lightning
    Skill(s): Kenjutsu

    --All 1050 have been used
    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution:D
    • Stamina:D
    • Speed:D
    • Coordination:D
    • Intelligence:D
    • Perception:D


    Unique Abilities:

    Asashi can perform hand signs with a single hand but at a rate of -1 Coordination tier


    Appearance:

    Asashi Uchiha is 5'11 and very slim. He weighs about 130 pounds and usually wears a black jacket with the Uchiha symbol on the back. He usually wears blue pants and a black shirt under his jacket, the shirt also has an uchiha symbol(Cause why not). He usually has a silver necklace with a blue crystal on it. His shoes are the normal sandals that the Shinobi wear, and his headband is around his leg or waist most of the time. He has a holster on his back for a weapon such as a Katana but he lost his a long time ago so he just carries the holster in case he finds a new one.

    History:

    Born in the village of Konoha, Asashi did not have parents. His father died when he was young and he never knew his mother. His father had given him a necklace to wear before the mission he had went on that killed him, and Asashi wears it to this day. The only other trait that made him know of his bloodline was the Sharingan. Sharingan was awakened when he was 6 years old and that is when he was told his friend, Shin Akamaru, had died of a mysterious disease.

    When Asashi was 8 years old, he practiced using swords and other weapons that he had taken from others. His practices made him good with weapons but it also meant he never focused on physical strength, so he’s not strong without them. By the time Asashi was 10 years old he was trying to become a Shinobi in hopes of honoring his dead friend whose dream was to become a Shinobi.

    At 12 years old, Asashi started attempting learning Lightning Style Release and learning techniques using it. He never had a real social life until this point in which case he started gaining fame around his school for practicing and learning his Lightning Style Release. During the time he was 12, he made a friend and went to their house. He brought his Katana to show his friend, but on the way he got pushed around and he lost it. He found the holster but not the blade.

    Personality:
    Loud, playful, tries to be funny. He’s usually a quick thinker and tries not to make a fight start. He doesn’t put up with people hurting his friends, and he is strong willed. He won’t give up simply because the enemy is stronger, he’ll try to beat someone even if the chances are slim. He’ll give his life for civilian’s he’d never met before.


    Roleplay Sample: N/A
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