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    Makakakaki: Jutsu

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    Post by Makakakaki Wed Apr 18, 2018 8:59 pm

    Name: Fuuinjutsu: Foothold
    Rank: D
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: D
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: None
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Fuuinjutsu
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Ox-Dragon-Ox
    Description: The user performs the handseals and the user can place a seal anywhere on a surface that instantly turns invisible. If an enemy steps or touches it then they can not move that body part from that spot.
    Weaknesses:
    C rank strength can break it, D rank can break it after a post of a struggling.

    Name: Fuuinjutsu: Summon Gate
    Rank: D
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: E
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: Instantaneous
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Fuuinjutsu
    Requirements: None
    Parent Technique: None
    Hand Seals: Dog-Monkey-Rabbit
    Description: The user places a seal where they can summon items from their pocket dimension to. Can be dispelled.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Makakakaki Super Secret Explosive Seal
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: None
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Element: None
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Fuuinjutsu
    Requirements: Learn from Makakakaki
    Parent Technique: none
    Hand Seals: Dragon
    Description: This explosive seal is unique to Makakakaki. She created a unique seal that creates an explosive blast much more potent than a basic explosive tag and can be placed on any item and surface. It has a blast radius of 10 meters and does heavy damage on direct impact.
    Weaknesses: None.


    Name: Kumo Style: 10 Hornet Strikes
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: None
    Range: Short (0-2m)
    Speed: Depends on Coordination
    Element: None
    Skill: Bukijutsu
    Classification: Bukijutsu
    Requirements: None
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals:N/A
    Description:
    The user throws ten kunai that have explosive seals on them these kunai can curve towards their target within reason (within 1 meter radius). They explode on impact or by user detonation.
    Weaknesses: Can be dodged or blown away.

    Name: Flash Blade: Lightning Strike Format:Omega Delta Dance.
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Short (0-5m)
    Speed: Very Fast
    Element: None
    Skill: Bukijutsu and Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Bukijutsu and Fuuinjutsu
    Requirements:None
    Parent Technique: None
    Hand Seals: Ox
    Description: The user forms a seal before launching a ninja tool at the target. At the user will, the user can activate the seal and summoning 100 Senbon launching from the throw ninja tool at a specific direction.
    Weaknesses: Can be blocked.
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    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Bukijutsu | Weapon Crafting
    Class: D
    Ryo: 0

    Makakakaki: Jutsu Empty Re: Makakakaki: Jutsu

    Post by Rin Matoi Thu Apr 19, 2018 5:42 pm

    For chakra costs, state the numeric value instead of the letter grade. Just as an FYI: creating "chakra ink" requires A-tier Intelligence and B-tier Stamina. If your idea is to place seals in an instant you would need to meet those parameters. You can learn more about how Fuuinjutsu works on our site here: https://gladiusnarutorp.forumotion.com/t86-skills-information. But in any case, you can scribe seals beforehand on paper or scrolls and use them that way.

    Classification refers to its availability. For instance, "Open" means everybody can learn it while "Personal" would be only the character. "Fuuinjutsu" is not a justified classification. Speed must be represented by a tier value. "Very Fast" is not an appropriate means of measurement. You can learn to better understand technique creation by viewing those already registered in the library https://gladiusnarutorp.forumotion.com/f42-technique-library

    Now onto the technique themselves....

    Name: Fuuinjutsu: Foothold
    Rank: D
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: D
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: None
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Fuuinjutsu
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Ox-Dragon-Ox
    Description: The user performs the handseals and the user can place a seal anywhere on a surface that instantly turns invisible. If an enemy steps or touches it then they can not move that body part from that spot.
    Weaknesses:
    C rank strength can break it, D rank can break it after a post of a struggling.

    Turning your seals invisible is not acceptable. Remove that portion of the technique.

    Name: Fuuinjutsu: Summon Gate
    Rank: D
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: E
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: Instantaneous
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Fuuinjutsu
    Requirements: None
    Parent Technique: None
    Hand Seals: Dog-Monkey-Rabbit
    Description: The user places a seal where they can summon items from their pocket dimension to. Can be dispelled.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    What is this "pocket dimension" you speak of? Something along those lines sounds like it would be limited to Kamui. To allow anybody to "own" a pocket dimension would be very power, and let alone allow them to infinitely store and call upon items by placing various seals that is not the original. If anything, such technique would be A-rank or higher.

    Name: Makakakaki Super Secret Explosive Seal
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: None
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Element: None
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Fuuinjutsu
    Requirements: Learn from Makakakaki
    Parent Technique: none
    Hand Seals: Dragon
    Description: This explosive seal is unique to Makakakaki. She created a unique seal that creates an explosive blast much more potent than a basic explosive tag and can be placed on any item and surface. It has a blast radius of 10 meters and does heavy damage on direct impact.
    Weaknesses: None.

    Explosive Tags are the result of releasing a sealed, primed explosive. They are not by-products of Fuuinjutsu, otherwise Fuuinjutsu could in itself act as a bootleg Blast Release.

    Name: Kumo Style: 10 Hornet Strikes
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: None
    Range: Short (0-2m)
    Speed: Depends on Coordination
    Element: None
    Skill: Bukijutsu
    Classification: Bukijutsu
    Requirements: None
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals:N/A
    Description:
    The user throws ten kunai that have explosive seals on them these kunai can curve towards their target within reason (within 1 meter radius). They explode on impact or by user detonation.
    Weaknesses: Can be dodged or blown away.

    I recommend editing the range. Once your projectile extends two meters you will be unable to control it by how you have it written.

    How do these kunai curve? As a Bukijutsu technique you would require some method to control these. If you plan of using chakra, your ability to control them would be based off your character's Coordination stat.

    How much can you change the direction? A pure homing kunai that never loses momentum would at least be a B-rank technique. Slight direction shifting much like Phoenix Sage Fire would be acceptable. In this case, it would be the user's Coordination -2 tiers.

    Name: Flash Blade: Lightning Strike Format:Omega Delta Dance.
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Short (0-5m)
    Speed: Very Fast
    Element: None
    Skill: Bukijutsu and Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Bukijutsu and Fuuinjutsu
    Requirements:None
    Parent Technique: None
    Hand Seals: Ox
    Description: The user forms a seal before launching a ninja tool at the target. At the user will, the user can activate the seal and summoning 100 Senbon launching from the throw ninja tool at a specific direction.
    Weaknesses: Can be blocked.

    Same issue as above regarding the range.

    Summoning tools through this method is fine, however you must change the wording to "the user can activate the seal and summon 100 pre-seal tools..." You must seal these tools in advance and word it so it does not seem like you're getting 100 senbon for free.

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