Kaku Shometsu

Clan element: Suiso (hydrogen)


✦ Strong Against (undetonated): None
✦ Strong Against (detonated/-ing): None
✦ Weak Against (detonated): None
✦ Weak Against (detonated): None
✦ Result of: Raiton and Suiton (and Futon if stage 3)

Clan lore

The Kaku Shometsu Clan is a clan that once was a branch of the Hozuki. Due to a marriage with a Magnet stye user this branch split off of the main clan. The Kaku Shometsu clan wandered away and slowly but steadily died off as their powers changed. Today only a few of them are remaining and those that are remaining are returning back to Kirikagure, in order to find back to their roots as an event that happened there forced them to leave. Their powers are still based on water, hoever with the m blood of their long dead ancestor they developed powers different then the main branch.



Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics

Members of the Kaku Shometsu clan often have a visually appealing, soft appearance. They are built slim and pale, as their body contains more wather then the usual human. They are a special and long lost branch of the Hozuki clan. As their habitat changed, so did their appearance and abilities. Having lost acess to most of the Hozuki clans abilites they developed new ones as a result of it. They carry no smell on themselfes, however fereigns smells are stronger on them then anywhere else. They are heavied then normal humans, despite their slim features. Another feature is that their bodies water is hydrogen thats taking on the properties of normal water through chakra. While any clan member having this kekkei genkai automaticly can control this without using chakra, this effect ends on death, causing the clan member to self ignite and detonate violently. They often make skilled medical nins through their ability to controll hydrogen, one of the most important elements in the human body.


Bloodline Description & Abilities

The Kaku Shometsu clan has its strenght in the ability to split water into Hydrogen at will utilising their body and sereval elements in the process. Getting the ability to control thier element on  atomar levels, thier clan jutsus got more specialised then the Hozuki clans. One of those feats is the ability to turn water sources (Or anything containing hydrogen) into pure hydrogen and oxygen, which can be used and "guided" together to form devastating attacks via explosions.

Stage 1:

Stage 2:

Stage 3 :

ADDONS:

Sealing:

Digging deep:

Miasmatic metabolism:

All of these abilities may be unlocked by any Kaku Shometsu, in any order desired, so long as the appropriate costs are paid. Hydrogen generation does not cost chakra, however the techniques that use them do.

Clan members that have unlocked the 2nd stage dont need to breathe air, and can just breathe pure oxygen


Bloodline Limits and drawbacks:

While being a forgoten Hozuki clan branch, Kaku Shometsu members do not have the abilities their main clan does have.

Hydrogen attacks can be prematurely ignited by C-Rank katon attacks and C-Rank Raiton attacks
(ends once user gets to stage 2)

Clan members will constantly feed on water around them, even if they dont wish to do so. Occasionaly the need to feed properly on larger water masses, replenishing themselfes.

Hydrogen will eventually disperse (1/3rd per post if outside users range), meaning it will become useless, or burn out without an explosion.

Requires the user to have spend a skill point (as it counts as kekkei genkai)

Requires the user to have Suiton and Raiton at start.

Clan members basicly have no real way of defending themselves close range with this element without them hurting themselfes

While the pure hydrogen and oxygen cant be seen, anyone will notice if they stand inside a cloud of it as pure oxygen and hydrogen are both not breathable, so anyone who needs air to survive will immediately notice this.



Clan jutsus

All techniques must clearly state their intend OOCly under the post to avoid trouble. (Aka moving my hydrogen towards enemy)

Hydrogen Damage and range table:

Gathering:

Detonate:

Delayed detonation:

Artificial amplification:

Genshi Kishi:

Disruptive force:

Harbinger projectile:

Advent of a hostile world:

While I appreciate the effort and originality this Clan seems to overlap quite a bit with blast release. I'd honestly recommend choosing that Clan and adding the hydrogen/oxygen ignition aspects via the Chemistry system if this is what you want to go for. As it is, it unfortunately cannot be approved.

so what part needs to be changed for it in order to not overlap with the blast clan? I mean neither, lore, characteristics, jutsusus nor anything else except the fact that both use explosions are overlaping, and even with explosions those wouldnt deal fragmentation (which blast seems to have) instead of blunt force (aka shockwave) and fire based damage. Also its kind of designed as long range artillery clan, while blast is the opposite, and focused on later forming explosive clay.

Basicly Blast release is (compared to my idea) having a seriously more taijutsu based approach and longer lasting efects (such as the remote detonating of infused things), while the things i wrote up are more in the direction of some kind of magnet release. That being said, its clear need for water + the fact that every single attack on their reportiare will damage them if to close (only applying to the clay based structures of the blast release), and the abilities this clan would have plus the prerequisites and the art of attack (concussive force, heat) is kind of pretty different then blast release.

So to conclude this, i am not sure how to implement said chances you were saying. Do you mean i should apply those techniques as a sub clan of the blast release or just try to do all that with chemistry? Id so, why would i then need the blast release for that. Theoreticly everyone with sufficient chemistry and engineering should be able to make hydrogen and explosives out of it (given that there are also exploding tags, ect...).

Alterantively if there is something that needs to be changed so it isnt to close to blase release, what would that be then? I mean explosions in general can hardly be a blast release exclusive, just like water cant be a hozuki one.

Modified it so now it uses Blast release clan as the base, and is simply a different path with more abilities then the main one, though needs explosion release.

Clan element: Suiso (hydrogen)


✦ Strong Against (undetonated): None
✦ Strong Against (detonated/-ing): None
✦ Weak Against (detonated): None
✦ Weak Against (detonated): None
✦ Result of: Bakuton and Suiton

Clan lore

The Kaku Shometsu Clan is a clan that once was a branch of the Kotoshura. Due to a marriage with a Magnet stye user this branch split off of the main clan. The Kaku Shometsu clan wandered away and slowly but steadily died off as their powers changed. Today only a few of them are remaining and those that are remaining are returning back to Kirikagure, in order to find back to their roots as an event that happened there forced them to leave. Their powers are still based on explosions, however with the blood of their long dead ancestor they developed powers different then the main branch.



Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics

Members of the Kaku Shometsu clan often have a visually appealing, soft appearance. They are built slim and pale, as their body contains more wather then the usual human. They are a special and long lost branch of the Hozuki clan. As their habitat changed, so did their appearance and abilities. Having lost acess to most of the Hozuki clans abilites they developed new ones as a result of it. They carry no smell on themselfes, however fereigns smells are stronger on them then anywhere else. They are heavied then normal humans, despite their slim features. Another feature is that their bodies water is hydrogen thats taking on the properties of normal water through chakra. While any clan member having this kekkei genkai automaticly can control this without using chakra, this effect ends on death, causing the clan member to self ignite and detonate violently. They often make skilled medical nins through their ability to controll hydrogen, one of the most important elements in the human body.


Bloodline Description & Abilities

The Kaku Shometsu clan has its strenght in the ability to split water into Hydrogen at will utilising their body and sereval elements in the process. Getting the ability to control thier element on  atomar levels, thier clan jutsus got more specialised then the Hozuki clans. One of those feats is the ability to turn water sources (Or anything containing hydrogen) into pure hydrogen and oxygen, which can be used and "guided" together to form devastating attacks via explosions.

Stage 1:

Stage 2:

Stage 3 :

ADDONS:

Sealing:

Digging deep:

Miasmatic metabolism:

All of these abilities may be unlocked by any Kaku Shometsu, in any order desired, so long as the appropriate costs are paid. Hydrogen generation does not cost chakra, however the techniques that use them do.

Clan members that have unlocked the 2nd stage dont need to breathe air, and can just breathe pure oxygen


Bloodline Limits and drawbacks:

While being a forgoten Kotoshura clan branch, Kaku Shometsu members dont have access to the explosive clay techniques of the main branch

Hydrogen release absolutely need explosion release stage 1 as predecessor.

Hydrogen attacks can be prematurely ignited by C-Rank katon attacks and C-Rank Raiton attacks
(ends once user gets to stage 2)

Clan members will constantly feed on water around them, even if they dont wish to do so. Occasionaly the need to feed properly on larger water masses, replenishing themselfes.

Hydrogen will eventually disperse (1/3rd per post if outside users range), meaning it will become useless, or burn out without an explosion.

Requires the user to have spend a skill point (as it counts as kekkei genkai)

Requires the user to have Explosion release and Suiton at start.

Clan members basicly have no real way of defending themselves close range with this element without them hurting themselfes

While the pure hydrogen and oxygen cant be seen, anyone will notice if they stand inside a cloud of it as pure oxygen and hydrogen are both not breathable, so anyone who needs air to survive will immediately notice this.



Clan jutsus

All techniques must clearly state their intend OOCly under the post to avoid trouble. (Aka moving my hydrogen towards enemy)

Hydrogen Damage and range table:

Gathering:

Detonate:

Delayed detonation:

Artificial amplification:

Genshi Kishi:

Disruptive force:

Harbinger projectile:

Advent of a hostile world:

This is still conceptually denied. As Nyg stated, if you want to continue with this line, it's smarter to just make a Blast Clan member and use our other site systems from there to augment that clan with customs, as making a "Branch" is still an infringement of the original clan and is just an attempt to circumvent a previously established rule.