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    Kanara [Done?]

    FROSTCestrell
    FROSTCestrell


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    Post by FROSTCestrell Tue Nov 23, 2021 4:24 pm

    Name: Kanara Uchiha
    Age: 17
    Gender: Female
    Village: Konoha
    Rank: Genin
    Title: N/A

    Clan: Uchiha
    Bloodline: Sharingan
    Element(s): Katon
    Skill(s): Taijutsu

    1650+800=2450-900-600-950=0
    4 skillpoints-1(clan)-1(Skill Trade) -1(element fire),- 1 (Taijutsu)=0

    Stats

    • Strength: D (150)
    • Constitution: D (150)
    • Stamina: C (450)
    • Speed: B(950)
    • Coordination: C(450)
    • Intelligence: D (150)
    • Perception: D(150)


    Unique Abilities:

    1 tomoe sharingan (500xp)

    Experience advantage- Kanara often spent time as a child striving to be fast enough to chase the birds, and eventually surpass them in terms of speed. This mindless training has payed of in an unexpected way. 800 xp loan that needs to be paid before anything else

    One-handed Seals: Pretty straightforward. A player may weave hand seals with only one hand. This results in a one tier loss of Coordination for that hand regarding hand seals.

    Stat boost: Kanara learned pretty fast that she could become even faster if she went all out and used her energy. +1 tier boost to speed (cant exceed A-tier), - 1 tier boost to str, 5cp on activation

    Stat boost: The faster someone is, the easier they fall. Kanara has lerned to focus solely on her movements, while disregarding her surroundings. +1 tier boost to coordination (cant exceed A-tier), -1 tier boost to perception, 5cp on activation.

    Appearance:

    Kanara ususally is seen wearing simple dark (black, violet, blue, dark red) robes with geometric patterns on them (if any) that underline the paleness of her skin. Her red eyes (Birth condition) are clearly visible and she sometimes wears glasses (although she doesnt need them really) around her eyes. Her body is extremely pale, with exception of her lips and her crimson red, long hair. Sometimes she can be seen wearing a light set of armour in uchiha style.

    Pic:
    Kanara [Done?] Yc3zMUi

    History:

    Kanaras life was uneventful so far. Born with a genetic disease that makes her skin pale (although not vunerable to sun),her red colours eyes and crimson red hair, she always was some kind of rarity among Konohas children. This, plus her hatred for sunlight, lead to her often playing alone, preferrably underneath or near trees, thus avoiding other children, unless they happened to stumble upon her. She often would spent a lot of time chasing alone through the woods as fast as she could.

    Same when she went to the academy, when she quickly became known with teachers, for her unusual speed, compared to other students. While usually avoiding conflict, she didnt hesitate to fight back, in case soemone was to bully on another student or her, and while being introverted, she became respected by a few students of her class.

    Personality:

    Kanara is a kind person that (in most cases) wont attack someone easily. She is calm and thought through, happy and spark inspiration in people close to her. Just like her (unknown to her) sisters she however like sarkasm and loves to have a good laugh. Although she isnt „evil“ she cant help but laugh at someone elses misfortune (if it isnt too hard). She wears robes because they are cheap, give her the right body temperature and look nicely on her. She loves meat and cooking. Kanara will help a friend in need always and will offer whatever help she can give. While not being a „professional“ shinobi, she also will defend helpless people and will step in, if something is unfair. She can be easily distracted, and fears rodents to the point she will actively exterminate them with anything she has.

    Roleplay Sample: NA


    Last edited by FROSTCestrell on Wed Nov 24, 2021 4:08 pm; edited 4 times in total
    Mitsukira
    Mitsukira


    Posts : 292
    Join date : 2020-02-23
    Age : 22
    Location : The Universe

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Iryojutsu, Sensory, Bukijutsu, Ninjutsu, Raiton, Fuuton, Doton
    Class: A
    Ryo: Time and Space

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    Post by Mitsukira Wed Nov 24, 2021 7:45 am

    This is looking good so far, just a couple notes;

    Where you have -1(KKG) listed for skill point usage, this should say Skill Trade (since that's what you're doing with the skill point - trading away a skill point in exchange for 500 Spendable EXP and 1 stat raise [Which will additionally put your lifetime maximum stat raises at 21])

    Any notation regarding WIP or TBD etc. can be removed.

    Just so you're aware: Characters under the age of 16 in Konoha are extremely limited in what they can do. They cannot join squads, gain rank or participate in any dangerous missions or wars (which would restrict the character from participating in most activities). My suggestion is to increase the character's age to at least 16, although most people start their characters at 18 or more.


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    Dancing Queen:
    Character Name: Mitsukira Tatsudashi
    Spendable Experience: 1115
    Total Experience: 4765
    Renown: 9750
    Ryo: 1,219,500
    Stats:

    • Strength: B
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: B
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: A

    Elements & Skills:

    • Sensory
    • Iryojutsu
    • Bukijutsu
    • Ninjutsu
    • Raiton
    • Fuuton
    • Doton

    Gear:


    • 2 C-Rank Tessen
    • Kunai
    • 4 Senbon
    • 2 Shuriken
    • ’Daybreak and Nightfall’


    FROSTCestrell
    FROSTCestrell


    Village : N/A
    Posts : 166
    Join date : 2021-11-23

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    Post by FROSTCestrell Wed Nov 24, 2021 9:28 am

    Thank you very much! I changed said parts.
    Zoe
    Zoe


    Village : Kirigakure
    Posts : 122
    Join date : 2020-10-02
    Age : 21

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Fuuton, Katon, Suiton, Doton, Raiton
    Class: B
    Ryo: It isn't for eating?

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    Post by Zoe Wed Nov 24, 2021 4:05 pm

    One more thing, so sorry. Make sure you list in each of the Stat Boost UA's that they can't boost above A-Tier.


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    Kanara [Done?] HuRU3zt

    Child of Light:
    Character Name: Zoe Zor-El
    Spendable Experience: 2205
    Total Experience: 2280
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 650,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: E
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: E
    • Coordination: E
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: D

    Elements & Skills:

    • Raiton
    • Fuuton
    • Doton
    • Katon
    • Suiton

    Gear:


    • Zoe’s Notebook and Pen
    • Toonami & Konami’s braids
    • Body Change Potion

    Zoe
    Zoe


    Village : Kirigakure
    Posts : 122
    Join date : 2020-10-02
    Age : 21

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Fuuton, Katon, Suiton, Doton, Raiton
    Class: B
    Ryo: It isn't for eating?

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    Post by Zoe Wed Nov 24, 2021 4:09 pm

    @FROSTCestrell wrote:Name: Kanara Uchiha
    Age: 17
    Gender: Female
    Village: Konoha
    Rank: Genin
    Title: N/A

    Clan: Uchiha
    Bloodline: Sharingan
    Element(s): Katon
    Skill(s): Taijutsu

    1650+800=2450-900-600-950=0
    4 skillpoints-1(clan)-1(Skill Trade) -1(element fire),- 1 (Taijutsu)=0

    Stats

    • Strength: D (150)
    • Constitution: D (150)
    • Stamina: C (450)
    • Speed: B(950)
    • Coordination: C(450)
    • Intelligence: D (150)
    • Perception: D(150)


    Unique Abilities:

    1 tomoe sharingan (500xp)

    Experience advantage- Kanara often spent time as a child striving to be fast enough to chase the birds, and eventually surpass them in terms of speed. This mindless training has payed of in an unexpected way. 800 xp loan that needs to be paid before anything else

    One-handed Seals: Pretty straightforward. A player may weave hand seals with only one hand. This results in a one tier loss of Coordination for that hand regarding hand seals.

    Stat boost: Kanara learned pretty fast that she could become even faster if she went all out and used her energy. +1 tier boost to speed (cant exceed A-tier), - 1 tier boost to str, 5cp on activation

    Stat boost: The faster someone is, the easier they fall. Kanara has lerned to focus solely on her movements, while disregarding her surroundings. +1 tier boost to coordination (cant exceed A-tier), -1 tier boost to perception, 5cp on activation.

    Appearance:

    Kanara ususally is seen wearing simple dark (black, violet, blue, dark red) robes with geometric patterns on them (if any) that underline the paleness of her skin. Her red eyes (Birth condition) are clearly visible and she sometimes wears glasses (although she doesnt need them really) around her eyes. Her body is extremely pale, with exception of her lips and her crimson red, long hair. Sometimes she can be seen wearing a light set of armour in uchiha style.

    Pic:
    Kanara [Done?] Yc3zMUi

    History:

    Kanaras life was uneventful so far. Born with a genetic disease that makes her skin pale (although not vunerable to sun),her red colours eyes and crimson red hair, she always was some kind of rarity among Konohas children. This, plus her hatred for sunlight, lead to her often playing alone, preferrably underneath or near trees, thus avoiding other children, unless they happened to stumble upon her. She often would spent a lot of time chasing alone through the woods as fast as she could.

    Same when she went to the academy, when she quickly became known with teachers, for her unusual speed, compared to other students. While usually avoiding conflict, she didnt hesitate to fight back, in case soemone was to bully on another student or her, and while being introverted, she became respected by a few students of her class.

    Personality:

    Kanara is a kind person that (in most cases) wont attack someone easily. She is calm and thought through, happy and spark inspiration in people close to her. Just like her (unknown to her) sisters she however like sarkasm and loves to have a good laugh. Although she isnt „evil“ she cant help but laugh at someone elses misfortune (if it isnt too hard). She wears robes because they are cheap, give her the right body temperature and look nicely on her. She loves meat and cooking. Kanara will help a friend in need always and will offer whatever help she can give. While not being a „professional“ shinobi, she also will defend helpless people and will step in, if something is unfair. She can be easily distracted, and fears rodents to the point she will actively exterminate them with anything she has.

    Roleplay Sample: NA

    Approved~


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    Kanara [Done?] HuRU3zt

    Child of Light:
    Character Name: Zoe Zor-El
    Spendable Experience: 2205
    Total Experience: 2280
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 650,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: E
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: E
    • Coordination: E
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: D

    Elements & Skills:

    • Raiton
    • Fuuton
    • Doton
    • Katon
    • Suiton

    Gear:


    • Zoe’s Notebook and Pen
    • Toonami & Konami’s braids
    • Body Change Potion


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