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    Zen Kleveland

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    Post by Zen Mon Feb 22, 2021 9:14 pm

    Name: Zen Kleve
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Village: Konohagakure
    Rank: D rank
    Title: The Ebony Bomb  

    Clan: Yoru
    Bloodline: Dragon's Blood
    Element(s):
    Skill(s): Taijustu

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    Stats

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: C


    Unique Abilities:
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    Appearance:
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    History: Prologue:

    Kaden’s life has been an interesting adventure one could say. His parents were common thugs who decided to give up the game once they had him and settle down. When he was born they named him Kaden. Everything seemed fine until they ran into trouble from their past. Sadly, his parents had crossed too many people and weren’t going to be able to sweep it under the rug. Nobody wanted to give them a chance and they didn’t have many places to turn. So his parents came up with the idea letting Kaden’s uncle raise him as his own and to make sure that no one could trace Kaden back to them they changed the boy's name to Zen Kleve and used some of their black market connections to destroy any trace of the name Kaden.The only ones that know the truth of Zen's past is his uncle and the Hokage. Every now and then the boy meets his parents in a undisclosed location where they mostly spend the time telling the boy how much he's grown. Still it's better than nothing and he cherishes every minute granted with them.


    Personality: Zen is the kind of guy you want to be around. He’s never looking for trouble and always wanting to uplift the people around him. Zen is friends with everyone, even if you don’t want to be. He’s always looking for the positives in people and constantly ignoring the negatives. His view is that there are too many people who focus on the negative and not enough people focusing on the positive. Zen is very outgoing and doesn’t mind being the center of attention. He is exactly like his element keepsake, loud and proud.

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    Sayuri
    Sayuri


    Village : Kirigakure
    Posts : 979
    Join date : 2020-06-24
    Age : 22
    Location : The Bloody Mist

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Hyoton, Fuuton, Suiton, Ninjutsu, Iryojutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kanchijutsu
    Class: S
    Ryo: I take payment in blood

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    Post by Sayuri Mon Feb 22, 2021 9:27 pm

    If you're starting this character in Konoha, you are limited to Konoha Clans, Clanless or Unaffiliated Clans.

    Bakuton is locked to the Kotoshura Clan, which is locked to Iwagakure.

    I'm unsure what Dragon's Blood is.

    For the Unique Abilities please follow this guide.


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    Post by Zen Mon Feb 22, 2021 9:43 pm

    Alright I changed the element and the clan is Yoru which is unaffiliated and Dragon Blood is their KKG
    Yen-Lì
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    Posts : 273
    Join date : 2020-09-08
    Age : 21

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Ninjutsu, Sensory, Raiton, Suiton, Ranton
    Class: A
    Ryo: Gooseberries and Lilac

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    Post by Yen-Lì Thu Feb 25, 2021 9:31 pm

    Just a couple things you need to change here.

    The experience allotment for stats that you currently have is 3150 EXP. This is far above the 1650 that a starting character is allowed.

    All new characters (unless they are given express permission) start at D-Class and have the Rank of Genin.

    For the Title section, this is where you will put personal titles that you acquire through the renown system later on - while you can put something in that spot now - it wouldn't be an actual title that anyone knows IC.

    For the Bloodline you would just put what's listed on the Yoru clan page: KKG - Dragon's Blood. The other things you have listed there (Draconic Resistance, Draconic Strength, Draconic Awakening, and Draconic Healing) are unnecessary.

    For the Unique Abilities, please write them out in full as they are in the Unique Ability Guide. They may be 'flavoured' to be more personal to your character, but they must include information about what they do mechanically.



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    Post by Zen Fri Feb 26, 2021 12:31 am


    Thanks for the information. I have made the necessary changes and once again await approval.


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    Character Name: Zen Kleve
    Spendable Experience: 100
    Total Experience: 2650
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 30,000
    Stats:
    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: C


    Link to Character Updates:
    Link to Character Application: Zen Kleve
    Link to Known Techniques:
    Yen-Lì
    Yen-Lì


    Village : N/A
    Posts : 273
    Join date : 2020-09-08
    Age : 21

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Ninjutsu, Sensory, Raiton, Suiton, Ranton
    Class: A
    Ryo: Gooseberries and Lilac

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    Post by Yen-Lì Sat Feb 27, 2021 1:30 pm

    Almost done! Everything is looking really good. The EXP numbers are still a bit off, and it should look like this;

    1650 (starting EXP) + 500 (Skill trade) = 2150 EXP

    The stats you have listed are still over the available 2150 you have listed.

    Strength: C (450 EXP)
    Constitution: B (950 EXP)
    Stamina: D (150 EXP)
    Speed: C (450 EXP)
    Coordination: D (150 EXP)
    Intelligence: D (150 EXP)
    Perception: C (450 EXP)

    Which is 2750 EXP - needs to be lowered and then everything should be good.


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    Post by Zen Sat Feb 27, 2021 1:57 pm

    Thanks! I have made the necessary changes
    Kara
    Kara
    Civilian


    Village : Kumogakure
    Posts : 570
    Join date : 2020-02-08
    Age : 30

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Fuuton, Doton, Jiton, Chemistry, Iryojutsu, Engineering, Weaponsmith, Armorsmith, Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu, Kugutsu, Genjutsu
    Class: S
    Ryo: More than I need, less than I'd like

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    Post by Kara Sat Feb 27, 2021 3:11 pm

    MackAttackisBack wrote:Name: Zen Kleve
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Village: Konohagakure
    Rank: D rank
    Title: The Ebony Bomb  

    Clan: Yoru
    Bloodline: Dragon's Blood
    Element(s):
    Skill(s): Taijustu

    Spoiler:

    Stats

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: C


    Unique Abilities:
    Spoiler:


    Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    History: Prologue:

    Kaden’s life has been an interesting adventure one could say. His parents were common thugs who decided to give up the game once they had him and settle down. When he was born they named him Kaden. Everything seemed fine until they ran into trouble from their past. Sadly, his parents had crossed too many people and weren’t going to be able to sweep it under the rug. Nobody wanted to give them a chance and they didn’t have many places to turn. So his parents came up with the idea letting Kaden’s uncle raise him as his own and to make sure that no one could trace Kaden back to them they changed the boy's name to Zen Kleve and used some of their black market connections to destroy any trace of the name Kaden.The only ones that know the truth of Zen's past is his uncle and the Hokage. Every now and then the boy meets his parents in a undisclosed location where they mostly spend the time telling the boy how much he's grown. Still it's better than nothing and he cherishes every minute granted with them.


    Personality: Zen is the kind of guy you want to be around. He’s never looking for trouble and always wanting to uplift the people around him. Zen is friends with everyone, even if you don’t want to be. He’s always looking for the positives in people and constantly ignoring the negatives. His view is that there are too many people who focus on the negative and not enough people focusing on the positive. Zen is very outgoing and doesn’t mind being the center of attention. He is exactly like his element keepsake, loud and proud.

    Roleplay Sample:
    Spoiler:

    Approved~


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