Ashitaka's Technical Experiments

Name: White Rain
Rank: A
Power: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Activation Cost: 20
Upkeep: -
Range: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Speed: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Element: None
Skill: Kyujutsu, Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow, a Shadow or Wood Clone, Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique, at least 20 arrows, Coordination B
Parent Technique: Kyudo, Shuriken Shadow Clone
Hand Seals: Ox → Dog → Dragon → Rat → Dog → Boar → Snake → Tiger
Description: Using this technique, Ashitaka fires off his full set of White Dragon Fangs into the air while his Clone duplicates them using SSC. They will then rain down in a 50 meter radius over the target area.
Weakness: Requires an active Wood or Shadow Clone and both it and Ashitaka to be stationary. All rain techniques use at least 20 arrows and therefore cannot be used more times than Ashitaka has the ammunition for. The power of this technique is reduced by a -Tier for every volley (out of 5) the target manages to avoid.

Name: Black Rain
Rank: S
Power: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep: -
Range: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Speed: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Element: Varies
Skill: Kyujutsu, Bukijutsu, Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Chakra Flow, Chakra Duet, Lingering Chakra, a bow and at least 20 arrows, a Shadow or Wood Clone, Coordination B
Parent Technique: See above, plus White Rain
Hand Seals: Ox → Dog → Dragon → Rat → Dog → Boar → Snake → Tiger
Description: An upgraded version of White Rain where the arrows are enhanced with Chakra Flow as they are fired, increasing the damage they cause and their ability to penetrate defenses.
Weakness: Same as White Rain.

Name: Kyudo
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: -
Upkeep: 10
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: None
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: -
Description: The fine art of the Samurai Archer increases Ashitaka's Coordination by a +Tier when used with any bow, for the purposes of wielding said bow according to the Projectile Rules (Archery).
Weakness: None.

Ashitaka_Inuzuka wrote:Name: White Rain
Rank: A
Power: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Activation Cost: 20
Upkeep: -
Range: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Speed: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Element: None
Skill: Kyujutsu, Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow, a Shadow or Wood Clone, Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique, at least 20 arrows, Coordination B
Parent Technique: Kyudo, Shuriken Shadow Clone
Hand Seals: Same as Shuriken Shadow Clone
Description: Using this technique, Ashitaka fires off his full set of White Dragon Fangs into the air while his Clone duplicates them using SSC. They will then rain down in a 50 meter radius over the target area.
Weakness: Requires an active Wood or Shadow Clone and both it and Ashitaka to be stationary. All rain techniques use at least 20 arrows and therefore cannot be used more times than Ashitaka has the ammunition for. The power of this technique is reduced by a -Tier for every volley (out of 5) the target manages to avoid.

Name: Black Rain
Rank: S
Power: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep: -
Range: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Speed: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Element: Varies
Skill: Kyujutsu, Bukijutsu, Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Chakra Flow, Chakra Duet, Lingering Chakra, a bow and at least 20 arrows, a Shadow or Wood Clone, Coordination B
Parent Technique: See above, plus White Rain
Hand Seals: Same as Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Description: An upgraded version of White Rain where the arrows are enhanced with Chakra Flow as they are fired, increasing the damage they cause and their ability to penetrate defenses.
Weakness: Same as White Rain.

Name: Kyudo
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: -
Upkeep: 5
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: None
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: -
Description: The fine art of the Samurai Archer increases Ashitaka's Coordination by a +Tier and his Perception by a + Advantage when used with any bow.
Weakness: None.

White Rain and Black Rain - Please write in the hand seals used.

Kyodo - As boosting Coordination is considered Secondary and Perception is considered Specialized, the full tier boost should not be applied to Coordination. Additionally a Coordination boost with Kyujutsu requires a more narrow explanation as per the Stat Boosting and Debuffing Rules.

I made the requested edits.

Name: Object Healing
Rank: S
Power: Varies
Activation Cost: Varies
Upkeep: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: Mokuton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A damaged object to be repaired
Parent Technique: Hand Tool Transformation Technique
Hand Seals: None
Description: This technique can be used to repair any object for varying chakra costs, provided they are made of stone or plant matter:
E- Repairs tiny objects with little complexity, like a handful of marbles.
D- Repairs small objects with little complexity, like a teddy bear.
C- Repairs medium objects such as a piece of equipment or furniture.
B- Repairs good-sized and/or moderately complex objects such as a door or basic puppet.
A- Repairs large and/or somewhat complex objects like a cart, a full set of armor, or an advanced puppet.
S- Repairs a huge or highly complex object such as an airship or a regular ship, or a conjured statue.
Weakness: Requires complete concentration. No other actions may be taken during the post, and damage received or other focus breaks cancel the jutsu.

Ashitaka_Inuzuka wrote:Name: Object Healing
Rank: S
Power: Varies
Activation Cost: Varies
Upkeep: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: Mokuton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A damaged object to be repaired
Parent Technique: Hand Tool Transformation Technique
Hand Seals: None
Description: This technique can be used to repair any object for varying chakra costs, provided they are made of stone or plant matter:
E- Repairs tiny objects with little complexity, like a handful of marbles.
D- Repairs small objects with little complexity, like a teddy bear.
C- Repairs medium objects such as a piece of equipment or furniture.
B- Repairs good-sized and/or moderately complex objects such as a door or basic puppet.
A- Repairs large and/or somewhat complex objects like a cart, a full set of armor, or an advanced puppet.
S- Repairs a huge or highly complex object such as an airship or a regular ship, or a conjured statue.
Weakness: Requires complete concentration. No other actions may be taken during the post, and damage received or other focus breaks cancel the jutsu.

Hand signs are required.

In addition, I'm assuming all repaired items will be B/S durability (B for Senju Wood and S for the rank of the technique.) That being the case I would like to see the cost be 30 CP, and times for each level for repairs in addition to an upkeep of 20 CP. For instance, repairing a piece of equipment or furniture might take a whole round, whereas repairing a ship may take up to three rounds.

Hana Kaguya wrote:n addition, I'm assuming all repaired items will be B/S durability (B for Senju Wood and S for the rank of the technique.) That being the case I would like to see the cost be 30 CP, and times for each level for repairs in addition to an upkeep of 20 CP. For instance, repairing a piece of equipment or furniture might take a whole round, whereas repairing a ship may take up to three rounds.

You're assuming a lot here. Every item repaired by this technique will have the same Quality and Durability as it had prior to repairs. Also, you're asking a lot for these chakra costs for what is a comparatively minor effect.

he power of this technique is reduced by a -Tier for every volley (out of 5) the target manages to avoid.

*^ For jutsu that create volley arrow shots the impact reduction should be regardless of whether the target manages to avoid. Just say that the technique lowers damage by a tier and a minus in the case of White Rain and two tiers in the case of black rain.

Name: Kyudo
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: -
Upkeep: 3
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: None
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: -
Description: The fine art of the Samurai Archer increases Ashitaka's Coordination by a +Tier when used with any bow, for the purposes of wielding said bow according to the Projectile Rules (Archery).
Weakness: None.

Name: Wood Tool Manipulation Technique
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep: 5
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: Mokuton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Senju
Parent Technique: Hand Tool Manipulation Technique, Wood Cutting Technique
Hand Seals: -
Description: A more powerful version of the Hand Tool Manipulation Technique which Ashitaka can use to produce simple weapons and tools such as those listed in the General Marketplace or those he can imagine so long as they are not overly complex. Their Quality and Durability are both B and they are made of Senju Wood, thus granting the cost reduction for techniques involving them.
Weakness: Only two implements can be produced or altered using this technique. They do not grant any Quality boons. Changing the form of an implement conjured by this technique costs its full Activation Cost.

Name: Power Shot
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: None
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: -
Description: By focusing all of his Strength into a single draw, Ashitaka can fire a bow as though his Strength was a Tier higher.
Weakness: Only one arrow may be fired at a time using this technique, barring application of Shuriken Shadow Clone to the arrow after it is fired.

Name: Horizon Shot
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep:
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: None
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: -
Description: With intense focus on a single target, Ashitaka fires a single arrow far into the distance for a killing snipe. Using this technique increases his Coordination by a Tier for the purpose of determining his maximum effective range with a bow.
Weakness: Only one arrow may be fired at a time using this technique, barring application of Shuriken Shadow Clone to the arrow after it is fired.

Name: Object Healing
Rank: S
Power: Varies
Activation Cost: Varies
Upkeep: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: Mokuton, Doton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A damaged object to be repaired
Parent Technique: Hand Tool Transformation Technique
Hand Seals: Ram -> Boar -> Snake
Description: This technique can be used to repair any object for varying chakra costs, provided they are made of stone or plant matter:
E- Repairs tiny objects with little complexity, like a handful of marbles. Repair is instant.
D- Repairs small objects with little complexity, like a teddy bear. Repair takes a post.
C- Repairs medium objects such as a piece of equipment or furniture. Repair takes a round.
B- Repairs good-sized and/or moderately complex objects such as a door or basic puppet. Repair takes at least two rounds.
A- Repairs large and/or somewhat complex objects like a cart, a full set of armor, or an advanced puppet. Repair takes at least three rounds.
S- Repairs a huge or highly complex object such as an airship or a regular ship, or a conjured statue. Repair takes at least four rounds.
Weakness: Requires complete concentration. No other actions may be taken during the post, and damage received or other focus breaks cancel the jutsu. No object may be Repaired to a greater Quality or Durability than it was initially created with. High-quality/complexity/durability objects are treated as having one Tier less of each for each round remaining until they are repaired.

Kyudo: Upkeep should be 20

Power Shot: I don't think the activation cost needs to be this high. 5 CP should suffice for this. Is there a reason you made the activation cost 20 CP?

Horizon Shot: Same story

Object Healing: Shouldn't affect stone constructs.

Ashitaka_Inuzuka wrote:

Name: Wood Tool Manipulation Technique
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep: 5
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: None
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Senju
Parent Technique: Hand Tool Manipulation Technique, Wood Cutting Technique
Hand Seals: -
Description: A more powerful version of the Hand Tool Manipulation Technique which Ashitaka can use to produce simple weapons and tools such as those listed in the General Marketplace or those he can imagine so long as they are not overly complex. Their Quality and Durability are both B and they are made of Senju Wood, thus granting the cost reduction for techniques involving them.
Weakness: Only two implements can be produced or altered using this technique. They do not grant any Quality boons. Changing the form of an implement conjured by this technique costs its full Activation Cost.

Approved

Chen Kimyōnakama wrote:Kyudo: Upkeep should be 20

Power Shot: I don't think the activation cost needs to be this high. 5 CP should suffice for this. Is there a reason you made the activation cost 20 CP?

Horizon Shot: Same story

Object Healing: Shouldn't affect stone constructs.

Kyudo: fixed

Power Shot and Horizon Shot cost as much as they do because for whatever reason, Kyujutsu has the Stats required to use it as Secondary boosters instead of Primary.

I thought it was fair to include earth and stone constructs in Object Healing since Doton is a component of Mokuton.

For Object Healing add in Earth in the element section.


Power Shot and Horizon Shot cost as much as they do because for whatever reason, Kyujutsu has the Stats required to use it as Secondary boosters instead of Primary.


*^ What does that have to do with the cost being so high? You are only boosting it by 1 tier so it should cost 5 CP, the fact that is secondary only means you can't boost it by two tiers.

https://gladiusnarutorp.forumotion.com/t3689p50-ashitaka-s-technical-experiments#36100

All techs in this post have been adjusted per conversations with moderators.

Ashitaka_Inuzuka wrote:Name: Kyudo
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: -
Upkeep: 3
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: None
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: -
Description: The fine art of the Samurai Archer increases Ashitaka's Coordination by a +Tier when used with any bow, for the purposes of wielding said bow according to the Projectile Rules (Archery).
Weakness: None.

Name: Wood Tool Manipulation Technique
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep: 5
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: Mokuton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Senju
Parent Technique: Hand Tool Manipulation Technique, Wood Cutting Technique
Hand Seals: -
Description: A more powerful version of the Hand Tool Manipulation Technique which Ashitaka can use to produce simple weapons and tools such as those listed in the General Marketplace or those he can imagine so long as they are not overly complex. Their Quality and Durability are both B and they are made of Senju Wood, thus granting the cost reduction for techniques involving them.
Weakness: Only two implements can be produced or altered using this technique. They do not grant any Quality boons. Changing the form of an implement conjured by this technique costs its full Activation Cost.

Name: Power Shot
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: None
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: -
Description: By focusing all of his Strength into a single draw, Ashitaka can fire a bow as though his Strength was a Tier higher.
Weakness: Only one arrow may be fired at a time using this technique, barring application of Shuriken Shadow Clone to the arrow after it is fired.

Name: Horizon Shot
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep:
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: None
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: -
Description: With intense focus on a single target, Ashitaka fires a single arrow far into the distance for a killing snipe. Using this technique increases his Coordination by a Tier for the purpose of determining his maximum effective range with a bow.
Weakness: Only one arrow may be fired at a time using this technique, barring application of Shuriken Shadow Clone to the arrow after it is fired.

Name: Object Healing
Rank: S
Power: Varies
Activation Cost: Varies
Upkeep: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: Mokuton, Doton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A damaged object to be repaired
Parent Technique: Hand Tool Transformation Technique
Hand Seals: Ram -> Boar -> Snake
Description: This technique can be used to repair any object for varying chakra costs, provided they are made of stone or plant matter:
E- Repairs tiny objects with little complexity, like a handful of marbles. Repair is instant.
D- Repairs small objects with little complexity, like a teddy bear. Repair takes a post.
C- Repairs medium objects such as a piece of equipment or furniture. Repair takes a round.
B- Repairs good-sized and/or moderately complex objects such as a door or basic puppet. Repair takes at least two rounds.
A- Repairs large and/or somewhat complex objects like a cart, a full set of armor, or an advanced puppet. Repair takes at least three rounds.
S- Repairs a huge or highly complex object such as an airship or a regular ship, or a conjured statue. Repair takes at least four rounds.
Weakness: Requires complete concentration. No other actions may be taken during the post, and damage received or other focus breaks cancel the jutsu. No object may be Repaired to a greater Quality or Durability than it was initially created with. High-quality/complexity/durability objects are treated as having one Tier less of each for each round remaining until they are repaired.

Approved

Name: Chakra Shot
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep: 3
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: Varies
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow
Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
Hand Seals: -
Description: This ability enhances the Quality or Durability of arrows fired by the bow through which the user flows their chakra by a single Tier. Upkeep is per Volley (number of arrows that can be fired at once per Coordination). Additional effects can be granted by applying an Element:

Doton- When arrows are enhanced by this element, they are coated in black stone, enhancing their effective Quality or Durability by an additional Tier beyond that already granted by the base version of Chakra Flow.

Suiton- When arrows are enhanced by this element, they are coated in water flowing from fletching to head, and on impact they sacrifice all of their Piercing Damage to convert it to Impact Strength, in addition to reducing the target's effective Str for resisting being knocked back/down by a -Tier.

Fuuton- When arrows are enhanced by this element, they gain an aura with a roughly 1m radius of B-tier Wind cutting power.

Mokuton- When arrows are enhanced by this element, they are coated in Senju Wood which the user can alter their shape mid-flight so long as his Coordination is higher than their current Speed. Each alteration reduces the arrows' Speed by a -Tier and cannot alter their size by more than 5x in any direction or dimension (as with Transformation Technique). If the new form is not naturally aerodynamic, it is instead dropped to the Projectile Rules for Thrown weapons from the point of its transformation.

Weaknesses: Applying Elemental Chakra to arrows also applies that Element's respective weaknesses to them. If the user drops or shoulders the bow, or is distracted or exhausted, this technique is dropped.

Name: Sleeper Shot
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Range: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Speed: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Element: Mokuton
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow, Senju Wood arrows
Parent Technique: Advent of a World of Flowering Trees
Hand Seals: -
Description: This technique fills one arrow with the pollen from the flowers normally conjured by the parent technique and replaces its fletching with the petals. On impact, the flower blooms and releases the pollen, filling a ball roughly 5m in radius with it and effectively sedating anything that breathes within that area. If the arrow misses its intended target, the effect takes place wherever it ends up.
Weakness: Those with A-Tier constitution or higher may resist the effects of the pollen indefinitely. The body constantly fights against the pollen even in those unable to resist, increasing all targets’ constitution by one tier for the purpose of escaping this technique for every post that they're unconscious until they hit A-Tier, at which point they wake up. They may then use that post to attempt to escape, although their constitution resets the post after and the cycle may simply start over again if they are unable. Simply remaining outside of the pollen's range will negate any of its consequences.

The effects of this technique may only be applied to one arrow at a time, and may not be duplicated by a cloning technique or similar methods.

Ashitaka_Inuzuka wrote:Name: Chakra Shot
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep: 3
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: Varies
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow
Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
Hand Seals: -
Description: This ability enhances the Quality or Durability of arrows fired by the bow through which the user flows their chakra by a single Tier. Upkeep is per Volley (number of arrows that can be fired at once per Coordination). Additional effects can be granted by applying an Element:

Doton- When arrows are enhanced by this element, they are coated in black stone, enhancing their effective Quality or Durability by an additional Tier beyond that already granted by the base version of Chakra Flow.

Suiton- When arrows are enhanced by this element, they are coated in water flowing from fletching to head, and on impact they sacrifice all of their Piercing Damage to convert it to Impact Strength, in addition to reducing the target's effective Str for resisting being knocked back/down by a -Tier.

Fuuton- When arrows are enhanced by this element, they gain an aura with a roughly 1m radius of B-tier Wind cutting power.

Mokuton- When arrows are enhanced by this element, they are coated in Senju Wood which the user can alter their shape mid-flight so long as his Coordination is higher than their current Speed. Each alteration reduces the arrows' Speed by a -Tier and cannot alter their size by more than 5x in any direction or dimension (as with Transformation Technique). If the new form is not naturally aerodynamic, it is instead dropped to the Projectile Rules for Thrown weapons from the point of its transformation.

Weaknesses: Applying Elemental Chakra to arrows also applies that Element's respective weaknesses to them. If the user drops or shoulders the bow, or is distracted or exhausted, this technique is dropped.

Approved.

Ashitaka_Inuzuka wrote:Name: Sleeper Shot
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Range: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Speed: Per Projectile Rules (Archery)
Element: Mokuton
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A bow, Senju Wood arrows
Parent Technique: Advent of a World of Flowering Trees
Hand Seals: -
Description: This technique fills one arrow with the pollen from the flowers normally conjured by the parent technique and replaces its fletching with the petals. On impact, the flower blooms and releases the pollen, filling a ball roughly 5m in radius with it and effectively sedating anything that breathes within that area. If the arrow misses its intended target, the effect takes place wherever it ends up.
Weakness: Those with A-Tier constitution or higher may resist the effects of the pollen indefinitely. The body constantly fights against the pollen even in those unable to resist, increasing all targets’ constitution by one tier for the purpose of escaping this technique for every post that they're unconscious until they hit A-Tier, at which point they wake up. They may then use that post to attempt to escape, although their constitution resets the post after and the cycle may simply start over again if they are unable. Simply remaining outside of the pollen's range will negate any of its consequences.

The effects of this technique may only be applied to one arrow at a time, and may not be duplicated by a cloning technique or similar methods.

Poisons, even from techniques, require a Countdown and a Duration. In which case can alter the description such as "instead of for as long as they're in that bubble, it's when they're in said bubble of pollen that affects their body."

My suggestion is to look into the Chemistry Guide for reference and look into Poison for more information.

Name: Chakra Surge
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep: 20
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Skill: Bukijutsu/Kenjutsu
Requirements: a wielded weapon
Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
Element: Varies
Description: The Non-elemental form of this technique grants two +Tiers that can be assigned at will to the Quality and/or Durability to any combination of one or both of the user's weapons and/or up to two pieces of armor (Max 2 affected items, chosen at the time of casting along with an Offensive or Defensive effect. Changing the choice requires paying the Activation Cost again). Adding an Element also adds one of the following effects in addition to those granted by Chakra Flow:

Earth: Grants the user the effects of Earth Spear or B-rank Cherry Blossom Impact (chosen at casting). Hand seals are Monkey-Snake

Water: weapon strikes are followed by Water Fang Bullets, or an A-rank Water Cloak Armor covers their entire body. Hand seals are Tiger-Snake

Wind: The effects of Vacuum Wind Blade are added, or a stable, A-rank version of Passing Typhoon. Hand seals are Bird-Snake, unless the user is wielding a Giant Tessen or Gunbai, then they are not required.

Wood: Each successful or blocked/parried strike sheds splinters which can be used for Wood Cutting Technique, or the user can activate an A-rank version of Wood Transformation: Armor. Hand seals are Ox-Snake.


Name: Mayfly
Rank: Restricted
Power: X
Activation Cost: 50
Upkeep: 5
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Skill: Ninjutsu
Requirements: Wood Release
Parent Techniques: Body Flicker Technique, Wood Clone
Element: Mokuton
Hand Seals: Snake
Description: The user merges with the ground and travels through underground root systems and water channels, gaining +4 Tiers to Speed while they are using this technique. If the bonus would put them over X++, the remainder instead goes to Coordination. The user is not subject to the normal Speed/Perception rules while using Mayfly. This technique is compatible with Chakra Suppression, and can be used to network with Wood Clones as long as they are within their standard range.
Weakness: The user of this technique cannot attack without the application of Antlion.

Name: Water Release: Monsoon
Rank: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep: 20
Range: 500 m.
Speed: A
Element: Water
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Custom
Requirement: High humidity or considerable cloud cover, either of which may be produced by another jutsu
Parent Technique: N/A
Handseals: Ram - Snake
Description: This technique forces the natural water cycle of the nearby area to accelerate until it starts raining. Due to the speed at which the rain falls, the land within the Range's radius of the user is unable to absorb and/or shunt it quickly enough and will flood. The water level in the given area will rise at a rate of 5m/post, and ninja cannot use Water Walk to remain on its surface unless they are also Suiton users.
Drawbacks: Friendly-fire enabled.

Name: Earth Release: Tilling
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: 0 - 500 m.
Speed: S
Element: Earth
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Custom
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Earth Release: Earth Flow River
Hand Seals: Tiger | Ox | Tiger | Snake
Description: The user transforms the surface of the earth into an up to 100m wide river of mud that sweeps enemies off their feet and carries them down stream up to 500 meters away. This technique can also be used as a medium for other Earth techniques. As its name indicates, it is also good for rapidly tilling large fields, although concentration is required and other jutsu cannot be used while doing so.
Weaknesses: N/A

Name: Earth Release: Grand Subterranean Expedition
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep Cost: 20
Range: Self + up to 100m radius
Speed: User's movement Speed
Element: Earth
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Custom
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Earth Release: Subterranean Voyage
Hand Seals: Monkey -> Ox -> Snake
Description: A vastly improved Subterranean Voyage technique that transforms a very large volume of the earth surrounding the user into a fluid, allowing them (and an accompanying summon up to boss size, or army) to close in on the enemy with high speed by swimming underground. Since being under the ground is a blind spot, the target has no warning; allowing the user to launch a surprise attack. By using this technique in conjunction with a weapon, it also gains great effect as an "assault ninjutsu." A jinchuuriki using their Tailed Beast's chakra to perform this jutsu may expand its effects as much as necessary to include the entire bijuu, and the Sage Arts version is undetectable to those without Senjutsu.
Weaknesses: The user must have a way of detecting the target or the surface above. Any others who are initially included in the technique but for whatever reason fall out of its range are left behind and have to find their own way to move around underground.

Name: Wind Release: Supreme Task of the Dragon
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep: 20
Range: 0 - 250 m.
Speed: S+
Element: Wind
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: N/A
Requirements: Gunbai/Giant Tessen
Parent Technique: Great Task of the Dragon
Hand Seals: Half-Snake
Description: This vastly superior version of the parent technique can be set up as a feint as it has a delayed activation. The technique alters weather conditions temporarily and attacks from the sky rather than from the person. The technique resembles an F5-class tornado and can level a small forest or town.
Weaknesses: Due to the delayed activation and method of approach this technique can be avoided by those wary of their surroundings. Also, due to its scale, it is not ideal for use against individuals and will lose two Tiers of power when targeting one.

Name: Multi-Element Release: Hand of God
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep: 20
Range: 0 - 250 m.
Speed: A
Element: Wood (plus up to five Base Elements)
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Custom
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Hobi Technique, All is Suffering
Hand Seals: Snake
Description: This technique combines the effects of its parent techniques to produce a giant hand whose fingers are each comprised of one of the base elements involved in its conjuring (max 5). The arm, palm, and all non-transformed fingers are made of Senju Wood. The hand has Coordination equal to the user's; and can be used to strike, grab, press, pull, or lift, but cannot be used for hand seals or to perform Taijutsu techniques. It cannot be used to wield or throw something unless said thing has S-Tier Durability/Constitution, because otherwise it will be destroyed.
Weaknesses: It has a fairly slow movement Speed and Range for a jutsu of its scale, and the 30m long x 10m wide fingers can be attacked or resisted individually as though contending with A-powered techs. The palm is roughly 50m wide and can be evaded entirely by someone who is fast/agile enough. The Range only varies the length of the arm, which starts within 5m of the user.

Monsoon: "The water level in the given area will rise at a rate of 5m/post, and ninja cannot use Water Walk to remain on its surface unless they are also Suiton users." <- This aspect of the technique is denied. Same reduce range to 100m

Tilling: Reduce range to 100m

Supreme Task: Trim to 100m. Remove +

Hand of God: aren't the only base elements of wood earth and water?

Subterraneous: Cost should vary depending on who is going through it.

Are we reducing the ranges of S-rank techs now?

Ashitaka_Inuzuka wrote:Are we reducing the ranges of S-rank techs now?

I think the majority of S Rank techs cap out their range at 100m barring a few exceptions.

The majority of S-rank techs cap out at 250m, barring the few exceptions with greater ranges (such as Mokuton which hovers around 500m or Suiton which is 2 miles) or melee.

Ashitaka_Inuzuka wrote:The majority of S-rank techs cap out at 250m, barring the few exceptions with greater ranges (such as Mokuton which hovers around 500m or Suiton which is 2 miles) or melee.

Even so, these techniques border on terra-forming and have a host of capabilities. They are also all omnidirectional so the range will still have to be reduced.

Nyguyen Uchiha wrote:

Ashitaka_Inuzuka wrote:The majority of S-rank techs cap out at 250m, barring the few exceptions with greater ranges (such as Mokuton which hovers around 500m or Suiton which is 2 miles) or melee.

Even so, these techniques border on terra-forming and have a host of capabilities. They are also all omnidirectional so the range will still have to be reduced.

Yes, that is what S-rank techs do. I'm not budging on this. Your suggestions would make them weaker than A-rank techs. Great Moving Earth Core, for example, has a 150m radius.