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    Inarie's Tech Creation

    InarieKaguya
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    Post by InarieKaguya on Sat Nov 21, 2020 3:11 pm

    Name: Primal Dragon’s Wrath
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: Self
    Speed: B
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal (Inarie Yoru-Kaguya)
    Requirements: Draconic Awakening, Shikotsumyaku Stage 2
    Parent Technique: ---
    Hand Seals: Dragon > Ox > Rat > Dragon
    Description:
    Rage is harnessed to its peak until it tapped into a rare pool of the mixed bloodlines. After weaving the handseals to control this transformation, Inarie’s scales rapidly grow until her body is encased in thick armored-like scales. Shikotsumyaku Bones in the form of spikes protrude six inches each along her back, forearms, and shins. Which enables her to shred as she strikes with her body. Additionally, each of these spikes can benefit from Chakra Flow.

    The transformation allows Inarie to be protected via scales against a single A rank damage or 2 B ranks worth of damage. Additionally, this transformation bolsters Inarie’s Strength by +1 tier and Coordination by ++. Sparks of Raiton dance across her body that makes a reactionary shock for B rank damage when Inarie is physically struck. However, the Dragon’s Curse burns down Inarie’s willpower and sense of reason. (Note. This counts as an Aura Booster)
    Weaknesses:
    The Dragon’s Curse is practically strong in this transformation as it lowers Inarie’s intelligence by 1 tier while this technique is active. This makes her susceptible to illusions, and it gives her a difficult time to differentiate from friend or foe. Once the scales are cracked via taking damage of A rank equivalent, Inarie must spend an additional 10CP to repair the scales. For if another attack was to land on her, or a stronger attack (S rank) then her transformation would crumble. Which means that Inarie must activate this transformation again.

    Name: Raging Pin Cushion
    Rank: A
    Power: C-A
    Activation Cost: C| 5, B| 10, A| 20
    Upkeep Cost: ---
    Range: 0-50m
    Speed: A+
    Element: Raiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal (Inarie Yoru-Kaguya)
    Requirements: Shikotsumyaku Stage 2
    Parent Technique: Draconic Awakening
    Hand Seals: Dragon > Tiger > Ox > Ram
    Description:
    A cluster of small Shikotsumyaku coated in raiton protrudes from the user’s palm(s). With an extension of their arm, the user launches a cluster fire of raiton coated shikotsumyaku into a 3-meter beam of multiple fragments with the sole purpose to shred anything unfortunate to be the target(s). Fortunately, the user can control the level of damage this technique can inflict. Only stopping when they come into contact with an object or person until they reach the maximum range.

    C; At this level the shikotsumyaku serves more like a cluster stun grenade where the raiton simply shocks the target(s) to the point of temporary paralysis. Otherwise the bones themselves just deliver shallow piercing capabilities.
    B; The shikotsumyaku at this level are designed to hurt as this technique becomes like an electrified explosive tag. It has moderate lethality to unarmored foes, but otherwise the raiton shocks everything that comes into contact in the hopes that the target(s) would surrender.
    A; The pinnacle of this technique is how dangerous it really is at this level. The raiton chakra that coats each small bone bullet condenses to improve the piercing power behind them. These shikotsumyaku's sole purpose is to pierce and shred their targets before they decimate the area.
    Weaknesses:
    Fuuton of at least one rank lower than the Power can counter this technique. Once fired, the user cannot change the cluster’s course as they follow a linear path.


    Last edited by InarieKaguya on Wed Dec 02, 2020 5:01 pm; edited 2 times in total


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    Character Name: Inarie Yoru Kaguya
    Spendable Experience: 0
    Total Experience: 2,955
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 321,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C (B/Physical)
    • Stamina: C+
    • Speed: B
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: C
    • Perception: B

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    Chen Kimyōnakama
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    Post by Chen Kimyōnakama on Tue Nov 24, 2020 11:58 pm

    Primal Dragon's Worth: A rank damage or 4 B ranks worth of damage <- This conversion doesn't seem right. I beleive 2 B-Ranks equals 1 A-Rank.

    Sparks of Raiton dance across her body that makes a reactionary shock when Inarie is struck for B rank worth <- Do you mean B-Rank's worth of damage?

    Raging Pin Cushion: how many needles are fired? Is it just a continuous beam of raiton coated needles?


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    Stats:
    Strength: D
    Constitution: D
    Stamina: A
    Speed: D
    Coordination: C
    Intelligence: A
    Perception: B
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    Post by InarieKaguya on Wed Nov 25, 2020 3:34 pm

    Primal Dragon's Wrath: That was a typo as I originally was doing a conversion from A to D rank, but then i just simplified it and i meant to put down 2 B-ranks not 4.

    Reactionary Raiton has been rewritten to clarify the damage, and I wrote in that Inarie has to be physically struck before it can exert the raiton. So the added weakness to that is aside from the fact that the reactionary is to touch, Katon and/or Raiton alone wouldn't trigger the defense mechanism.

    Raging Pin Cushion: It's a continuous beam of raiton coated needles that lasts for the same posts that it is activated.


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    Character Name: Inarie Yoru Kaguya
    Spendable Experience: 0
    Total Experience: 2,955
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 321,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C (B/Physical)
    • Stamina: C+
    • Speed: B
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: C
    • Perception: B

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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike on Sun Nov 29, 2020 12:17 pm

    "Sparks of Raiton dance across her body that makes a reactionary shock for B rank damage when Inarie is physically." <- When physically what?

    "coated shikotsumyaku into a 5-meter beam of multiple fragments" <- Reduce to 3 meters.


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    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: A++
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: S
    • Intelligence:  B
    • Perception: A


    Gear

    • 1x Kālīkoroshimasu
    • 1x Kālīkoroshimasu (Chakra Disruption Technology)
    • 10x Serrated Kunai
    • Six Sai of Serration
    • Badger's Claws
    • Chinowakugumi Armour (Snow Armour Technology)
    • Twin Tessen of Terror


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